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wow!,dis is a great story....angel weldone....thumbs up. |
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wow, #ghostmode deactivated#,this is an interesting story. wow this prose is what I call superb and superly awesome. keep up the good work. |
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Presh900:thanks for the corrections,I will work on them. |
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The Effect of Patience In the majesty of her glory She lifted up the veil Behold the most fabulous woman on earth I said in my mind Oh! What a beauty! She approached me and talked to me It felt like I was talking to an angel I felt her presence like the Holy spirit I said again in my mind Oh!what a beauty She talked to me I anticipated our wedding(in my imagination) Her scent was like a memory wipe I forgot all about my past life And focused on her lips like my life depends on it Then I said once again Oh!what a beauty! I breathed in her scent And I was intoxicated by her love I so wanted her now and now I told her What a beauty How disappointed was I when she revealed to me That she was taken I became aback Wondering why beautiful ladies always have guys I said in a dejected disappointed tone Oh No! What a beauty! I felt elated once more after three days When she told me that she and her guy were not in good terms I felt a ray of hope shinnin across my face once more Planning and scheming I decided to wait till d followin day So it wont look like I was waiting fr dem to break up The second day came I texted her and greeted her like every other day We chatted normally and I asked her about her guy................... Hmmmmn,her reply was devastating,heartbreaken,jaw opening and anger creating She dropped it like a grenade I caught it bfr I knew what it was Oh my God! She was back wit her guy.........oh.........so bad I instantly felt cold shivers on my skin I became really upset and uptight with my self Thinking about the devastating news If only had I known her guy would come back......... Now, I couldnt help but say it out loud That the effect of patience isn't always good. THE END By Olowosoyo Honour... |
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hey guys I wanna post a poem |
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hmmmmn,,nice story man,,bt .... jst kiddin,nyc work man,, post more ooo |
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Wow!!! I am short of words,,,mirabel died?kai its so painful,,[color=#990000][/color]may her loving gentle soul rest in perfect peace. Ohhhh men,,,victor u did a great job with this novel. Kudos. 1 Like |
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Oya nah,,,bro abeg update nah,,,u wan kill person with suspense[/color][color=#770077] |
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Chai!!! And I am scared for victor,,,mirabel just dey run mouth like tap wey no get control...kul sha. I hope wat is comin doesnt hit :Ddem as in ,,i hope dey dnt break up.. It ll b serious trouble fr all of dem,,promise,victor,mirabel and even d president. They ll have to cancel wedding,,abeg no break up ooooo 1 Like |
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Vic.....i have read dis story using ghost mode as I do for every other novel but I could not just overlook this book. You are really doin a good job on this book. I love the way suspense is used and your dramatic diction,,,you are really a good writer. More grace to you and more data to your phone. ![]() ![]() 1 Like |
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