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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by bdabuwa(m): 11:01pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
Following !!! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:06pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
Emmykul4love: OMG!! s.heart, where hv u been? I've missed u so much!! Hope techno4life did nt hurt u? 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:10pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
stuff46:make im cme drop o 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:13pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
adeh39:ur guy d our prison abi tecno4life,fatelveli and onemansquad no be so? U have to pay ransom b4 we release emmykul4love. onemansquad pull a call to her,stuff46 bring my ak47. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:26pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
Bluestarry: Haba!!! Y are u guys punishing me nau Okay hw much do I pay into ur account? My s.heart is a Trillionaire..... Just tell me d amount nd send ur account num D9ty7..... U see wat ur guys are doing ooo. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:30pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
Jesus! D9ty7 again? My guys? adeh39: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:32pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
adeh39:mmmmmm let me see mmmmmm i think a kiss will be enof and a stick of cigar and bread. Emmykul4love stop looking at me like that *knocks him with the but of the gun and he slums* |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:38pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
Bluestarry: What A whole kiss Chai!! Dis guys no dey fear at all, u even had d guts 2 knock him out abi?? because I dey beg u abi? I don vex nw...... If u dnt release him in d next 15mins.......nd take him back 2 his house... U don enter trouble be dat ooo. I will hire Kelvin nd Victoria 2 come nd deal wit u pple. D9ty7..... Come nd warn ur guys ooo, cos it's lyk u wnt 2 deny dem nw..... 15mins or I scatter deir head. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:41pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
adeh39:*laughs a bigman laugh* ho ho ho ho ho. Victoria n kelvin are nothing. Na me been train osamibaladen. Abubakar shekau na my servant. *kicks emmykul4love* oops sowie love. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MhizEnkay(f): 4:47am On Nov 16, 2014 |
kingphilip:she'll be caught for sure.. That is, if they dont kill her before that. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 5:41am On Nov 16, 2014 |
Bluestarry:*rushes in with it on a tray and handz it over to bluestarry... Anything else? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 5:55am On Nov 16, 2014 |
stuff46:ya thanks. Let me keep it 4 future reference |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Horlardorjah(m): 6:07am On Nov 16, 2014 |
I jst dey Observe sha! Guess the tym 4 d circle members to feel d grunts don near! Nice 1 boss |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kocvalour(m): 7:48am On Nov 16, 2014 |
early morning update laaa... Abi u don go church?? Kip it up bro |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:11am On Nov 16, 2014 |
--continuation-- Ngozi was still discussing with Hassan on how best to handle the situation. Then Sylvester came strolling into the room. "Don't just stand there. Keep searching, we may find something helpful." He said to both of them, his eyes darting towards the map in Ngozi's hands. He strained his eyes trying to see the map from where he stood. "What's that?" Sylvester asked. Ngozi quickly folded the paper and hid it in her pocket. "Its nothing." She replied. Sylvester moved closer with clenched fist. Ngozi moved backwards defiantly still holding the pocket where the map was hidden to prevent it from flying out. "Give me that thing in your hand." Sylvester bossed. "Its something personal. Was showing it to Hassan." She replied, this time, she had reached the wall and there was little she could do anymore. Sylvester held her shoulders roughly and pinned her to the wall. He freed one of his hands to her back pocket, which she still held onto. Hassan quickly seperated them even though, Ngozi offered no resistance except that she still held onto her pocket firmly. "Hey man, be a gentleman for one." Hassan said. Sylvester gave Hassan a 'does it concern you' look, but seeing he was no match for the well built millitary man before him, he walked out of the room. Ngozi leaned on the wall suprised at her defiancy and stubborness. Hassan walked up to her. "What do you intend doing with the map?" He asked. "Don't say a word to anybody. We'll both work on it on our own. Am suspecting Sylvester, his hands are not totally clean. Write down your number, I'll keep in touch with you from time to time." Ngozi explained. Hassan wanted to say something, but he kept it within him and nodded in the affirmative. "Good, so now lets continue with our search." She said as she lifted a couch very close to her to see if there is anything hidden underneathe. "I need to power this laptop." Hassan said. Ngozi left what she was doing and walked over to where Hassan was seated. "Is it working?" She asked. Hassan nodded. "The battery is down. It could reveal some facts." "Let me see if we could power the generator." With this, she walked out of the room leaving Hassan to the task of searching for the laptop charger. She walked the whole length and breadth of the house with no sign of a power generator. "Is it possible for a house as big as this not to have a power generator?" She thought as she walked towards the front gate where an electric pole stood. To her suprise, the electric pole didn't connect to the building she was in. Meaning, Mr Ayo doesn't use electricity provided by the government. But he has electric appliances in his house, how does he power them? A mystery. She returned to Mr Ayo's room to brief Hassan about the latest revelation. "Its not possible. And did you check if he uses solar?" Hassan asked. "There is nothing of such." She replied. "Lets check the map, you know, you could have missed something while you were searching around." He said. Ngozi immediately produced the paper map and unfolded it, they both scanned the map but couldn't see anything. Just then, Hassan's eyes darted towards the part where the underground, and saw something that heightened his curiousity. He showed it to Ngozi. "Power?" she asked. "I guess, that where the house is being powered." They both colcluded that the underground must be a very important part of the house. Will the two of them be able to pull it through? END OF CHAPTER ELEVEN 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 9:19am On Nov 16, 2014 |
Have this feeling that someone else is dying soon |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:21am On Nov 16, 2014 |
There won't be much updates today because it is sunday. Maybe we'll just have one more, after service and call it a day. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:26am On Nov 16, 2014 |
QUESTION FOR THE DAY 1. Do you think Ngozi is doing the right thing by handling things on her own? 2. Is it true that there is something suspicious about Sylvester? Maybe he is the mole. Give your reason. 3. What do you think about the underground? Please endeavour to answer the questions, it shows that the story is being followed despite its twists and turns. HAPPY SUNDAY! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 9:42am On Nov 16, 2014 |
Ngozi isn't doing the right thing,she might get killed,she needs to involve the whole team in whatever she z planning,as for sylvester,tho there z smthing odd about him but I cnt say he z the mole...the underground? Hehe...anoda mata,might be a stash house,guns and ammo ,but I gat this feeling someone z gonna die in the underground |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 9:50am On Nov 16, 2014 |
D9ty7:1.Yes i think she is bt its dangerous tho 2.his attitude towards his other colleagues is undue esp ngozi (why will he be so curious 2 knw what she has in her pocket) i tink thr is something fishy about him 3.The underground: i think thats where mr.Ayo's topmost secret are |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by jummy604: 12:07pm On Nov 16, 2014 |
D9ty7:1,not at all. 2,no,ntn is suspicious abt im.3,m tnkn dats whr d khal corp is,buh since mr ayo is a new man.i dnt knw wat to say. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kingphilip(m): 12:58pm On Nov 16, 2014 |
MhizEnkay:u r really ryt I think the only close one that can b sacrificed here is Clement's wife n even Clement won't flinch because he is considering divorcing ha since she doesn't love his profession nice update d9ty7 |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MhizEnkay(f): 1:58pm On Nov 16, 2014 |
kingphilip:haba.. Divorce where na? Clement loves his wife oh.. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Beckytee(f): 2:29pm On Nov 16, 2014 |
D9ty7:1. She is not doing d right thing joor she shld at least inform someone in her station 2.notin is suspicious abt him, his problem is pride cos everybody wants him to stay 3. The underground is mr ayo's power house |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Ubechu1(m): 2:31pm On Nov 16, 2014 |
D9ty7:1. I don't think Ngozi is doing the right thing, because, they both came to Mr Ayo's residence with a common goal... and now she wants to play smart, maybe she thinks it would be a chance for her to be given a higher rank in her workplace... 2. Yes, he has started behaving funny.... I suspect he is up to something illegitimate... 3. As for the underground, I think it's a place where arms, ammunition and probably money are hidden by Mr Ayo... just my 2cents . . . . We need some updates this evening.. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kingphilip(m): 2:40pm On Nov 16, 2014 |
MhizEnkay:even at dat like two or three updates ago that she don't want him to resume, when he got to the office he considered a divorce if I can remember |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 2:44pm On Nov 16, 2014 |
kingphilip:That was some weird thoughts. You know some times, you imagine evil things. Clement was quick to wave off the thought actually. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 2:49pm On Nov 16, 2014 |
Am so loving the replies I am getting, the discussions too. Let me answer those questions from a reader's point of view. 1. Ngozi may be right and on the other hand my be otherwise. I don't think she is looking for promotion like someone clearly stated. She is a woman, I don't think woman are power hungry like the men. 2. I don't want to reply that. 3. The underground. Lip sealed, lets see how the writer wants it to play out. NB: This was written strictly from a reader's point of view. 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 2:49pm On Nov 16, 2014 |
Update drops before 5pm. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Chimdim: 3:02pm On Nov 16, 2014 |
Nice story, keep it up |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Ndukings92(m): 3:03pm On Nov 16, 2014 |
Feed me more |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 3:07pm On Nov 16, 2014 |
D9ty7: Lemme try and respond according to what I know. 1). Yeah. Sylvester seems suspicious 2). Yeah. Everyone is suspicious of him. And he acts somehow. 3). The underground houses a lot of secret. That's why its the underground. But I dont know its pirspose neither the secrets kept there. D9ty7, welldone. Happy Sunday. Don't know you do go to church. Still waiting for summary please. |
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