[quote author=coolbreezy01 post=53811757]Dedicated to supizino thanks man 4 d dedication more ink 2 ur pen

e jez dey sweet me 4 belle

I don show any babe available 4 take off?

guy update nah abi u wan make i run commot this thread ni

abeg shey seat they here make i seat?

in adekunle gold voice' e dey sweet me 4 my belle o'

greg42 u c wetin u dey do as sweet as dis tori u no dey mention me anyways 'kwantinu'

henhen greg42 u knw mention me abi anyways no p kwantinu

hahaha e don red 4 u niyen o make i play p'square danger 4 u 'tochi u go see danger coz wahala dey'

Lleigh:

Thank you supizino.
Hope you enjoy the ride

yea enjoying it 2 d fullest

abeg mention me when u update o coz i no wan miss dis tori o

hmm i jez dey observe

been a silent reader all these while buh i decided 2 come out of my hiding jez because this story is very much interesting lleigh more ink 2 ur pen

tenkz 4 d mention

u are getting me confused o who is ada and who is eve kindly expansiate plz

hehehe tochi's dilenma ni looto kindly mention me when u post another chapter ooo

9c story u have here kindly mention me if u have updated another chapter

9ce story you have here kindly mention me if u have update another chapter

thankx 4 d mention

boss me fire on i dey ur back

ashatoda:
present for a thrilling ride

i don land boss oya fire on

greg42:
Cc girlhaley creeza jagugu88li Lliegh xamster
Remiseyi supizino ashatoda oma4u drivepen1

i dey wit u boss following bumper 2 bumper

greg42,lleigh,creeza,bibijay,loriebloom another update don land o

continuation*** i was so speechless that i continue to cry and she started rendering my eulogy Omo Oba tin fi ase muti, omo oyinbo iyanro, omo oba n rin ile n mi titi, omo otubu n'bon omo agbeja nla bofa (sorry that i have to write it in yoruba) don't cry akanji the son of a warrior don't cry' she concluded but i was still angry with her when my friend came to check on me so my mum quicky leave us alone to talk. *** Abimbola was a very good friend of mine since childhood and we often do alot of things together and to crown it all we are in the same school and same class. he knows what happen and quickly ask me what we are going to do about the teacher. eddie wetin we go do this teacher nah e be like say her own too much o !!! he lamented. i don't know what am going to do o" i replied, let me think with my head first nah' he said, i know what we are going to do eddie bring your ear make i yarn you coz wall get ears... *story continues*

dedicated to greg42 and lleigh**** Chapter4**** I wouldnt say am happy nor proud because its the mixture of both but i know one thing that am heading in the right direction we won the competition courtesy of me and my team mates but i know that have make an enemy in mrs kofoworola the mother of the boy they substitute for me because she torment me everywhere she sees me and to top it all she was my class teacher.one day i will never forget in my life is the day she order the whole twenty pupils of my class to beat me just because am sleeping in class i was so frustrated that when i got home my mum know something is wrong somewhere so she ask me Omo Akin whats wrong with you? mama nothing; i replied, don't tell me nothing is wrong because i can see it all over your face!!! i started crying because i don't know whether to tell her the truth or not. am afraid that she will storm the school fight with my teacher and i don't want that to happen. as if she knows my mind she came over to where i am an hugged me.

i dey follow you lyk madt lleigh kindly follow my story back nd i will appreciate if u do

greg42:
Am here now bruh......grabbing a front row seat

you are highly welcome bruh wetin make i bring come orijin or star

plz come one come all i really need ur comments so that i will knw where my mistake lies plz where art though greg,kayemjay,divepen,lleigh,larrysun,bibijay,d9ty7,kingspen,foxyflow,lorriebloom,chippapi et all i need your support i cnt do it alone oooo

greg42:
Cc girlhaley creeza obinnau jagugu88li Lliegh xamster
Remiseyi supizino ashatoda oma4u

Thanks For The Mention plz kindly follow my story

~continuation~ so i went to my coach pleaded with him to let me in in second half and he agreed, first half came and ended,as second half wants to begin i enter the field in place of jamiu that was playing my wing as soon as i enter the field my friends and my classmate started shouting Eddie! Eddie!! Eddie!!! till the whole school shouting my name. my head swell up we started dominating the match i receive the ball at the opposition half and i starte dribbling them one by one and before i could say jack i was brought down on the edge of the box and it was a freekick, i stand over the freekick and BOOM!!! over the wall and into the top right corner of the post and there it was A GOAL!!! i screamed with all my might urging my teammate that the match just started and to cut the long story short we won the match by three goals to two courtesy of two goals from me and one from skippo and that was how my fame started rising around the school and the neighbouring school in our area. A Star Was Born Eddieranking.

***** CHAPTER 3 ***** The reason for me not to play was not far fetched because am one of few people that uses spectacles to correct their eyes since doctor has told me that i have short sightedness. but the irony of it is that when am in class i usually move my sit infront so that i could be able to read and write what the teacher is scribbling on the chalkboard but on the field of play i virtually see everything around me. i was flabbergasted that these teacher knows about my ailness, so when my coach comes he advice me that i should stop playing that he dont want to loose his job, i was sad but i didn't let it weigh me down. on the day of the match i dressed properly hoping that they will changed their mind, we were to play St Emmanuel Primary School Ijebu Ode at St Anthony Primary School Ijebu Ode to my surprise i was among the substitutes, the match started and by twenty minutes we were trailing St Emmanuel by two goals to nil. i was not happy because my school was at the loosing ends.

***** Chapter 2 ***** growing up was tough because the area i grew up was like a ghetto the house that we lived in consist of 8 rooms four opposite each other what we people called face me i slapped you and it has one general kitchen and two bathrooms and one toilet we have three tenants because my grandfather built the house,i attend baptist primary school ijebu-ode for my primary education. i won't say am the brightest student but am one of the best student ,the troubled first start when am in primary five my school was selected to perform in a football competition held all over the primary school in ogun state and i was opportune to be among the players selected to play because am blessed with the trickery of lionel messi, the pace of cristiano ronaldo and the ability to score like zlatan ibrahimovic. i was buzzing on the field on that fateful day entertaining my classmate when one of my teachers came to the field and began harassing me she kept on rumbling that i can't play on that day. ~still i vibrate~