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Untitled by noble4d(m): 12:14pm On May 31, 2015 |
Can someone give this poem a title?... In the city of despair, There lives a man unconscious Swimming in blooding And bathing in tears. He had lived for centuries Begging for food to eat Ranging from abode to offices Just to be free. He is indeed, An embodiment of patience Optimistic that, The years of struggle will be over. Here comes a new dawn The birds prayed for. He hope, he'll smile again And be free. |
Re: Untitled by joseph1832(m): 7:40am On Jun 01, 2015 |
"Patience is virtue" sounds like a good title. Howdy noble4d. Been a while. 1 Like |
Re: Untitled by noble4d(m): 9:42am On Jun 01, 2015 |
joseph1832: Yah Bro, ave bin good, How about you? |
Re: Untitled by joseph1832(m): 9:44am On Jun 01, 2015 |
noble4d:I've been better. 1 Like |
Re: Untitled by theunusualmoon(m): 1:24pm On Nov 22, 2015 |
Hope 1 Like |
Re: Untitled by Bamibor: 12:10pm On Nov 24, 2015 |
The poem is quite deep and thought provoking. Several lines had me trying to decipher what the writer was thinking, his mood. Was it despair? "he had lived for centuries... " Was it hopelessness? "...a man unconscious" Was it hope? " here comes a new dawn" Perhaps it's a mixture of all of these, which man usually has to experience in one short lifetime. Giving it a fitting title, is not an easy task sir. A really nice piece. Cheers! |
Re: Untitled by noble4d(m): 8:30pm On Nov 25, 2015 |
Bamibor: Alryt Bro tanks |
Re: Untitled by BobUg28(m): 9:27am On Nov 28, 2015 |
I like the poem. Deep and insightful. I suppose this appellation; TRAVAIL AND DESPAIR will do |
Re: Untitled by noble4d(m): 10:54am On Nov 28, 2015 |
BobUg28: Alryt Bro, tanks. 1 Like |
Re: Untitled by Nobody: 6:56am On Nov 29, 2015 |
Swimming in blooding |
Re: Untitled by noble4d(m): 8:05am On Nov 29, 2015 |
Rainess: |
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