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| Please Rate My New Poem Titled "Ice Cube Of Fire" by bokunrawo(m): 4:14pm On Dec 11, 2017 |
Not completed, still working on it tho AN ICE CUBE OF FIRE❄⛄⚡� Clothed in modesty Forged out of mundane humility Lighted in the illusion of self glorification Exhumed by vanity Flawless show of hypocrisy A ball of Fire enclosed in an ice cube Danger looming in the atmosphere Foolish humans belief that all is fair Wolf in sheep's clothing infiltrates mortals Trust being captured in strong metals Hidden pains entrenched under a cover of open gains. How do we discern good from evil? How do we decipher Truth from Lies? All lies in the purity of the heart Just like a warrior that goes through the battle like a conqueror Just like an old sage that depends solely on his wisdom 1 Like 1 Share |
| Re: Please Rate My New Poem Titled "Ice Cube Of Fire" by meneski(m): 11:03pm On Dec 11, 2017 |
7/10 |
| Re: Please Rate My New Poem Titled "Ice Cube Of Fire" by noble4d(m): 10:40pm On Dec 12, 2017 |
bokunrawo: This is fabulous bro, try out narrative poem and The Bop in Rudiments of poetry thread. Thumbs up |
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