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| Pls Critique This Poem by tedben(m): 1:38am On Mar 08, 2012 |
SILENT SCREAMS A lonely path we navigate As the quite journey begins Our thoughts, never considered Our feelings, subdued Our emotions drained Words never spoken desires, unexpressed abilities and inherent powers murdered Always told we cant even when the small voice says we can We metamorphose into manhood with fear and uncertainty Emotions only expressed through anger and violence We hate being like this But this is all we know We re hurting but who cares to know Always blamed and accused Who will acquit the accused Who would care to know Freezing in d cold Who can hear our silent screams… |
| Re: Pls Critique This Poem by ladolls(m): 10:41am On Jun 04, 2012 |
[color=#550000][/color]9ice try, dere is always room for improvmnt |
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Is Dis Partial God Or Partial Fate / My Nubian Queen / Expressions Of Lost Loved One
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