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The Day The Clouds Turned Red (crime Story) / 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] / All In A Circle...(a Crime Story)-- The Completion (2) (3) (4)
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Flakeey(f): 9:10pm On Dec 22, 2014 |
Ghen ghen so many mysteries being unravelled If Rachel should b killed..her death will be on no one's head cos she killed herself. .you can take ur secrets to the grave for all I care...yeye woman. Ngozi u see ur life for outside alagbere omo dolapo pele dear this is ur fate...I pray u overcome soonest btw who is the politician protecting dolapo.. Well done D9ty7 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by teamplayey: 10:41pm On Dec 22, 2014 |
It appears a lot of people are against Rachel which I think is unfair. Apart from being a female, pregnancy is associated with hormonal factors. Eg the stress hormones are almost inhibited. As a result, the brain gets very emotional. Lol |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by teamplayey: 10:45pm On Dec 22, 2014 |
As for Ngozi, una go blame her? Considering her childhood background, police work and enviromental factors? She even still dey try. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by teamplayey: 10:46pm On Dec 22, 2014 |
Abeg, anybody don see D9Ty7 ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nostradamus: 10:58pm On Dec 22, 2014 |
tecno4life:bros shey u dey sell firearms ni,i need to get one |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 11:27pm On Dec 22, 2014 |
welcome back oga d and to oms keep on your work to techno tell this guy to feed more 2 Likes |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:58pm On Dec 22, 2014 |
teamplayey:abeg no tell me dat,is that y her thinking faculty can't work |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by teamplayey: 12:04am On Dec 23, 2014 |
@ Vibra: Her thinking facility/faculty is tending towards 'emotional'. The good thing about this is that if she follows her compensatory mechanism, she go become super-starish; Still we read |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MhizEnkay(f): 3:21am On Dec 23, 2014 |
Onemansquad:I'd have said you should buy him food oh.. But lemme just pity him, Take one of his wives.. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 5:55am On Dec 23, 2014 |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by emmabest2000(m): 6:01am On Dec 23, 2014 |
Vibra:He was here some minutes ago ![]() Still following .... 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 6:26am On Dec 23, 2014 |
emmabest2000:who? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 6:54am On Dec 23, 2014 |
teamplayey:chisoooooooz! *shouts* i don see oga o e d enter keke e wan go south africe. E wan leave us for here o ok we pursue keke na onemansquad and stuff56 make we pursue d keke wey one carry our oga so SA 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 6:58am On Dec 23, 2014 |
tecno4life:u d sell catapult? I need two catapults and twenty stones ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 7:23am On Dec 23, 2014 |
MhizEnkay:u mean it !!! Ok i wil take adewealth027 if dats d case |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:31am On Dec 23, 2014 |
CHAPTER TWENTY FOUR "I just hope you won't do anything funny, because on mistake from you, I'll press this button and the trigger would go off on your boyfriend." The guy said as he brought the car to a halt about one hundred metres away from Mr Ayo Okorie's residence which was well lit as a result of a power generating plant given to the soldiers by a rich man in the estate to keep the place illuminated and therefore guard the house and also the whole estate as well. "I will uncuff you now and we'll both go in there and fetch the map. You know how to get past those soldiers, therefore, I don't need to teach you that." He continued. Ngozi kept a straightface. She wan't afraid of the task before her, but her mind is on Tobiloba. Only God knows what the other guys were doing to him. The guy uncuffed Ngozi's hands and she became free agian but without any form of self security or defensive weapon. "Now, move it." The guy said pushing her forward. They both walked towards the gate and Rachel gently tapped on the gate gently. "Who be?" A deep masculine voice asked as the gate swung open. The soldier was taken aback when he saw a lady dressed in her nightie and another well dressed guy. What could they looking for at this stange hour, only God knows what they want. "I am Detective Ngozi from the police headquarters. There is an emergency, we need to pick something real quiick from the underground." Ngozi explained. "Emergency? We've not been briefed about that. Well, I am sorry you can't be allowed into the house." The soldier replied and locked the gate. "Wait! Wait!" She said. The soldier opened it wider, but his frame was blacking the opening such that no one could see what was happening inside the house. "I tod you I am a police officer." She said. "Am sorry you can't be allowed into the house." "Fine, I don't have my ID card with me. But can I see whoever is in charge here?" She asked. The soldier scrutinized her for a few seconds by sizing her up with his eyes. He shrugged, and removed a device from his pocket. He radioed someone whom Ngozi concluded was his colleague or the boss in charge of the team guarding the residence. Ngozi was praying that whoever was coming as the boss should at least know her as a police officer, because if it turned out that no one recognises her, she would be denied entry and another alternative is to put a call through to the Inspector Clement and that would automatically put her into trouble. She looked at the man behind her, he had an expressionless look on his face. A senior millitary officer came around to the gate, he had no uniform on, but Ngozi concluded he would either be a leuitenant or a leuitenant colonel. "Good evening sir." Ngozi greeted. "Good evening Miss Ngozi. Come on in." The senior officer said and that was it. The walked in between tens of soldiers until the reached the front door, the door was opened by another soldier, this time from inside the house and they all stepped in. "So, why are you here this late?" The soldier asked now that they are in living room. "Sir, we really need to see a paper map that actually led us into the underground and we needed to study it because it could also lead us into the Khal corp." Ngozi explained. "Where is it?" He asked. "It should be in the room above the underground." Ngozi replied. The soldier led them towards the room and luckily for them, the electric shock attached to the underground cover has been disabled and Ngozi walked freely to the other end of the small room where the map was lying. "Here is it." She said showing it to the soldier. He collected it and studied it for a while before handing it back to her. Three minutes later, Hakym's man was about cuffing Ngozi's hands to the passenger seat. "Please don't." She said as she freed her hands. The guy placed his hand on the red button on his cloth. "No no, don't. This is my hand." --to be continued-- |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by macpetrus(m): 8:05am On Dec 23, 2014 |
Ride On..... D9ty7 Hapy bday To me..... ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:05am On Dec 23, 2014 |
--continuation-- After the departure of Hakym and his men, Ngozi and Tobiloba couldn't sleep throughout the night. By the time Ngozi returned, Tobiloba had sustained a lot of injuries as a result of the beatings he recieved. "Baby, am sorry about yesterday." Ngozi said for the upteenth time as she massaged his body that early morning. "What is there to be sorry about. A right thinking man will always do what I did for the woman he loved." He replied. "I know I don't deserve you, after everything that I did to you. You still suffered because of me. Just find a place in your heart to forgive me." She said. Just then a knock sounded on the door. "Come in the door is not locked." Ngozi said. The door was pushed open and their next flat neighbour walked in. "Good morning Uncle and Aunty." The woman greeted. "Good morning mummy Chiamaka." Ngozi replied. "We all heard what happened yesterday. But what's your business with those men?" The woman asked. "We just can't explain. It was a terrible experience." Ngozi replied. She glanced at Tobiloba and could see the angry look on his face. She knew something good is not likely to come out of his mouth if he decides to speak, so she had to take charge and give him no chance to talk. "We won't see such anymore in the name of God. Hope you weren't wounded much? What did they take?" The woman asked. "Madam, you heard when those men entered the compound. You should have called the police since you knew that the way and manner which they entered the compound looks unatural." Tobiloba said. "We wanted to call the police, but the only police number we have is Aunty Ngozi's number. We felt she would have called the police immediately they opened the gate." The woman explained. Tobiloba knew anybody could have called the police out of the four occupants in the compound, and their flat which was directly opposite the gate, they had the chance to contact the police, but because he was venting his anger on his fiancee, they were caught unawares. Three minutes later, the woman had left with the excuse that she was going to work. "But sweetheart, promise me you won't ever cheat on me." Tobiloba said. "Like I told you, Kelvin ra.ped me. It was true that I ran to him after I left home, but I had no plans of sleeping with him. It is you I belong to." She replied. "I just can't imagine myself sharing my woman with another man. Maybe we should report to the police." He suggested. "I have nothing to back my claims. I entered the hotel with him, it was not like he forced me or anything." Ngozi replied. Tobiloba reasoned with her, that indeed is the beauty of dating a lawyer or a police officer, one would know a bit about the constitution and how things work in court. "Promise me you will never raise you hand to beat me again." Ngozi said. "I cross my heart." Tobi replied. "Let me go and get prepared for work. You can call your boss at work and explain things to him." Ngozi said walking out of the room. "I thought we would be spending the day together." He said. "I wish we could but I need to be at work this morning. Don't worry, I will do shift because of you. By twelve o'clock I should be home." She replied this time from the bedroom. --to be continued-- 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 8:50am On Dec 23, 2014 |
Ifa knock u ehn............okay...come and take me so dat u will do xmas for me since D9ty7 isn't making any preparation for dat....... Onemansquad: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 8:51am On Dec 23, 2014 |
oga d morning |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 8:54am On Dec 23, 2014 |
adewealth027: dont go with dude. he isnt that good there are good guys to spend the xmas with that would make it memorable for you. peeps like hrh |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MhizEnkay(f): 9:05am On Dec 23, 2014 |
Onemansquad:happy marriagement life to you two. Muah! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nostradamus: 10:04am On Dec 23, 2014 |
tecno4life:a 5 meter long dane gun that always sound like a burst tyre,how much is it? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 11:04am On Dec 23, 2014 |
Nostradamus: like 75 thousand bucks |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 11:32am On Dec 23, 2014 |
adewealth027:are u xur? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 11:33am On Dec 23, 2014 |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 11:42am On Dec 23, 2014 |
oga 'D' go on Nostradamus do you love this one ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 12:20pm On Dec 23, 2014 |
--continuation-- Dolapo was awake by the time Clement entered her ward with the doctor. "Dolapo." He called as he moved closer to her bed. "Uncle, why will you allow Darasimi to die?" She asked immediately she saw him and started crying. "I wasn't the one, she died on the way to the hospital." Clement replied. "You could have saved her. You could have saved her. God, you are wicked. Where is thy face?" She screamed. Clement turned to face Doctor Kolade with a are-you-sure-she-is-okay look. Doctor Kolade smiled and nodded in affirmation. "Who shot Darasimi? Did you catch them?" She asked. Clement nodded his head in affirmation. "Who are they? What did they want? What's our offence and why do they want us dead?" She asked. "Its Deoye and his guys." Clement replied. "Where are they?" Dolapo asked. "They are in custody, they'll be tried in court before the end of the week." Dolapo kept mute for a minute or two staring into space and slowly, a smile crept into her face. "Doctor, I hope Tola is still in her ward?" She asked. "Yes of course. Any problem?" Doctor Kolade asked. "She deserved to hear this goodnews. It could bring her back to life." Dolapo said making a move to get out of bed. "No, you need to rest some more. You can go and see Tolani, but not now." Doctor Kolade said trying to push her back unto the bed. Her small frame proved advantageous that moment because she was able to snatch her hand off his grip and raced out of the ward, even though she didn't know the part of the hospital she was. But taking a gamble, she took the doorway marked 'EXIT' and found herself outside the hospital building. She walked inside through the main door of the second building and started towards stairs, half running and half walking. Meanwhile, she was been followed cloesly by Clement and the doctor. She pushed the door open and entered the ICU waiting room, the first thing that caught her attention was the fact that about three nurses and a different doctor were inside the ICU attending to a patient. One look at Tolani's mum, she knew something was not right and she was bent on finding out. She burst forward towards the door and pushed it, but it didn't open. "Open this door for me." She screamed, but it was of no use because the nurses inside the ICU couldn't hear her. Doctor Kolade came forward and with the help of his keycard, opened the door and Dolapo sped into the room where, Tolani was gasping for breathe, fighting for her life. "Are you going to stand there and watch her?" She screamed at the doctor. "Come on do something to stabilise her." She added. She joined Tolani on the bed and turned her face to herself. "Tolani please don't leave me alone, please get well. The doctor will make you get well." She said, but got no response and Tolani kept staring at her without blinking her eyes. "Tolani, you have every reason to live. Deoye and his gang has been arrested and will go to court before the end of the week. Get well so we can watch them get jail terms and death sentences." She screamed into Tolani's ears. Then she got the suprise of her life when tears escaped from Tolani's eyes and rolled down her cheeks. Why was she crying? Is she seeing something that she can not see? Were the questions on her mind. It was the popular believes among the yoruba, a tribe in the south western Nigeria that a person will always see death either few days or few hours before he give up the ghost, but he won't be able to tell anybody. But something about him will change which not even his family members will notice, it is only after his death that they will remember thos strange things. The person could be staring into space, others could be crying, another set of people will just become unecessarily nice, some people will start making mistakes which are unheard of. "Omotolani. Stay with me and lets make history, you will be allowed to write your exams and I promise to help you through it." Dolapo continued. "Tell me, why the tears? Are you seeing something that we can not see? There is no cause for alarm, we are safe now." She said and Tolani breathe her last. This is not happening. "God!! Kill me too." She screamed so loud that tears escaped from even the doctor's eyes. Clement couldn't stand the scene, he had to walk out. Tolani's mother was lost, she could neither laugh nor cry. What's the gain? Sitting in the hospital sleeplessly for the past two to three week because of her daughter who would later die. God must be a wicked man afterall. The elderly woman concluded. She felt pity for the lady crying beside her daughter even more than herself. --to be continued-- --to be continued-- 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 12:24pm On Dec 23, 2014 |
To all the fans and lovers of Omotolani. I am sorry the girl had to die. It has been pre-planned right from the start of the story, and therefore, I cannot change it for anything. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 12:29pm On Dec 23, 2014 |
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ultraawesome(m): 12:31pm On Dec 23, 2014 |
STC...Dolapo is all alone.kai.Chai.koi.hai hei.eeya Nice story,d9ty7 |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nostradamus: 12:33pm On Dec 23, 2014 |
tecno4life:waoh!!!this is gud,do you also sell cutlass and rat poison,i want to go rescue our girls from sambissa |
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