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Sky by Gamine(f): 5:22pm On Nov 27, 2006
Up above in the sky
I must admit I felt scared.
I havent travelled by air
Since last year
God, pls keep me in Ur Blood
So that no matter whut
I'll come out victorious
Sharin testimonies of the
Great things Uve done for us

Descending, even as we reached
the airport
I thanked God
Profusely, cos He kept Us.
Re: Sky by RuuDie(m): 3:32pm On Dec 13, 2006
gamine, gamine ,
did u do dis off the top of ur head 2? it's cool, but u still gotta work on the flow , d'u wanna roll or rhyme , and do smthing about the choice of words, some of 'em are way 2 ordinary! later!
Re: Sky by Gamine(f): 5:07pm On Dec 15, 2006
Ooh thnk u, i wrote in when i was travelling to abuja, the last tym i went
gosh , it jst rolled out, i wanted to rhyme, but then i didnt take it too seriously.

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