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Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by illicit(m): 12:06pm On May 19, 2012 |
[color=#000099][/color] Oh God of Men Thou art thou the beginning the creation the science Now the once upon a time the old testament the remembrance Where art thou Today in our presence The Great God of Men wonderful art thou silent absent. |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 12:00am On May 22, 2012 |
illicit: [color=#000099][/color]nice bro. Nice in deed. 1 Like |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 5:35am On May 30, 2012 |
OH HEAVEN! Oh heaven! Why do you always love to give us sunshine, rainfall and breeziness? Seasonally Why not pure fire in form of rain? Daily Rain fire on this earth now I plea For this earth is over-corrupted Aye, I don't care One of the casaulty, I may be. And thank you heaven Do it and I will think of ways to repay you. Manifoldly Aboundant. |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 2:32pm On Jun 05, 2012 |
[b]☺Go to hell my love(reloaded)☺ When you were quivering like an injured quail in frosting times I came to your rescue Without considering the pale state of our nation, I held up your retard hands to rub with mine I worn your bare but fine legs with my golden slippers I covered your yawed hair with my ma's bold blankets I worn your swollen clam with the only cloth I possess I worn your shivery hands with the irons I blacksmithed in the sun I creptly drew out my best coat to give you best of all warmness I lifted you up even when I'm even busy chilling to my mere fingers and toe tips, I steely still bourne you shoulder-high Into my mighty hut; And now, you mutter muffledly to my pinnae you need injection I bred you with my finest food, Lay you on my pa's inherited bed While I slept on my long gone parents' shrouds You, I covered with a golden shawl And at dawn Bathe your wounds and bath you in my winy water to replenish your stolen aura Then, round you up with a thick attire to hallow my work Even during these times I entertained you by myself I did everything to please your heart all by myself Liza, do I know you? Nah, I don't Just now, the frosting time is packing out Now, unseen, okey-dokey, apparently gone I let you go expecting being paid back in the same coin Your heart was all I desired ever But now, Trouble times, forgotten, You dawdled into my mighty hut Pointing a condescending finger at my globy iris And cursed me, You said, the day I helped was an unfortunate one You called me ugliest, Even you said a tamable zombie supercedes me You called my mighty hut a diabolical vamps den That makes you jitter That can even make a glad home jilter You called my finest food one with naught savour You tagged my best bed the worst the world has ever had You called my blankets too filthy and ludicrous to be seen You even called me a proud pauper You said how dare I love a pauper That can't even afford a 20 naira pepper To hell with you You said to me Right there in my hut. Now listen Liz, you've mocked me in the presence of my avowed fiends And tainted my visage in front of my bosom friends. You whispered into my ears What have you done? Uuum, nought, You said. You've vapourised me You've sent me on a suicidal errand You've poisoned my soul with viper's venom You've soaked my good spirit in hot water You've poured a whole batch of undiluted acids on my naked feet and commanded me to hobble on broken bottles You've falsed me to ingest pythons Even, delighted seeing me deficating broken chips You've altered my sagacity to silliness Trying to sage makes me trudge on numberless pins You've killed me and my love. Aye, on that day, you crossed my mind, really, I loved you Now, I even prefered I had loved yew in the stead of you Now, love, I don't get enough of it, Hatred now kings my mild heart. O heaven! Thanks for saving me from heart attack while still youthing But, tell me, just try and tell me Why am I so unlucky? See, I beseech Bestow on my head an infinite luck For me to realise the benefit of still breathing Yes, again, I need lots of luck and gains even when it won't rain. But, as for you Liz, You've crossed the Rubicon There, you shan't find a corn To repower your doomed saddle. Henceforth, starvation is your best bloke, Beasts shall propose to mar you There you can't do but to gnash till you finally silent. Enough. Heaven, for me He shall avenge Cos you've stained my whiteness with Chameleon feases Upon which when washed Still remain intact. Liz, I need you to please go to hell. Go to hell My love go to hell There, dance with satan and Eat with his demons. [/b] |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by razzyblazing: 4:28pm On Jun 06, 2012 |
nice one guys, click on this link and see my piece, one i titled someday. <a href = "http://www.voicesnet.org/displayonepoem.aspx?poemid=233839">Click here to visit VoicesNet.com to read the poem called "SOMEDAY" by Razak Akhilome, Nigeria</a> |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 8:28am On Jun 13, 2012 |
An african thunder! Now, see the clouds are coming from the west Matching in procession to present their best In foamy-like theykiss one another With empty enmity betwixt one another The claps produced by the shriek of their kissings Wakes a comerade's dead concubines The kissing so silent that they always produce a loud baul That can make a mere man go dull Yes, that makes merry kids mould together like sheaves to ball. The clouds are now pregnant Ladden with water, they're laying off the pant The rumblings andtremblings of all this make young dead heroes mourn Right from there sepulchre when these are on The cracking, rambling, racking are breaking the silence into shreds Thunder, see thosedangling breasts packing their driedbananas Mature man manning their horses to hide incase it May be for their ill sakes that it's thundering, who knows what's what? Belles, pilling theirtits well to submit their calabash Afore the incoming of rain, cos it may be brash. Aye, ageds are even shaken, Asking Little lads, isn't that thunder thundering? Aye, baba, it's thunder tearing through the sky tattering our treesand vapourising Those of malevolency in our kingdom But massaging themost simple-hearted with his balm Oh! Thunder, You again with your shudders, well no wonder. |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by Luckysoul(m): 2:09pm On Jun 14, 2012 |
The moon the star the moon who seeth what we do who giveth light to the nook fixed so beautiful to look the cloud are your groom i wish i could pluck you to my upper room your name is what i put in my slum you are a deceiver, to make believe you move u are not your light you tap to deceive by the gloom |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 3:10pm On Jun 14, 2012 |
Lucky soul: The moonhandsome... And thanks! |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 7:47pm On Jun 14, 2012 |
╗°ON HER BIRTHDAY°╗ See, I plea Embrace this as a tokken from me to you naught to yew I aint having any chicken nor even laps of a turkey that's true But my mild mind lingers To write you this with my fingers To congratulate you on your birthday, this summer Aye, and to minionly wish you many millions more To witness today's date again or Even trillions, if God thinks that it's core Today, Clouds are giggling like a glad cow eating hay Plus, the sun is busy jumping up shining its ray Just cos today's your birthday This is just a tokken from a parley Lim, take it merrily, is today not your day? |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by kasiem(m): 10:37pm On Jun 14, 2012 |
i have five poems but i can't post them here cos i feel intimidated by the ones already here |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 4:26am On Jun 15, 2012 |
kasiem: i have five poems but i can't post them here cos i feel intimidated by the ones already hereAh, why are the ones already here intimidating you? We post poems to explain to ourselves the hidden meanings of lines or the whole poem and to encourage us to write the more; and that's the aims and objectives nothing more. |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by kasiem(m): 8:50am On Jun 15, 2012 |
Probation so was it a new dawn came, the thought of the past showered in, oh, a new responsibility lurks behind behind, tears dripping like dews, hey, what's it? So did the rhetoric of the absence of my heart, so, my heart is gone? Nope, she's gone for adventure oh, how long can i cope without her? A question waiting for fate to answer. |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by kasiem(m): 8:52am On Jun 15, 2012 |
i need criticisms |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 9:58am On Jun 15, 2012 |
kasiem: Probationuhm! I think the subject matters of this piece are life, destiny and responsibility. I hope am right. The subject matter(s) should be known afore parody/criticism is done on that poem of yours. |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by kasiem(m): 11:51am On Jun 15, 2012 |
gloatkenf: uhm! I think the subject matters of this piece are life, destiny and responsibility. I hope am right. The subject matter(s) should be known afore parody/criticism is done on that poem of yours.i suppose we meet on facebook so dat we can take time to put heads together. I will send u d analysis of d poem later. But, on the whole is d poem presentable? |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 1:33pm On Jun 15, 2012 |
kasiem: i suppose we meet on facebook so dat we can take time to put heads together. I will send u d analysis of d poem later. But, on the whole is d poem presentable?YES NAH, D POEM IS PRESENTABLE. Go and register in this website: poetfreak.com. There, you can learn from people round the world on how to write the more and to write better the more... Note: 'The more u write the more beautiful ur poems will look like.' Just search 4 'Jodekss/Gloatkenf' on facebook that's me. Lots of Luck bro. |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 12:43pm On Jun 26, 2012 |
My silhouette/shadow. Aye, I am looking forward To D-day that I will argue with my dad And even anyone else That, at 1 a.m exactly Or in the mid-day exactly, I saw my silhouette doing something else While contraposttoing I mean, while just jumping up But instead, my shadow is just skipping rope Familiar, but different in every sense Isn't this something else? I am sure, If that happens, the world would have high Blood Pressure Cos, it would be just like a scary corpse kissing the chicks of a year old kid that's just. See, the day I saw my silhouette doing something else The day I would walk on the world telling everyone that has ears That, the world has been taken away by surprice Imagine, while some are busy buying baked breads... |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by raptureme: 11:17am On Jul 03, 2012 |
THIRTY MILLION NAIRA Thirty million naira Of a man’s sweat Thirty million naira Off a man’s brow Gliding like a peacock along Balance engraved on her legs And nobility on her frame While her rims sparkle with abandon Shooting admiry eyes like a shotgun As I stare awed like bunkum As she flashes her lights at me Its like a wink from Halle Berry; And when she races I remember the dotted spots of the cheetah. She combines power and beauty Like Queen Amina While mixing allure and appeal better than the chief chef At McDonalds. Thirty million naira Of a man’s intellect Thirty million naira Off a man’s ingenuity Nearly having the brain of a man Predicting a rough terrain From a thousand miles Navigating her husband effortlessly From the hazards and obscurity of nowhere To the lights and civilization of somewhere Though with a flesh of fibre She has a mind of reinforced steel And the guts of a jail bird. Thirty million naira Of a man’s calories Thirty million naira Off a man’s biceps When she coos at night Offering the best of surround sound Its Nightingalish; But she turns official and formal in the morning In a smooth mood swing To keep her husband up to speed And abreast of events. Thirty million naira Of my bargaining ability Thirty million naira Off my saliva for over two hours And I get a young, nubile and smart princess She is bitchy, powerful and rugged Towering seven feet of raw muscle and hassle But her most endearing trait Is the three-pointed German tattoo in a circle Near her waistline. Ogbonna Nnaemeka Henry. 1 Like |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 5:57pm On Jul 03, 2012 |
raptureme: THIRTY MILLION NAIRAVERY BEAUTEOUS. I LOVE YOUR PIECE, IN FACT, KUDOS. |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 6:01pm On Jul 03, 2012 |
TWELVE A.M OF AFRICA Oh, you again twelve! You that tolerate kinds of maelstrom occurrences You that permit the witches and wizards to mar their naive oppugnants What! You want to vie with, that I am slying? Okey-dokey, jab the head up Aye, when it's twelve again in Africa See them, not only in Nigeria Flapping, flying in and out parabolically and barbarically In the blur mo, Even when the morny dew is moving down Aye, you will see them offing altogether, all together to meet for the next meat. Bad birds, bouncing back into their devious baskets In confirmation, You would hear The cock jumping up crowing evasively and bauly Like the bomberdment by bombs as of now here by the Bokos' The hulaballoo so breath-taken that it makes chicks pass out Goats are shrieking while pipers and their allies are hissing for A safer passage For the ambassages of night are flying over To assemble again All, when at twelve am of Africa. I am telling you naught only in our North or in Kenya Yes, to me, twelve a.m is when I found it most comfortable To lucubrate with or without light twelve a.m here, listen carefully I've pieces of advice for you this morny I am talking to you Yes, you not yew Attentive, I plea, You've got to amend now For, who knows what will be what in the end? For the moribound you've caused us beats the otherwise Be wise Support what's right with your wit without any price And in the end, you shall earn an elegant judgement with your ears. By from the owner of earth and heavens. See, twelve a.m in Africa just now It's one of the most fearful Even in Libya 'n' Ethiopia! |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by wumiesontop: 10:05pm On Jul 03, 2012 |
FRIEND OR FOE ''Water you no get enemy''sang a Renowned musician in Nigeria(Fela Anikulapo kuti) The world's best friend In the past and recent Years(water) Has suddenly become The world's number One enemy In the past,during Rainy season Everyone,especially Children become wild with joy When the cloud Thickens,you ask Why? They know it may Rain With soothing efects But,today,when the The cloud thickens Everyone glue their Eyes to the sky With prayerful Hearts to God Because it will Forever remind them Of an experience They will never Forget The downpour that Resulted to An almighty FLOOD That claimed the Lives of their Lovedones;parents, Children,siblings, And properties Their hearts Becomes gripped With fear and Sorrow Their eyes gets Stained with uncontrollable tears Some lost Everything They laboured for Why? Why? Why? Has our best Friend become our worst enemy? Nobody seems to Know why.[color=#000099] PLS I NEED COMMENTS 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 2:47pm On Jul 12, 2012 |
Illuminati-the new world order [b]Now, Wonder keeps wondering me For I was thrust into a gloomy vision, To explore illumination is the mission Therein, Here is what I saw; Things occurring just now is repleated with naughtiness, Affirmative All, now, As I hobble flutterily Like a flapping flamingo that lost a fine wing Into the blur zone of the earth's reality Area, where not even little light is permitted, Indibutable, See them, Here they come The ganitors to the iron-gate of hell-fire The wild wide empire of serious fire. Illuminati- the new world order... Who shall sit in the seat of its emir Contemplation looms in at the mo of my arrival Who else, but Lucifer Blessed with mammoth accursed acolytes That shall borne the responsibilities of the maelstrom happenings in the long run of all the runners Aye, in the selfsame process, I was nudged to proceed into the mistery of misteries Hence, truism clinged to my scalp and permeated into my brains for my use Plus, for the sake of any attentive mankind. Listen, they are enriched hyper- bountifully with world's wealth To the state of vieing to buy the world herself with dollars They that sit in the darkest part of darkness The new world order The word makes my heart pounce on spiny grass And tore me to bare and left me to shudder Their world had torn the golden garments of the world to shreds Hence, shivery and scorchiness In the both weather What do you expect? Whether this is the real expected sign or part of Who knows! Yes, the symbol is a triangle With a treachery and deceitful eye in its mid What does it means? But, the source of the spring was... The betrayal was misjudged Sequelled with the eternal rustication Hence, they want to avenge Cos he wants a revenge O heaven! Listen to the mournful mind of this iniquitor product of yours Make their purnishment be too grave in the end Heaven, open your mouth and let down tens of thousands thunderous thunders And tear them and their outcomes disintegrately Roll off their generations aeonly From the visage of the earth now Make them mutter that you are right Even from the fore of all things I beseech, make them kowtow on your foot for food and fruit Make their saddle be filled with pinchy rays of sun Make their mind long to serve you Now, do it in your ways For who can fathom your calculus? Even with the craziest scientific calculator ever progenitored For who is worthy to stand in your presence and talk like an idiot palm tree? For the world had been taken by surprise Heaven, I plea, peregrinate on earth with your mighty might and surprise And do your will; the sufferness was too much on the crux.[/b]® |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by WilliamHenry: 9:59am On Jul 21, 2012 |
Good poems.........Nice to read it..... |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 10:48am On Aug 16, 2012 |
O lovelorn orioles How I wish I could tango to the lyrics of your amorous angel Why won't you choose to embrace my embrace? Run down tither Permeat into my heart and take 'em all For my heart is void so devoid of your existence therein. My lovely love for you You beauteous black belle Higher than the distance twixt hell and heaven Do my wish, You lovelorn lonely one And I shall decorate your head with Solomon's crown Shall anoint your perfect skin with the costliest ointment Shall take a centenary to adore your tits Bicentenary, to inspect and cherish your bulgy buttock Tricentenary, to kiss your luminous lips Just ramble yes Aye, to my request And I shall die to assure your existence O lovelorn orioles Let your heart fall into my warmly embrace And I won't mind purchasing for you this cosmos♥. |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by Nobody: 2:50pm On Aug 29, 2012 |
Check out this poem of mine on my blog http://oluafolabi93./2012/08/29/mother-earth-2/ other bloggers should indicate too, would like to follow their blog... |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by 40fied(m): 4:15pm On Aug 29, 2012 |
It's the birth of a new day 24 hours long time to make things right enough of doing wrong yesterday's gone gone with the wind today's a happy song the world hears me sing so to everyone who's been hurt by me I pray thee, lower your gun this is a new me if I could go back in time bring back yesterday trust me, I'll press rewind and change destiny 40fied. |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by Nobody: 8:14am On Aug 30, 2012 |
If one must parade himself as a poet he must endeavour to reflect in his art the pulse and topical issues that rear its head in the fabric of the society. Any who writes in isolation of the happenings in the society does not fulfill the inalienable role of the poet, because it is the events in the society that must give literature direction. |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 12:25am On Sep 03, 2012 |
chukwuma101: If one must parade himself as a poet he must endeavour to reflect in his art the pulse and topical issues that rear its head in the fabric of the society. Any who writes in isolation of the happenings in the society does not fulfill the inalienable role of the poet, because it is the events in the society that must give literature direction.Point of correction, literature isn't just about the main mileu, it's an art that mirrors life in entirity! And life, though, four alphabets, but so complex. And don't be insinuative against on the basis of a rustic reason(s) in the morrow |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 6:21am On Nov 13, 2012 |
NOTHING'S STRAIGHT ☀Morny... Noting these things, is a must for thee See, to me Set down this set down This is another graceful dawn We are still cos we're all loved By Love himself Listen up... For life shall always be in an askew mode Reset it always by being bold Since the first morn, it'd been like that Yes, the morn, perharps noon Who knows, perhaps it's at night Nay, in the morn or in the noon Cos the twain had to trudge down to The central square afore the munching down of What was accursed Nothing's straight here bloke Since that mo The more earth-man move to make it straight The more, perhaps it signs up for, a newer strait Life is in its dire days Heaven is now peeping at, to see who shall be picked For the fieriest and the furrious time for that foe is fully at hand... Yes, this tit-bit isn't a first-hand Nor would it be the last-hand Try and understand my stand, friend Try to be my best friend my fiend☀ |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by enebeliifeanyi: 7:38pm On Nov 13, 2012 |
My name is Enebeli Ifyprada and am a Poet to a fault. I write poem like i drink water. Like a river, it keeps flowing. I just publish 16poems online feel free to read, comment in the below link. Thanks http://www.poemhunter.com/enebeli-ifyprada/ |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by Nobody: 9:06pm On Nov 13, 2012 |
gloatkenf: Point of correction, literature isn't just about the main mileu, it's an art that mirrors life in entirity! And life, though, four alphabets, but so complex. And don't be insinuative against on the basis of a rustic reason(s) in the morrowYou merely echo my points. Literature must like a mirror illuminate the life of a people so that they can see their shortcomings and summon the will for positive change!be more constructive in your criticism! |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 10:54pm On Nov 13, 2012 |
chukwuma101:It's thee that has to be more constructive in your assertions pal. That mirror that you mayn't do without peeping at early in each morns afore dawdling out of your cave means more than reflecting things, it means manifolds, one of is correcting...and you may correct to make it right to your taste cos it's your taste and you may correct to make it more putrid, appalling, rustic and wrong cos it's the same...the pattern we embrace in restructing things as a poet needn't being of sameness, nah, you could rectify a blunt spot in the society by the merely locomoting backwards and forwards of flowing flowers on a water by being indirect... Bloke, don't confess your weakness even when it's needed; confess your meekness even when naught direly needed and be appreciative in all ramification. I am also in your so called poemhunter.com...you've just got to search for JODEKSS in google and read my works...ehm! Save the carpet you'd blown...entertake it, I will never...it sounds repulsive |
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