hmmm now it's really on
at last sumone with some nerve

dn't worry m jst getin my groove on will be back at you

m real impressd
not on form now but when i get back, get ready
for a piece of my lyrical fury

Maedan,u dumb,messd up shagless hoe
now u've really made me ur foe
hope u're ready 4 dis lyrical exchange
cos givin up is neva in my range
did i hear u say ur name i'll sing?
Worthless,touchin ur toes i'll send u off d ring,
ring as in bed,bed as in dead,lyrically dead
hot rhymin flows i'll unload in ur vagina
till screamin my name u'll beg surrender
but i won't stop till worthless ur 'female glory' i'll render
In,Out, i'll hit u with a strong edge
and make ur tits n worthless hips merge
and when u come,den i'll make u sing
for darin 2 mess wit dis undisputed lyrical king
U'll climax thinkin u're in heaven
stop d dreams wen am thru i'll leave you in a caven
u talkd of autographs,
i'll put mine in ur **** mane
skillz's d name,rhymin is d
game,
dis is just a teaser
or maybe a breezer
want more?post again
but read my DISCLAIMER:u culd go insane

??

Waitin, waitin, waitin

Go insane? yeah, insane with laughter
ur whole rhyming flow is just a disaster

talking like u can shag
u're just a common gay
making me come?
more like making me run

u should've known better, it's such a pity
a girl's here to teach u the real nitty-gritty

hating and dissing, the truth u'll be missing
ur lyrics n style have got most people hissing

my funky fly skills have got u in heat
u'll kill to feel ur lips on my tit

so sad, u're really far from my type
itz time u stop believin' ur hype

i'm so sick of u guys blabbing 'bout sex
running ur mouth like u know how to flex
i really thot this was all about rhyme
but now i see it's more about slime

i think it's high time i quit this child's play
'cos none of u guys deserve my time of day

so till i see some skills i can respect
my posting of rhymes, pls do not expect!!!

Wow! Now u've taken this up a notch
From here onwards all sick rhymes go in d hutch!
I've gotta admit u've earnd my respect
so now i'll know what to expect
u've got game,dat's 4 sure
but wat's all this about me wanting more?
U say u've got funky fly skills?
U mean like serving tables @ Big Joe's bar n' grills?
I'll tip u d next time i cum around
So generously it'll have u layin on d ground
What!! YOU get me in heat?
the very thought makes me reel with vomit
Seeing as u are a dishevelled old hermit
me kill 2 fill ur worn out tits?
I wouldn't give two cents to see 'em bits by bits
Quittin d child's play?
sounds lyk a dumb tactic of delay!
cos u've run out of words 2 say?
Not deservin of ur time of day?
what do u do aside 4rm gettin a cheap LovePeddler's lay?
stay put n' fight this to d end
else ur reputation u'll be unable 2 mend.
am not in my element now
or u'd have gotten a thrashin SILLY COW!
And abut not xpectin ur Rhyme,
mine oh mine luk @ d time,
2 late 2 be dissin a cheap call girl
so charl 2 u n ur crew
and don't 4get 2 give ur nxt customer a good old screw

well,well,well, what a surprise
some people's game is beginning 2rise,
good 4 u, but not good enough
u'r still talking trash n stil acting tuff

think u can get me with ur cheap low-down insults?
i take those desperate ryhmes with a pinch of salt
u can't cook up lines good enough to be felt
so u take the easy road n hit below d belt

all the same, u've upped ur game
u'r beginning to rhyme tho' its still v. lame

keep going at it, u just might learn a lot
and in a million years, maybe get what i've got!

been too busy to react to people talking trash,
seems like they bin talking out of their ass,
thot d lady was all messed up,
then met a guy will his brains torn up,
came here to have fun,
but u people keep behaving like punks.
u wanna mess my shine?
i will kick ur damn behind,
too bad i will b gone for a lil while,
but u meetin my skills level is like swimmin across d nile
u all should quit da game,
b4 u give it a bad name

WTF is all this bullshit around here?

Do you guys actually call this rhymes?

Disgraceful!

not even close to rhymes

All y'all bullshitter's who condemn what u can't do.If u tink our rhymes are disgraceful, why don't you post urs and let's see or quit blabbing and give way.Suckaz

As for u olulu,dumb monkey,
punk,fool n drugd out junkey
mr post-once-in-a-blue-moon
aren't u being paid again goon
haven't got ur time rite now
bt i'll b back @ you soon.Rest assurd.

Maedan dn't tink I forgot all abut you
here's my reply 2 ur last post


Huh, not good enough?
How's this for desperate rhymes n actin tough?
I've got skills that deep down i know u crave
Cos all u've got is fodder 4 d grave
d style i've got takes time 2 groom
so sweep all urs out,i could help you with a broom
As for havin rhymes nt good enough 2 be felt
wouldn't know about that cuz i've got all d medals on my belt
Still lame?
C'mon dn't be a dumb dame
It's a tactic 2 GUT u in a lyrical flame
olulu n d odas were just a test
admit it, u've met ur match give me ur best
before i came on,u were struttin abut like it was ur anniversary
but now u've met a worthy adversary
i cook up rhymes on d daily,2 me it's just sport
dat's y u see me always on d no 1 spot
the game is on
a new age is born
pack all u've got n leave when d ovation is loudest
or stay put n get scorched by my lyrical prowress

P.S:i tink u are kinda good
bt ur rhymes culd av fit in perfectly wit d mumblings of stone age men millenia ago.Ha ha ha

skillz4eva:

All y'all bullshitter's who condemn what u can't do.If u tink our rhymes are disgraceful, why don't you post urs and let's see or quit blabbing and give way.Suckaz

Eat a dic.k!

Ya all trashy

Go check the freestyle lounge and the caution:ill netcees only threads

And you will see the reason why we punch above your weights

Spamming the forum with crap rhymes!!

HAHAHA
that's u laughing at ur own stupidity
seems u've been out in too much humidity
so u've lost ur senses, now i'm paying the expenses
of a dumb cross-eyed loser
i'm sure u're drunk like a boozer
'else why would u continue
bugging a babe with my retinue
of mad-bad rhyming skill
who's got the style & fits d bill

well at least u've stopped ur sexual innuendos
but ur whack-lame-dumb rhymes have reached a crescendo
i really think its time u back out
before my final punch-line will make u shout
OUCH!

I think it's quite crude
in fact downright rude
for people to come here
and foul the atmosphere

saying this thread's no good
u must be in a bad mood
if so, we don't care
with ur bad manners go elsewhere 

do you actually believe all your bullshit
:

@ Maedan and other Angels
ART THOU NOT AN ANGEL?
So early this peaceful night
I see fogs shinning so bright
Like an angel or a lady she looks to try
Shimmering the night like stars in the sky

Her feet were too crystal to touch the earth
Her hips so bulbous it will seize the wind
Her breast so luscious the rain will plead
And her face beams like the moon in sea

If thou art not an angel
Then where art angels be?
Show me dear angel
In valleys low or mountain high?

Tell me oh precious beauty
That I may thread the path

oreshade:

@ Maedan and other Angels
ART THOU NOT AN ANGEL?
So early this peaceful night
I see fogs shinning so bright
Like an angel or a lady she looks to try
Shimmering the night like stars in the sky

Her feet were too crystal to touch the earth
Her hips so bulbous it will seize the wind
Her breast so luscious the rain will plead
And her face beams like the moon in sea

If thou art not an angel
Then where art angels be?
Show me dear angel
In valleys low or mountain high?

Tell me oh precious beauty
That I may thread the path

aaah . . . such soulful lines are bringing me back to my senses
u didn't actually rhyme but ur words certainly flowed to me!
great stylish poetry from a guy? wow!

@ maeden
There is a rhyme scheme
Look deeply within:
aabb cddb ebeb bc
How would I have written such a beautiful sonnet without a rhyme scheme?

Again that's for you and all the angels in the house

@ oreshade

ooh, i get it. Thanks anyways. I hope the others on the thread can appreciate it as well.

oreshade:

@ Maedan and other Angels
ART THOU NOT AN ANGEL?
So early this peaceful night
I see fogs shinning so bright
Like an angel or a lady she looks to try
Shimmering the night like stars in the sky

Her feet were too crystal to touch the earth
Her hips so bulbous it will seize the wind
Her breast so luscious the rain will plead
And her face beams like the moon in sea

If thou art not an angel
Then where art angels be?
Show me dear angel
In valleys low or mountain high?

Tell me oh precious beauty
That I may thread the path

maedan? angel?
nackson must b a monk then.

MrCrackles:

Eat a dic.k!

Ya all trashy

Go check the freestyle lounge and the caution:ill netcees only threads

And you will see the reason why we punch above your weights

Spamming the forum with crap rhymes!!

cracked head

skillz4eva:

As for u olulu,dumb monkey,
punk,fool n drugd out junkey
mr post-once-in-a-blue-moon
aren't u being paid again goon
haven't got ur time rite now
bt i'll b back @ you soon.Rest assurd.

dnn't have ur time,
but i could spare u a dime,
u just a broke ass nigga,
acting all wild like a crazed cougar,
ur talk is all messed up,
shows ur brains are all blown up,
u even sure u got a brain?
seems to have been washed away by the rain.
u can't just match me,
u always would be beneath me.
step back, sit down and shut up,
before u head get torn off.

olulu:


maedan? angel?
nackson must b a monk then.

keep running ur mouth
we all know ur brain's gone south
acting like a lout
u can neva make me pout . . .

maedan:

keep running ur mouth
we all know ur brain's gone south
acting like a lout
u can neva make me pout . . .

cracked head
with a brain filled with lead,
got no sense,
so talks non sense
u better quit being a jack ass,
else i would have to whoop ur ass

hmmmm

So far, I have been going through this book
I have seen the illest rhyme in the hood
The crapest rhyme for anyone to use
And creativity to make me shout “oh this is good”

I would have loved to join in the game
But I do not want to get caught in the addictive train
So you big rhymerz in this place
My invaluable hat is duffed, with a smile on my face

Meadan you are a girl that got skill
So far you’ve made this guyz your meal
But myopic as they be
They will never admit it

Skillswateva, u dint show much competition skill
Cos being the initiator doesn’t make you the king
Neither a judge to bump into olulu’s and madean fun
Just because u thinksu deserve to be on

Olulu my priceless friend
This is the thread you told me to check
I have been on but only as a guest
And this is just to tell you I know its here

Mr Brash with an ugly mouth rash
Calling this creative thread a wasted trash
When you can’t birth something worth a laudable clap
You sit and type ill mannered crap
Giving link to another part
If you say this bad, then why do you near its path?

Ore, do write me a poem
One as beautiful as the one for the girl
I hope my reputation as a witch don’t scare the men
cos normally am the natural girl ever u can get

so ya all should keep up with the groove
I shall always be on to see the biggest moves
Comment whenever I think I could
I hope I dint spoil the mood
Sorry if I did, but This is all I could do

kissess to ya all

princesa:

hmmmm

So far, I have been going through this book
I have seen the illest rhyme in the hood
The crapest rhyme for anyone to use
And creativity to make me shout “oh this is good”

I would have loved to join in the game
But I do not want to get caught in the addictive train
So you big rhymerz in this place
My invaluable hat is duffed, with a smile on my face

Meadan you are a girl that got skill
So far you’ve made this guyz your meal
But myopic as they be
They will never admit it

Skillswateva, u dint show much competition skill
Cos being the initiator doesn’t make you the king
Neither a judge to bump into olulu’s and madean fun
Just because u thinksu deserve to be on

Olulu my priceless friend
This is the thread you told me to check
I have been on but only as a guest
And this is just to tell you I know its here

Mr Brash with an ugly mouth rash
Calling this creative thread a wasted trash
When you can’t birth something worth a laudable clap
You sit and type ill mannered crap
Giving link to another part
If you say this bad, then why do you near its path?

Ore, do write me a poem
One as beautiful as the one for the girl
I hope my reputation as a witch don’t scare the men
cos normally am the natural girl ever u can get

so ya all should keep up with the groove
I shall always be on to see the biggest moves
Comment whenever I think I could
I hope I dint spoil the mood
Sorry if I did, but This is all I could do

kissess to ya all

my lovely princess
thou art so priceless.
my darling princessa,
we would still dance d salsa
and do the makossa
naked on d beach of mombassa
we will do it nakedly naked,
till we are tiredly tired.

from one sista to another:
i'm glad u took out the time to bother,

it's great the way u broke it down
u'r a princess so u deserve a crown

don't mind those dat don't understand us
to dissect my rhymes they need a thesaurus
from olulu to skill4eva,
i truly tried to deliver

but fake rhymes n abuse was all i got
till this noble thread almost turned to rot

thank goodness for nice folks like ore & you  
who added light 2 dis dark lyrical kung fu  

princesa:


Mr Brash with an ugly mouth rash
Calling this creative thread a wasted trash
When you can’t birth something worth a laudable clap
You sit and type ill mannered crap
Giving link to another part
If you say this bad, then why do you near its path?

I can see you'v been running your wide mouf again, ryt?

Do yourself a favour, get off my dic.k and dont get me started on you!

If this is the best you can come up with, then m seriously 25 lifetimes way above the league you aim and aspire to be at!

Chatting gobbleydygook as usual, u lil twit!

I just knew I would get to him
And make him start his pathetic hymn
But who cares a hoof
If you’ve got fire on your roof
Spit out your coveted words
The one you think that make you the word god
Am chilling like a princess
Waiting for the wrath of your incense

MrCrackles:

I can see you'v been running your wide mouf again, ryt?

Do yourself a favour, get off my dic.k and dont get me started on you!

If this is the best you can come up with, then m seriously 25 lifetimes way above the league you aim and aspire to be at!

Chatting gobbleydygook as usual, u lil twit!

are u drunk?
or u just a mad skunk?
if dats how u talk to my princess
u gonna end up in d casket
u shouldn't insult me lady
now am gonna make u cry like a baby.
break ur balls,
and hang dem on d walls,
knock u out cold like neva b4,
u hit d mat b4 d count of 4,
so back off
and stay off
make sure ur mouth get a stitch
and quit acting like a bitch,with an itch.

My knight of shinning armor