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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Lleigh(f): 10:08pm On Nov 07, 2016 |
MabEl and Funmi become lovers.... |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Creeza(m): 10:11pm On Nov 07, 2016 |
Bibi . I've read your story twice. TO be honest I like your style. Thats why I employed it in my own story... '' When Love Dies'' its taking a new dimension now, and could even go on for a very long time. you can say I'm a fan of yours. I HAVE TO GIVE YOU THAT . #gracias 3 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Eniqurl(f): 10:12pm On Nov 07, 2016 |
Have been busy that'd why hve been unable to drop a comment.... Thanks for the mention BIBI, I appreciate! Funmi iss now a bad girl oh.... I feel sorry for Dupe tho. 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 10:43pm On Nov 07, 2016 |
iwakacome: Lol take am easy nah 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 10:45pm On Nov 07, 2016 |
Creeza: Awww thank you. Pls check out when loves dies, the story is dope! Cc eveeyone 3 Likes |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by olatex25(m): 10:54pm On Nov 07, 2016 |
Gbese re oo... 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 11:31pm On Nov 07, 2016 |
Lleigh: Lol nooo I don't write such ooo 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 11:32pm On Nov 07, 2016 |
Eniqurl: You are welcome babe 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by veekid(m): 12:18am On Nov 08, 2016 |
bibijay123:Anything for you bae....... you're 1 in a million |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by iomoge2(f): 12:25am On Nov 08, 2016 |
Just getting a hang of motherhood. Lemme start reading |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by maggilove(f): 5:33am On Nov 08, 2016 |
As for this story, I comment my reserve.#funny# |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by adebriana(f): 6:48am On Nov 08, 2016 |
So Mabel's influence is that strong, Funmi has finally joined bad gang. I just didn't imagine it wud be that easy to influence her, considering her age and how she was always firm with Dupe. So Uche has a child, hmm, where's the child now? |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bummybummy(f): 7:11am On Nov 08, 2016 |
uche didnt do well @ll so he has a baby nd he kips it as secret if her mama don go to dupe aos nw he wont tell her oo, Men! Chai! Dey ar very wicked nd for funmi, she going frm grace to grass nd nobody to call her to order, her end no go gud oo. Mre update bibi 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 8:32am On Nov 08, 2016 |
adebriana: Funmi was too eager to please 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 9:49am On Nov 08, 2016 |
Dedicated to sniffydon, happy belated birthday. * Continues* Uche " She had my baby," I said I grabbed hold of her hand as she made to flee out of the car. " I am sorry," I said " When were you planning on telling me this?" She asked angrily, " perhaps on our wedding night or after the birth of our first child?" " Dupe, please. It was a still birth......the baby died at birth" She suddenly transformed from anger into a somber mood. " You could have told me still" she said softly " I am sorry, like i said it's all in the past now" I said, " I didn't tell you because it was a painful part of my past which i have long since put behind me" " Are you still in love with her?" She asked " I never was." I said and it was the truth. Cecilia was a mistake which shouldn't have happened. She was the daughter of my mother's friend. She was a beautiful ebony skinned girl but her beauty could never hold a candle to Dupe's. Once upon a time we had dreams of settling down some day and having a family but she was too impatient to wait for that dream to come to fruition. I thought she was sweet and angelic but I discovered her true color when she got pregnant, she complained about everything I did and she never hesitated to belittle my efforts. My mother always excused her behavior as being normal for pregnant women.She made my life so miserable that i almost resorted to suicide.Her constant nagging and troubles drove her into an early labour in her seventh month but the premie baby turned out as a still birth. I pushed the ugly events of the past out of my mind. " Why did you break up?" " We had some problems before the birth of the baby, the baby was the only thing that kept us together so when that magic was gone, she left. Dupe, i love you. Please don't give up on us," my hand seeked out hers. She sighed before flinging herself into my arms. " I am sorry about your baby. I love you Uche. I don't want to lose you" " I don't want to lose you too." She gave me a weak smile." I have not eaten today" " Why? this is past noon" " I had no appetite but i do now" " Want some Chinese?" " Yes," " I know a cool place. By the way, ever heard of Shark?" She laughed." Who doesn't? although i don't know what he looks like because he shys away from the media but you would have to be living under a stone not to have heard of him" " We are dining with him this weekend. You and I" She squealed " Uche, for real? How... how did you...?" I frowned. " Why are you so excited? Crushing on him?" " No joor. How did you meet him?" " He's Annie's date." " Geez! I thought you said she's in her thirties. I heard Shark is very young and he's not even up to thirty" " Age is just a number remember?" ********* Mabel " Mami what's going on?" I asked, grabbing the shoes from her hand. " Serwa, give me my shoes!" Mami shrieked, hitting me with her palm. " Daddy! Daddy!" I screamed, moving away from her. My father ambled into the room, a newspaper in hand." Akosua, what are you doing?" " Serwa took my shoes away from me" Mami replied, crying. She walked to him and hugged him." tell her to return my shoes" " Come my love, it's time for your nap" he said He led her out of the kitchen while i stood in shock. I had met Mami dipping a pair of new shoes in an ice_cream bowl on the kitchen counter. Daddy returned after some minutes, he removed his glasses and leaned against the counter. " What's going on dad?" I asked, " what's wrong with Mami?" " Oh Mabel," He said, " I don't know how to tell you" " Tell me what?" " Your mother is sick.....very sick " " Why didn't you tell me!" I cried out, " How long has this been going on?" " Almost six months. I have taken her to several hospitals already" " You shouldn't have to go through all that alone dad!" I said, wringing my hands in worry." I have not been a good daughter, have i dad?" " Mabel this isn't about you." " A good daughter would have known her mother was sick for almost six months!" " This is why i didn't tell you. You always make everything about yourself! My God!" " That's not fair dad! how did I make Mom's sickness about myself? You were the one who hid it from me! you were the one who made it about yourself " " I am flying her abroad" he said. " I am coming along" " You are married and you have a young child to care for" he said," I can handle it on my own" " I am coming along! " I said, marching out of the house. ********* I closed my eyes, feinging sleep, I felt my husband's warm hand on me."Tade, please " I said, pulling his hands away." I am not in the mood " " What is going on Bell?" Tade asked, sitting up in bed." You have been so quiet" "My mother is sick" " What is wrong with her?" " I don't know....dad kept it from me! the poor woman has been sick for almost six months now!" " What?" He asked, " She looked quiet healthy the last time i saw her" " She's ...she has old people's sickness" " Oh, your mother is so young. What do we do?" " We are flying her overseas. " I said, " I won't be able to take Serwa along but i trust you and Funmi will take good care of her" " Bell, i am sorry." He pulled me into his arms" Why didn't you tell me earlier" " It hurts so much saying it out loud" " When do you leave?" " I will call my dad and we will set a date.No later than next week i guess" " I wish i could go with you" " Be good and take care of Serwa" I said, suddenly feeling so emotional. I kissed him softly on the lips, my hands pulling my nightie off. " Bell love, no." He said hoarsely," You are so vulnerable now," " Make me forget my problems Tade," He Pulled me closer into himself and proceeded to do just that. TBC 19 Likes 9 Shares |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 10:10am On Nov 08, 2016 |
iomoge2: Congrats Mama 3 Likes |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by adebriana(f): 10:14am On Nov 08, 2016 |
bibijay123:Yea, I wonder why.. Hope she doesn't go way overboard tho. Now Mabel is leaving Tade alone with Funmi, hope nothing will happen between them cos that's too low, going after a friend's spouse. 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by crazygod(m): 10:19am On Nov 08, 2016 |
Somebody's marriage is hitting the rocks very soon. 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 10:19am On Nov 08, 2016 |
nice update bibi |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 10:21am On Nov 08, 2016 |
OMO1234567: Thank you....I always pronounce your moniker as omotayo 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 10:25am On Nov 08, 2016 |
crazygod: Hmmn why? is it that the male race can't be trusted or what? 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by iwakacome: 10:37am On Nov 08, 2016 |
bibijay123: can you leave your husband in care of another woman (irrespective of her personality)? 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by IamLukas(m): 10:37am On Nov 08, 2016 |
Door yaff open... Leaving a full grown man with a lady who is just getting to know herself as a woman is suicidal. Nice piece Bibi... 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by crazygod(m): 10:42am On Nov 08, 2016 |
bibijay123:This has nothing to do with trust my dear. No man likes a selfish woman. Mabel is a selfish woman. She prefers things done her way. There is a limit Tade can go. And leaving a sex starved husband with someone that's just discovering her sexuality? That's a no brainer for infidelity. 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 10:53am On Nov 08, 2016 |
crazygod: Lol she shld leave her mother and stay with her sex starved hubby? OK o 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 10:54am On Nov 08, 2016 |
iwakacome: Lol I will leave him in God' s care 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 10:55am On Nov 08, 2016 |
IamLukas: Thank you Lukas 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 10:56am On Nov 08, 2016 |
bibijay123:ok oh am nt 4rm west am a bini girl 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 11:28am On Nov 08, 2016 |
And thats how the infidelity will start... 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by olatex25(m): 11:53am On Nov 08, 2016 |
Nice one bibi, weldone... 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by iwakacome: 11:54am On Nov 08, 2016 |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by toboski1(m): 12:17pm On Nov 08, 2016 |
bibijay123:I so pity you ehn |
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