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Re: The One I Love by TemitopeDaniel(m): 7:52am On Jul 28, 2014 |
Nancydearie: Wow! Am so happy for Tolani and Stella,keep it up T-Dan!! Please when are you starting another story?Lol. Firstly, I neva finish dz one na... ![]() secondly, sheyb I dey write peace and april ![]() Lastly, aw was ur night ![]() |
Re: The One I Love by Queenxstar(f): 8:07am On Jul 28, 2014 |
TemitopeDaniel: Lol.I marvel how to type and update more than once daily and in two different stories or more. Teach me na... you hear? |
Re: The One I Love by gennysq(f): 9:23am On Jul 28, 2014 |
Interesting ![]() Buh ur last 3 updates had errors. U used AA instead of AS a̶̲̥̅̊η∂ vice versa, wen Fav n Stella went to redo Deir tests. a̶̲̥̅̊η∂ also used her (Tolani) instead of his. 1 Like |
Re: The One I Love by Queenxstar(f): 9:56am On Jul 28, 2014 |
gennysq: InterestingAnd you replaced Favour with Faith at some point. 1 Like |
Re: The One I Love by godwah(f): 11:39am On Jul 28, 2014 |
[quote author=Sallychizzl3] Keep your guess to yourself bro or you take up the story from there. ![]() Av u nw c d outcome of d test bad mouth fellow,nxt tym try 2 b polite nd diligent in ur speech Gosh! 1 Like |
Re: The One I Love by Donicobone(m): 11:47am On Jul 28, 2014 |
Gud work |
Re: The One I Love by Tytylorpe(f): 12:18pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
heemah: okey....,tanx 4 d correction 1 Like |
Re: The One I Love by dammygoody(m): 1:06pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
Well, some people are just born to write....T.Dan..hmm...nice one... I'm here at last ![]() Please continue asap.. Keep up the good work bro.. The sky is your starting point.. And like you usually say, you're going places.. ![]() 1 Like |
Re: The One I Love by missuniverse(f): 1:06pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
been offlyn 4 a while,glad to ve caught u at dis point Welldone Tee |
Re: The One I Love by TemitopeDaniel(m): 1:34pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
The nex update z gonna d b d last update. ... coming soon... oga Dammy! i sight u oh... QUEENxster... Thanks for d correction, everything will b modified ma and to others, tee'dan loves u. |
Re: The One I Love by maryhaam(f): 1:41pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
TemitopeDaniel: The nex update z gonna d b d last update. ... coming soon... oga Dammy! i sight u oh...i loffz u too |
Re: The One I Love by BestInDeeWorld: 2:26pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
TemitopeDaniel: The nex update z gonna d b d last update. ... coming soon... oga Dammy! i sight u oh...wat is dat supposed 2 mean? Dat dis beautiful story is gonna end soon? ![]() TemitopeDaniel: The nex update z gonna d b d last update. ... coming soon... oga Dammy! i sight u oh...wat is dat supposed 2 mean? Dat dis beautiful story is gonna end soon? |
Re: The One I Love by tmamuda(m): 3:02pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
TeeDan Stil wit U |
Re: The One I Love by Ziziola: 3:17pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
TemitopeDaniel: The nex update z gonna d b d last update. ... coming soon... oga Dammy! i sight u oh...Excuse me! Tell me u r joking. This is short na |
Re: The One I Love by Nancydearie(f): 3:33pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
TemitopeDaniel: Lol.Because the story is gonna end today and Peace ans April u don't update it on Nairaland. Lastly,my nyt was fine. Waiting for the last update. Well done!! |
Re: The One I Love by Nobody: 3:57pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
almost stop reading not untill u drop dis mind blowin chapter. guy u hv a way of twisting tins. more knowledge |
Re: The One I Love by chii8(f): 4:28pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
Hello op,dnt mind me ooo,you said the next update will be the last?am at the story climax,which hasnt really finished and you are talkn of the ending,will you resolve all those issues involving;Favour and Bolu,Tobi and Feyi,Temitope and kate or you only want to focus on Stella and Tolani? Anyway,anyhow it comes shaa,we will always enjoy,its your story..... |
Re: The One I Love by TemitopeDaniel(m): 5:03pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
chii8: Hello op,dnt mind me ooo,you said the next update will be the last?am at the story climax,which hasnt really finished and you are talkn of the ending,will you resolve all those issues involving;Favour and Bolu,Tobi and Feyi,Temitope and kate or you only want to focus on Stella and Tolani?lol.... sha dey look me oh... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Re: The One I Love by TemitopeDaniel(m): 5:04pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
snowprince07: almost stop reading not untill u drop dis mind blowin chapter.why? coz of d blood issue? lol |
Re: The One I Love by TemitopeDaniel(m): 5:05pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
Nancydearie: Because the story is gonna end today and Peace ans April u don't update it on Nairaland. Lastly,my nyt was fine. Waiting for the last update. Well done!!lol... thanks. if I'm gonna write anything again... na next week oh buh I'M GONNA MAKE IT KNOWN. |
Re: The One I Love by TemitopeDaniel(m): 5:06pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
Ziziola: Excuse me! Tell me u r joking. This is short naLOL.... u mean d last update? sha dey look me. |
Re: The One I Love by Nobody: 5:06pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
TemitopeDaniel: why? coz of d blood issue? lol★ ![]() ![]() |
Re: The One I Love by TemitopeDaniel(m): 5:06pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
tmamuda: TeeDanThanks boss... 1 Like |
Re: The One I Love by TemitopeDaniel(m): 5:07pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
BestInDeeWorld: wat is dat supposed 2 mean? Dat dis beautiful story is gonna end soon?yes oh... alpha z d start and it must av omega... d end ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Re: The One I Love by TemitopeDaniel(m): 5:08pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
maryhaam: i loffz u toolol... let mama ibeji cash u... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Re: The One I Love by Nancydearie(f): 6:07pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
TemitopeDaniel: lol... thanks. if I'm gonna write anything again... na next week oh buh I'M GONNA MAKE IT KNOWN.Ok,waiting! |
Re: The One I Love by TemitopeDaniel(m): 7:22pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
Last update drops latest by 8:30pm.... love u guys!" |
Re: The One I Love by TemitopeDaniel(m): 8:32pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
Last phase - Conclusion. Tobiloba arrived back to Ibadan after a week to beg his grandmother. He was looking bright as he got to the front of her gate with an innocent look. He couldn't but leave Ibadan for Lagos because of his feelings then. He explained everything to his grandmother and pleaded over and over until he was forgiven. "I never knew it was Stella that caused your departure." The woman said. "She was the one. But Granny, I already have another lady in mind." He smiled. "Are you serious? You're ready to get married?" She asked with surprise written all over her. Tobi was grinning. "Yes, though I've not spoken my mind to her but something deep within me tells me she's the lady.." he continued grinning. "Don't ever try leaving me again, what if I had died before your arrival?" "Mama, I'm deeply sorry. Just forgive me. At least I've stopped drinking, I'm now a born again." He grinned. "Good to know, what are you going to eat?" She asked and stood happily. ****** "How was Lagos dear?" Kate was smiling as she seated beside her friend. Feyi returned with Tobi. Since both met at the eatery, they've been speaking to each other on phone and sometimes did see each other, after they've planned to meet at the same eatery where they met. For that one week, they met thrice. Feyi too was beginning to suspect that something was going on, it seemed Tobi liked her. She was eagerly waiting for him to come out straight. "Lasgidi dey there.. how have you been?" Feyi grinned. "I've been nice, nice to see you again." Kate was smiling. She was really happy. "Same here. What of Dad and Mum?" "They are..." she hadn't finished her statement when her phone rang. She smiled and picked up the call. It was Temitope. They discussed for few minutes before Temitope told her he'd like to see her because his sister would want to meet her. "Why would she want to meet me?" Kate asked smiling. "I don't know, but I told her about you." Temitope replied. "What did you tell her?" She asked, still smiling and eager to know. For the past one week that they've met, both have been free and outspoken to each other. Temitope had told her about his family, likewise Kate. Temitope had also fixed a date for the two in a restaurant. "She asked me who you were and I said my friend. She said she'd like to see you because I don't keep female friends, you are going to be the first." He smiled. "Wao... where do we meet?" Kate was happy. "Where do you think?" Temitope replied with a question. "The restaurant again." She replied. "Alright, see you there by 1pm." Temitope said. "No problem." Kate replied amd ended the call. Feyi had been smiling. "Who was that?" She winked. "One guy like that..." she chuckled. "I also met a guy in Lagos oh.. we've been friends since then." Feyi said. "Really?" Kate moved closer. "Sure, we've met in Ibadan here before and we met in a eatery." She explained. "That's nice, I met this one in a supermarket." ****** "I guess it's high time you left that company." Tolani tod Stella as both went on to an eatery for lunch. "Why?" Stella glimpsed at him. "Come and join my dad's company, we are going to head the company together instead of being a servant under a guy." He smiled. "Hmmn..." Stella chuckled. "What?" Tolani started laughing. "Nothing..." she laughed too. Tolani kept on laughing until he brought another issue up. "I want to take you to my father by the end of this week." He told her. Stella was shocked. "Why? Why do I have to appear before him now?" She asked. "He said he'd want to know that wonder girl that changed my pife around." He grinned. Stella hissed dryly and laughed. "Are you serious?" "Yes, I want you to look nice, I'll come and pick you by 9 am." He said. "Alright." ♡♡♡♡♡ ♥♥♥♥♥ Evening. Feyi was lying down on the sofa in the living room and speaking with Tobi on phone. She had been laughing because Tobi was just saying funny things to her. He was jovial and friendly. Both had been discussing for minutes before she ended the call still laughing. "Who's that?" She heard her father's husky voice behind her. She trembled and sat up. She had forgotten her father got back home earlier than usual. "A friend." She smiled. "So you now have a... hmmn.." her father sat grinning and winking at her. "Dad!" She started laughing as she clapped her hands together. "What? Did I say anything?" He grinned and rested his back. "You don't have to, I can read your mind and I know you're thinking of something dirty..." she was still laughing. "Can you see? I just asked of a simple question and I said 'hmmn' who's the one with a dirty mind now?" He laughed. "I know you dad.." she kept on laughing. "I wish to meet him as soon as I can." He smiled. "Who? A guy I'm not dating." She laughed. "But from all your discussions that I heard, it might lead to that.." he laughed. "Let it lead to that before knowing him and... were you eavesdropping?" She was curious. "In my own house?" Prof laughed. "What you don't know is that I'm in my father's house, I can send you away, you should go back to your father's house too." She stood up laughing. ****** The next day. Tobi had been with Temitope for quite some minutes, discussing about what happened to him. "I really feel for you, it's normal to leave but you could have explained everything to me, you could have told me earlier." Temitope said. "I know sir, I just didn't want to bother you and I thought Stella might hear from you." He grinned. "No problem. I see you as a reasonable and good guy so I've been recording the days you were absent as you leave days." Temitope told him. "I'm so grateful sir." He was happy everyone understood him. "Resume back to duty." He said. As he was about to leave the office, he met Stella at the front of the door. He smiled and stretched his hand forward for a handshake. "How are you?" He asked her. Stella was shocked. She didn't expect him to be free with him even if he returned to the company. "I'm good." She smiled too and shook him before she entered amd tendered her letter of resignation. She started her explanation too that he fiance needed her jn his company and would love to leave that time. Temitope was happy for her because she was aiming at greater height. He congratulated her and wished her well in her relationship. ****** SATURDAY- 9:15 AM. STELLA was seated right on a small couch as she patiently waited for her father-in-law-to-be. Not quite long after, Tolani came out with his Dad. Stella knelt immediately and greeted her. "How are you?" He was smiling. "I'm good sir." She replied still on her kneels. "Sit down, ladies rarely do this nowadays." He said and sat as well. Stella was smiling. "This is the lady that caused your son so much of tears." Tolani grinned as he sat beside her. Stella chuckled. "It wasn't her fault." The man said and laughed amd asked Stella some questions about herself. "I support you both, the thing left to be done is the introduction betweem the two families and planning the wedding." He said. Stella was fulfilled. "Thanks so much dad!" Tolani had exclaimed. **** Stella was flaunting her head as she entered into the house happily. She met Favour grinning as she entered. 'What is making this one happy?' She thought as she came in. "How far na." She smiled and sat down. "You wish to know how far?" She rose up her left hand and showed her the ring. "What!" Stella stood happily and hugged her friend. "When did he?" She asked. "This evening. He took me together with some staffs to a fast-food and proposed there." She grinned. "I'm so happy for you dear." Stella hugged her again. She was very happy. "Thanks." Fave was so hapoy too. "Tolani took me to his parents' place today and I took him to mum too, she said our wedding date will be announced soon." "Wao!" Favour pulled her hugged her too. "This is indeed God's miracle!" She said happily. ***** Tobi had been rolling on the mattress. His mind hadn't settled since he came back from work. He was imagining things until he picked up his phone. He wished to tell Feyi his mind but he felt it was too early. He couldn't control himself for hours until he eventually called her and told her what he had been nursing in his mind. It's from the day I sighted you I've been nursing this but the fear and the thoughts has kept me silent but now I couldn't stop thinking about you but to tell you my mind. Will you... I mean are you going to... no.. em... yes, I mean will you be my.. hmmn... wife... ♥♥♥♥♥♥ The next day. Tobi woke up and met a meessga on his phone. He hissed, 'Mtn as usual.' He muttered amd stood up. He hadn't taken his eyes off the phone completely when he saw Feyi. Feyi's text message? He picked up his phone and opened it instantly. Why were you stammering while calling me yesternight? It's a free world. Em... let me stammer too.. hmm.. em.. Yes, I will. "Huh?" Tobi flung his phone away and jumped happily. ***** AFTERNOON. The same day, Temitope and his sister had really spoken. His sister, Mercy had told him she liked Kate when she sawnher and she wasn't bad to be a wife. Since he heard that from his sister who had always criticized every lady, he didn't waste time before he sent her a message that morning in the presence of his sister. Since then, he had watching his phone closely if any message was received but he didn't receive any. He had been wondering and had checked his sent items properly and was convinced the message had been sent. "Why is she not replying?" He had been wondering. He was still wondering as it was lunch time that of not for the message he had sent to her, he'd have called her for lunch. He was about picking up his phone to check if any message was received when her call was received. His heart skipped a beat. He wasn't expecting her call, it was nlt text message he needed. "Are you free? Meet me at Lovers' spot, this place is nice." She told him. Lovers' spot? Who won't know the place.. he thought and rushed up, straight to Lover's spot. ***** LOVERS' SPOT was a popular place for lovers that was just opened. It had various sections for lovers. A section for games, music for competition and lot more. It was fast spreading after a month that it was just opened. Temitope parked outside the gate and took some stes forward when he noticed a car. "Is this not Tobi?" He wondered and hastened his footsteps. He walked in and smiled. The air conditioners were working perfectly. He could sight some couples playomg games, as he moged further, he saw some aroung the swimming pool and swings regions. He smiled and turned his head. He saw Tobi and Feyi seated, smiling and talking to one another. He smiled and clapped his hands to attract him. Tobi turned and saw him. He was surprised and stood uo laughing. "My boss." Temitope winked at him, still searching for Kate until he finally located her in a corner. Kate had been pinging, she didn't even know when Tobi and Feyi walked in. Temitope walked toward her briskly, smiling. "Hey dear." He grinned. "Yeah, you came earlier than expected.." she grinned. "I had to.." he smiled. "I called you here because I think it's a nice place to say yes to your proposal." She smiled. "Really?" Temitooe was happy. Just then, Tolani and Stella also walked in. Feyi saw them instantly and smiled. "Welcome." She wanted her presence to be noticed. "Wao!" Tolani smiled and walked to their seat together with Stella. Both were smiling as they all exchanged pleasantries. KATE'S CORNER. "I saw one of my staffs there with his hmmn... let's go there to have nice time, my love." Temitope said and stood up with her. They both walked to the seat and saw Tolani and Stella likewise. Kate was also shocked to see Feyi. "You never told me you would come here.." she hugged her. "Dd you tell me also.." Feyi replied and smiled. Temitope got two more chairs, it would be nice for they all to seat together. They were all gisting and playing. None even remember they had to go back to their various offices. Not even the boss, neither the staff. "This is a great thing! I never knew everyone is going to be here." Tolani smiled. "See Tobi, so you left the office even before lunch break right?" Temitope smiled. "Oga no oh..." he grinned. "No problem, all is well." Tobi smiled. ****** Evening. Tolani had gotten to the front of Stella's place to drop her when he came down from the car and spoke with her. "I so much enjoyed today." He said. "Thank God everything worked out back, if not..." Stella smiled. "Everything was done to teach us a lesson. We left for years and Fod still worked out a way for us again. Even there were problems and troubles, blood issues but THE ONE I LOVE still belongs to me." He smiled an hugged her. "This God Is great." Stella smiled. "Really great. He has ways of workinf out things. Love you dear." "Love you more." She replied. ....THE END.... FROM THE WRITER'S DESK. THE ONE I LOVE. THE ONE I LOVE may not be the one destined with me THE ONE I LOVE may not be the one that will love me till death. Tobi loved Stella but they weren't destined together, Tolani who loved Stella too underwent troubles and problems before his dreams came true. Good things don't come easily, you run after them. Never give up on love! Love is not wicked like the love Feyi had for Tolani from d start. God has designed everyone's script and nothing will change it. THE ONE I LOVE MAY NOT BE GOD'S CHOICE, PLEASE! The short story I wrote between dz story is a real one! I know of a lady like that who died because her parents married and gave birth to her as SS. Do you think that kind of a chid will pray for you? DON'T USE YOUR HAPPINESS TO DISRUPT UR FUTURE! LOVE AND LEARN! ...... DANNIE DEE KONSEPTS. 2014. 18 Likes |
Re: The One I Love by Aipete2(f): 8:49pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
The one i love, my first love disappointed me, guys sha * Sad mood * Baby i still love you oh, i want u to cm back to me plz |
Re: The One I Love by Ormorlehwah(f): 8:59pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
Aipete2: The one i love, my first love disappointed me, guys sha * Sad mood * Baby i still love you oh, i want u to cm back to me plzHmmmmmm....... THE ONE I LOVE, Eh yah tokyo love. I go lovvvvvvvve ooooooo |
Re: The One I Love by godwah(f): 9:00pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
Nice one weldone dear more ink 2 ur pen. |
Re: The One I Love by necal(f): 9:09pm On Jul 28, 2014 |
it was a happy ride as usual. n all I can say is that u are d best. ur stories teaches people while it entertains dem too,,,, more wisdom 2 u mr. T. |
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