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Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by MzChistar(f): 4:24pm On Oct 31, 2013
HEY!!! CHISTAR!!! WE ARE ON FRONT PAGE!!!! *POPS CHAMPAIGNE* cheesy

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Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by dollykeyz(f): 4:32pm On Oct 31, 2013
WAO! i love wat i am reading.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Nobody: 4:37pm On Oct 31, 2013
A Bitch is a female dog
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by kingphilip(m): 4:38pm On Oct 31, 2013
Wow chistar we made it to FP already pop champagne jare
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by adegwurulez(m): 4:41pm On Oct 31, 2013
frontpage tinz... Congrats chistar
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Therock5555(m): 4:47pm On Oct 31, 2013
Congrats sir chistar. Respects Man
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Dchiefpriest(m): 4:52pm On Oct 31, 2013
***appears on d tread,read d story***chistar !chistar!! Chistar!!! Make sure you finish what you started to avoid......amaghim na oga adirim o tua.....gud work anyway but keep it update cos munwa dey follow***disappears from d tread***
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 5:00pm On Oct 31, 2013
cheesy *dancing skelewu* Third story to make front page in a roll. Thanks guys! Una too much grin. @Mzchistar (u made dis happen, gracias),
@dollykeys, really?
@kingphilips, adegwurules, rock - thanks.
@chiefpreist- I sure will, thanks 4 stopping by?
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by onimcee1(m): 5:06pm On Oct 31, 2013
kingphilip: This is the very 1st story i'll start frm the very begining and i hope to finish it cos it seems i'll be in for a jolly gud ride
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by skyscraperTM(m): 5:06pm On Oct 31, 2013
And i came here, saw the traffic, knew something must have happened, viewed the frontpage, saw this thread there, congract sochistar. . .
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by tinahrex(m): 5:11pm On Oct 31, 2013
hehe.......nyc trilogy of an update Mr.Chistar........Congrats on makn F.P!!....
#Anticipating
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Akuneshiobike(m): 5:38pm On Oct 31, 2013
I must follow this thread to the last. Eating my jollof rice with yam and akamu as i read on! Ride on babe.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by ritababe(f): 6:22pm On Oct 31, 2013
@chistar
thanks, now that am here make everybody maintain

LOL

nice story
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Daniel2802(m): 6:23pm On Oct 31, 2013
FP Tinz on point.


Dancing Skelewu
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by skyscraperTM(m): 6:28pm On Oct 31, 2013
Chistar you too much jare, i love the way you broke one update into three. . .

Even jack bauer go fear you!!
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Chuksemi(m): 7:24pm On Oct 31, 2013
Nice update, I will lie low for a while though.......... I prefer reading from the blog.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by ponti93(m): 8:00pm On Oct 31, 2013
Jst started and finished the 17pages.amazing write up.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Sike(m): 9:10pm On Oct 31, 2013
Forget me not on this thread.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 9:23pm On Oct 31, 2013
@Skyscrapper - lol, that's more dan one update oh. I just typed and updated as d spirit led grin
@tinarex, akune,, sike,- tanks.
@point - nawa 4 u oh, u be kylexy?
@chuks, that's fine by me.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Ghyft(f): 9:38pm On Oct 31, 2013
We've made front page...
Thanks MZ chistar,u're rily a gud wife.
Thanks to evry1 who has made dis possible....
Oya chistar,u dnt ave to fail us dis time...or even kip us waiting......u can even updare dis nyt if possible
sorry for my outburst yestaday,i realised dat i couldn't leave d story like dat cos its so addictive....following as usual
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Nobody: 3:02am On Nov 01, 2013
Chistar.....
U be baddo
luv ur write up
abeg no slacking
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by clevop11: 5:06am On Nov 01, 2013
Nice write up,..wish I wil meet up wit d orthers
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Nobody: 8:34am On Nov 01, 2013
*panting* finally, I got here
*spreads mat on thread*
Chistar, u da bomb, boko haram s got nothing on ya.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 9:13am On Nov 01, 2013
@gift- welcome back, apology accepted.
@Ih89Ja - I see you.
@clevop - you would.
@Ms sleeq- thanks babes.

Good morning guys, I have something special 4 you guys today grin.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 9:14am On Nov 01, 2013
EPISODE 23A.

Love does not begin and end the way we seem to think it does. Love is a battle, love is a war; love is a growing up. - James A. Baldwin.

* * * * *

Zainab stood transfixed on that spot, trying to assimilate what was happening and at the same time trying to tell herself that it was all a lie and hopefully a misunderstanding. She just couldn't really believe that after she had agreed to give E.A a chance, she had to see him with another woman.

"Zainab, why didn't you call before coming over," E.A asked again as he saw Zainab probably didn't hear him the first time.

"I'm sorry, I didn't know you have a guest," Zainab replied. She knew she didn't have any good reason to be disappointed or angry but she just couldn't help it.

E.A chuckled, he could read Zainab thoughts. "I know what you are thinking at the moment but its not true. This small girl here is my sister," the lady at the front of E.A turned and playfully tapped E.A on the shoulder, "am not small," she said.

"Yes, you are small, don't think because you now have two tiny oranges on your chest that you are now big oh," E.A then turned to Zainab, "as I was saying, she is just my sister and ignore the 'honey' I called her earlier, we just tease ourselves a lot."

Zainab was a smart lady and didn't entirely believe what E.A just said, so she kept quiet and patiently waited for some kind of confirmation.

The confirmation eventually came, as E.A's sister opened her mouth to talk.

"Wait a minute," she said turning to E.A, "is this by any chance the Zainab you've been giving headache with? Telling me about her every second?"

E.A was embarrassed, he was blushing, "firstly, I don't talk about her that often and yes, this is Zainab."

"Yes you talk about her too much, anyway," she turned back to Zainab, "am sorry for my rude attitude earlier on, just that in this hood, we get strange visitors often and the only way to deal with them is being rude."

Zainab just smiled in response, she wasn't entirely convinced yet.

E.A's sister then stretched her hand for a hand shake and said, "Am Diana by the way."

And that did the trick, that was the confirmation she had been waiting for, E.A had mentioned the name "Diana" to her a couple of times, "oh, so you are the Diana?" She asked.

"I don't really like the way you make it sound but yes I am, so are you going to shake my hand or would I have to fry akara for you first?" Diana asked jokingly, or maybe she was serious.

"Oh, am so sorry," Zainab replied and took the hand. "I guess you already know me so no need for introduction."

"Yea, so why don't you come in? Or you are still admiring the staircase?"

"I don't think I'll be able to..." Zainab was about to decline when Diana cut in.

"If you say no, I'll have to drag you in," she said.

"We aren't exactly in talking terms at the moment," E.A whispered into Diana ears.

"Good, you just gave me another reason to make sure she comes in," Diana replied, then turned to Zainab, "so am I going to have to drag you in or would you make it easy for the both of us?"

Zainab just smiled and walked pass Diana and E.A into the house, she knew her way around so she went straight to the sitting room and sat on the couch. E.A joined her few minutes later and they both stared at each other in silence.

Diana went to the bedroom and after five straight minutes of consistent noise making, she finally came out fully dressed to go out.

"E.A, I wanna assume you guys would be needing a lot of privacy since you obviously have a lot to talk about so I'll be on my way, I won't come home tonight so don't expect me, so for crying out loud, don't blow this opportunity," she turned to Zainab and smiled, "I now see why he like you so much, you are almost as beautiful as me," Diana replied and walked out of the house leaving both Zainab and E.A laughing uncontrollably.

"Your sister is really funny and nice, you know?" Zainab said after they were done with laughing.

"Yea, I know, she is the only sibling I got. After my parents gave birth to her, they decided to start using c0ndoms," E.A replied mischievously.

"At least your case is better, I've told you about my family right?"

"Not really, all I know is that they are all based at Canada," E.A replied.

"Well, I have two siblings, an older brother and a younger sister, after I finished schooling, I was the only one who decided to come back to Nigeria, my brother decided to work for my dad in his company and my junior sis just stays at home and grow fat," Zainab said pitiful.

E.A smiled, "I guess I'm kind of better off that you."

"Yea, you are." A brief silence followed.

Even though he was supposed to be mad at Zainab, he just couldn't really stay mad at her, he liked her too much and with her sitting beside him at the moment, he felt the urge to do something crazy.

Zainab on the other hand felt the same way but as the lady, she didn't think it would be right to make the first move, so she decided to give him a sign, "E.A I'm sorry," she started, "I don't really know what I did that hurt you the most but for whatever it is, I'm really sorry," she paused before adding, "and I need you... Back."

E.A was having a mental crises and weight his options, what could be the possible worst thing that could happen if he does what his mind tells him to do, Zainab would probably just walk out of the house, he concluded that it was worth the risk.

As Zainab silently waited for a response, E.A leaned over and pecked her, then he quickly withdrew and stared deeply in her eyes, waiting to see what would happen next. Then it happened. Zainab leaned over and kissed him back, and before the could say "Jack Bauer" they were tossing and turning, kissing like teenagers who just found love for the first time.

Like magic, Zainab top flew from her body and E.A's shirt disappeared too, the Zainab's bra and skirt somehow found their way out of her body. By the time E.A carried her to the bedroom, they were both naked and well... I think everyone knows what happened next *wink*.

* * * * *

It was already 8:45PM when the ringing of Zainab's phone woke her up from a short sleep, she couldn't feel her legs as E.A had done a good job, so she rolled and picked up her phone which was on the floor beside the bed, she had no idea how the phone got there.

"Hello," she reluctantly said.

"Hey! Hi, this is Barrister Boniface, I just called to tell you that a court date has been fixed for Richard trial."

"Good, so when is the date?" Zainab asked excitedly.

"Tomorrow by 2PM," he replied.

Zainab was surprised, "so fast?"

"Yea, I happen to know a few people," Boniface replied, feeling pompous.

"Okay, email me other detail."

"Okay, I'll do that, but brace yourself, the case isn't going to be as easy as we thought. Your husband hired Barrister Anthony Okili and they seem to have some sort of new witness who claims he knows everything that happened, and he has proofs," Boniface replied unsure of himself.

"Hmmm, who is Barrister Okili and who is this new witness?"

"Barrister Okoli is one of the best lawyers to come from this country and I'm not sure but I think the new witness is a certain Doctor.. Doctor Daniel or something like that," Boniface replied.

"We have the tape, and our own witness of our own, so I guess we just have to wait till tomorrow." Zainab replied, she sounded unsure too.

"I'll email you the full details right away," Boniface replied and hung up.

TO BE CONTINUED.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Eniqurl(f): 9:17am On Nov 01, 2013
Chistar! Xo u've 4qotten mie jez lyk dat, life z nt lyk vhiz oh. Aniwaez conqrat.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 9:18am On Nov 01, 2013
[b]PREDICT AND WIN.

So, I made a promise sometimes this week that I’ll start giving away stuffs once my blog hits get to 10,000. Well, good news! Its gotten to 10,000 and even passed it.

I don’t think there can be a better timing, today is a the beginning of a new month, Happy New Month to you all by the way, and I think we just entered the fourth week since I launched this blog.

So enough of my story, am sure most of you aren’t interested in it, lol.

Here is what is going to happen.

This is how this “give away” is going to work.

1. I ask a question.

2. You guys reply.

3. I pick a winner and give him/ her the gifts.

So here is the question.

Most of you claim you know my series: B•I•T•C•H (Babe In Total Control) very well and think you can predict it. So I’m going to give you a chance to be win something for just doing what you think you know how to do best.

In the next episode of #B•I•T•C•H, there would be a court scene where Richard is going to have a trial. What I want you to do is, predict what the verdict would be. Would he be found “Guilty” or “Not Guilty.?”

Please note that if you choose “Guilty” you are to tell me why you think so and what you think his sentence would be but if you choose “Not Guilty” you are to tell me why you think he was found “Not Guilty.”

The person whose answer is the closest to mine becomes the winner and wins the following:

1. A 20 minutes private chat with me via Twitter, BBM, 2GO, or Whatsapp. During the chat, you can ask me whatever question you want and I’ll reply with the truth.

2. You would be the first to read my first E-book. I’m working on a short four/five episode series that would be published strictly as an E-Book. I would personally send the E-book a day before it is released to the public directly to your Email for free.

3. You get a 200 naira recharge card top up in any network of your choice.

NB: please, I’m aware the gifts ain’t enough and very little, but its just for the fun of it and my little way of saying thank you for supporting #SOC (me) for the past one month.

RULES:
1. Only predictions made on my blog would be considered, other predictions made here or even on a wrong topic on my blog would be considered invalid and ignored.

2. Normally, you can choose to comment(reply) with out filling in your email address, but if you want to win, you have to fill in the “Email Address” box.

3. All predictions should be posted on or before 6:00PM (GMT +1), 1-11-2013. And prediction after 6:00PM would be ignored.

4. If you are a member of NL please use your NL username to comment. Its not compulsory but I have my reasons.

5. The winner would be announced during tommorow’s update.

SO MAY THE PREDICTIONS BEGIN!!!

If you are not following my blog, I'll advice you to kindly follow it and be a regular because the give aways would become more often and the next ones might not have anything to do with this series, it might be another series or even my short stories ETC. The next give away would be bigger and better.

CLICK ON THIS LINK > http://sochistar./ to go to my blog and predict
[/b]
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 9:32am On Nov 01, 2013
Eni~girl:
Chistar! Xo u've 4qotten mie jez lyk dat, life z nt lyk vhiz oh. Aniwaez conqrat.
ahh! Sweety me, I didn't 4get u oh, I thought u have abadon me as yu didn't comment 4 a while... sad. Oya, I know you are one of the best followers of this stories, go and try your luck and stand a chance to win my small recarge card grin.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Eniqurl(f): 9:38am On Nov 01, 2013
Ah dint abandon yhu jhur xcl stress. Uhmm prediction tinz...
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by 360prince(m): 10:28am On Nov 01, 2013
chistar01: @gift- welcome back, apology accepted.
@Ih89Ja - I see you.
@clevop - you would.
@Ms sleeq- thanks babes.

Good morning guys, I have something special 4 you guys today grin.
. Oga chister i de hail oh.



Nice story.... smiley
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by agunblaze(m): 10:47am On Nov 01, 2013
[color=#000099][/color].imperesive!!! u are good
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by kennybelle: 11:11am On Nov 01, 2013
This is getting interesting! I love d quiz part... Makes one think n not read alone. U‘re a good entertainer

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