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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Kruzykidt(m): 8:47am On Nov 17, 2014 |
Walahi if I no comment 4 dis story,God sef go vex....my guy u talented.....u will go places with this ur talent....just work hard and don't be discouraged....God bless U....God bless u D9ty7 |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:09am On Nov 17, 2014 |
God bless you too sire. Kruzykidt: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Fatalveli(m): 9:20am On Nov 17, 2014 |
Gud morwin D9ty7.... Pls who is Ay |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:27am On Nov 17, 2014 |
You remembered Harmony lodge don't you? Deoye's hostel. Ay happened to be a member of Deoye's cult group. Shey you get? Fatalveli: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Omololamide(f): 9:50am On Nov 17, 2014 |
WELDONE...... Im impressed. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by yemiisaac: 11:03am On Nov 17, 2014 |
Respect to d main man D9ty7....troway salute o...jst enjoying every bit...I feel like reading d story from the beginning again....waiting for next update tho |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by toykathy(f): 11:37am On Nov 17, 2014 |
#ghostmodedeactivated# D9ty7, U re a really doing a good job here, and what I find intriguing the most is d twist n turns of ur story. This is one of d best around here and I wish u d best. More ink 2 ur pen. U re da boss. Have a nice wk. #rushesbacktoghostmode# |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by handmaid: 11:46am On Nov 17, 2014 |
so much, no, too much blood shed |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 11:57am On Nov 17, 2014 |
D9ty7, i just they fear. Who you don kill again? Make e be Deo abeg |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Flakeey(f): 11:59am On Nov 17, 2014 |
![]() ![]() who die? Rachel is playing tenten with her marriage so disgusting of a pregnant woman. Ngozi...i fear for your life sylvester gragra too much, i hope he doesn't end up dead i smell betrayal and envy - i believe someone in d khal organisation wants Kelvin out of the picture so dat he can take his position and be Maleek's favourite. you are doing an amazing job here D9ty7 my 2 thumbs up for you |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 12:28pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 1:05pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
D9ty7 gr8 work u are doing here Darasimi don die ![]() ![]() Ngozi last day on earth don reach ![]() ![]() Make Rachael die ![]() do am like dis because of d slap DangerKelv vex come kill her and excape *thumbs up* because If she comot 4rm patrick house dr. Raph go dey yansh her everyday immediately she deliver ![]() In all gr8 work oga duro ur story is ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() make I return 2 monitor spirit/waiter mode I go use pepper soup cool but make I catch sum pple first |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 1:10pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Viewing this topic: tecno4life(m), Eveluv(f), soniachuks(f), MherihGold(f) *catches dem* don't run don't run just kindly drop comment and critisms ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 1:10pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
D9ty7 bia i no wnt any bloodshed 4 dis story agn oo is dt undastood? ![]() ![]() whr is d waiter sef @tecno4life ah nid sumtn 2 cool ma brain wit |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 1:12pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
MORE Viewing this topic: oooopss(m), maphed, MherihGold(f), tecno4life(m), Onemansquad(m), MissMalia(f), kcee14uand 2 guest(s) drop comments pls oga d9ty7 needs dem |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 1:15pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Onemansquad: *brings cigar and bread in tray* take dis one our pepper soup is out of stuck ![]() ![]() don't worry logodwhiz is bringing more peppersoup ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 1:16pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
--continuation-- "What do you suggest we do?" Hassan asked and he continued peering at the glossy paper Ngozi held between her fingers. "I think we should let this pass. I can take the laptop with me to our station. I'll work on it from there, and discreetly we'll access the underground without James or Sylvester knowing." Ngozi explained. "Don't you think, that will be too risky, only the two of us? Am not a party to that, remember, I am a soldier, we don't do much of detailed tactics. Once we have the basic informations we attack. We could both loose out job if things go wrong." Ngozi thought for a while, though he may be right but her instinct has never failed her. This won't be an exception, she'll follow her instinct but this time carefully. First she'll have to win the hearts of her colleagues, Mike, Clement and others. They'll try and axe Sylvester. "Hey lets go. Our time is up." Sylvester said to her from the doorway. She turned to face him but said nothing. "Trust me, you can do better than looking at me that way. Meet me in the car now or I leave without you." He turned towards the exit. "I have to go." She said to Hassan who saluted her and vice versa. She walked briskly through the living room with the almost broken laptop clutched to her chest. "Its nice working with you." Leuitenant James said. She stopped then turned to see the soldier lighting his cigarret. "Same here." She replied and off she went. The soldiers manning the front door, the gate(from inside and outside) were saluting her as she walked. She could only beam with smiles as she approached the car in which they had come. An angry Sylvester was keeping the car engine running and with a frown on his face, he hissed immediately she opened the passenger side of the car. Immediately he sped off even though she was yet to shut the door. "Sincerly speaking, Silvester, you are mad." Ngozi said as she tired to recover from the shock she felt when he accelerated the car without her properly in the car. He kept mute and drove on in silence. Whatever was going on in his mind must be something bad or so she thought. "You'll give me five minutes of your time. I want to see a friend down there." He said. Ngozi nodded her head and smiled like she has been best of friends with him all day long. He pulled up a minute later in front of a cafe, he walked in briskly. Ngozi crossed to the driver seat and switched on the ignition of the car. She drove off at once. She had taken her time to study him, he always leaves the car key in the car. She gave a wicked laugh as she glanced at the cafe one last time. "You'll regret the day you were deployed to assist the police." She muttered. Even though she hasn't perfected her driving skills, she knew she wouldn't be involved in a crash. The road was free, she drove with absolute concentration. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++ "This is how you do it. We'll storm the girl's hostel today and kill them both. You'll even end up having a nice time with them." Don explained to Deoye whose eyes was glued on the weapons spread on the table. "The security in the school is tight presently and I heard a team of police has been deployed to keep twenty four hour surveillance on them. I don't think we stand a chance." Deoye explained. "Stop thinking like a bloody jew man. Act like a man, think like a man. In the end, you'll realise that this is the most easiest task afterall." Don said as he grabbed his shoulder and squeezed it. Deoye inhaled deeply, "Let do it." He said. The members of Don's gang all clapped their hands at his bravey. "Remember, you are doing this alone. We'll step in if things go out of hand." Don said as he distributed weapons to the guys. Deoye nodded. --to be continued-- |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 1:17pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Viewing this topic: kcee14u, D9ty7(m), tecno4life(m), efilefunand 3 guest(s) oga I sight u ooh, no update 2 dedicate 2 me as I come back ![]() ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 1:26pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Viewing this topic: D9ty7(m), luke007(m), tsquare29(m), olarafiat(f), pjthatcherand 5 guest(s) drop ur comments ![]() D9ty7 sorry but dat update is shortistically short ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 1:27pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Short updates... Oga yu just wan kill me with suspense |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 1:29pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
tecno4life:No take away d cigar nd gv me coret pipe ![]() ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 1:34pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Onemansquad:u smoke ![]() ![]() take ur cigar like dat joor u no hear say we are out of stock ![]() ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 1:36pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
More updates go come. Its just that I have some friends hanging out with me. As soon as they leave, I go update. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 1:37pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Viewing this topic: Onemansquad(m), Chimdim, ayoleyi(f), Donkaz(m), tecno4life(m) comment naw!! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 1:37pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
tecno4life:u smoke ba I say i no wnt cigar kip am let me eat ma bread lyk a gentleman |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 1:38pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
D9ty7: pursue dem na ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 1:39pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Onemansquad:na so u for talk na ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by classicuju: 1:45pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Nice story, Talented Author, Funny Fans nd Still I follow. nice workD9ty7 |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 2:15pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
D9ty7:hmmm |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 2:20pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Rachel.......u are a complete idiot Deoye.......Na hand dem go take cash you Sylvester.....continue to dey do jack bauer o Ngozi.....I will keep praying for u to succeed in dis mission Techno4life.....I just dey observe u o D9ty7 sweetie........God will continue blessing dat brain of urs |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by zuma4k(m): 2:45pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Damn!!!!... Suspense! and I'm loving it! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 2:46pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
classicuju:set's table and chair sir come and seat down *brings food in tray* here's cow tail pepper soup and beer cool down oga D9ty7 is coming e be like say traffic hold am *checks watch* ![]() |
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