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| Our First Time by nnamso(m): 10:57am On Dec 18, 2014 |
I want our first time to be special, not conventional, no candles no flowers, no music. Just in a dark room together. All I want to hear is the sound of our lips and the friction of our skin bonding together. Just us whispering to each other about how much we want this and how much we want that. Our first time will bring about a lifetime of us I want to kiss forever into your lips as I start an adventure that you will find worthwhile. Don’t kiss me if your saliva doesn’t test like forever Written by Nnamso A. @nnamso_ 1 Like 1 Share |
| Re: Our First Time by Nobody: 5:33pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
I too. I want my first time to be special.  Ayamlaykorn |
| Re: Our First Time by Ghost01(m): 4:54pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
OP, you could make the poem into three stanzas. It'd be more fun and easier to read that way. |
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