very interesting story. eagerly waiting for your update but abegi who set am up

peeled

nice update
more ink to your pen
when should we expect more update

. . .Great story. More grace

Nice....Btwn Amara should chill O.. it's Yemisi I want for BJ.

oga Dom, u rock what a long but captivating update, indeed u came to the world with a pen and writing pad

mehn....if stories could kill, i'll be dead by now..... Dom u are a killer , i dont have anymore words to describe you.....

where was i when GOD was shaeing this talent sef .

can't wait till tomorrows' update...... GOD BLESS

Nice write up. More grease to ur elbow

Ehn ehn .........I sha dey look say this story no go lead to military ni.....by the way nice story jare oya next update

ohmaigosh. human beings are sooo wicked

Abandoned twice to die.

Op, death is still very far from you bro.

Interesting

heemah zeinymira.. our writer is doing what he knows how to do best....

any story i follow just dey hit FP back to back......

Dom's stories always have military presence in them, more reason i love them tho.......


WE DON MAKE FRONT PAGE OOOOOO........EVERYBODY COME SEE OOOOO......


you go dash us 2 updates today oooo

Following with full expectations_ Suspense @ d highest peak

demmy66:
heemah zeinymira.. our writer is doing what he knows how to do best....

I've been following silently from the onset. Guess its time to deactivate my ghostmode. Dom has always wowed us with his stories!
Btw, is zeinymira still on NL? And we no see her green light at all? Well done ma'am oo. Demmy66 has taught u laziness abi? Lolz

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An interesting read. Please post more chapters.

Chopsyray! tell me you didn't see this story . You're lucky he hasn't gone far with the story.

Let me start reading

heemah:

I've been following silently from the onset. Guess its time to deactivate my ghostmode. Dom has always wowed us with his stories!
Btw, is zeinymira still on NL? And we no see her green light at all? Well done ma'am oo. Demmy66 has taught u laziness abi? Lolz

shioooor..so you have been following and you couldn't do the proper thing... i will not disappoint you..

oga update na

good job
any space for me.?

Update pls. It is why i hate been on de same pace as the writer. Prefer reading from behind

Mehn i just shed a tear,new creation and the abandoned child writers should be given a medal.

Dis suspense is wot i detest most about reading stories on nairaland, u neva gat to get d complete jojos...... hhaaaan, i dont lyk dis

Oya two of you, forward March to the base! When we reach base, then una go sabi the difference between the Police and the navy!

I so much love this part

If life were to come into dis world,it would come as a black ma cos life itself is nt fair, a great deal of lesson i av learnt throughout my reading of d masterpiece, pls OP,permission to share dis story outside NL

Wow! This is a story . I've cried, laughed and reflected on d subject matter LIFE AND DESTINY.thanks Dom

Oga abeg more!!! interesting. Amara wan carry d guy wholesale asap! always stick to d gal ya hrt longs fr nt d one dt longs aftr u.

Yuneehk:
Chopsyray! tell me you didn't see this story . You're lucky he hasn't gone far with the story.

Let me start reading

Lol
Guilty
But you know how you like them
This is still ongoing

Solidkay:
If life were to come into dis world,it would come as a black ma
cos life itself is nt fair,
a great deal of lesson i av learnt throughout my reading of d masterpiece,
pls OP,permission to share dis story outside NL

Not yet. 'Allow the readers here to drink water & drop cup'.Lol
Most importantly, let's encourage Op. There is time for everything

Intresting.... Continue guy