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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:32am On Nov 14, 2014 |
Tecno4life, na only you dey comment na. Anyways, ama drop the next update by 12noon. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:35am On Nov 14, 2014 |
kip it rolling. u write up is amazing |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:37am On Nov 14, 2014 |
Thanks bro sodyc5050: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 11:42am On Nov 14, 2014 |
D9ty7: thanks sir, but note I'm not voting 4 Kiddablingzz and d other guy again!!! procedure 2 much 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 11:44am On Nov 14, 2014 |
Viewing this topic: Ukeme8, elMacho(m), sodyc5050, AmazingAngel, rockyeweka(m), mydex93(f), wag008, bmario1, Ogbarmey(f) and 6 guest(s) no no run just go comment u hear |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:56am On Nov 14, 2014 |
Me sef had to run away from the thread. How do they expect me to vote 25people at a go. I'll do the voting when am less busy. tecno4life:Guy, just try and vote. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 12:01pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
I swear to God, I am not being encouraged. I only see comments when I fail to update. But the moment I update, only a few people drop their comments. The same set of people are the ones commenting everyday. Please lets improve and I'll definitely increase my delivery rate. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 12:03pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
D9ty7:NO!!! I'm not voting where d 12pm update |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 12:04pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
--continuation-- Victoria was cooking in the kitchen when her phone rang from the living room. "You have a call dear." Her mother said from the living room. "Am coming mum." She said. She could hear footsteps approaching the kitchen, she knew her mother was coming to give her her ringing phone. "You have a call from Don." Her mother said eyeing her suspiciously. She picked the call and pressed the phone tightly to her ear. "Hello." she said. She knew her mother could hear what Don was saying because her phone speaker was a little bit loud. She tried to locate the volume control on the side of the phone but couldn't. "You knw what Don? Lets chat. I am busy in the kitchen." She said throwing a glance at her mother. "No problems." She hung up and dropped the phone on the kitchen table. "Who is he?" She was expecting the question quite alright. "A friend." She replied thinking hard on how best to describe him. "I know he is a friend. What does he do?" "He is a petrol-chemical engineer. He worked with Shells petroleum." She lied. "Is he married?" Her mother asked. "No mum." He mother smiled at her and walked out of the kitchen. She heaved a sigh of relief, afterall she was able to discharge her mother. Her phone vibrated, a new message. The convo goes thus; Don: Bae, there is a fresh assignment for you. Vicky: What is it? Don: That Sandra lady wants you in her apartment today. Vicky: What for? Don: you ask yoo much questions. Why don't you go and see things for yourself? Vicky: Alright. Send me the address. The message containing the adress immediately flew in and she quickyl read the message and mastered it, after which she deleted her chat with Don. She quickly rushed her cooking, did many things at a time and in twenty minutes, she was done. "Mum, the food is ready." She announced. "Set the table." Her mother said. "No way mum. Am going to see Don. He is in town and will be leaving in an hours time." She replied. "Okay. Leave it, I'll serve myself." She left the kitchen with her phone and hurriedly went to take her bath. Why was she even rushing? Its not like Sandra wanted her in her place before 10am or something. Was her thought as she walked out of the bathroom. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Kelvin was in having his breakfast with Sandra seated opposite him. She was throwing occassional glances at him and was smiling. "So, tell me about your family. My in-laws." Sandra said. Kelvin decided to tell her everything she needed to know because its been a while since he talked about his family. "My dad, is the popular politician and a former..." He was saying when he was cut short by Sandra. "Minister and an ambassador." "Though my parents are divorced. I lived alone with my dad, my big bro is married and my little sister lived with my mum." He explained. "You have a sis? Waoh! Tell me about her." "I don't know anything about her. Except that her name is Victoria." he replied. Sandra gave him a are you okay look. "We didn't spend much time together while we were younger. I attended a secondary school in Niger state, she had hers in Oyo state. We only see once in a year which was during christmas. So I didn't really see her as a sister and we were not that close." He explained. "When was the last time you saw her?" "About eleven years ago." He replied. Sandra looked at him intently, he seemed bothered about his sister. She was to help him fill the void left by her sister while they both try to find her. Kelvin's ringing phone stopped their conversation. "Hello, Hakym." He said. "Guy, you need to be at the corporation right away. Maleek wants everyone present." Hakym replied. "Are you out of the hospital? I'l be there in an hours time." He said and hung up. "Sweety, I need to go. My attention is needed at my workplace." He said as he drank a full cup of water and stood up. "Where is you place of work? What work do you do?" she asked. "You'll get to know that in a matter of time." He ran out of the house towards his car when a young lady of about twenty five walked past him. Something seemed unusual about the girl. He felt something run through his body, not sexual desire, but a kind of bond or connection. He waved it off and hopped into his car. The lady turned to give him one last look before he drove out of the compound. --to be continued-- |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 12:04pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
D9ty7: the more u update the more u attract more fans watching in 3D |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 12:05pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
Viewing this topic: AmazingAngel, sulaimon99(m), Ogbarmey(f), drizzy4ril, chideeva d9ty7 see d people wey no agree encourage u. Me go break their head ooh where my Heckler and Koch pistol |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 12:06pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
tecno4life: NA JUST TO QUOTE THE POST AND DELETE 6 PEOPLE FINISH |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 12:12pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
D9ty7 thanks 4 d update don't mind those dat don't encoiurage u when is d next one dropping dis one short joor |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 12:15pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
giftforlife9:abeg na work be dat I no get d time therefore I no fit vote 4 u and KIDDABLINGZZ wish u good luck anyways, next time tell dem 2 make it just "I VOTE ........" simple I CAN'T VOTE PERIOD!!! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 12:17pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
Viewing this topic: sodyc5050, tecno4life(m), yemiisaac(m), AmazingAngel, KingzPen(m) and 3 guest(s) Oya drop it (comments) "ur comment or ur life " |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 12:17pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
tecno4life: NO lele bros |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 12:20pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
The next update strictly depends on the comments. Though it has been typed and saved. I need more comments before I drop it. tecno4life:When I say comment, I don't mean you commenting like twenty times. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 12:29pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
"Sweety, I need to go. My attention is needed at my workplace." He said as he drank a full cup of water and stood up. "Where is you place of work? What work do you do?" she asked. "You'll get to know that in a matter of time [/quote] so Sandra had not even asked kelvin d type of work he is doing and also whre he works all dis while dey av bin dating? dats so stupid of her |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 12:31pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
D9ty7:okay make I rally dem na Labaski seunviju onemansquad kingzpen kingphillip adewealth027 adeh39 tecno4life fatalveli bluestarry hameenat94 (missing in action ) LogoDwhiz Walewunmi come comment so D9ty7 go update abeg na beg I dey beg |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 12:35pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
Viewing this topic: martin98(m), Bluestarry(m), jummy604(f), ayoleyi(f), afamjb(m), sodyc5050, Bloomingbud(f) and 4 guest(s) abeg comment anything so D9ty7 go update. God will bless u as u do so |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by afamjb: 12:47pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
tecno4life thanks for catching me and reporting me to d teacher....... |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Niwdog(m): 12:54pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
Nice work, m loving diz story |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by buccal(m): 12:58pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
Nice work bro,keep up d good work. Dey ur back gidigba. More opolo to ur brain. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 1:02pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
afamjb:lol |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by jummy604: 1:07pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
Victoria doesnt wana change,e dy ur blood |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 1:20pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
jummy604:na small D9ty7 comment don dey flow ooh, we fit get 3pm update |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by d4real890(m): 1:20pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
tecno4life:At last the good badt guy has gotten me Wink |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ReLaTE(m): 1:24pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
keep it up wt ur nice story, I hv caught up wt u at last, pls more updates. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 1:39pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
tecno4life: tecno4life: Viewing this topic: martin98(m), Bluestarry(m), jummy604(f), ayoleyi(f), afamjb(m), sodyc5050, Bloomingbud(f) and 4 guest(s) abeg comment anything so D9ty7 go update. God will bless u as u do so tecno4life:amen. Oga tecno4life afa long time o |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tescoleps(f): 1:47pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
tecno4life:This got me laughing. Tecno u harsh oh! Anyways, all d best to d guys contesting. D9ty7 nice update. more grease to ur elbow. Jst do wot u know hw to do best. We dey ur back gidigba! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 2:00pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
Mmmmn.....Rachael!!!, I just hope she won't get killed by either Kelvin or by her father in law... Oga mi, thanks 4 d update. Keep it flowing. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by RhAngel: 2:00pm On Nov 14, 2014 |
Nice one,permit me to cal u "Da Suspender".lolz smtn tells me Rachel is going to c d doctor due to hangover. Just guessing, pls dnt keep us waitin 4 too long. I wil definitely see to d end of ds. |
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