@ princesa and maedan
Jewels do you like that?
Solely for the both of you folks

Finally gave the crowd what
They have craved for like peace

A 'RHYMING' poem to post
But this is so distinct

A very creative sonnet
All through 'a' and no 'b' to post

So heatfusion can you see
But scheme should be all we

can do, we should be
Able to do this and more stalwart

Olulu now beat that
Whilst having fun so sweet

Am so much drenched
With this exams bod

Who even started exams?
I would have had more time to write

and post
Peace

meexteriox:

Finally, you got it Maedan
Remember, you mentioned mae n dan
Did you say, he was your spouse?
This is not meant to rouse

Maedan, can i tell you a story?
Details that seem too gory

I wish i could turn back the hands of time
Back to when i had no dime
I wish i learnt an ear to my instinct
shouting with voice so distinct
I wish i had brought back the money
which went down the well of honey
I wish i had written a missive
though not with intent to deceive
I wish my plans had gone as planned
i would have gone back to switzerland
I wish i never made that call
i wouldn't have had this fall
I wish
with so much relish

aahh, finally i truly remember
the one with words so tender
who goes by the name meexteriox
always prodding and being curiox

asking me about my man
yes hez the other part of the name maedan

nonetheless these times u & i will share
need cause no alarm to the rightful heir
of the one now close to my heart
'cos wot NL has joined, no one shd part . . . .

@ oreshade

me, princessa and heatfusion!
how wont u b filled with confusion

talking sweet to one and all
if we're not careful, we three will fall

but wise I am, and wise are they
the girls to which ur words are prey

gentle lines to melt d heart
jewels that promise "til death do us part"

u think u can enjoy the hearts of a triple
beware of the weight of the female multiple!!

TO HEATFUSION: A DAMSEL
with my soft soul of
watery curiosity so stiff
I craved so sonorously tough
to your profile to see for myself
what a damsel you are though trailed by fright

with my naked eyes of truth pace
I saw your priceless bulbous face
etched with a chuckling smile of peace
and succulently raised cheeks
so sweet even monks will gaze with ease

at beauty's birth at sight
for when I saw your beaut
it struck me so hard that
my soul of fright so soft
made my heart beat so fast

like a war within at race
as I looked down her gorgeous face
to her sexy stature at ease
I smiled and chuckled at the hands
of God how He made such a beauty as this

so full and romantically right
nairalanders if you think am just
a flatterer and liar of disgust
be a member of nairaland right
now and check her profile picture with no fright

just trying to be just---
ART THOU NOT AN ANGEL to maedan
TO NIGHT to princesa
THE SUN IS DEAD AGAIN to prinsesa
and maedan

TO HEATFUSION: A DAMSEL to heatfusion
I kind of do not see you as heatfusion
perhaps a better one
is heart fusion

for you have fused my heart
and your heart
with your beaut

note, learning poets
frequent use of lower case
especially to start sentences

connotes urgency
like you are writing on pricky
stuffs like death or a subject of urgency

and note the rhyme scheme
of the 'to heatfusion a damsel' poem
aaaaa bbbbb aaaaa bbbbb aaaaa scheme

ASHA LIKE AFRICA
…Black…Female…Dreadlocks…
…Love…Unity…Peace…
…Africa…Dingaan…Mhlangana…Murders…

I can see Asha perched on Iroko,
With its broad round strength-wings,
And sparkling silveric unsheathed claws.

Calling bare her dead to life,
Bare soul of sonorous voice,
Not coarse.

Filled with bald light of truth,
The head of keen knowlege,
Not revenge.

Asha in the carcass carrion,
Of tragedy filled life,
Has chose to strife.

With the sonorous voice of pitches,
And the keen knowldge of knights,
Asha did pick up assegai to strife for peace.

Peace like eye adaaba high aboves,
At the days dawn when fog,
And dew thick on contour leaves.

Not the dusk-dawn of fright,
That seems though cool,
Drops men in despair all night.

For in her big flight ashore,
She did see fire on the mountain,
With wild flames of wander at tour.

Some say you ugly Asha,
Have they so beautiful eyes,
Within they shall see afar.

Though truly no one knows,
Tomorrow what it holds,
Iba to sights that see within lights.

Obsess slavery savage Mr. Jailer,
Has made Asha’s life the soul subway,
That drains love down the path away.

Now she lays on the path of change,
Swinging ablaze her beak-strings of truth,
That all men must hear even bi n banke with teeth.

She sings not like Igunnugun,
With its naked neck of blotters,
And its fragile flight of preyish wants.

Nor like the amazing Akalamagboi,
With goitre in the neck for changes,
But like the awesome awe for peace.

That awe that love-seeds,
Grew from its flesh-sands,
And spilt gushing water-bloods.

Three-sixty round the globe,
Her cvlarion call must be heard tall,
Her highly personal but totally universal call.

Her truly loving but lonely call,
That rests the mean-mind of hate,
To sail atide on waters of sleep aright.

Her innate stand must be seen,
On the llano shrub of unity,
caressing coolly like found a lost lilly.

Her face of pure priceless peace ,
Must be felt afar,
Like the solemn zephyr at wailing winter.

You see the dusk has dusked,
And now dawn has dawned,
The renaissance of Asha will be heard.
07.06.08 10:01pm

that a poem I wrote in honor of asha
the nigerian singer
and which was greatly blogged
you can find

it by typing 'oreshade on asha' on google
can you see the rhyme scheme? poets

this poem is kinda complex poet
And stylishly technical so be patient
And note your previous sounds
With the masculine and feminine rhymes

Filled with innuendos
Imageries, personifications
Similies, metaphors and
poetic prophecies of standard

@oreshade
You i hold in high esteem
Your poetic display has such beam
The depth, believe me remains astonishing
Its natural flow remain my admonishing.

But could you rhyme more?
That's what the thread is meant for
This is not an attempt to rubbish
Just for you to polish.

maedan:




aahh, finally i truly remember
the one with words so tender
who goes by the name meexteriox
always prodding and being curiox

asking me about my man
yes hez the other part of the name maedan

nonetheless these times u & i will share
need cause no alarm to the rightful heir
of the one now close to my heart
'cos wot NL has joined, no one shd part . . . .

Ur company? dat i wud rily savour
'cause i know, it wud be far from darfur
Permit me to add little flavour
Certainly not in terms of a saviour.

Can i get to know you?
Me? don't think its due
If u insist, then i remain meexteriox
Ofcourse enshrined in mystery n very furious.

Yours truly scrap a living by d great river
I audit books whenever i decipher
Got moved from d lagoon town
Certainly with a lot of frown.

So, can i know you?
Now i think its due.

BEING A SAVIOUR

This is earth
There is no justice yet.

When I strolled through,
I found peace lacking here too
So I came to help them
Only that was when,
I was hated for being good
They were so rude
Well, I didn’t bother
Since I was smarter

They finally got a way to nail me
Who wants me dead- they said "we"
I was beaten for nothing
Yet people were jeering
I tasted the pains
It flowed into my veins
My head was hot
My eyes, blood-shot
I was flogged next
Thirty-nine times I guess,
I was been humiliated
Like I was a witch’s reincarnated
Will it end I thought
For was I Jesus?

hmmm thanks oreshade for the poem
ya should keep up the rhyme work
am holding my break. . . dig more into my work

@meexteriox
knowing me knowing u
ask d "what" b4 u seek d "who"
and what am i, of the shy four-eyed clan
tho' in contacts i'm sought after by every man
just playing - as we were saying . . .
there's not much to me, but blood and skin
show me some love, n i can be your kin
but somehow i sense
tis not for friendship u come hence

be that as it may, let's play 4 today
for who knows? tomorrow we mite go astray

i dont tink it rhymes though but,

i once had a bear
who was very near
the point of death

i waited upon him
by his bed side
day and night

one day this bear
i love very dear

passed away silently
leaving behind
a picture of his pretty face to remember him by
happily

maedan:

@meexteriox
knowing me knowing u
ask d "what" b4 u seek d "who"
and what am i, of the shy four-eyed clan
tho' in contacts i'm sought after by every man
just playing - as we were saying . . .
there's not much to me, but blood and skin
show me some love, n i can be your kin
but somehow i sense
tis not for friendship u come hence

be that as it may, let's play 4 today
for who knows? tomorrow we mite go astray

Did you say ''four-eye clan''?
You mean d one in Eastern Heartland?
I knew my instinct was always right
Now i can put in more fight.

Listen, ur intelligene draws me close
I mean much stronger than beer overdose
The word astray does not even exist
Bear it in mind i'm gonna persist.

Do you know Njaba Town?
If u do, then remove all frown
Kith and kin, dat we could be
More than friends, dat's for me.

Maedan, come wit me n be my love
And we will some new pleasures prove
Of golden sands and crystal brooks
With silken lines and silver hooks.

@ Maedan
I feel u much.Bin offline 4 a stretch,had 2 get nu glasses.Bt i tink d tide has turnd
4rm dissin rhymes 2 gud ole luv vibes.
Wouldn't wanna rock d boat y'know?
I'l turn 2 luv rhymes,i've gotta romantic side y'know?N y'all ar gonna luv ma flows.So Oreshade,watch ur back pal! Maedan u're a gud lyricist but 4 a change,do sum coooool luv flows.
@ Oreshade
dude u're real gud.i xpecially lyk d way u fuse in da African Flava.Big ups!!! Stop tryin 2 charm da ladies i know ur game
watchout 4 ma flows lol n lemme know wat u tink.
@ olulu
dude, u're good.bt i tink u tend 2 crack unda worthy opposition n resort 2 derogatory vibes.
Bt 4 d change,i'd have tot u sum lessons in temper tantrums.watch dat attitude dude.
@ princesca
lol m more dan a gud comp, maedan can testify.
@ Mr Crackles
dude u came ön in a whiff of smoke n dissapeard wit da breeze.pity i tot u had sumtin 2 offer
@ meexteriox
homid dat babe's way 2 hot for your phoney tricks.go ply ur trade sum oda place

@ skilz4noweva
Me? Phoney trick?
Is it me or u're just a prick?

Bro, go dig a well n if u can't
Get someone to help u - u pant.
Then take a dive
Or take a nap in a beehive.

skillz4eva:

@ Maedan
I feel u much.Bin offline 4 a stretch,had 2 get nu glasses.Bt i tink d tide has turnd
4rm dissin rhymes 2 gud ole luv vibes.
Wouldn't wanna rock d boat y'know?
I'l turn 2 luv rhymes,i've gotta romantic side y'know?N y'all ar gonna luv ma flows.So Oreshade,watch ur back pal! Maedan u're a gud lyricist but 4 a change,do sum coooool luv flows.
@ Oreshade
dude u're real gud.i xpecially lyk d way u fuse in da African Flava.Big ups!!! Stop tryin 2 charm da ladies i know ur game
watchout 4 ma flows lol n lemme know wat u tink.
@ olulu
dude, u're good.bt i tink u tend 2 crack unda worthy opposition n resort 2 derogatory vibes.
Bt 4 d change,i'd have tot u sum lessons in temper tantrums.watch dat attitude dude.@ princesca
lol m more dan a gud comp, maedan can testify.
@ Mr Crackles
dude u came ön in a whiff of smoke n dissapeard wit da breeze.pity i tot u had sumtin 2 offer
@ meexteriox
homid dat babe's way 2 hot for your phoney tricks.go ply ur trade sum oda place

hmmmmm, . . . . . .wateva !!!

meexteriox:

Did you say ''four-eye clan''?
You mean d one in Eastern Heartland?
I knew my instinct was always right
Now i can put in more fight.

Listen, ur intelligene draws me close
I mean much stronger than beer overdose
The word astray does not even exist
Bear it in mind i'm gonna persist.

Do you know Njaba Town?
If u do, then remove all frown
Kith and kin, dat we could be
More than friends, dat's for me.

Maedan, come wit me n be my love
And we will some new pleasures prove
Of golden sands and crystal brooks
With silken lines and silver hooks.

meex! mr. undercover toaster!
u're sending me on a rollercoaster!!

such flowery lines - ur poetry shd be a crime!

wherez d police, to lock u up
b4 u steal my heart n make me drop!

ur rhymes are sweet and so theatric . . .
but u can't fool me tho' u're quite romantrick!

skillz4eva:

@ Maedan
I feel u much.Bin offline 4 a stretch,had 2 get nu glasses.Bt i tink d tide has turnd
4rm dissin rhymes 2 gud ole luv vibes.
Wouldn't wanna rock d boat y'know?
I'l turn 2 luv rhymes,i've gotta romantic side y'know?N y'all ar gonna luv ma flows.So Oreshade,watch ur back pal! Maedan u're a gud lyricist but 4 a change,do sum coooool luv flows.

skils4eva,
welcome back
i'm glad 2 see u've given up d attack!

u really were my worst tormentor -
but u're still d main originator . . .
of this groovy rhyme thread,
where we can all test our street cred.

letz shed d beef, its time 2 lv
we all must fit like hand in glove!

maedan:

meex! mr. undercover toaster!
u're sending me on a rollercoaster!!

such flowery lines - ur poetry shd be a crime!

wherez d police, to lock u up
b4 u steal my heart n make me drop!

ur rhymes are sweet and so theatric . . .
but u can't fool me tho' u're quite romantrick!

Come, my Maedan, let's prove
While we may, the sports of love
Time will not be ours forever
At lenght, our good may sever
Spend not then my gifts in vain
Sun that set may rise again
But if once we lose this light
'Tis with us perpetual night.

@ meexteriox
dude all ur rhymes are wack
luks lyk u jst took a crack
or maybe u've had 2 much 2 drink?
I'll recommend u see a shrink
I tink i'ts calld amnesia
wat u've got dat's makin u crazier
u can't even rhyme well
we xperiencd poets can tell
wat's 'u pant' 'U PANT'?
U make me wanna rant
dude place ur rhymes to fit
& then maybe p'raps in a million yrs u'll be a hit
meexteriox??
get ur act 2geda
n then maybe we mite take u serious.
P.S we are into cool rhymes now pal,so please dn't make me do dis,else i'll thrash u so hard ur descendants will be feelin d pain ages 4rm now.(that was a joke man,but nevertheless heed my warning)
@ maedan
Tnxs a lot.
Gud 2 b back.i know u missd u X-Nemesis huh!!! peace out.

now d fight has gone cold,
everybody is seekin for someone to hold,
throwing rhymes and acting all bold,
una no know say una don old

u all tryin to rhyme into a lady's heart,
don't u know thats d oldest trick on earth.
well, it always works,
if ur lines don't suck.
ladies trip over what they hear,
so pull out close and whisper sweet nonsense into their ears
just say d rite words,
and u just might become her heart's lord.

me nko? don't i seek to love,
wel, i ve been burnt by love,
now i hate to love,
but God is love,
and i believe in God,
and not in dogs,
so i just might love again,
if i could just see d gain,
get over d pain,
and make sure d hate feeling is slain.

@ Skilz4

skillz4eva:

@ meexteriox
dude all ur rhymes are wack
luks lyk u jst took a crack
or maybe u've had 2 much 2 drink?
I'll recommend u see a shrink
I tink i'ts calld amnesia
wat u've got dat's makin u crazier
u can't even rhyme well
we xperiencd poets can tell
wat's 'u pant' 'U PANT'?
U make me wanna rant
dude place ur rhymes to fit
& then maybe p'raps in a million yrs u'll be a hit
meexteriox??
get ur act 2geda
n then maybe we mite take u serious.
P.S we are into cool rhymes now pal,so please dn't make me do dis,else i'll thrash u so hard ur descendants will be feelin d pain ages 4rm now.(that was a joke man,but nevertheless heed my warning)
@ maedan
Tnxs a lot.
Gud 2 b back.i know u missd u X-Nemesis huh!!! peace out.

See who's talking about wack rhymes
Stop tripping or you will step on land mines
Who cares wat u think about my lines
Wat u write is so dense, it taste like brines

Experienced poet? Pls gimme a break
U must be feeling like a real drake
Surely, crack remains ur solitude
Read ur lines, i see it in ur attitude.

Don't make u do wat, loser?
By now, i thot u wud be wiser
Bring it on, i can take all ur trash
By the tyme i'm thru, u wud look like a mash.

P.S we are into cool rhymes now pal,so please dn't make me do dis,else i'll thrash u so hard ur descendants will be feelin d pain ages 4rm now.(that was a joke man,but nevertheless heed my warning)

skillz4eva:

@ meexteriox
dude all ur rhymes are wack
luks lyk u jst took a crack
or maybe u've had 2 much 2 drink?
I'll recommend u see a shrink
I tink i'ts calld amnesia
wat u've got dat's makin u crazier
u can't even rhyme well
we xperiencd poets can tell
wat's 'u pant' 'U PANT'?
U make me wanna rant
dude place ur rhymes to fit
& then maybe p'raps in a million yrs u'll be a hit
meexteriox??
get ur act 2geda
n then maybe we mite take u serious.
P.S we are into cool rhymes now pal,so please dn't make me do dis,else i'll thrash u so hard ur descendants will be feelin d pain ages 4rm now.(that was a joke man,but nevertheless heed my warning)
@ maedan
Tnxs a lot.
Gud 2 b back.i know u missd u X-Nemesis huh!!! peace out.

meexteriox:

@ Skilz4
See who's talking about wack rhymes
Stop tripping or you will step on land mines
Who cares wat u think about my lines
Wat u write is so dense, it taste like brines

Experienced poet? Pls gimme a break
U must be feeling like a real drake
Surely, crack remains ur solitude
Read ur lines, i see it in ur attitude.

Don't make u do wat, loser?
By now, i thot u wud be wiser
Bring it on, i can take all ur trash
By the tyme i'm thru, u wud look like a mash.

P.S we are into cool rhymes now pal,so please dn't make me do dis,else i'll thrash u so hard ur descendants will be feelin d pain ages 4rm now.(that was a joke man,but nevertheless heed my warning)

_{i love dis show,. . . . . . .i love it, . . . . i love it. . . . .i love it .}

listen when am rapping is like am preaching
some are asking reasons why i didn"t come out since sixteen
they like some leaders when they speaking is they never eaten
but i say they only pretending


this is just my ryhmes from one of my song am rapviruz
|love naija

ha! ha! ha! ha!!!

akundo:

listen when am rapping is like am preaching
some are asking reasons why i didn"t come out since sixteen
they like some leaders when they speaking is they never eaten
but i say they only pretending


this is just my ryhmes from one of my song am rapviruz
|love naija

it's really a rapvirus
i guess u've come to slay us
u're free to join d rap mob
but dont give up ur day job!!!

to fall in love i'm not afraid
for to give love, my heart was made
my body for my darlin's pleasure
my soul to b my Creator's treasure

but somehow it seems, the well's run dry
noone to hear my sweet night cry
my dear to the north has run away
forgetting his promise never to stray

his melodious rhymes are of the past
i should've known it'll never last
too bad it all has come to an end
so all the love, to myself i'll send!!!

Real funny y'all!

Presentation Day

I stood in front of the crowd:
I’m Jeff, I’m not deaf
I love to have my way, don’t call me gay
I’m loving, don’t call me boring
I’m a male, I don’t have a tail
I’m a sage, I’m not an image
I behave well, don’t call me cruel
I’m cool, never call me a fool
I love my life, I don’t have a wife
Why is it you frustrate me?



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