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ANTHOLOGY OF WOES by naijamd(m): 5:59pm On Feb 07, 2009
hello guys this tread is for you to post your best poems(note woes)this is the first titled DEMISE OF MY MOTHER LAND
I woke up this morning
look out my window
Automobiles speeding past
Men haughtily dressed
Women scantily dressed
All madly in haste


Africa my Africa
does not look like thee
Africa of my fathers
Where at thou gone

Under the graceful full moon
Children playing  happily
Men drinking wine in peace
Women telling tales to the youth
Africa my Africa
this is thy beauty
thy beauty is thy soul
thy is is thyself

Oh Africa of proud natives
Now land of woes
No matter how many roads are tarred
No matter the good of civilization
No matter what it promise
Thou has become a land of woes

Africa my Africa
thou has lost thy beauty
civilization may bring comfort
but it also bring woes
for it's comfort
we pay the price of our soul
but for it's woes
A price is not attached


how did i do plese comment
Re: ANTHOLOGY OF WOES by naijamd(m): 9:15am On Feb 08, 2009
guys,please comment grin grin 
Re: ANTHOLOGY OF WOES by Epi: 5:14pm On Feb 08, 2009
Who am I to critique?. . . .after all, I am not a Poet.  I sit at my computer write whatever crap that comes into my head. And if you think that is bad, you should see my paintings,  . . .Crappier. grin grin grin

On a serious note. .  . . . . . . . . . .
                                        personally, I think when one takes pride in ones country it says a lot about their   strength and character.

Good looking out for your country (continent).  CONTINUE TO FIGHT THE POWER THROUGH YOUR POEMS .  Nice!!!


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Re: ANTHOLOGY OF WOES by naijamd(m): 9:37pm On Feb 10, 2009
Already it's morning
another day is here
tomorow keeps becoming yesterday
the future remains bleak
I now doubt the existence of a future


Get up and work
this is the voice of my father's
Get up and work
do something good for yourself
so say's my father's before me


I always knew my weakness
but greatest of them is laziness
I have always done below my abilities
because i have always done nothing


I have come to crossroads before in my life
i always knew the right path
but on it i never tread
cause i felt it was filled with thorns


Go tread that path
there goes the voice of my father's
Life is not always rosy
if you seek success
you must make work thy friend


Again i tried my father's
again i failed
I did no wrong
i only tried the fast way
A horse that runs fast
don't run long
so say's my father's
If you must succed
you must be slow and steadfast


Oh what a dilemma
I have never done all this before
How do i go about them now
To get what you've never had
you must do what you've never done
so say's my fathers


it's now simple
i have never worked
this is what i must do
Thank you my father's

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