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Re: The Corridor of Hell by ghostwritter(m): 4:17pm On May 15, 2017 |
shovaychoco:Amen o! I so much need God's favour soonest but God should also help heal the entire Nation and my President Buhari. *** mister_tayo (instagram) if u wish tagging a face. |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by eunisam: 10:20am On May 16, 2017 |
ghostwritter: Bia nwokem, write this thing osorsor let me gerrarahia |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by ChukaLupin(m): 1:20pm On May 16, 2017 |
You Haven't finished o! |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by experimentist: 3:53pm On May 16, 2017 |
Mr Ghostwriter wetin dey sup? You been MIA and we miss you. 1 Like |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by ChukaLupin(m): 7:06pm On May 16, 2017 |
. 2 Likes |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by MhizDherbee(f): 9:17pm On May 16, 2017 |
Please continue......... 1 Like |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by dhehbhor(m): 10:51pm On May 16, 2017 |
intriguing story so far.......kudos bro 1 Like |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by ghostwritter(m): 8:42am On May 17, 2017 |
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Re: The Corridor of Hell by ChukaLupin(m): 10:15am On May 17, 2017 |
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Re: The Corridor of Hell by ChukaLupin(m): 10:33am On May 17, 2017 |
. 1 Like |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by ernesty20(m): 11:49am On May 17, 2017 |
Who Be This Mumu Again? If U Want To Write A Story, Start Your Own And Stop Derailing This Beautiful Thread With Your Hogwashed Nansense |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by ChukaLupin(m): 12:21pm On May 17, 2017 |
ernesty20: ? |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by ghostwritter(m): 1:44pm On May 17, 2017 |
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Re: The Corridor of Hell by sotadegrt(m): 2:37pm On May 17, 2017 |
ChukaLupin: your update on dis thread is wonderfully boring. It irks to the high heavens. Go start your own story. |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by Nobody: 2:55pm On May 17, 2017 |
ernesty20: If nor b you wey bring this scam to my notice. I be don read waka,wait for d next update. Lol, Chukalupin is a bad guy. 1 Like |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by ghostwritter(m): 10:35pm On May 17, 2017 |
******* **** Azzarah was so much terrified to see Gadar go futher in using a cutlass in tearing the corps of the youngman into pieces. He had thought of hitting hitting Gadar with a stone but thought what if missed. So he waited patiently for the perfect time as he watched furiously in his hiding. The perfect time came when Azzarah from his hiding saw Gadar fully turned his back at him to face the rock, he had earlier seen him poured various things into the fire and had rubbed it ashes on the rock, he saw him try enchanting the rock with incantation as the wind blew and the atmosphere was electrified with thunderous strikes. Slowly and carefully, Azzarah moved forward in anger and despise for Gadar, he knew Gadar was more evil than he potrayed. Quickly, he picked up the dagger beside Gadar and swiftly pushed it through his back, Gadar slowly turned in pain as he tries to reach for the stuck object with one of his hands but he couldn’t. Gadar was surprise to see Azzarah, he grinned in pain, and slowly falling to his kneels as he kept trying to reach for the dagger tightly stuck behind him. Gadar pointing to the rock with his other hand trying to say something but Azzarah was too furious and enraged to have noticed; he rose up a huge stone and mercilessly hits it upon Gadar’s head. Gadar fell lifeless to the ground with a broken skull as blood gushed out of it. Azzarah was still breathing heavily, trying to catch his breath when he heard something cracked; he slowly turned to the rock, gazed at it, hoping it’s not what he thinks. Slowly, the rock cracked heavily, fully exposing the creatures it had harbored. Azzarah carefully moved forward to have a clearer look; he watched with disbelief the once mighty Daughters of death lying still within a specious confine of the cracked rock. The light from the full moon had made him realized the three bodies were motionless and he doubted if they were alive but he wouldn’t dare risk his life to confirm. As he stood there thinking of what to do, he heard a sound behind him, it was a threatening growl, he turned around to realize it was a snarl of a beast with it glowing eyes directly at him. Shocked and trembling, Azzarah watched as the huge black hairy wolf gentle padded out from within leafs into the open reflection of the moon. Azzarah had no tool on him, he saw the dagger stacked to Gadar’s back and not too far was also a bloody machete but he realized it would be deadly and silly of him to make any confrontational move against such a deadly creature. It snarled more aggressively at him with its body extended, back arched and tail vibrating , Azzarah knew he was done for, it was over for him, he stood still like an erected wood waiting to be pounced upon when suddenly a gentle wind blew from within the cracked rock where the daughters of death laid still into the open air. The Wolf fearfully pushed back, whining as it had its tail tucked between legs; it dashed back in hurry into the forest. Azzarah turned to the rock, closely looked at the unconscious creatures in it and try to figure out what just happened but he couldn’t and after awhile he decided to do what he had to do. ***** ******** 4 Likes
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Re: The Corridor of Hell by adontcare(f): 2:48am On May 18, 2017 |
Hehehe. If I be azzarah, I for borrow leg take run. Well done ghostwriter. |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by Nobody: 6:21am On May 18, 2017 |
adontcare: Usain Bolt legs go make sense here 1 Like |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by Majesticniyi(m): 8:53am On May 18, 2017 |
Omoh....na story be this. I'm held spellbound. Ghostwriter, you rock! |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by ChukaLupin(m): 10:12am On May 18, 2017 |
Lol. I finally got you to continue.
Your grammar sef don improve. Kudos 1 Like |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by keelarpencil(m): 10:50am On May 18, 2017 |
oga ghost writer dis ur story intrigues me as am reading it. but can't you do something abt this long wait... abeg |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by abilshay(m): 12:36pm On May 18, 2017 |
mehn. This story is captivatingmehn. This story is captivatingmehn. This story is captivating |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by eunisam: 8:53pm On May 18, 2017 |
last update is too short. faster abeg |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by bourbon(m): 6:52pm On May 19, 2017 |
Mehn this writer is not from this planet and this story is definitely out of this world. Patiently following and constantly glued to this captivating story..... In Ryback"s voice: "Feed me more" 1 Like |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by Nobody: 10:13pm On May 20, 2017 |
ghostwritter:finally a horror story... So intriguing... 1 Like |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by Damibiz(m): 9:25am On May 21, 2017 |
Nice update,bt it hv being lng since u updated,jst try nd do it twice a day |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by Chizzyjoyce(f): 3:49pm On May 21, 2017 |
Awwwwwn.. This one really caught me Jesus!! Can someone be this good Ghostwriter I swear You know how to handle the pen I so much love this work In fact Kudos to you will [color=#006600][/color] |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by udison(m): 1:21pm On May 22, 2017 |
WAITING PATIENLY |
Re: The Corridor of Hell by ghostwritter(m): 10:06pm On May 22, 2017 |
HAS ANYONE EXPERIENCED SAME? 1 Like 1 Share |
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