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The Day The Clouds Turned Red (crime Story) / 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] / All In A Circle...(a Crime Story)-- The Completion (2) (3) (4)

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Beckytee(f): 9:34am On Nov 23, 2014
Uthman51:
Beckytee:
tank you
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Beckytee(f): 9:35am On Nov 23, 2014
stuff46:



tommorow already here.
Hapi birthday wishinq yu llnp.

*in racheal's unbore babies voice.
How old are you now?
tank you... In kelvin's voice silver jubileee
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 9:43am On Nov 23, 2014
stuff46:

lol dictionar... Wat?
Dictionary. Happy bdae to da celebrant.
Welcome techno4life. Pls resume your job o.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 10:28am On Nov 23, 2014
walewunmi:
chai logo u open my yansh i'ms still in page 5 I was hoping to meet up with u guys b4 I comment bt newaiz its all good i'm back here people d bouncer is back bt for now lemme go be to ghost mode once I meet up wit u guys I wud cum bak @logo wunmi is fine she's just bizy of late
TAGS:
D9ty7
techno4life
stefikal and everybody miss u guys alot

Okay.
All iz well
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 10:30am On Nov 23, 2014
Beckytee:
tank you... In kelvin's voice silver jubileee
wishinq you many yearz ahead like diamond jubileee
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 10:42am On Nov 23, 2014
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 10:53am On Nov 23, 2014
Hapi bafday, bufday,baiday,betday and birthday 2 u beckytee ..
*wish u everytin gud in life*
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:25am On Nov 23, 2014
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO BECKYTEE. LONG LIFE AND PROSPERITIES IN JAH'S NAME. JAH IN HIS INFINITE MERCIES WILL GRANT YOU EVERY OF YOUR HEART DESIRES.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 11:33am On Nov 23, 2014
*No wonder she was making noise here yesterday*
Happy birthday beckytee.......may God decorate u with unlimited favour
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by mariamferanmi(f): 11:42am On Nov 23, 2014
HBD beckytee!!! Don't know u but just wishing u HBD LLNP in Good health n wealth!

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 11:50am On Nov 23, 2014
Happy birthday beckytee.
Wishing u more good things on earth
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:57am On Nov 23, 2014
Update resumes this afternoon. One of the readers here who asked not to be mentioned because he is a guest made it possible. He subscribed my phone so I can serve you guys with updates aplenty.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Rounakid(m): 12:22pm On Nov 23, 2014
Yeepaaaa...! Mah niqqa don bounce bak mehn... *draws my seat nd gallon of monkey tail closer*
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by mariamferanmi(f): 12:24pm On Nov 23, 2014
Tanx to dat anonymous person, D9ty7 tanx 4 wanting to give us more u are toooooo muchhhhh
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Benjaminbest(m): 12:39pm On Nov 23, 2014
nice work kip it up Is not easy. I wish oda nl writers were regular updaters as u.tanks again but i want to make a little correction pls wen writing dont write in favour of any character like trying to favour one to another it wil make d story luk like a fiction i believe dats what it is.....but if u write in favour of no character it wil make d story live why bcus everybody is bound to make mistake. I also notice a place were two officers fought in real sence like in my state a jnr officer wil b put in prison for creating nuisance and his accomplish which is clement wil also b punish for lack of professionalism bcus is an order from above......pls no favourities. Tanks abeg nor take am too far
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Benjaminbest(m): 1:01pm On Nov 23, 2014
pls note dis any profession dat has to do with force such police, army,navy and odas though dey also engage on physical combact but dey are taught not to fear. Dey dont respect themselves base on physical build on but on how gud dey deal with cases. So saying in one of ur update dat d oda guy is afraid of d oda guy and dose two guys take on dsame profession and d one dat even seem to b afraid pass through hard training dan d oda. Abeg bros in force is not dont dat way dey dont believe in physical combact with one anoda abeg correct dat. Wen i read d undercover agent it was gud there was a little favoritism but was not as open as d one in all in a circle.........pls am not critiscing ur gud work jst a correction. U are trying kip it up. Remain blessed
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MhizEnkay(f): 1:05pm On Nov 23, 2014
D9ty7:
This gel yaff kee me. Nobel gini?God will give you wisdom too, same with strengthening you.
what is Nobel gini? Dream big jare
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 1:16pm On Nov 23, 2014
Where the update angry
Beckytee happy birthday kiss
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MhizEnkay(f): 1:17pm On Nov 23, 2014
haydot95:
Thanks for the regular update boss... lemme read the latest update finish b4 I drop the remaining comment so I go fit mark attendance
them dey mark attendance? And no one told me! #feigning annoyance
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MhizEnkay(f): 1:26pm On Nov 23, 2014
Beckytee:
tank you
happy birthday dear.. Wish yhu what yhu wish yaself.. Have fun!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Beckytee(f): 1:50pm On Nov 23, 2014
D9ty7:
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO BECKYTEE. LONG LIFE AND PROSPERITIES IN JAH'S NAME. JAH IN HIS INFINITE MERCIES WILL GRANT YOU EVERY OF YOUR HEART DESIRES.
Amen. Wow, I really apreciate dis tank u soo much.... Tank you all for your wishes may almighty God ans all ur prayers and make you happy always. LOVE YOU ALL
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 2:05pm On Nov 23, 2014
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 2:17pm On Nov 23, 2014
@Benjaminbest: you criticism are well recieved and will be acted on. I'll try to improve on everything you said. But the problem is, I am not a policeman. But anyways, I'll work on it.
@Everyone who has commented, you guys are just too numerous to mention. Thank you all.
And to that guy that said I can drink 6,000litres of palm wine. There is God o.

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kristen12(f): 2:22pm On Nov 23, 2014
Happy birthday beckytee, wishing you the best life has to offer and all you wish yourself.
Oga D9ty7 wats up with Rachael na
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 2:53pm On Nov 23, 2014
Thanks Mr ghost reader,guess we all show our support for d9ty7 in different ways...thanks a lot though....now lemme go back up and "farabale" chop this update
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 2:54pm On Nov 23, 2014
MhizEnkay:
them dey mark attendance? And no one told me! #feigning annoyance
hehe...oya no vex,even tho ya annoyance na fake...barman,help me give her feyrouz,or u want something strong?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 2:58pm On Nov 23, 2014
So this idiot girl hasn't told anyone about the note she received yet shey? Guess she wanna die sef
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 3:31pm On Nov 23, 2014
Beckytee:
tank u, I really apreciate dis
*sings*api birthday to u 2x hapibedday2x hapi beday to u. How old r u nw?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 3:34pm On Nov 23, 2014
D9ty7:
@Benjaminbest: you criticism are well recieved and will be acted on. I'll try to improve on everything you said. But the problem is, I am not a policeman. But anyways, I'll work on it.
@Everyone who has commented, you guys are just too numerous to mention. Thank you all.
And to that guy that said I can drink 6,000litres of palm wine. There is God o.
comon u knw u can do dat. U have drink it b4
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 3:35pm On Nov 23, 2014
D9ty7:
@Benjaminbest: you criticism are well recieved and will be acted on. I'll try to improve on everything you said. But the problem is, I am not a policeman. But anyways, I'll work on it.
@Everyone who has commented, you guys are just too numerous to mention. Thank you all.
And to that guy that said I can drink 6,000litres of palm wine. There is God o.
comon u knw u can do dat. U have drink it b4 correction i said gallons not litres
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Beckytee(f): 4:18pm On Nov 23, 2014
D9ty7:
--continuation--
Darasimi was almost sleeping off when Dolapo walked into the room shouting. Tola ran out of the store turned kitchen to know what the noise was all about.
"What's the matter?" Darasimi asked as Tola walked into the room and leaned on the wall.
"My exam on Tuesday has been postponed." She said hapilly.
"I swear to God. You are mad." Tolani said and walked away.
This same Dolapo recieved the news of the forthcoming exam with total indifference like she does not care, like she wasn't afraid. So why is she happy to see the exam called off?
"So when are you writing it?" Darasimi asked.
"Friday." She replied.
"Meaning, you'll write three papers on Friday. How do you intend to do that?" Darasimi asked.
"Help me ask her o." Tolani said from the kitchen.
"My second paper ends 2pm and the third paper starts by 2:30pm. I'll finish before two o'clock and rush down for my second last paper." She replied.
"Well thought. You know, you can even call Stephanie to come and pick you up. Or what do you thin?"
"Thank you jare my friend. I'll do just that."
"But my friend, what if your second paper take you by suprise and you find it difficult and time consuming. How will you do it? I mean, you want to finish the exam before two o'clock, and we both know some exams can make you use extra time." Tolani said walking into the room with two plates of rice. She dropped one before Darasimi and the other on her own bed.
"Abeg forget about my exams. Where is my food?" Dolapo asked.
"I wasn't expecting you now. So I didn't prepare your own food." Tola replied.
"You must be joking." Dolapo said laughing.
"I don't joke on Fridays." Tola said emphatically.
"Are you serious?" Dolapo asked.
Tola nodded her head affirmatively with seriousness written all over her face.
"You can come and have mine, I'll get something else to eat outside." Darasimi volunteered.
"No, you can eat."
she walked out of the room towards the kitchen to confirm her fears.
"Tola you dey mad o." She shouted from the kitchen.
Tolani bursted into laughter.
"Did you prepare her own?" Darasimi asked.
"You should trust me now. She is my kid sister, so I have to take care of her." Tolani replied.
"When it comes to food, you are the eldest, but believe me, you beg me today." Dolapo said as she walked into the room with a plate of rice and a pack of fruit juice and two glass cups.
"Where did you see this?" Tola asked, smile disappearing from her face.
Dolapo ignored her as she filled the two glass cups and gave one to Darasimi and she took one herself.
"Am not gonna carry last. Let me get my own cup." Tola said dashing out of the room.
"And you'll be taken by suprise because your glass will only be filled with water."
She still felt the urge to tell her friend about the letter she recieved in the lecture hall a few hours ago, but she wasn't sure and doesn't seem to trust Darsimi.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Lunch has been going on smoothly even though Sandra was trying hard to contain her anger. She still managed to engage her cousin's girlfriend in conversation.
Frank was all smiles as she watched the two ladies talk about fashion and other things that he considered as boring, but for the sake of the present situation, he had to play along.
"You two will really fit as sisters." Frank chipped in.
"I won't mind having Isabell as the sister I don't have." Sandra replied smiling.
"Me too. Or what do you think big sis?" Isabella asked and they all bursted into laughter.
"You are a very funny girl." Sandra said.
"Just like Janet when she was here." Frank added.
And his reply or addition was was the last straw that broke the camel's back.
"What did you just say?" Sandra asked hitting the table with her fist, causing the drinking glasses to spill.
"I said she is as humorous as Janet." Frank replied foolishly. And before he could get a grip of himself, his elder cousin was already ranting angrily.
It was then he remembered that Janet left his cousin's house on a very bad note.
"I knew it, you guys were working together. No wonder you said nothing when I told you she duped me of eight million naira. You have to tell me where she lives because I knew all about your celebrating your victory against me. You met today right? And you took pictures."
"Aunty please take it easy." Isabella said but her vision soon went blank after she realised that Sandra had slapped her hard accross the face.
"Sandy, I don't understand what you are talking about." Frank said.
"You understand when am through with you. Now you two get out of my house." Sandra screamed at them.

--to be continued--
This update is dedicated to the birthday girl/lady/woman. Beckytee
tanx for the dedication
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Beckytee(f): 4:19pm On Nov 23, 2014
kristen12:
Happy birthday beckytee, wishing you the best life has to offer and all you wish yourself.
Oga D9ty7 wats up with Rachael na
tanx dear

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