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The Day The Clouds Turned Red (crime Story) / 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] / All In A Circle...(a Crime Story)-- The Completion (2) (3) (4)

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tenajtek(f): 5:29am On Nov 14, 2014
Waoh! Just wish i could support this cause. Someway, somehow. Welldone d9ty7.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 6:18am On Nov 14, 2014
Wow!great updates....Kelvin Kelvin kelvin,how many times did i call you?be careful sora e
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by samcidon(m): 6:38am On Nov 14, 2014
Bros hope say d receptionist no go die? Kelvin leave Ngo alone, na pesin wife to be. Loving dis story.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:50am On Nov 14, 2014
Good morning guys. Update comes up in a matter of minutes.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:51am On Nov 14, 2014
tenajtek:
Waoh! Just wish i could support this cause. Someway, somehow. Welldone d9ty7.
Thank you ma'am.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:53am On Nov 14, 2014
Receptionist? Lemme check if she'll die.
samcidon:
Bros hope say d receptionist no go die? Kelvin leave Ngo alone, na pesin wife to be. Loving dis story.
Kelvin is a guy who always get whatever he wants. He must have Ngozi even if he has to eliminate Tobiloba(Ngozi's fiancee)
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:54am On Nov 14, 2014
Why is everyone talking about Kelvin? Is he doing something wrong. He is in love that's all.
Vibra:
Wow!great updates....Kelvin Kelvin kelvin,how many times did i call you?be careful sora e
How are you doing?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Ziziola: 8:05am On Nov 14, 2014
Hmmmmm........ Nice story with different sets of people with different palava
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:17am On Nov 14, 2014
I appreciate it ma'am. Thanks.
Ziziola:
Hmmmmm........ Nice story with different sets of people with different palava
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by alabig(m): 8:17am On Nov 14, 2014
One thing is to be in love, another is to be in doubtful love. Kelvin issue is of the doubtful one which might end up in breaking and slaughtering of one's heart. However, the uncanny aspect of it is the avaricious attitude he had over tobiloba towards ngozi. Is sandra not woman enough for kelvin or is kelvin needed a force lady to be getting information before he strategize on his dubious venture with the corporation?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by bdabuwa(m): 8:19am On Nov 14, 2014
Nice one, keep it up !!!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:21am On Nov 14, 2014
Kelvin knows how to get what he wants. But in this case, he just doesn't know what he wanted.
alabig:
One thing is to be in love, another is to be in doubtful love. Kelvin issue is of the doubtful one which might end up in breaking and slaughtering of one's heart. However, the uncanny aspect of it is the avaricious attitude he had over tobiloba towards ngozi. Is sandra not woman enough for kelvin or is kelvin needed a force lady to be getting information before he strategize on his dubious venture with the corporation?
@ the bolded. You may be right. It seemed like Kelvin needed an informant from the police force.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:22am On Nov 14, 2014
Thanks bro and good morning to you.
bdabuwa:
Nice one, keep it up !!!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:55am On Nov 14, 2014
--continuation--
As Clement drove out of the estate, he started weighing his options. He started making plans on how best to spend the day. He was given a week off work, but he concluded that a week would be too much and he'd have missed a lot. Even if he won't be part of any police team for the day, he won't mind sitting at the counter, even though it is impossible.
He took a right turn and headed for the Lagos State university. He was not a student, neither was he a parent, he had nobody studying in the school. He just felt visiting the girls is a responsibility. Its been a while since he visited them.
He drove towards the girls hostel his mind full of dangerous and wild imagination. He considered divorcing his wife because she seemed not to think like he does, she doen't want him in the force, she was a stumbling block. She wanted him all to herself alone. He snapped himself out of the weird imagination just when he phones started ringing.
"Hello, sweety." He said immediately he picked the call.
"Sweety, I forgot to tell you. But I have a session at the hospital today." She informed.
"And you didn't tell me before I left home."
"Am sorry darling. I can go can't I?"
"Who'll drive you? Call one of Dad's bodyguards." he asked.
"I'll drive myself. I already got the keys of the Honda element parked inside the garage. I don't feel safe with those mean looking guys." She explained.
"Alright baby. Keep you phone on."
He brought his car to a halt in front of the school's security complex. He alighted and walked.
As he proceeded towards the CSO's office, he could hear two faint voices arguing.
"He is the one." A familiar female voice said.
"Who is he?" Another female voice asked.
"Inspector...." I don't know his name but he bears and english name anyways.
He didn't bother looking back at the locked cells. He knokced on the door to the cso's office and was asked to enter.
"Inspector Clement." The cso, Mr Bankole said immediately he saw him.
"Good morning sir."
"Please take a seat."
The two men chatted for a while, discussed the security level of the school at present. Clement couldn't help but smile at the latest development. Students are now safe to move around even at night.
Ten minutes later, the cso walked him out of the office. A familiar face caught his attention. About twenty students were locked up inside a cell.
"Hey! You." He called her.
Tolani quickly ran towards the iron bar.
"What are you doing here?" He asked.
Mr Bankole quickly replied.
"They were all fighting yesterday evening. Our man were able to round them up afterall."
"They were all fighting or two people were fighting and the rest were watching?"
Mr Bankole looked at Clement for a while.
"Do you realise that you could be sued to court for this? You locked them up overnight, without taking gender into consideration. Don't you think, something bad could happen?" he paused.
"Anyways, can you release them to me?"
Three minutes later, all of them were released and Clement volunteered to drive Tolani and Tokunbo to their hostel.
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The journey back home was silent and boring. Tokunbo and Tolani were seated at the backseat exchanging occassional glances which he paid no attention to.
He was deep in thought. Even if he was at the hospital, someone should have at least told him about the latest development inside the school. He personally invited Roberts and his team over, so they can keep watch over the girls for twenty four hours and give him reports. He just hoped its not what he is thinking.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++
One hour later, he drove into the police headquarters happily, but something stange caught his attention. Everywhere was unusually quiet. The young police officer who are always merrying were seated in group with teary eyes. Then it hit him. Another policeman had died.
The National flag was flown at half mast as well as the Nigeria's police force flag. He hurriedly brought his car to a halt and ran into the building ignoring greeting from the young officers outside.
He was friends with everyone in the force but he had some friends who are just too special. Ngozi, Mike, Sylvester. He just hoped it is not Mike.
But has he thought about his junior, who rose to the ranks through him? Has he thought about the young policeman who took him as his elder brother and seek advises from time to time?
Has he thought about Charles?
"No! It's not happening." He muttered as he ran to the counter.
--to be continued--
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by chuks000(m): 9:07am On Nov 14, 2014
Dis na breakfast....keep up d gud wrk bro
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 9:13am On Nov 14, 2014
adeh39:
Mmmmn d way dis story is going ehn....? Kelvin.... D guy is sumhw going crazy, nd Rachael, I hope she explains 2 her husband b4 Kelvin do sumthing crazy ooo. Dis Janet nd Benson issue sef... Nawa ooo... I hope she teaches him sum lesson but make she no spoil him marriage o.

Nd I also wnt 2 say hi 2 my sweetheart.... Techno4life, I miss u so much.

I miss u too baby kisskisskisskisskisskisskiss *lifts her up in d air* so how are you my love
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Flakeey(f): 9:15am On Nov 14, 2014
eh ehhhhh
na wa o
*speechless*
i don't know why Rachel won't open up to her husband about what she saw in Chief Pat's study

kudos man
waiting for more updates.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:22am On Nov 14, 2014
She was trying to protect her husband. She knew Clement is going to get his father arrested and their lives will be in danger.
Flakeey:
eh ehhhhh
na wa o
*speechless*
i don't know why Rachel won't open up to her husband about what she saw in Chief Pat's study

kudos man
waiting for more updates.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:42am On Nov 14, 2014
Ten more comments and I drop the next update. Lets start counting
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emmykul4love(m): 9:56am On Nov 14, 2014
I didnt see anything coming yet,but........................ok i now understand
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 10:09am On Nov 14, 2014
good morning my fellow readers please the elimination round for mr nairaland have started just click the link below to vote for me thanks and GOD BLESS.

https://www.nairaland.com/1995552/mr-nairaland-december-2014-edition
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:26am On Nov 14, 2014
Hey guys, something just came up. There is a guy named Kiddablingz, he is contesting at the ongoing Mr Nairaland contest. He needs you vote, he is one of us here. Even though you may not see him comment, he does his by sending mail messages.
Lets make sure he progresses to the next round.
Kiddablingz needs your votes.
Here is the link; https://www.nairaland.com/1995552/mr-nairaland-december-2014-edition.
Meanwhile, as you vote for Kiddablingz, you should try and add giftforlife9 to the list. They both need our votes.

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Your votes counts.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Spongia1(m): 10:38am On Nov 14, 2014
Nice story
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 11:09am On Nov 14, 2014
Hey hey!!!
Come back no run come comment and encourage oga duro
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Oga u said 10 comments okies let's go there cool
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 11:10am On Nov 14, 2014
d9ty7 dis story is wonderfull keep it up
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 11:11am On Nov 14, 2014
Oga mi nice updates
this yur suspense too too much.
Who have died again,i guess itz Ngozi or something like that...
Hmmm ride on
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 11:12am On Nov 14, 2014
tecno4life:
Hey hey!!!
Come back no run come comment and encourage oga duro
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Oga u said 10 comments okies let's go there cool
i don comment my own
morninq sir... 2days you come hide?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 11:12am On Nov 14, 2014
D9ty7 ur story is finally shaping up I now understand where it's going but in d circle without diameter who will win
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 11:14am On Nov 14, 2014
stuff46:

i don comment my own
morninq sir... 2days you come hide?

NO NA BUSY ME BUSY OOH, ANYWAYS D9TY7 HOOPW U DEY COUNT D COMMENT BECAUSE I GO COMPLETE AM 10 SINCE U WANT 10 COMMENTS BE4 U GO UPDATE
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 11:19am On Nov 14, 2014
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I catch una
so una wan chop clean mouth abi undecided

as 4 d guests join Nairaland and comment be4 my eye red now angry
ah ha we go push d writer 2 update una go come chop and run In d name of guests angryangry

As 4 d registered ones make go bring 9mm Taurus I go come meet una angry
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 11:23am On Nov 14, 2014
Oga D9ty7 no tell I 2 do 10 comments again ooh angry

all dis ones go read clean mouth na me go come dey beg u 2 update 4 dem again angry I dey talk guests dey plenty wella angry

OYA OGA ALL DIS COMMENT DON DO COME UPDATE grin
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 11:26am On Nov 14, 2014
Ole! Ole! See dem here angry
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and none go comment angry dem wan read but no go encourage writer.
Oga D9ty7 continue joor! No mind dis ones angry

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