Like my feelings in the tide
Travelling like a wind, like our emotions which is bona fide
Like the voices of thunder deep in the air
Have my emotions trembled, 'cause life was unfair.
Like the birds of the air, dangling in ecstasy
Have my tears flowed, as though 'oog life lies on papacy.
Like the scorching sun, did tears feel my eyes
As all I did, was to look at the skies.
Like the driZzling from above, have my tears flowed
Then I asked, why should my eyes pay a debt it never owed?
Like the silk brocade of the rainbow,
Do I see riding on the feathers of a crow.

---By Ben' Chukwuemeka Okere---

Please guys, I really need your comments and observations on this poem, it is dedicated to my friend who died two years ago.