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Re: Meant To Be by LarrySun(m): 1:44am On Dec 21, 2013 |
stefikal: -6-Rough review. You're really improving. Keep it up. |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 7:19am On Dec 21, 2013 |
Larry-Sun: Thank you sir, please about 'proximity', is 'closeness' a good replacement? |
Re: Meant To Be by LarrySun(m): 9:27am On Dec 21, 2013 |
stefikal:In this context, 'proximity' is not a word I'd use. Of course, it means 'closeness', but it literally means the state of being near somebody or something in distance or place *at least, according to the dictionary*. But not all synonyms apply to all expressions. I'd rather put the expression thus: '...but he'd rather not risk knotting a stronger loop in their cord of affection, which, however, was slowly tightening up.' But that's me though, I enjoy writing in figuratives. To use the words for the right narratives, a thesaurus can be of absolute help. Endeavour to get one. Keep up the good work, dear. 1 Like |
Re: Meant To Be by missterious(f): 10:11am On Dec 21, 2013 |
Front page things. Steph, where you at? Congratulations. |
Re: Meant To Be by Sugarbabekemi(f): 10:19am On Dec 21, 2013 |
Yipeee! Front page o,at long last, congrat babes, U ROCK!!! |
Re: Meant To Be by Onlinebiz2012: 10:38am On Dec 21, 2013 |
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Re: Meant To Be by skyscraperTM(m): 10:45am On Dec 21, 2013 |
Atlast. Frontpage |
Re: Meant To Be by DEllaluv(f): 10:49am On Dec 21, 2013 |
Wow,I saw many ppl viewing and I tld myself,'ds is a sign of fp',congrats nwanne m |
Re: Meant To Be by Clemzy16(m): 11:23am On Dec 21, 2013 |
stefikal: *picks microphone and shouts into it**hears my name from a distance and rushes into thread* oboy yeeee! I no go miss this kiss oo!! De thin be say i bin dey follow from de beginnin buh leta lost track, nw we don make frontpage, make i go continue from where i stop. Jet mode activated. |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 11:39am On Dec 21, 2013 |
miss.terious: see as I come late...wow! Wow is all I can say...thanks every1 |
Re: Meant To Be by PEEBERRY(m): 11:39am On Dec 21, 2013 |
Nice story and cool write up.keep it up you are doing good.I wish u cud quit pharmacy and face literature that would be nice.all d same I wish u d best.waiting for d oder part of d story |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 11:41am On Dec 21, 2013 |
Sugarbabe_kemi@: thanks Kemi sкчscrαρεr™: thanks skyscraper D.Ella.luv: thanks Ella |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 11:44am On Dec 21, 2013 |
Clemzy16: *hears my name from a distance and rushes into thread* oboy yeeee! I no go miss this kiss oo!! De thin be say i bin dey follow from de beginnin buh leta lost track, nw we don make frontpage, make i go continue from where i stop. Jet mode activated. No wahala...thanks PEEBERRY: Nice story and cool write up.keep it up you are doing good.I wish u cud quit pharmacy and face literature that would be nice.all d same I wish u d best.waiting for d oder part of d story thanks Berry... Awww but I can't quit pharmacy oooo...maybe I'll combine d two by God's grace...#PharmacyRocks... Thank you |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 11:45am On Dec 21, 2013 |
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Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 11:52am On Dec 21, 2013 |
Pheeewww.. Wow! Front page at last...'in Kemi's words'...lolzzz, I really appreciate as many of you that took time to endorse the story...I mean its not easy to use your megabyte, time to read a story much less endorsing it. Thank you all...God bless I'm currently in a meeting...CPFN breakfast meeting(Christian Pharmacists Fellowship of Nigeria)...the meeting is still on which is why I could not update earlier as I was still working on the update. I don't know when the meeting will end as its the last meeting of the year and a love feast. But I'll update today...please bear with me. |
Re: Meant To Be by TrishaP(f): 11:53am On Dec 21, 2013 |
WOW..Congrats!!..my namesake. |
Re: Meant To Be by KingzPen(m): 11:54am On Dec 21, 2013 |
LmaoOooooo... I can't help but laff... So happy we finally hit fp... Congratulations Boss... More Grace... stefikal: |
Re: Meant To Be by walewunmi(m): 11:57am On Dec 21, 2013 |
I am hereby please and honoured to announce to our esteem readers that we are finally on nairaland literature section's front page,it is with great delight we announce this to you. We want to thank all our esteem fans;those who took their time to endorse our story,those who followed the story from beginning,those who joined later on,those who commented(either positive criticism or just an encouragement comment) and yes also all our ghost reader we truly appreciate you all,you guys really inspired us may God be bless each and everyone of you,Thank you. Don't forget the story continues,please endeavour to drop your comment after reading,Thank you. Signed:walewunmi (PRO stefkal's 'meant to be') |
Re: Meant To Be by walewunmi(m): 11:59am On Dec 21, 2013 |
In honour of our frontpage achievement,we are please to announce that all drinks ordered for today would be on the house (meaning free drinks for everyone pls don't be shy order anything you want) Thank you guys Signed:walewunmi (PRO) |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 12:09pm On Dec 21, 2013 |
See everybody dey sing carol songs, I dey type... #Singing... I wanna wish u a merry christmas TrishaP: WOW..Congrats!!..my namesake. thanks Trisha...are u Stephanie or Ify? |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 12:14pm On Dec 21, 2013 |
KingzPen: LmaoOooooo... I can't help but laff... So happy we finally hit fp... Congratulations Boss... More Grace... lolzzz..thanks Sir na truth now we go buy @Wale: tnks |
Re: Meant To Be by walewunmi(m): 12:20pm On Dec 21, 2013 |
stefikal:You are welcome |
Re: Meant To Be by Zellie: 12:29pm On Dec 21, 2013 |
Yay!! You made it! Congrats |
Re: Meant To Be by MightyFortress: 12:48pm On Dec 21, 2013 |
To read. |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 12:50pm On Dec 21, 2013 |
*continued* Omoye packed her remaining clothes into her bag, she had been packing for over thirty minutes, she wished she could leave immediately but she thought against it. First, Victor was still asleep, there was no point disturbing his sleep, secondly her mother had gone out, it would be rude if she left without seeing her. However, she wanted to kill two birds with a stone. She had no doubts about Osagie's love for her, he had said all she needed to hear over the phone, she was going to make this right no matter how hard it seemed. Deep within her she knew he deserved and had earned her forgiveness, it would only take her a little time to heal completely, the second bird she planned to kill was her father, not literally of course. The man had not spoken to her in years, she was not going to leave his house until he gave her an audience. She just prayed everything would end fine and fast, that way she would be able to return to her home feeling fulfilled. Her phone started ringing, it was Osagie, she smiled. "Hello Omoye, you asked me to call you back," he said. "Yes, I needed to clear my head." "Please forgive me and give us another chance," he pleaded. She knew she had forgiven him, but why were the words refusing to come from her lips. "Osagie, I'll come home but I can't come home today." "Why?" he asked, "I want to see daddy before I come home," she heard him mumble somethings to himself, she was not surprised, her father really hated Osagie. "But as soon as I've settled things here, I'll come home so we can talk." she continued "Okay, how is Victor? Please can I talk to him?" Omoye almost laughed, he was really feeling bad, who would think he would beg to speak to his son, she liked the way he was using please in almost every statement he made. She needed him to know she had forgiven him, only that her mouth appeared heavy to say those words. "He is asleep," she replied. "Alright, I'll be expecting you. Can I call you again?" Omoye gave a healthy laugh, he was asking for permission to give her a call, now this was the height of sweetness. "Of course." she replied. "Thank you, this means a lot to me" She did not know what to reply him at this point, all she knew was that she was happy. Her curious mind was still bent on knowing why he cheated on her, should she let sleeping dogs lie? Or would knowing about it help her healing heart? "Its nothing Osagie," "Thank you, I love you Omoye," he said and continued, "I'll call you later." That statement signified that he was going to end the call, she had not mentioned the fact that she had forgiven him or the fact that she was still very much in love with him. Life was all about taking risks, wasn't it? If taking a risk was the next option, she would willingly do it. "Osagie hold on, errm.." she sighed, "even though we still need to talk just bear in mind that I've forgiven you." Osagie did not say anything, she checked to see if he had ended the call, thank goodness the call was still on. "I love you," she finally said, what magic did those words possess? The calmness she felt after saying them made her wonder if there was no magic linked to them. "oh Omo," she heard him sigh, "you don't know how much those words mean to me, thank you." The words equally meant a lot to her as well, everything happening pointed to one fact, Osagie was her man, she loved him and he loved her back. After ending the call, she resorted to packing her remaining clothings. She would have to check Victor's clothes which she washed yesterday, she swept the room and cleaned up everything that needed to be cleaned. She had to put everything in order before leaving her parents house, she saw the pile of clothes her mother left by a corner, although her mother had not instructed her to wash it, she decided to wash it before leaving. She packed the clothes and left the room while heading to the backyard. She spent about forty five minutes washing the clothes, as soon as she rounded off with the washing she packed Victor's clothes. She opened the door only to find a stranger crouched over her son who was sleeping on the floor. She was about to scream at whoever the visitor was till she saw the face of the intruder. 5 Likes |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 12:52pm On Dec 21, 2013 |
Zellie: Yay!! You made it! Congrats thanks Zellie...yeah, we made it! Who is a writer without the readers...you guys are super amazing |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 12:53pm On Dec 21, 2013 |
Mighty Fortress: To read. tnks Sir |
Re: Meant To Be by popeshemoo(m): 1:10pm On Dec 21, 2013 |
stefikal: Pheeewww.. Hmmm, na. French kiss we dey use celebrate dis one, clemzy park well, na me go start d next kissing round......u deserve it gal btw shey dis osas cannot wait for her to come op abi or is it her father |
Re: Meant To Be by TrishaP(f): 1:23pm On Dec 21, 2013 |
stefikal:Stephanie dear. |
Re: Meant To Be by TrishaP(f): 1:26pm On Dec 21, 2013 |
Pls try and add more of femi and sandra's part. Tnx |
Re: Meant To Be by Jumizie13(f): 1:44pm On Dec 21, 2013 |
stefikal:Abeg, no finish d food o. |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 1:48pm On Dec 21, 2013 |
TrishaP: Pls try and add more of femi and sandra's part. Tnx thanks namesake...I realized dt, just that dz Omoye n Fola ish are all happening on d same day...we go soon drop deir matter Jumizie13: no worry I go pm u 1 chicken @Pope: I don quit with d kisses oooo, no more kissing |
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