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Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by oluwaphizzy(m): 11:10pm On Dec 01, 2016
Olajhidey22:


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Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by Adelodun24: 6:06am On Aug 02, 2017
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Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by Nmaglit: 9:22pm On Aug 02, 2017
Adelodun24:
The website is nt goin through

am experiencing the same thing Star reading the story this morning
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by eunisam: 6:41am On Aug 03, 2017
reading
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by obajoey(m): 8:23am On Aug 03, 2017
I love the lines. Going to try some with a lady I like so much.

Good work Op.
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by Gloria4(f): 8:46am On Aug 03, 2017
Thanks for your lessons, waiting for the next episode, plz so interesting
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by Kehinderichard(m): 8:49am On Aug 03, 2017
Wow.. breathtaking..Good Job. Captivating..I couldn't leave my fone till the end...The link isn't going true as at this moment but I'll keep trying..well-done..
Your creativity simply stirs my imagination
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by OkeOladimeji: 9:03am On Aug 03, 2017
First time I read a story this long in a very long number of years. I always preferred motivational book.

Keep it up.
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by Copretzax: 10:07am On Aug 03, 2017
Habbaaaa this is not fair ooo. Complete the story now
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by adontcare(f): 11:17am On Aug 03, 2017
The link to the remaining episodes are not opening.
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by Leks25: 11:28am On Aug 03, 2017
What an intriguing story! I av really learnt a lot . nice one
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by Nobody: 11:34am On Aug 03, 2017
I swear I'll never follow this kind story again, what would happen kept me to read it all and now I can't access the last 3 episodes as the site is not responding.

OP that's such a wonderful story up there, you can contact nollywood

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Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by Nobody: 12:02pm On Aug 03, 2017
Women always like to use the word Destiny to cover up their mess. Destiny this Destiny that.. Na Samuel i pity pass. Nice story though

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Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by Nobody: 12:04pm On Aug 03, 2017
Olaide59:
Wow! What a wonderful story. I really learnt a lot from it. God bless u bro
can you please summarize what happen in the last 3 episode
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by Considering(f): 12:06pm On Aug 03, 2017
Intriguing! Good job
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by kosire(m): 12:33pm On Aug 03, 2017
Brother please finish the story for us..
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by liz4eno(f): 12:56pm On Aug 03, 2017
Where is the remaining story? Plssssssss finish it up, notify me wen u do pls dear, so interesting.
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by igwe44(m): 2:19pm On Aug 03, 2017
Olajhidey22:
Episode 38

“I hope my girl is free to leave?” Emmanuel asked quietly with his eyes on me. The young officer calmed himself, sat on his chair and breathed deeply as he stared at me.

“She’s free to leave, i have nothing against her for the moment, but i will be forced to involve her if we are unable to reach an agreement” he replied. Emmanuel instantly smiled at me,

“Hope you heard him baby?, you are free to go outside and wait for me” he said while i blushed and shook my head.

“Don’t worry about me, i think it’s better i sit here and listen to everything” I replied with a calm smile. He shook his head and stared into my eyes.

“I insist dear, please go outside and wait for me, please i beg of you” he pleaded seriously. I breathed deeply, stood up and left the officer’s office without another word. I really wasn’t happy that he asked me to leave, because i was keenly following the whole drama like a soap opera. Perhaps he did it to protect me, or did it to hide something from me, time will tell.

As i angrily left the police building, i ran into stella at the entrance . She smiled as soon as she saw me and stopped,

“HI friend good morning!” she greeted. I felt like ignoring her, but my anger overcame me. I stopped and stared at her furiously.

“What’s good about the morning?” I asked angrily,

“Oh a lot dear, today’s Sunday don’t you know?, Oh how would you remember since you spent your night in a good hotel huh” she replied with a smile.

“Whatever you are planning, just know that bad things doesn't last, you will be judged for your actions, better know that” i preached and made to leave, but she strongly held my right hand, which surprised and stopped me.

“Where is your child p-----t? You want to fight me again huh?” I asked with burning eyes. She scoffed and shrugged.

“Come on babe cool off, we should be friends instead of enemies” she said with a changed tone,

“I don’t have your time, so please get behind me” i yelled and turned to leave.

“Whether you like it or not, you will be seeing more of my presence and i advise you leave that obnoxious Emmanuel and make something good out of your life now you still have the time, because i will make his life miserable and burn who ever stands on my way. I think i have given you fair warning my lady. Emmanuel spoiled my life and i won’t stop until i spoil his” she threatened seriously. I froze for a while, meditated over her words and walked away silently.

A new fear erupted in my heart. I had no doubt she was serious with her threats.

“Can i stand her? what else is she planning?, is there something i’m yet to find out about Emmanuel?” i wondered fearfully, my legs shook while my heart pounded furiously.

I calmly left the police station and waited for Emmanuel in a shop close by. I anxiously waited for forty five minutes, but he failed to show up.
Nervously i returned to the station, with my heart pounding furiously, fear engulfing me immensely. But luckily i met him at the entrance door, the spot i earlier had a little confrontation with Stella. I heaved a sigh of relief as i stared into his eyes.

Stella’s brother was standing by his side, they stared at me for a while without saying anything.

“You are free to go, but do know that my eyes are on you” He finally said to Emmanuel as they shook hands,

“No problem” Emmanuel murmured, held my hand and made to walk away with me.

“Can i have a word with you please” I heard Stella’s brother ask with his eyes on me. I stared at him nervously, breathed deeply and shrugged.

“Okay” i muttered and walked towards him, while Emmanuel watched suspiciously,

“You have seen nothing of what we call life’; your boyfriend is false in heart, in mind, in soul; he has a false flattering tongue, false lips, false principles, you better be careful” he advised seriously, surprising me with his bluntness.

“You better watch your tongue mister” Emmanuel instantly barked, reached out and dragged me away,

“Don’t mind the idiot” he nervously said to me as we left the police station.
We said nothing to each other until we arrived at his apartment minutes later.

“So how did you finally settle with them?, did you sign the papers?” I asked curiously. He breathed deeply, and shook his head,

“Please i rather not talk about it. Please” i heard him say,

“But i have every right to know, don’t I?” i asked,

“Please let me be, i’m very hungry” he murmured with an angry tone.
_______

Without another word, i dutifully prepared and served breakfast, which he ate hungrily. My thoughts kept wandering to and fro as i watched him eat. I wasn’t as hungry as he was, because my heavy mind blocked my apetite.

“I’m still eager to know how you settled with him?” I anxiously asked, hiding my anxiety with a calm smile,

“I’m telling you no story, so please bother me no more. I have enough problems already” he replied coldly. I stared at him angrily, stood up and bit my lips.

“I think you are hiding something nasty from me, it’s better you open up now or?” I threatened with a raised voice.

“Or what?, Mary give me some space please, i’m choking” he replied defiantly, getting me extremely annoyed with his comment.

“Fine, I’m leaving, you know where to find me, bye” I shouted at him, grabbed my bag and ran out of his apartment. I was extremely angry and downcasted, i felt very bad because he treated me like an insignificant child. I understood his problems were telling on him, but to be treated in such undignifying manner was something i couldn’t stand. He equally never cared to run after me nor call me back.
I was almost in tears when i got back to my lodge minutes later.

Fate however added salt to my wound, by making me run into Samuel as i ran up the stairs with tears in my eyes.

__________

I froze in shock as i stared at him, got hold of myself, looked away and ran past him to my room, but he surprisingly came after me, catching up with me as i stopped to unlock my door.

“happy Sunday Mary” he greeted politely,

“Hello Samuel” i murmured nervously. He breathed deeply, drew close and studied me silently. Luckily, i managed to open my door that moment, and rushed into my room without another word. He however joined me in my room, throwing me into great tension with his undesirable behaviour.

He really was the last person i expected to see or talk to that moment and I equally was extremely ashamed that he saw me in a very terrible condition. My heart pounded furiously as i fell face first on my bed, backing him rudely, and praying silently for him to leave, but my prayers weren’t answered. He simply stood calmly, and waited for me to get hold of myself.

“Please let me be, i’m not myself please” i finally heard myself say to him.

“You look very troubled, dejected, broken and lost, what is happening to you?” he asked curiously. I bit my lips and sighed deeply,

“Sam please leave me alone, i’m very tired and weak” i murmured, sat up and faced him with a coloured face. His eyes melted as he looked into mine, he came forward and squatted by my side,

“Did he hurt you again?, tell me, what did he do to you? I see pain and unhappiness in your eyes?” he asked searchingly, making me blush and look away. I was extremely embarrassed and ashamed.

“Why should you care, please leave” i said to him, but he calmly shook his head and held my hands,

“Old things has come to pass my dear, this is new year and ‘A New Year Brings a New Beginning’, so don’t worry about the past, you can still count on me for anything” he sweetly said, while i looked into his eyes and saw hope. The only thing missing that moment was a soap opera music.

Can you guess what happened next?


-To Be Continued-

Source: http://www.bussydave.com.ng/2016/01/story-common-mistakes-ladies-make-in-a-relationship-episode-38
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by igwe44(m): 2:21pm On Aug 03, 2017
The link you gave is not opening,I really want to read the end of this great story. 08035037847 that is my whatzapp number,I don't know how and where to get the complete story
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by PrettyT1(f): 2:26pm On Aug 03, 2017

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Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by Tobennz(m): 2:46pm On Aug 03, 2017
Olajhidey22:
Episode 3

I was watching the last movie when I noticed him sit beside me on the floor, with two bottles of coke and a packet of crackers biscuit, which made me smile to myself, as I focused all my attention on the movie which was showing on his television……

“Mary here is cola oo” he managed to joke while i smiled, and looked at him in appreciation. We ate the biscuit and drank the coke in silence, as i returned my focus back to the movie once again.

He later held my hand gently, which really made me look at him with surprise, and he appealed to me with his eyes.

“Please accept me into your life, i’m not a bad person, i promise and swear to keep your dignity and respect intact, i truly love you” he begged.

“Really?” i asked, while he held my hand strongly.

“I swear” he answered. I rolled my eyes and said nothing.

“Please answer me” he pleaded desperately.

Seriously seeing him beg me, really gladdened my heart, but i just pretended as if he was disturbing my peace.

“What do you want me to say again?” i asked, while he drew his face closer to mine.

“Please just say yes” he whispered. I looked into his eyes and saw love, desire and honesty in it, but i controlled myself and looked away.

“Just give me time, i will think about it”. I replied

But surprisingly and out of nowhere, he drew closer to me and gave me a tight hug, this i received while i closed my eyes ……

But I soon got myself and gently pushed him away, while he looked at me gratefully, and with shinning eyes.

“I have never felt this way before, thank you” he said, while i looked away and closed my eyes briefly, because i equally felt something strong when we hugged, which i have never felt for any guy before, not even my Ex..

I was unable to concentrate on the remaining part of the movie i was watching after the hug, because all my thoughts were now on him, and even though i was the one who pushed him away, i still wanted him to hug and hold me closer to himself, but then i had to control myself, because i’m nothing but an humble girl who has her pride and dignity to protect, and so i stood up minutes later, while he stared at me with his innocent face which always make me lose focus……..

“Let me go and sleep, i’m so tired” i said to him with a smile, while he equally stood up as well and held my hand.

“Will you come once you are through with your sleep?” he asked with a pleading face, while i looked down.

“I will try” I replied, but instead of letting me go, he drew closer to me, and hugged me again, while my soul melted. I immediately fled his room without looking back….

As i lay on my bed that evening, i battled with my thoughts and emotions, as i prayed for him to be real, because i really do not want to repeat the mistake i made with my Ex, who had equally looked so honest when i first met him, and so in love, i was with him then, that i freely gave him my virginity…….

Tears fell off my eyes as i remembered how he took my most precious asset, and i swallowed hard as i bit my lips. I knew i could never get over that trauma, because i knew the pain i passed through that fateful night. I thought he really loved me, just because he looked decent and said those words i wished to hear, I guess that’s one problem every girl faces, because we never really can tell or know the guy who really loves us. Moreover, they all appear good and decent at first sight, that you won’t really see the wolf in him, if you also do have feelings for him which will then blind you from his faults and before you know what, he’s had his way with you and it’s already too late………

My thoughts really drew much tears from my eyes that evening, and before i knew what was happening, i was already crying deeply, as my mind played back on how i lost my pride to Emmanuel……..

It’s really something that touched my soul, spirit and body, but i didn’t know it was just a game to him. Only God will judge us all and here is the story of how i lost my treasure……

-To be continued-

Source: http://www.bussydave.com.ng/2016/01/story-common-mistakes-ladies-make-in-a-relationship-episode-3/
... Ts jst a luvly story, i wish 2 get 2 d end of t
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by Osada1: 3:01pm On Aug 03, 2017
You are really a good writer, this means you can author a book, if you didn't author a book, I will be angry for you my dear, Thump up for you, try and write a book and invite me for the launching, trust me you will make a good one
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by Emimaeyor(m): 3:10pm On Aug 03, 2017
waoo i really enjoyed this story.

I hope those prospective students would learn from this and take things slowly. cant wait for the next episode
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by divineRx(f): 3:28pm On Aug 03, 2017
pls dear try nd update d story here cos i'm finding it difficult to access d blog..nice story nd more ink to ur pen
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by Copretzax: 3:35pm On Aug 03, 2017
Still waiting for the climax pls
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by Optional2(f): 4:20pm On Aug 03, 2017
first time i will read a story on nairaland from the beginning to the end.. I was bitting my lips and felt like slapping mary..



Most ladies do this common mistakes, i did it but not as bad as this mary..
I learnt something today..
Thanks op.

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Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by Optional2(f): 4:26pm On Aug 03, 2017
divineRx:
pls dear try nd update d story here cos i'm finding it difficult to access d blog..nice story nd more ink to ur pen



you can finish it here.


http://gospelbreed.com/2016/01/story-
common-mistakes-ladies-make-in-a-
relationship-episode-39/
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by Emeth: 4:38pm On Aug 03, 2017
The link to the blog doesn't seem to be functional.
Re: Story: Common Mistakes Ladies Make In A Relationship by yemstok(m): 6:04pm On Aug 03, 2017
Let me help

EPISODE 39


My heart pounded furiously as i tried to say something, I opened my mouth but no word came out. I swallowed hard and looked away, deeply embarrassed and confused.“Mary” Samuel called my name softly, breaking my heart and flogging my soul with his voice. He really behaved like a good christian, very forgiving and caring, making my conscience flog and bite me without mercy.The way he offered his help totally broke me into two, i really couldn’t believe he was ready to help after how i betrayed and dumped him the previous year.“I don’t deserve your help, sympathy or anything, please just go, i beg of you” I finally managed to mutter, shaking and surprising him with my outburst.“You are too proud and it isn’t good for a girl” he said with a very sad face. I breathed deeply and touched his left cheek,“You are a very nice guy who deserves something better. Seriously each time i look at you, my conscience hurts because i instantly remember all the bad things i did to you, so accepting anything from you will kill me, please just let me be, moreover i’mnot in any terrible situation that needs help, believe me” I explained calmly. He bit his lips and stood up.“I broke my pride and most importantly i did what every guy will frown upon, by coming back to see you, but it’s okay” he murmured regretably.“Oh no Samuel don’t say that” I cried, stood up and hugged him tightly, “you are a very nice guy and i know God will repay you somehow” I prayed,“We don’t choose who we fall in love with, it’s something that happens without influence, and when it happens we leave everything just to follow our heart. Sometimes we end up with the wrong person, but believe me that’s it” I poured out as i held him tightly,“And what happens to a guy who falls in love with a girl who happens to love another?” he asked,“Seriously i can’t answer that” i murmured with a heavy heart.“I wronged you, i scammed your family and broke their trust. I’ll be at your family house next saturday to apologize and seek forgiveness from your family” i heard myself say. He instantly broke away from me, stared into my eyes and rubbed his face with his palms.“Will you actually do that?” he asked curiously,“Of course i will, moreover it’s the only way i can atone for my sins and be free from the evil touch of misfortune which has befallen me lately” i confessed.Was there ever anything seen like love and sorrow meeting together in a place?.The pure love of Samuel’s noble heart, and the keen sorrow in mine, brought sadness more bitter than death upon us as we stared at each other that fateful Sunday.“Alright then, i have to get going” Samuel muttered seriously. I nodded with a faint smile,“Thanks again for checking up on me, hope you will be at home on Saturday?” i asked meekly,“Of course i will” he replied, breathed deeply and turned to leave.“Sam please wait” i begged nervously, forcing him to stop, turn and stare at me curiously,“I have cute course-mates who will be willing to have a relationship with a guy like you, should i arrange one for you?” i asked nervously. He breathed deeply and shook his head,“Never mind, thanks” he objected,“Are you sure?” i asked seriously,“Yea and i’m also very sure you will later regret leaving the only boy that truly loved you” he answered, turned and left without another word.______I took a long shower, freshened up and had a little nap. However a loud knock on my door hours later, woke me up. I lazily answered my door and smiled brightly as my eyes fell on Mariam.“Thank God you are back, i missed you dear” i happily cried as we hugged each other.“Me too” she murmured happily.Even though our friendship wasn’t as strong as it used to be due to my strange affair with Emmanuel, we still maintained a little closeness and still shared a unique bond which kept us together like sisters. She never supported how i got back with Emmanuel, but it never stopped me from sharing my fears with her.“Could you believe Emmanuel has a daughter” i announced as she walked into my room,“Don’t say that, jeez!” she exclaimed with surprise, settled down on my bed with both hands on her jaw and listened keenly. I calmly sat beside her and narrated the latest story of my life to her.“Damn this is so weird and unbelievable” she murmured and shook her head after listening to all i poured out,“My dear i think you should run away from that guy, unless you are willing to risk your life over him. Moreover it isn’t too late for you, since you havn’t given him much commitment, nor slept with him after that careless night you spend at his family house last year” she advised seriously.“You are right, but i just can’t do it, don’t ask me why please” i said seriously. She scoffed, shook her head and held my left shoulder,“I think you are being insanely stupid, seriously” she scolded,“you used to be a level headed, intelligent girl, but it seems like you are getting stupid as you grow older, please don’t take it the wrong way, but i have to tell you the truth” she added with a serious look.“What is love without happiness?, and what is happiness without a bright future?” she asked, forcing me to look away in confusion,“There is no doubt you are love with Emmanuel, but where is yourhappiness, and how will your life turn out in few years coming?” “This is no soap opera, we are talking about your life. Youthful love fades with time, but happiness and bright future can make it last a life time” She advised with burning eyes,“You are like my sister my dear, and i know you have a very good but weak heart, do you think you stand a chance with Stella and her numerous antics eeh?, answer me?, moreover how are you sure Emmanuel won’t abandon you at the last moment, because he’s good at it?” she asked seriously. I silently swallowed hard, lost in thought.I was lost, disoriented and disorganised. Instead of helping, Mariam choosed to dismember me with her frightening questions. But sometimes a truthful reality is very painful and horrible to imagine.But could she be right with all she’s just said?

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