Re: The Abandoned Child by kikayboss(m): 2:39pm On Sep 28, 2016 |
Oga Dom I salute....am sure this story contains one or two things that happened to you....that's why your stories never go wrong....followed from the start and till the end....
Oga I salute ooo...god grant you long life and good health so we will have nice novels to relax with...
*bouncing of to KUMALO... 1 Like |
Re: The Abandoned Child by Hollarbeece(f): 12:19pm On Sep 30, 2016 |
Domawoleye, u are a genius and a gifted writer. Wat a very happy ending for bolaji....hard work really pays. Oga Dom pls start kumalo soon o. 1 Like |
Re: The Abandoned Child by ephi123(f): 6:43pm On Oct 08, 2016 |
What a great twist and an amazing ending to a trying story. I am so glad it all ended well for him. Only if people received their reward this way, the world would have been a better place.
Thank you DOMAWOLEYE for sharing this inspiring and impactful piece with us all. God bless you. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: The Abandoned Child by mrtegation99(m): 3:44pm On Oct 28, 2016 |
Let me take my seat and listen to this Wonderful epistle.
More Blessings to you 1 Like |
Re: The Abandoned Child by mrtegation99(m): 7:32am On Oct 29, 2016 |
Just completed it today
This is just nice
In Praiz Voice : When I'll become rich and famous all this faces will know who I am cos I'll be a superstar. Bolaji can relate to those words
This story taught me that not every obstacle is an obstacle but an elevator to raise you up .
So take each day and its obstacles as it comes without letting up. Know your goal, fight for it.
I shed tears for Bolaji while reading this cos I could relate to some of his trial.
But life goes on , so grab a bite of life and go on.
Thanks So much Mr Dom for another movie that made me cry and smile . You are simply gifted. Your magic pens can't go dry Take Care |
Re: The Abandoned Child by DOMAWOLEYE(m): 11:18am On Oct 29, 2016 |
mrtegation99: Just completed it today
This is just nice
In Praiz Voice : When I'll become rich and famous all this faces will know who I am cos I'll be a superstar. Bolaji can relate to those words
This story taught me that not every obstacle is an obstacle but an elevator to raise you up .
So take each day and its obstacles as it comes without letting up. Know your goal, fight for it.
I shed tears for Bolaji while reading this cos I could relate to some of his trial.
But life goes on , so grab a bite of life and go on.
Thanks So much Mr Dom for another movie that made me cry and smile . You are simply gifted. Your magic pens can't go dry Take Care
Thanks a lot Tega. |
Re: The Abandoned Child by Twinkle004(f): 8:42pm On Oct 29, 2016 |
It was a funny & captivating story.the 1 dat cracked me up most was d time baba landlord acted as both mother & father..I just like him.. Op thumb-ups 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: The Abandoned Child by laddybay(f): 9:30pm On Oct 29, 2016 |
woow. I really love this story, but i must confess the break in transmission whilst waiting for the story to commence wasn't at all pleasant. But kudos it takes more than, having a pair of hand and eyes, and a brain to finish a story ur nt being paid for. 1 Like |
Re: The Abandoned Child by Winters22: 10:32pm On Dec 23, 2016 |
Bros... u are a prolific writer. dunno how this story managed to elude me...
but that Bolaji na confam carword fa! 1 Like |
Re: The Abandoned Child by crislyn(f): 12:35pm On Dec 25, 2016 |
Merry Christmas and a prosperous new year in advance Domawoleye....God bless you and your family. I'm missing you though. |
Re: The Abandoned Child by DOMAWOLEYE(m): 9:15am On Dec 26, 2016 |
crislyn: Merry Christmas and a prosperous new year in advance Domawoleye....God bless you and your family. I'm missing you though. Ooh! Thanks a lot sweet heart.Thanks for checking on me and remembering me at this season. God bless you. Merry Christmas, a prosperous new year and One love! 1 Like |
Re: The Abandoned Child by EkoroPrince(m): 6:54pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
You are great Domawoleye, your story is a source of inspiration to many youths out there whom are striving to survive..most especially, the academic achievements of Bolaji, it was very touching, the story is lesson filled . I learnt alot from this wonderful work of yours. And with this I say I CAN MAKE IT. Thanks for this eye opening write up. 1 Like |
Re: The Abandoned Child by DOMAWOLEYE(m): 8:45pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
[sup][/sup] EkoroPrince: You are great Domawoleye, your story is a source of inspiration to many youths out there whom are striving to survive..most especially, the academic achievements of Bolaji, it was very touching, the story is lesson filled . I learnt alot from this wonderful work of yours. And with this I say I CAN MAKE IT. Thanks for this eye opening write up. Thanks and keep believing in your self.Yes you can! 1 Like |
Re: The Abandoned Child by Yudeeaikay(f): 10:27am On Apr 26, 2017 |
DOMAWOLEYE: sandalina(f), Alicapapaya(f), eboigbedavid1(m), Daeveed(m), gbishancomedian(m), Hollarbeece(f), leopayne(m), tohpahz(f), lionson(m), zeetyzin(m), Bobolayefa(m), bobnatlo, farouk0403(m), chistar01(m), AdiscoPele, kikayboss(m), femora007, phykel(m), obikiel(m), recruit4real, Godbest(m), Deejay1000(m), yusufibrahim(m), jimkramar(m), SunFlow(m), BobUg28(m), iamprotocol(m), horlawharley(m), mubarak001(m), Taduma1(f), Tbrak(f), mrtegation99(m), treyliz, Labu2013(m), oruchechuks(m), Despirado121(m), MozB(m), daveson07(m), ephi123(f), olanshile2016(m), Emmykul4love(m), MightyFortress, felipemadero(m), efe2nath, dupsai(f), Oyinprince(m), Brozo1, deeade(f), yomalex(m), Ayjos10(m), africangurl, Donpoker9(m), Harrychocoberry(m), admin7(m), Dyoungstar, Mariammi(f), bigx(m), harmlessphil(f), Yudeeaikay(f), fam24(f), prettyJoy22(f), drollster(m), sebak(f), Jeanfortune(f) RSAV, MATRYCX, DONWEASLEY,,MOZB, MHIZ ETC.
I thank every one of you Guys for the completion of this story. God bless you all. Your encouraging words went a long way in helping me find time to complete the work. i am very sorry for the long break before completing the story. My hands were full. I just love the way we encourage each other on this platform. i also like to thank Seun Osewa and the Admins for the wonderful works you guys are doing. i would love to send copies of my Published book 'Restless' to you guys. Please contact me lets discuss how to connect. i am a proud Author today and i owe it to naira land!
one love! Awoleye Ayokunle Dominic Please i'm interested in restless o...how do i get it? |
Re: The Abandoned Child by ifyude(f): 3:54pm On Apr 26, 2017 |
I just come across the story today but discovered that some parts a missing Don pls how do i get the missing part |
Re: The Abandoned Child by Hada2020: 5:52pm On Oct 27, 2017 |
Wonderful story 1 Like |
Re: The Abandoned Child by Kingstone32(m): 3:24pm On Dec 10, 2017 |
The story is not complete again o. Wetin happen na? |
Re: The Abandoned Child by itsandi(m): 4:12pm On Dec 10, 2017 |
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Re: The Abandoned Child by TheCork(m): 9:59pm On Sep 04, 2020 |
Olaitan3784: Oga Dom, I doff my hat for you, more knowledge and thanks for sharing with us Hello this is yor shance. please describe yor body & do u were thong & mini sket? ![cheesy](https://www.nairaland.com/faces/cheesy.png) |
Re: The Abandoned Child by Kawo9ze(m): 2:53am On Jun 06, 2021 |
Wow, nice story! Tho the end wasn't what I expect but its captivating Kudos @domawoleye |
Re: The Abandoned Child by DOMAWOLEYE(m): 7:54pm On Jun 08, 2021 |
Kawo9ze: Wow, nice story! Tho the end wasn't what I expect but its captivating Kudos @domawoleye Thanks. Please what did you expect the end to be like? |
Re: The Abandoned Child by happyjuliet(f): 8:05pm On Jun 09, 2021 |
Baba you too much � I swear, May God continue to lift you up �. What a great story, Nice one � bro. |
Re: The Abandoned Child by happyjuliet(f): 8:06pm On Jun 09, 2021 |
Baba you too much � I swear, May God continue to lift you up �. What a great story, Nice one � bro. |
Re: The Abandoned Child by mendel04(m): 11:29am On Jun 10, 2021 |
DOMAWOLEYE:
Thanks. Please what did you expect the end to be like? Give us something new na boss |
Re: The Abandoned Child by DOMAWOLEYE(m): 9:02am On Jul 17, 2021 |
happyjuliet: Baba you too much � I swear, May God continue to lift you up �. What a great story, Nice one � bro.
thanks my sister. 1 Like |
Re: The Abandoned Child by Ayemileto(m): 12:48pm On Jul 17, 2021 |
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Re: The Abandoned Child by Ayemileto(m): 1:09pm On Jul 17, 2021 |
DOMAWOLEYE:
CHAPTER 21
Contrary to my expectations, the navy did not torture Chioma and Oga Dan in order to get their confessionary statements. They were given the VIP treatment.
When we returned to Owerrinta base, we went to the commandant’s office and gave him the update of our journey. He joined us in his official car and together we drove to the naval police unit. Commodore Aboderin went into the office of the Naval Police CO while his orderly took Chioma and Oga Dan to the guard room section and handed them over to the petty officer on duty. I was later called in by an SO and was given a note pad to write my statement. After writing my statement and submitting the note pad to the SO, Oga Dan requested for the note pad so he could write his statement too. Not now! You are not ready yet! The petty officer said to him. Me? No o! I am very ready sir! Oga Dan said. No sir! The PO said, when you are ready you will know.
The CO NP( Commanding officer naval police) and commodore Aboderin met us at the counter of the guard room, the ratings in the Office came to attention and saluted the presence of the personnel that walked in. the Commodore acknowledged the salute. You are Mr. Daniel kwo? The CO NP asked Oga Dan Yes sir! I am Daniel Maduabuchi sir! Kai! You are the man sucking breast in your office kwo? Shege! Dan banza! See ya mouth! The CO said and started to laugh as Oga Dan bowed in shame.
And you are the Chioma kwo? He asked Chioma Yes sir! Chioma nodded her head. Good afternoon sir! She said
Yoowa! Em, PO! Please give them the VIP treatment first! You know they are civilians, this one is an Oga in the hotel and this one is a girl, don’t torture them o! Just start with the VIP treatment! The CO said. If they don’t cooperate, then you can torture them. Yes sir! The petty officer saluted and called on the SO. Oya get the korofo marshal and his tool box! Yes sir! The SO who is a corporal equivalent answered and scurried out of the office.
Thank you very much sir! God bless you sir! Oga Dan said after the senior officers as they walked out of the guard room section. Bolaji! You guys can go home from here! I am going back to the training school! The Commodore stopped and told us; and by the way, I hope you got all your belongings from the hotel?
Oga! This stupid man here! Pointing at Oga Dan. Don share all Oga Bolaji property finish walahi! He say he think say Oga Bolaji don yamutu! Even the clothe wey he wear when we enter him office na Oga Bolaji own! The Orderly said. Hmm, life! Commodore Aboderin shrugged and went to his Car.
Wetin be VIP treatment? I asked the Orderly; and by the way sef! Wetin be your name? Me and you don dey waka together since yesterday and I no know your name! I said Oga Bolaji, dem no dey ask Soja man for him name o! My name dey my name tag! He replied. Oh sorry! Na true you talk o! And I dey with you since yet my mind no go there! I said and saw that his name was Adamu Shuaibu. Okay Adamu, wetin be VIP treatment? I asked It means “very important personality” Adamu replied. I know nah! But how is it like? I asked You want to know? He asked Yes! I want to know! I replied Okay! Make we go outside go wait and see. He said.
After about fifteen minutes, the soldiers brought Chioma and Oga Dan outside to the mini-parade ground in front of the NP building. Chioma and Oga Dan had been kitted with military porch bags strapped over their shoulders, helmets on their heads and boots on their feet; they also gave them condemned riffles to carry. Oga Dan looked funny because he wore these regalia on his boxers.
They were told to stand apart, they looked confused and terrified. After minutes of standing outside, the korofo marshal, a giant creature came along dragging two ferocious looking Rottweiler’s. Immediately the dogs saw the duo of Oga Dan and Chioma, they charged and started to bark and prance towards them. The dogs knew the drill.
Oga dan and Chioma wanted to run, but to where? They ran into each other and started to scream out loud. The marshal chained the dogs to a pole on the floor close the where Chioma and Oga Dan were told to stand.
Now listen to me! The Soldier said; I am the Korofo marshal! I am LS Slaughter or sergeant Slaughter if you like! This is my small parade and I hate people that do not follow my instructions! He used the big swagger stick in his hands and drew a circle on the sandy ground. Oga! Enter here! He told Oga Dan He drew another circle on the floor Oya Auntie! You enter here! They both entered the circle while adjusting the bags strapped over their shoulders. Something dey inside that bag? I asked Adamu Yes! Na wet sand and stones full am! Jesu Christi o! I exclaimed Now listen to the instructions of this parade! The marshal continued Number one! Thou shall not leave the circle under any circumstances! Anything you want to do, either to shit or to piss, to laugh or to cry, never leave the circle! Number two! Thou shall not drop your armament! No matter the condition, rain or shine! Number three! Thou shall not sit down! If any of these rules is broken, there shall be consequences! He said and looked at his wrist watch, then he turned around to leave. Sir! Oga Dan called The marshal turned swiftly back and stood at ease to face Oga Dan; yes? He asked. Biko, please! Oga dan said softly almost in tears; what is the consequence sir? The dogs will tell you! The marshal said and turned abruptly to march out of their presence and at that instance, the two dogs started to bark and jump towards Oga Dan and Chioma.
Chineke me e! Oga Dan screamed Awun’a na m o! Nkita a ta gbuo m na barracks ndi navy o! chaii! Ewu ata go m atu n’isi o!
Chioma too was crying and calling for help Bolaji please forgive me o! I am sorry for everything! Eewoo! Mama m o! Please o!
Oga Bolaji, I beg me I want to smoke cigarette o! you dey smoke? Adamu asked No, I no dey smoke, I replied Oya make we go sidon for under that mango tree there! He said We moved towards the Mango tree close to the office from where we could watch the VIPs. There was a wooden bench there and a woman with a cooler on a small table in front of her. We greeted the woman and sat down.
Akwai kunu? Adamu asked the woman Akwai sir! She replied Akwai sanyi? Adamu asked Akwai sanyi sosai! She replied To! Bani insha! Adamu said. She gave him a cup and a chilled bottle of kunu Oga, you sabi this one? Adamu asked me as he pulled off his beret and clipped it on the shoulder of his uniform. No! I replied. It is made from dawa! He said. Dawa? Na wetin be dat one? I asked Wheat! It is like pap but made from wheat and it is watery unlike pap. The thing good well well and he dey give blood for body! He said. What? He dey give blood? I asked; no be wheat you say dem take make am? I asked. Yes nah! He replied. Okay o! I said. Is it alcoholic? He dey shack? I asked Haba! No o! kunu no dey shack person! Na the senior brother pito dey shack! That one na gero dem dey take do am! He said Wetin be gero? I asked Kai! I no know the English name faa! But na gero every body dey call am. He was referring to millet. Walahi if you drink pito ehn? You no go drink beer again! Adamu continued as he brought out a pack of Rothmans and lit a stick. You mean am? I asked Walahi! He replied. Just as Oga Dan started to shout.
Chioma o! chioma o! ogini ka m mere gi n’uwa!? Kedu ka isi tiyem n’ime udi nsogbu a! chioma what did I do to you that you would put me in such a situation as this! Chai! I am suffering o! These bags are too heavy o! Oga Dan was restless; he was shifting the weight of the bags from one shoulder to the other. Chioma was doing the same but she was not shouting like Oga Dan. The two were sweating profusely and the dogs were getting more agitated.
They are lazy people! Adamu said as he puffed out smoke from his burnt lips. They won’t last! He said. How long do you think they will last? I asked I don’t know, but they will be there until they break down! He said Break down? I asked; how will we know they have broken down? I asked We will all know! Even the dogs will know! He replied. Ha! Okay! But how long can a normal human being last with the VIP treatment? I asked Three hours maximum! He said Hmm, so you mean you can endure this treatment for three hours? I asked I was able to do eighteen hours in the depot! He said. It was competition for us. He said; the person that won the competition endured it for 48 hours without sleep, but that record has been broken by another set where some one did it for seventy two hours! Three days! But you said it was three hours maximum for normal human being? I asked. Yes! Three hours max! He said puffing out smoke into the air above his head. He tossed the butt away and lit another stick.
Oga Dan, Chioma and the dogs were all shouting.
It was over one hour that we had sat under the tree that Oga Dan suddenly changed the tune of the music. I want to shit o! I want to shit! A choro m iyu nshi biko nu o! He held onto his buttocks as he jumped about in the circle.
How will he shit now? I asked. Shit for there! Dan bura uba nka! Adamu shouted back at him laughing hysterically; it took me fifteen hours before I shit on myself that day! Adamu said. Everyone must shit under the VIP treatment! He said as he enjoyed his kunu and cigarette. Walahi this your Oga Dan na lazy man fa! Even the girl strong pass am I swear! We did not know that Chioma had already excreated in her pants without making any noise about it. She was just crying and stamping her feet on the ground. She was holding her waist and writhing in agony of pain and discomfort. My waist o! My shoulder! My waist o! Can I sit down please? She was begging and crying. Oga Dan too started begging to sit down after he had emptied his bowels on his body. The pebbles fell off his boxers while his urine combined with his sweat soaked his boxers. He was shaking all over like some one with cold.
Biko o! ukwu m o! My waist o! My shoulder o! My belle o! Biko gbahara m o! ndi navy gbahara o! It is the devil o! Oga Dan lamented. The Korofo marshal came around for inspection after two hours. Listen! He said as the duo and the dog continued to shout; I am going to untie the dogs now! If you leave your circle, you will be eaten alive! Why? Why? Oga dan shouted; biko don’t lose these lions o! they will chop us o! we have not broken the rules nah! The marshal loosened the dogs.
Chai! O kam si na? O otua kam si na? Oga Dan kept shouting. O bu Nkita g’ata gbu om? Is this how I will go? To be eaten alive by dogs? But the dogs did not bite; rather they put more fear into them by sniffing them up. Chioma closed her eyes and was screaming for her mothers help. Oga Dan made the sign of the cross and started singing a gospel song in tears.
Adamu was just laughing uncontrollably, clutching at his stomach. I was scared of what the dogs could do to them. The Marshal marched away.
At two hours thirty minutes Oga Dan fell down flat with a loud noise and he lay still. One of the dogs sniffed his face and walked briskly to meet the Marshal who was already on his way with a bucket of water to pour on Oga Dan.
That one has broken down! Adamu said; if the marshal had not shown up, the dog would have gone to call him, he said. Wow! I exclaimed. At two hours fifty minutes, Chioma collapsed; the dog sniffed her face and barked at the marshal who was on standby with a bucket of water after carrying Oga Dan indoors.
Now they are ready for their statements! Adamu told me as he stood up and slapped his back side clean. I stood up too as Adamu paid the kunu seller and we went home.
The reason for my death was the most stupid one! Out of her quest to get even with me and her friends when the news of our relationship got to her, she had gone to join the “Black Brazier” the most dreaded female confraternity on Campus. Her plan was to deal with me, katty and messy, but DJ Slam was the obstacle as he would definitely know where the attack is from. The former boy friend of Chioma, Major was given the job to eliminate DJ Slam but DJ Slam has friends every where so the plan licked to him and he quickly organized his men and they took out Major and his number two man “Lusaka”. With Major and Lusaka out of the way, the Black braziers knew they were in trouble so they used their police connection to kill DJ Slam at an illegal Police checking point, he was slaughtered and his body dumped at the gate of the hotel in the dead of the night while his head was thrown into the bush, the idea was to make it look like a rival cult murder, after all two known cultists were just murdered. Chioma sent emissaries from Nekede Polytechnic to round up Tessy and Katty, they were beating and bathed with acid. They have left school for good. The hotel was shut down for some days after the body of Slam was discovered so as to allow the Police to investigate into the matter but Chioma went to the hotel and black mailed me. She told Oga Dan that whenever I am seen he should call her first and try to hold me down until the Police arrived.
The corrupt police men at Owerri were arrested and charged to court with Chioma and Oga Dan including some members of the Black brazier confraternity.
Abeg, it seems chapter 20 (the chapter before this quoted post) is missing. Can you post again please. ![shocked](https://www.nairaland.com/faces/shocked.gif) |
Re: The Abandoned Child by girlhaley(f): 12:29pm On Jul 18, 2021 |
How do I get the complete story please ![embarassed](https://www.nairaland.com/faces/embarassed.png) Is it on okadabooks ? |
Re: The Abandoned Child by DOMAWOLEYE(m): 4:23pm On Jul 18, 2021 |
girlhaley: How do I get the complete story please ![embarassed](https://www.nairaland.com/faces/embarassed.png)
Is it on okadabooks ? It is on Okada books and on Amazon Kindke. Also on Bambooks. |
Re: The Abandoned Child by Pumpumking: 3:12pm On Sep 10, 2021 |
girlhaley: How do I get the complete story please ![embarassed](https://www.nairaland.com/faces/embarassed.png)
Is it on okadabooks ? Please describe yor sef from waist down ward...I juss like to no u please ![smiley](https://www.nairaland.com/faces/smiley.png) |