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| Pls Experts, Help Correct Mistakes by Nobody: 12:19am On Mar 06, 2016 |
A friend of mine lost her dad so i wrote this dirge. I need constructive criticism and corrections. Thanks. A benign soul, principled beyond doubt. Knowledge that thrives in solemn reflection. Observant, though few worded. an epitome of fatherhood, An embroidery of nature. A rare paragon of excellence an example for posterity whose effigy will forever etch in our minds. Impeccable wisdom gone to dust. His personality, the sun reflects during the day. His wisdom, the stars assume. An Aurora of perfection a long lasting transient. Copyright: Abang52 |
| Re: Pls Experts, Help Correct Mistakes by Patented: 3:48am On Mar 06, 2016 |
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| Re: Pls Experts, Help Correct Mistakes by Nobody: 1:21pm On Mar 06, 2016 |
Please guys, do not just view if there are any mistakes help correct themselves Please guys, do not just view if there are any mistakes help correct themselves Please guys, do not just view if there are any mistakes help correct themselves |
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