maziude:


Sorry boss, if you cannot present your case yourself by writing your own SOP, how else do you expect to succeed in Canada if you eventually get a visa? Or you think you can also pay your way out during examination period too?

Everything is not all about money.

People here are willing to help you proofread your SOP should you need it. If that is not enough, you can also google sample SOPs or go through earlier parts of this thread to see other people's SOP for guidance.

I think we should desist from this mentality. We keep causing trouble for intending applicants by giving the VOs the chance to raise their bars.

I am sure some of the VOs frequent most of these forums especially the travel portions, imagine if one of them should stumble on your post, what do you think will happen to others who wrote their SOPs themselves?

I might not be making sense, but a word is enough for the wise...

It will end in praises for us all....

Peace...

you have spoken well bro, @expertman pls try and write urself then u can contact the gurus in the house so they can help u go through it. Nobody here knows you better than you know yourself so try and write it urself then gurus in the house can help u add one or two things. Google is ur friend bro and u can see samples when u search, u can even see some samples here on this thread so pls take advantage of that

Anyone going for biometrics this morning? On my way to the office.

expertman:
Hello Boses,

Good evening please any one here who can help write a good sop letter I am ready to pay.

Or if any one can link me with someone who can help write a good convinci$ng sop I am ready to pay.

Thanks

Jus because it is you o, I will manage $1,500(USD) per page. I forsee it is going to be 3pages, so......

Osemigho:

My usual format is below. Each time I follow it, I usually feel exhausted at page 1.5 - 2. Can't remember using another since last year.
Please note that you don't have to use it, and I am just a visa applicant like you. Visa or admission SOP?

Generally, any of the above must answer question of why you are writing it.
Sample format.
Paragraph 1: your interest. What you have done in my interest (briefly). Why you are writing the SOP.
Para 2 or 3: what you did in my interest(major one). How you did it. What you got from it Including awards and excellent grade. How it influence what you want to do.
Para 2 or 3: what you want to do. How you want to do it. What you hope to achieve with it.
Para 4: your goal. Why you believe your goal is related to what you are writing the SOP for. What you desire by writing the SOP.
Optional paragraph for Visa: how you will finance your study. How you got (if scholarship) and or why (if relative or friend) that option of finance. Evidence of finance as included in documents submitted.
Optional paragraph for Visa: what you have as home tie as included in documents submitted. Why they are home tie. What you intend to do with them upon end of study.
Thank you.

Just to add
Para 2 or 3: What you are doing currently.
**very important
Thanks to Almeida3 for the last comment.

@expertman
On a more serious note, see if the above format gives u some ideas on how to start. Google samples too. Remember no plagiarism. Once you start writing, you will definitely flow. Then, come back to request for proofreading assistance. Was once in ur shoes too.
Look at this format below and tailor to your spec
http://www.duhochoancau.edu.vn/en/find-country/study-in-canada/consultancy/item/640-sample-cover-letter-applying-for-study-permit-in-canada

anyone in concordia uni or who knows how the university is pls i need ur contact

lanrayx:
anyone in concordia uni or who knows how the university is pls i need ur contact

I have a friend who has an offer in Concordia......send me a PM

expertman:
Hello Boses,

Good evening please any one here who can help write a good sop letter I am ready to pay.

Or if any one can link me with someone who can help write a good convincing sop I am ready to pay.


Thanks

Honestly I understand how you feel, but you've got a better advice through the gurus.

Why you should write your Sop:

1) No one know your educational background.
2) What got you interested in the proposed program
3) Relationship between your UG and proposed program.
4) your goals ( during the program and after the proposed program)
5) financial status
6) social/home tie.

Don't feel offended. write anyhow/anyway you can write, captured all the areas advised earlier by the gurus and then ask for help to review your SOP.

It shall end in praise.

odagogo:

I have a friend who has an offer in Concordia......send me a PM

i dont really know how this pm thing works but i have sent you a pm

Please folks, Is there any difference btw LOE and SOP?

I thought they both serve same purpose just to be sure

dimpules8:


@expertman
On a more serious note, see if the above format gives u some ideas on how to start. Google samples too. Remember no plagiarism. Once you start writing, you will definitely flow. Then, come back to request for proofreading assistance. Was once in ur shoes too.
Look at this format below and tailor to your spec
http://www.duhochoancau.edu.vn/en/find-country/study-in-canada/consultancy/item/640-sample-cover-letter-applying-for-study-permit-in-canada

Why Na? You just spoil market with your quote.

hello everyone
also doe

expertman:
Hello Boses,

Good evening please any one here who can help write a good sop letter I am ready to pay.
Or if any one can link me with someone who can help write a good convincing sop I am ready to pay.
Thanks

Ok. No wahala.

Can you pay 1.5million naira? Cos I have to read widely plus question and run several test on you.

sunvick:
Please folks, Is there any difference btw LOE and SOP?

I thought they both serve same purpose just to be sure

If you are a religious follower of this thread, you won't ask this question.

They are the same in different format.

dimpules8:


@expertman
On a more serious note, see if the above format gives u some ideas on how to start. Google samples too. Remember no plagiarism. Once you start writing, you will definitely flow. Then, come back to request for proofreading assistance. Was once in ur shoes too.
Look at this format below and tailor to your spec
http://www.duhochoancau.edu.vn/en/find-country/study-in-canada/consultancy/item/640-sample-cover-letter-applying-for-study-permit-in-canada

Hi guys, please I need help with proofreading my SOP. Thank you

Greetings,

Anyone here schooling in Dominican University College (DUC).

Treat as urgent

Thanks.

Thank you most high.... One step away

Medical request came in today..... Happy

Request for Refrence letter from CBN and the rest

Where that Chimah post sef on how to tackle that stuff

I have been following this thread for a while now but I learnt a lot from it.

MY Profile:
Male, Single, 32 yrs, Bsc Industrial Maths & Comp Sc (2008), NYSC (2010 -2011), Oracle Certification, Working in Telecommunication Comp (Supply Chain Analyst).

Admitted to study Post Graduate Diploma: Information Technology (Business Analysis) @ NBCC, Canada.

My QUESTIONS:

Please

1) Is it advisable to run medical test before study visa application?
2) I need address where my employer will address my letter to, am a bit confuse on this.
3) Is it advisable to do court marriage as Home Tie because I intend to submit my application this month of May.
4) Also I need Sample of SOP
5) This is my email address for your kind responses sampebola@yahoo.com
6) My in-law (married to my sister) will be my sponsor, is it advisable to use him?

I look forward to receive your Professional advises and opinions

Regards,

Hi All,Have been following this tread for a while,please how long is it advisable to leave funds transferred into my account by my sponsor before applying for TRV,i have also paid all of Tuition.Funds transferred is just for living expenses for a year.Is a week sufficient ,am pressed for time due to the 16 weeks processing time.Thanks.

CanadianNurse:
Thank you most high.... One step away

Medical request came in today..... Happy

Request for Refrence letter from CBN and the rest

Where that Chimah post sef on how to tackle that stuff

Wow nice news congrat, u are on d way up. success

CanadianNurse:
Thank you most high.... One step away

Medical request came in today..... Happy

Request for Refrence letter from CBN and the rest

Where that Chimah post sef on how to tackle that stuff

CanadianNurse:
Thank you most high.... One step away

Medical request came in today..... Happy

Request for Refrence letter from CBN and the rest

Where that Chimah post sef on how to tackle that stuff

Nice One.

Please were you asked to pay tuition fees as well?

U can check schools, but TRU have post graduate programs for mostly business field

hustla:



Any recommendations?

tayonani:
pls share updated experience with d immigration and border control cos some peeps here re saying we should be carrying 10k USD for hand ooo,lolz

you must have mistaken me for someone else. Please gurus kindly give answer anyways you don't have to carry such amount unless you must

Jaau:
Hi All,Have been following this tread for a while,please how long is it advisable to leave funds transferred into my account by my sponsor before applying for TRV,i have also paid all of Tuition.Funds transferred is just for living expenses for a year.Is a week sufficient ,am pressed for time due to the 16 weeks processing time.Thanks.

I think a week is OK. But expect d latest request from cic for additional documents on funds at a later date ie d bank & cbn ref letter . Hp u explained d funds transferred to you in your sop and your sponsor 's letter of sponsorship

AAOL:


Nice One.

Please were you asked to pay tuition fees as well?

Yes ooo they asked for tuition fee

CanadianNurse:
Thank you most high.... One step away

Medical request came in today..... Happy

Request for Refrence letter from CBN and the rest

Where that Chimah post sef on how to tackle that stuff

Congrats.. did u pay tution prior to your application?

Judgepelumi:

Congrats.. did u pay tution prior to your application?

I paid half but they are asking for full

CanadianNurse:
Yes ooo they asked for tuition fee

Thanks.

To all Visa applicants here, please start looking for ways to pay your first year academic tuition fees or have the money liquid and available.

Reasons: I have noticed CIC is now requesting for payment of tuition fees before approving visa. Again, I noticed this request comes before getting TRV. They started this with Feb applicants and that was when CBN made significant changes to their Forex policy.

**my own opinion pls

See me see cic o, Dem no send me biometric letter and the account is showing action required!

sunvick:
Please folks, Is there any difference btw LOE and SOP?

I thought they both serve same purpose just to be sure

Well based on my understand, they tend to address the same issue, but the format may be different. Like me, my statement of purpose contained the following, in a letter format;
1. Brief introduction of myself
2. Why I chose the university
3. Why I chose the program
4. Why the program is different from the one obtained in Nigeria
5. And assurance to return on completion of my program.

My Letter of explanation on the other hand addresses each issue raised by the VO in my previous denial, what I have done yo correct it and explain what isn't clear to the VO that made him/her to deny me.

You can as well let your letter of explanation address each of the following point separately;
1. Available funds
2. Purpose of visit
3. Home ties
4. Assets e.t.c

All what I have stated are my opinion and how I did mine. Thanks

i graduated from production engineering ,and i applied for masters in mechanical engineering in university of Ottawa,i just got an email from them that my application was refused , i graduated with a second class lower (2.5), Please which other university can i apply to that i will get admission to .

AAOL:


Thanks.

To all Visa applicants here, please start looking for ways to pay your first year academic tuition fees or have the money liquid and available.

Reasons: I have noticed CIC is now requesting for payment of tuition fees before approving visa. Again, I noticed this request comes before getting TRV. They started this with Feb applicants and that was when CBN made significant changes to their Forex policy.

**my own opinion pls

perfectly correct! It's not a case specific requirement any more it's as important as medicals

Except you have full and surplus funding biko pay ur tuition or have the cash breathing heavily in ur akant!

expertman:
Hello Boses,

Good evening please any one here who can help write a good sop letter I am ready to pay.

Or if any one can link me with someone who can help write a good convincing sop I am ready to pay.


Thanks

your post has attracted some critics so far.

To write a good SOP, I have always seen different formats and opinions on how to write it but to me there is actually no standardize format in writing this. but any good reader would want to see a sequential flow without repetition from introduction-body-conclusion and ability to paragraph while structuring your statement is also necessary to make it interesting. some tips have been laid out to make you revolve your statements in accordance. Like introducing your purpose for the statement, educational background, achievements in relationship to the program, reason for this program and prospects, career advancements, why this school, why this country, conclusively your career goals. if applicable for TRV application, financial breakdown if necessary, home ties, bla bla ...

I will advise you if you can to at least try because when you would want to write ENGLISH TEST, like IELTS,PTE etc. especially for the WRITING category you would understand you need to be technical and creative in writing to be able to achieve higher points if your are aiming for Permanent Resident.

Additionally so many who are not on NAIRALAND got TRVs without SOP. but don't try this if your application got some ''undones'' and demanding questions. More so your profile, the type and manner of study program would demand a convincing SOP with devoted hours or just fairly written ones which could take me one hour as the case may be.

Coming to the scene that your post generated, if you can meet my demand I will do so, yes ranting is allowed. Writing a good professional sop requires devoted time which if for example I am a banker, with the stress of work and family I can hardly write a good one that may facilitate visa approval. That does not mean that if I am jobless/idle or my work gives me time like Govt. works, with the tips here that I can't write it? of course I will! hence the need for one's service as long as you can give me the primary details of yourself to assist in writing.

People will plead and plead for some people to help proof-read their SOPs thus delaying their submission for TRV application which some annoyingly just submit like that, some may even ignore your PMs/mails as a result of attending to their primary needs. This is because they are not being paid. if something to motivate was attached.. you would have seen the difference on this forum from interested ones to do so

A good sop requires devoted hours, days + advanced learner's English dictionary beside the table + Panadol extra pack & a glass of water + fuel/diesel for generator b/c PHCN is never trusted at least you don't need discomfort when writing this when you come back from work. Bro to be realistic many would have come out openly to get paid to do this for you but....to be continued.

To whom it may concern............