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Rate My Poem Over On A Score Of 10 by Beverlies(f): 4:07pm On Jul 26, 2015 |
Rate my poem please. I wrote it since last year This is my country A beast of rivalry My country at fifty-four Yet nothing to be grateful for Now where do I start from So confused like a girl on her prom Is it the era of corruption Or the pains of insubordination My people labor like slaves With nothing left to save Working all round the clock With hearts as heavy as rock Lives are lost like nothings Souls mourning all mornings The menace of boko haram But no cause for alarm I believe in a better Nigeria No need to flee to Algeria This is my own letter to our heroes past I believe in a Nigeria with blessings so vast 1 Like |
Re: Rate My Poem Over On A Score Of 10 by Nobody: 4:08pm On Jul 26, 2015 |
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Re: Rate My Poem Over On A Score Of 10 by sseunth(m): 4:10pm On Jul 26, 2015 |
8 |
Re: Rate My Poem Over On A Score Of 10 by socrateez(m): 11:37pm On Jul 26, 2015 |
8.85 |
Re: Rate My Poem Over On A Score Of 10 by Beverlies(f): 8:24pm On Jul 27, 2015 |
Re: Rate My Poem Over On A Score Of 10 by slap1(m): 9:09pm On Jul 27, 2015 |
6 Did you deliberately decide to not punctuate? I also think you were so inclined to arrive at a couplet rhyme scheme that you were willing to sacrifice depth and substance. I like your poem, but I only gave my opinion. |
Re: Rate My Poem Over On A Score Of 10 by Beverlies(f): 10:45pm On Jul 27, 2015 |
slap1:I'm actually not an avid follower of dos and don't' in poetry. In fact I don't know them. Though I'm beginning to develop interest. I believe I will grow with time. Thank you very much though, 6 is a pass mark. 1 Like |
Re: Rate My Poem Over On A Score Of 10 by nicholausian(m): 11:52pm On Jul 27, 2015 |
A struggling, somewhat naive yet permissible poem. an 8 is fair enough |
Re: Rate My Poem Over On A Score Of 10 by Nobody: 7:24am On Jul 28, 2015 |
It would be 5.2, ma'am. |
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