heaven on earth

a paradise i hadnt experienced yet

hard hands on my naked skin

swimming in a sea of blankets

exploring each other like new terrain

a little bit of pleasure and pain

naked bodies entwined

souls met

left in a state of bliss

and all things sweet

ur adventurous lips

planting soft kisses

the creaking of the bed

drowned by loud moans

not of one in great pain

but of intense pleasure

our first time

not a cheap sensual thrill

but the physical expression

of the love we deeply feel,

Another good one. If only everyone's first time was like dat.

Beautifull! Do you mind if I print it and put it at my wall?

no problem!!!!!!!!!!

My first time was better than that.
"You didnt add the pounding and creaking of the bed"

Who made u judge over her, Genie 542! She didnt do it wit u anyway! so no pounding and creaking because she did it on a kingsize,

methinks jinny542 is a VIRGIN - na shakara im dey do. 

pounding ko, pounded yam ni.

No! Me thinks he did it more on Bob Marley's lyrical single bed

Dt explains d creakingsssssssssssssssssss!

how do u noe if i'm a virgin or not. I'm not saying the poem isnt nice i'm onlye saying she wud have added that efizy. Chill comment on d poem and not me.

whats all the hulaballo about?it's just a first time.it could be worse
or just stinking awful.anyhow, it's well written and you prattlers
where is your own WRITTEN EXPERIENCE?!!!!!!!!!! AMEBOS

teno:

whats all the hulaballo about?it's just a first time.it could be worse
or just stinking awful.anyhow, it's well written and you prattlers
where is your own WRITTEN EXPERIENCE?!!!!!!!!!! AMEBOS

Wey ur own account? ITK

this is my own account of what happened, and i dnt need to put effizi(as u put it) to pls u or anyone, if urs was better good for u, carry am go collect money from bank now,

thanx to everyone else who gave me some feedback, one luv!

My first time was 85% fear 15% adventure
Afraid i may be caught,
It was in a friends room in the university
between 2 inexperience "kids"

Laide ,

dis poem is an absolute beau , just ain't got words 2 describe it , keep it up girl! got any more 4rm where dat came?

Nice one!!!!
cheers

trying to recall my first time

but memory fails me

for all my life i've been pounding

right from infant i've been there

with fear n courage

in the toilet n sometimes bathroom

nailing my victims on the wall

with the strenght of a horse


all my life

i will never forget

my spoilt neighbourhood

though a big advantage to my manhood

my priceless wood

dart's a nice one

But were on the MATRIMONIAL BED?

dat's a nice one

But were on the MATRIMONIAL BED?

 

rossyluv:

dat's a nice one

But were on the MATRIMONIAL BED?

i dont understand this post @ poster pls more light

what a nice atuempt if its in a lawful way it an heaven on earth indeed but if not its the hell in a cool breez radiant.