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Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by BINTILAYE101(m): 12:14am On Jan 09, 2013 |
uhmm! @gloatkenf l really love ur poems though am not a poet n av neva written any poem b4 but i luv poem n i would like to b a poet too, how can you helop me achieve this. |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 3:29pm On Jan 09, 2013 |
BINTI_LAYE101: uhmm! @gloatkenf l really love ur poems though am not a poet n av neva written any poem b4 but i luv poem n i would like to b a poet too, how can you helop me achieve this.You've just got to be inspired ni jare. And it's gonna be much more easier for you, if it's your inborn ability. As in, abinibi yato si ability tins, you get... Thanks a lot, we all have talents! |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 3:34pm On Jan 09, 2013 |
The bond bound. Being beyond what's beyond Now I needn't being the second I solicited He gave the bond Showing me how to untie the bound Now is verily around I am naught sure how this will sound I am far drowned in the brook of the loudest sound What surrounds is not around but it's around The most scary trait to ever be around I think it's around Perhaps, it is for now cos am still around Don't ask me how this should sound I can't even unbound Only He that mould the word propound Can bring around what isn't around for it to be found. 1 Like |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 7:00am On Feb 12, 2013 |
I AM CONFUSED, NAH AM NOT... Now am off I don't belief in being confused But which mode is this Confused As if I were dissed Just the doves perhaps naught In lambs raiments Who should I go with? In whose embrace should my soul fly away with? I am confused No am not I am just about living for the north But here I am Dining direly with the rest three states Which kind of fate is this These belles are some thingummy drainers of spirit My heart's hale but very full of void What on earth should I name this This is as the diss Entertaken even by Him I meant the spittle Is this how smartly rough the routes to affirming One's purpose is here? O am fed up Of this wearied world, no hype Inspite, the weak, is seen jacking up those hale type Almost, just as... Just like stagnant to 'em but the fastest to somehow I am confused I think I am I am not but I don't get this Why should love loan me a long term illness? |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by Nobody: 4:35pm On Apr 09, 2013 |
gloatkenf: It's thee that has to be more constructive in your assertions pal. That mirror that you mayn't do without peeping at early in each morns afore dawdling out of your cave means more than reflecting things, it means manifolds, one of is correcting...and you may correct to make it right to your taste cos it's your taste and you may correct to make it more putrid, appalling, rustic and wrong cos it's the same...the pattern we embrace in restructing things as a poet needn't being of sameness, nah, you could rectify a blunt spot in the society by the merely locomoting backwards and forwards of flowing flowers on a water by being indirect... Bloke, don't confess your weakness even when it's needed; confess your meekness even when naught direly needed and be appreciative in all ramification.preview and edit before you post comments. Thank me later. Your post is so caught up in grammatical deficiencies that I am constrained to deny you the dignity of a direct reply. And always distance name-calling and sentiments from your pseudo-intellectual 'assertions' if you hope to convey a point to your audience. |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 3:35am On May 06, 2013 |
chukwuma101: preview and edit before you post comments. Thank me later. Your post is so caught up in grammatical deficiencies that I am constrained to deny you the dignity of a direct reply. And always distance name-calling and sentiments from your pseudo-intellectual 'assertions' if you hope to convey a point to your audience.Wow, I haven't been here for months, now gulp this tit, if you need me to punch your dirty butt with my dirty sinisterous remarks, believe me, am damn good at that and am going to punch you real bad and you are gonna live with it till...hmmmm... who cares...! Don't be too eager to be too jealous, I have published manifolds, weighed and checked by learned heads not this very person of yourself who takes delight in depleting someone else's might directed toward what he loves... To me, you are just a piece of mustard that won't germinate an inche. All rice, compose yours, and let's read it. Believe me oaf, whatever you compose, imma pastiche it for ya dirty dick dickhead! Waiting... Bless you... |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by Yellowmoon1400(f): 10:07pm On Oct 31, 2019 |
Let the warmth outpour of Loveliness embrace me Let it search in my heart Another reason to live Let all my nerves come to live Let it unplug my passions From unthinkable places I had never imagined... Let it pierce my heart with arrows of joy Let it take me on a journey Of fulfilled promises Let me be taken to a solitude of peace I had not known existed Let me breathe in the atmosphere of peace Let it overshadow my doubt... ©Precious Pen,2019 |
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by Britboy(m): 8:35am On Nov 01, 2019 |
You're my favourite notification Every morning, every day I pick up my device I wait for the notification! It's not forthcoming I wonder why Now I know why But why so? Don't keep me waiting I don't like waiting You make me smile You make my day! You have all it takes To stop me from waiting Make it happen You're my favourite notification! maynation 1 Like 1 Share |
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