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Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by Flakkydagirl: 2:26pm On Jan 23, 2015 |
kingphilip:. I can't find the link too. @mod...Obinnau |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by lenmafon: 2:39pm On Jan 23, 2015 |
touchmeder: yea i guess so but i sincerely want to thank u personally, the message in the story pass just that one way u mention: infact them plenty. thanks for the mention and e bi like say mama pamela prayed for my phone, then miracle come happen . girl u are good and i hope u go publish as book? u deserve many 'carribian' kisses - (i no be pamela's friend o!) |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by Nmeri17: 3:01pm On Jan 23, 2015 |
u didn't say anything about "pop goes the weasel" or if edugie is pretending to be sick @touch me there |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by lenmafon: 4:47pm On Jan 23, 2015 |
Nmeri17: she did say that sometimss edugie behaves normal and when she(pamela) is happy that edugie is getting better, edugie will start behaving strange again. touchmender also did mention dat after pamela told her mother about the abuse, mama pamela took edugie for deliverance becos she think edugie needs spiritual deliverance than just the 'psychology' therapy she has been attending in the hospital. a little child like edugie that was abused at that age is bound to suffer such problem & i dont think she could be pretending. i hope i ve explained to ur understanding. |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by Timothy3113(m): 5:59pm On Jan 23, 2015 |
touchmeder:even i never born and am not preparing to born now, i will always protect my kids from d closest relative i ever known. |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by Lilyomi(f): 6:04pm On Jan 23, 2015 |
I jus love the way u ended it. The future is always uncertain for such victims and they easily hurt anyone who tries to push them out of comfort in the future. If only we listened to their story, if only only parents had been a little more close to their kids, if only we trust no one wif our kids, if only parents knew whatever they do affects their kids...... If only. Touchmeder ur story is sooo real. Thnks a lot |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by touchmeder: 6:55pm On Jan 23, 2015 |
lenmafon: Very well spoken. Pop goes the weasel and Its raining; its pouring are nursery rhymes. Edugie was not pretending. |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by Nobody: 7:29pm On Jan 23, 2015 |
Double post |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by Nobody: 7:29pm On Jan 23, 2015 |
touchmeder: Good job, I enjoyed it! I just wish Pamela and her friend are not saddled with the burden of murder! So sad because after the euphoria of the satisfaction of revenge, they will bear the guilt of murder, maybe for life. They shouldn't have taken the laws into their frigile hands! |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by Fatalveli(m): 8:03pm On Jan 23, 2015 |
Nice piece touchmeder, u are indeed an atomic bomb. This story deserves frontpage. Cc. Obinnau |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by charijee(f): 8:13pm On Jan 23, 2015 |
At last we've come to the end of this intriguing piece...... Touchmeder you really touched my marrow with this story......its so educating and diversified......but one thing is sure.....Pamela and Pippi will forever live with the guilt of murder...... Applauds to you touchmeder |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by Toeyean1507(f): 10:44am On Jan 24, 2015 |
As much as i wouldnt wanna sound like im supporting dis high level of juvenile delinquency and risky vengeance,i'll applaud Pam and Pippi fr dis payback. Yea,they shudnt have taken laws into their hands.Lemm quickly bring to ur notice dat we r in a society whr justice is as scare as virginity. Leaving dis kinda matter to d law enforcement agencies might not have dis kinda effect. Im not in any way supporting jungle justice.I just pray God forgives u...................@TOUCHMEDER,thanks for sharing dis lovely piece.May d Good lord strenghten u 'Opolostically' 1 Like |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by missterious(f): 5:21am On Jan 25, 2015 |
Thank you for this great story, touchmeder. Please mention me when you start the next one. |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by Elparaiso(m): 6:01am On Jan 25, 2015 |
I no go lie, this is the first novel I've finished on Nairaland.... Thank God, It was worth it... Touchmeder gha to pe e |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by touchmeder: 10:10am On Jan 25, 2015 |
Elparaiso: You dey hail me Oba greeting? I beg ohhhhh! LOL Just curious are you bini? @missterious, I will. You were the one always distributing likes on d story abi? That was cute. |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by Elparaiso(m): 12:20pm On Jan 25, 2015 |
touchmeder:I be Bini boy o... Owiedo kpataki.. Owiedo se se e se 1 Like |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by Lilyomi(f): 12:21pm On Jan 25, 2015 |
Yes o pls mention my name in ur next story. 1 Like |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by Costlybabe: 12:46pm On Jan 25, 2015 |
This is a wonderful piece,thumbs up to you touchmede,ms imade had neglected her children and y she even chose to have children for a married,i don't know and even sleeps with her men right under the children nose,really bad,thanks touchmede for sharing this piece 2 Likes |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by missterious(f): 2:07pm On Jan 25, 2015 |
touchmeder: Lol. The least I could do. 1 Like |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by Ebbisco(f): 4:06pm On Jan 25, 2015 |
This work is beautiful, the end is superb. @touchmeder this is your first work I'll b reading, i luv it soooo much will look out for ur other works on NLand. 1 Like |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by virtuedagirl(f): 4:23pm On Jan 25, 2015 |
Wow u story is so superb and each time i read an update,i kept coming back 4 more.Touchmeder u are blessed already and i see u going places,all d best in ur endeavours. I hav been a silent follower but i just hav 2 comment cos ur work is so nice and i enjoyed every bit of it. 1 Like |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by Promziie(f): 5:34am On Jan 27, 2015 |
Nice story! |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by Nobody: 9:13am On Jan 27, 2015 |
Wow! Nice piece here.. Please Nairaland Writer voting is closing on the 28th. Just quickly vote for one of these three as the best Newcomer of the year. Touchmeder, Kinwayne thronekid Also, vote for any other three as the best writer of the year, including this writer. Follow this link to vote https://www.nairaland.com/1804027/free-n5000-writer-here-every/46 |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by gal10(f): 12:43pm On Jan 27, 2015 |
I started this story and didn't go beyond d first post...subsequently i tried to continue but couldn't...i just couldn't go through it .... Today i came and forced myself to read abd couldn't stop... I locked myself in d restroom at work n finished this..... Touchmeder you are A raw talent... Please never stop writing abeg.... |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by touchmeder: 10:56pm On Jan 27, 2015 |
gal10: I appreciate, glad you enjoyed it. |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by alabig(m): 4:58pm On Jan 28, 2015 |
Touchmeder i voted for you before reading any of your story, buh after reading this story i concluded that your story worth my vote. However, there're some parts that got me off kilted, such as where you posted with alphabet letters. And again, it got to a point where your story updates on this thread does'nt move in tandem and i got a bit confused at the middle and end of the story. You're just an amazon in the writing world. |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by stuff46(m): 2:14pm On Jan 29, 2015 |
Dyoungstar: 2 Likes |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by Lilyomi(f): 2:58pm On Jan 29, 2015 |
Touchmeder I believe u.nid to delete some part of ur story to prevent plagiarism. Writin ain't easy n sumone enjoyin ur sweat certainly ain't pleasant. 1 Like |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by touchmeder: 6:40pm On Jan 29, 2015 |
Lilyomi:My dear I did that since yesterday. Its something I always do apart from the first story I wrote here. This plagiarism stuff is quite annoying. |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by lenmafon: 6:26pm On Jan 30, 2015 |
touchmender, i hope u ve them in ur blog cos i think it is time we leave NL an follow u to ur blog. hope u dey na? 2 Likes |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by ubjunior10(m): 10:16am On Feb 02, 2015 |
Where Cn I Get D Complete Stowy T.M?..Seems Yhu Cut Sum Scenes Awt. |
Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by lenmafon: 12:52pm On Apr 03, 2015 |
touchmender where art thou? its been long o! abey who has seen touchmender? |
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