sorrow fills the heart,
like the slow spread of poisonous venom,
pain is persistent,
like an insatiable hunger refusing to be quenched.
burning embers of passion, lay in the depths of the soul,
like rare artifacts waiting to be unearthed.
the soul hopelessly searches for a mate,
like a lost sheep in acres of barren land.
the being is incomplete'
like the sky without the stars,
the spirit so low down,
like a sunken ship in the ocean deeps.
the body longs for the warmth of loving touch,
like the earth thirsts for rain in the dry season.
the heart is like a lost and forgotten island,
just waiting.
waiting to be discovered,
waiting to love and be loved !

Nice,simple but perfect!

@ iicey,

how do you think i'd given it mo' imagery in it ?

that was kool, please check this out pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee


[center]BEAUTIFUL ONE

Beautiful one, where at thou
Lovely one, here i bow
Body and soul we avow
Distance apart, we afar

In my mind, you abide
In my soul, there resides
Beautiful thoughts of our time worth while
Stolen glances at you all worth while

Mona Lisa, you i call
Da Vincis' greatest amongst them all
Complexion,nor compared to like a god
Reflection falling on me like the sun god

The Holy Grail, non never understood
Templars fought and died for its good
Revealing such a history to you
Describes how much the chalice lies in you

A bosom compared to Aphrodite's alone
Please grant my soul, and be its home
Zeus almighty would forgive us, even for this sin
My immortal, you my heart is longing to see,

06/19/2007
(Damon Hill)[/center]

We have come to crossroads,
And i must either leave or come with,

I lingered over the choice,
But in the darkness of my doubts,
u lifted the lamp of love and i saw in ur face,

The road i should take.

@ Damon Hill,

penned down like a real pro !

anymore sad love poems

Hello bro, ive got new one, check em out

IF I CRY

Visions of love evolve us both,
Entwined i passion of a voyage in a love boat,
Intimacies gods felt and men loath,
Love in my mind to the end was an oath,

Kiss we shared so deep i fell,
Moments my being dared the word fear,
So into you with lighting speed i was there,
Heave ha! I felt my dear,

Time my enemy chose to invade us,
Revealing your face hidden behind white gloss,
Travails of all sort erupted from no cause,
The end was "I'm Leaving" a dreadful clause,

How then do you think to console me when you try, ?
My love is empty;my heat stack dry,
My being aching for touches i cant let lie,
What then can you do, IF I CRY, ?

Damon Hill
01/27/09

@Ruudie: Nice, like it. Can i post it at my blogsite? kezenwaka..com

RuuDie, your poem is nice.
to me it is mystical and philosophical.
but what do you mean by "the being is incomplete"

pls,check my new poem 'everybody is angry'

chura:

RuuDie, your poem is nice.
to me it is mystical and philosophical.
but what do you mean by "the being is incomplete"

pls,check my new poem 'everybody is angry'

thanx. . . . .

the "being" as a NOUN - refers to a human or living thing