pls review

thx u all for ur review am really dumbfounded.tx. hello prinseca

thx u all for ur review am really dumbfounded.tx

pls nairaland moderators and co,will you pls help us poets organize a poetry contest,i'll bet you it would be fun.please look into this request.

aint nothing free on the internet,got to pay one way or the other

you wrote it or did u copycat?u sure re good if u did wright it urself

stillwater would you poll with me?it's just that i dnt know if u're playwright or a poet but for sure u're good in both of em,

cool.kinda like the poem,it makes some sense

who is this stranger in our mist
who dances to our tune
and jumps at our beats
he partakes in our feasts
and dines with our best
he speaks our tongue
and dresses in our attires
but then by night
he speaks a foreign tongue
and steals from us
he marches with our enemies
and despoils us
he goes into our fields
and sets it on fire
he murders our king
and makes us strangers in our land
yet by morning
he mourns with us
and prays with us
who is this stranger among us?
this stranger among us?
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who is this stranger in our mist
who dances to our tune
and jumps at our beats
he partakes in our feasts
and dines with our best
he speaks our tongue
and dresses in our attires
but then by night
he speaks a foreign tongue
and steals from us
he marches with our enemies
and despoils us
he goes into our fields
and sets it on fire
he murders our king
and makes us strangers in our land
yet by morning
he mourns with us
and prays with us
who is this stranger among us?
this stranger among us?

who is this stranger in our mist
who dances to our tune
and jumps at our beats
he partakes in our feasts
and dines with our best
he speaks our tongue
and dresses in our attires
but then by night
he speaks a foreign tongue
and steals from us
he marches with our enemies
and despoils us
he goes into our fields
and sets it on fire
he murders our king
and makes us strangers in our land
yet by morning
he mourns with us
and prays with us
who is this stranger among us?
this stranger among us?

THEY CAME AND TOOK US AWAY
BUT WHO WAS HE WHO LED US ASTRAY?
FOR WHEN A MAN LEAVES HIS CULTURE
HE BECOMES LIKE A VULTURE
WHEN A MAN ABADONS HIS GODS
THE GOD OF HIS FOREFATHERS
AND CALL THEM FOOLS
HE HIMSELF IS THE WORST FOOL
FOR A FOOL BEGETS NOTHING BUT A FOOL
FOR HE GROWS IN THE KNOWLEGE OF HIS FATHERS
HE CALLS THEM "MERE WOODS"
BUT WHAT DOES HE BELIEVE IN?
EMPTY HEAVENS?IT TAKES THE WISE BUT A LITTLE TIME TO LEARN
BUT THE FOOL REMAINS BLIND TILL DEATHHE THINKS HIMSELF THE WISEST
WHILE HE WALLOWS IN FOLLY
HE ASKS WHERE THE GODS NOT AROUND WHEN THEY BOUND AND TOOK US AWAY
BUT HE NEVER ASKS "WHAT HAVE WE DONE TO DESERVE THIS
"THE TRUTH LIES WITHIN HIS REACH BUT HE WONT EVER GRAB IT
WHY?
CAUSE THE TRUTH IS HIS WORST ENEMY
HE DETESTS TRUTH LIKE DEATH
HE BELIEVES IN A FOREIGN CULTURE
AND BOWS TO A FORIEGN GOD
YET WHEN ONE OF HIS FAMILIES DIES 
HE BURIES HIM IN THE WAY OF HIS FORFATHERS
HA! FOOLS INDEED

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THEY CAME AND TOOK US AWAY
BUT WHO WAS HE WHO LED US ASTRAY?
FOR WHEN A MAN LEAVES HIS CULTURE
HE BECOMES LIKE A VULTURE
WHEN A MAN ABADONS HIS GODS
THE GOD OF HIS FOREFATHERS
AND CALL THEM FOOLS
HE HIMSELF IS THE WORST FOOL
FOR A FOOL BEGETS NOTHING BUT A FOOL
FOR HE GROWS IN THE KNOWLEGE OF HIS FATHERS
HE CALLS THEM "MERE WOODS"
BUT WHAT DOES HE BELIEVE IN?
EMPTY HEAVENS?IT TAKES THE WISE BUT A LITTLE TIME TO LEARN
BUT THE FOOL REMAINS BLIND TILL DEATHHE THINKS HIMSELF THE WISEST
WHILE HE WALLOWS IN FOLLY
HE ASKS WHERE THE GODS NOT AROUND WHEN THEY BOUND AND TOOK US AWAY
BUT HE NEVER ASKS "WHAT HAVE WE DONE TO DESERVE THIS
"THE TRUTH LIES WITHIN HIS REACH BUT HE WONT EVER GRAB IT
WHY?
CAUSE THE TRUTH IS HIS WORST ENEMY
HE DETESTS TRUTH LIKE DEATH
HE BELIEVES IN A FOREIGN CULTURE
AND BOWS TO A FORIEGN GOD
YET WHEN ONE OF HIS FAMILIES DIES
HE BURIES HIM IN THE WAY OF HIS FORFATHERS
HA! FOOLS INDEED

ALL RIGHTS RESERVED.

sorry lol just that they aoint got people thier

THEY CAME AND TOOK US AWAY
BUT WHO WAS HE WHO LED US ASTRAY?
FOR WHEN A MAN LEAVES HIS CULTURE
HE BECOMES LIKE A VULTURE
WHEN A MAN ABADONS HIS GODS
THE GOD OF HIS FOREFATHERS
AND CALL THEM FOOLS
HE HIMSELF IS THE WORST FOOL
FOR A FOOL BEGETS NOTHING BUT A FOOL
FOR HE GROWS IN THE KNOWLEGE OF HIS FATHER
HE CALLS THEM "MERE WOODS"BUT WHAT DOES HE BELIEVE IN?
EMPTY HEAVENS?
IT TAKES THE WISE BUT A LITTLE TIME TO LEARN
BUT THE FOOL REMAINS BLIND TILL DEATH
HE THINKS HIMSELF THE WISEST
WHILE HE WALLOWS IN FOLLY
HE ASKS WHERE THE GODS NOT AROUND WHEN THEY BOUND AND TOOK US AWAY
BUT HE NEVER ASKS "WHAT HAVE WE DONE TO DESERVE THIS"
THE TRUTH LIES WITHIN HIS REACH BUT HE WONT EVER GRAB IT
WHY?
CAUSE THE TRUTH IS HIS WORST ENEMY
HE DETESTS TRUTH LIKE DEATH
HE BELIEVES IN A FOREIGN CULTURE
AND BOWS TO A FORIEGN GOD
YET WHEN ONE OF HIS FAMILIES DIES HE BURIES HIM IN THE WAY OF HIS FORFATHERS
HA! FOOLS INDEED

ALL RIGHTS RESERVED.