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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Fatalveli(m): 2:48pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Viewing this topic: jovychika(f), Milkymike1(m), zuma4k(m), Ego2(f) and 2 guest(s) Ghost mode readers, u've been made, oya drop ur comments |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emmykul4love(m): 2:53pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Adeh ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 2:59pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
adewealth027:I dey eye u since ooh make we go room e get wetin I wan do with u ![]() . Thank God according 2 ur profile pic u're a nurse so I no go fear 4 u 2 get belle ![]() make we go naw |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emmykul4love(m): 3:01pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Adeh my s.heart it was not your name that i wrote there,dot know how it changed. Pls pardon. Dot mind onemansquad,tecno,fatalvi, i was not hold captive by them. It was work that makes me less present. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emmykul4love(m): 3:03pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Eeeeh adewealth abeg make you follow am go make you see weti he wan show you.. ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 3:07pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Viewing this topic: Milkymike1(m), codedbaby(f), Matrix01(m), Emmykul4love(m), D9ty7(m), Candis009(f), Jollyjoy(f) and 3 guest(s) Ndi ala ndi ala lele lekwa .achiri Ghost Mode I still dey see una |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Flakeey(f): 3:09pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() o my! oh my! i love the stunt Ngozi just pulled payback is a biitch, babyyy Oga Duro, na you biko |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 3:09pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 3:15pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Flakeey: sorry next time spell it b.itch if u don't mis-spell it u get bitch ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Flakeey(f): 3:17pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
tecno4life: hehehe already modified tnx chinko..oops! sorry, Techno 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 3:44pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
;Techno caught me again. Anyway I have registered and commented twice. You can go back and check previous comments. Now let me vanish as a ghost again |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 4:22pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Mtcheeeeeeeew I don go see wetin he wan show me o.......na one kain yeye ting wey be like remote battery jare Emmykul4love: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 5:24pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Cme cntinue na oga d9t7 |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 5:37pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Bluestarry:as in ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 5:41pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
tecno4life:y u wan knw? I wan hear d side wey rachel go ..... Rapheal |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 5:43pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Ogbarmey:*holds her pant and drags her back* come here ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 5:49pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
adewealth027:na my weapon of mass destruction u call remote battery ![]() ![]() ![]() I dey do gentleman naw u dey call my bazooka remote battery no worry next time u go piss 4 toilet I go follow u......lock door and pesin go get belle before I comot ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() thank God say u be nurse u fit flush d baby urself ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 5:56pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
tecno4life:imagine what a gentleman is saying. Tecno yesterday was sunday o respect that fact abeg. Aaaaah u cme d drag ha pant ? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 6:28pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
--continuation-- Rachel has just finished taking her bath. She walked out of the bathroom dripping wet with a big sized towel tied around her body. She walked into a inner room which served as her closet and came back a few minutes later dressed in a gown that touched her ankles, blue in colour. There was a knock on the door as she prepared to lie down on the bed and read a novel she had taken from Doctor Rapheal's office. "Come in." She said, half expectant that it could be Clement. The door knob turned and Onome, the maid walked in smiling, but a second thorough look at her will suggest she was there for something serious. "When are you coming for your lunch?" Onome asked curtly. Rachel smiled, "this woman could be dramatic at times. She came in with a straight face, now she was talking about food." "I'll be down there at dinner." She replied. "So what do you intend taking for lunch?" The elderly lady asked with concern. "I got myself some fruits because the doctor said they are good for us." She said pointing to her bump. "But I don't mind getting a vegetable soup, garnished like that of yesterday." She continued. "Locust or no locust bean?" Onome asked smiling. At least, someone is appreciating her cooking expertise unlike her employer who seize every opportunity to critic her cooking. "I want enough locust, but please, no beef." Onome bowed curtly and made to walk out of the room when she remembered the main reason why she was there. She turned back to face Rachel who was still smiling. "And I have an important issue I want to discuss with you." Onome said. Rachel's smile slowly disappeared. "this woman would fit perfectly well in the movie industry." "You may sit." Rachel said pointing to a black suede couch. "I don't think I'll be able to discuss it here with you. Uncle Clement could be home anytime and he may not like me in your room." Onome disagreed. "Oh! Clement is not like Chief or Kelvin. He won't mind seeing you here. He knew how badly I needed someone to keep my company." Onome thought for a while before settling down on the couch uncomfortably. Rachel sensing her mood "Okay, lets go to the kitchen." The two ladies walked out of the room. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Kelvin walked into the living room, slamming the front door behind him. He walked towards the kitchen where he was hearing voices. "Hello." He said walking into the kitchen. He felt embarrassed immediately he saw Rachel seated on a stool. Rachel on the other hand went pale and couldn't move or talk, her eyeball blinking at intervals and her heartbeat taking a further leap in its speed. "Welcome sir." Onome greeted. Kelvin hissed and walked out of the kitchen in anger. Onome who saw the reaction of the two maintained a smiling face. "I think I have to go. Am no longer comfortable with this conversation. Please, do bring the vegetable into my room once you are through." Rachel said and stood up. "I believe you are at fault afterall." Onome said. Rachel wasn't sure if she heard her right wanted to comfirm what she heard. "What did you just say?" She asked. "I said, its all your fault. Imagine if you hadn't allow your emotion to get the better of you by allowing the doctor to touch you like you told me, Kelvin won't make passes at you. You know what they say about first impression? You gave him a bad impression which he himself misunderstood because he has no emotion himself." Onome explained. Rachel was awed by her brilliance and the way she spoke. "What do you suggest I do?" She asked resignatedly. "Spill everything to your husband. He knows you more than anybody else, he trusts you. He'll definitely believe you acted without thinking. He has a feeling of his own and am sure he'll forgive you." "I don't think that will be possible." Rachel said with a pale face. "Its possible. It is possible, you didn't cheat, you only had a recurring fling with him. You kissed him because you regreted not dating him back then. It could happen to anybody, but your ability to bounce out of it, is the most important." She explained further. Rachel thought for a while allowing every of her words to sink in as she pondered on what to do or how to go about it. "Will Clement understand like Onome predicted? He doesn't act like someone with a feeling of his own. He act like he has no emotional attachment to anybody. Will he be quick to forgive her? --to be continued-- That's a question for all of us. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 6:34pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
The brain wey Rachel suppose get,na him Onome pack put for head....well done Onome Kelvin.....u no well @ all Clement is a very understanding person,I believe he'll forgive his wife |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by harryfish(f): 6:44pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Marvellous updates. I think it will do well 4 Racheal to confess to her hubby just like Onome said. Doing that will save her future embarrasment and pain that will. Come from d doctor, kelvin and finally her hubby. I wonder if Don is thinking of avenging Deoye's betrayal by sending him out 2 die knowing fully well that security is somehow tight around d school. Cos I see what Deoye is going 2 do as a suicide mission. All the same keep it d9ty7. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by drizzy4ril(m): 7:11pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
0ga d9ty7 ah sight yhu ooo....Good evening sir.ah hope yhu have sumtin for us diz evening |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emmykul4love(m): 7:25pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
I dot think clement will forgive her easily. Remember,clement was thinking about his wife behaviour towards his job and also about divorcing her. If she confess to him,then he will it as an opportunity to divorce her or maybe he will reconsider her and forgive her..............just saying my mind.............ADEH my s.heart how are you doing? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 7:25pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
D9ty7 thanks 4 d update.......but I can't seem 2 get enuf ![]() ![]() MORE |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 7:29pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Emmykul4love: if u mention Adeh39 name again I go plank ur head ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 7:34pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Viewing this topic: D9ty7(m), Emmykul4love(m), yemiisaac(m), tecno4life(m), ayox1, Spiritmask, Kruzykidt(m) and 4 guest(s) c catching ![]() ![]() oga D I sight u ooh any update cooking ?? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:44pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
tecno4life:Not at this moment. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 7:48pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
adewealth027:ma'am u don 4gt me shey diaris God o |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 7:49pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
RIP racheal |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:01pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
RIP ke? Vibra: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by codedbaby(f): 9:13pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
if I no comment wetin u wan do. anyways I think I just did that. no mention my name again if u no u can't appreciate me for the fact that I even commented once or twice. don't know. moreover, continue what u know best #angryfan# |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 9:27pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Emmykul4love: My darling.... Welcome back.., I'm nt fyn b4 but I'm fyn nw.., I really missed u.., D9ty7 guys nearly giv me heart attack, |
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