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I Can't Walk Alone by Tosdam(m): 6:27am On Jan 07, 2013 |
A soothing love poem Honey of my life without you my life is bitter, i never have a sound sleep since seeing you, your reply to my proposal weaken my active bone, without you i can't walk alone. My thinking is occupy by you alone, all i can write after my readings is i love you, your lovelorn make me wander, without you i can't walk alone. You i saw in my dream, when i wake up without seeing you am helpless, love made me fool, without you i can't walk alone. your blonde made me bite the bit of my fingers, belle of my choice, without you i can't walk alone, your beauty is a prize from God, it lure me into lust ending in love, my love for you is never a deceit, without you i can't walk alone. My heart is free for you, my lobes is calling for yours, come over and occupy it, without you i can't walk alone. Age flies like time, season harsh on me, must i grow grey before you accept my proposal, the magistrate is awaiting us, but without you i can't walk alone, My ribs are incomplete without you, occupy my heart, hand my hand, support my leg, and we shall walk together. 1 Like |
Re: I Can't Walk Alone by Tosdam(m): 6:35am On Jan 07, 2013 |
drop ur comments 1 Like |
Re: I Can't Walk Alone by Tosdam(m): 11:25am On Apr 12, 2013 |
Ur comment is highly needed, to know if the poem is good to go. |
Re: I Can't Walk Alone by clemzydutch(m): 2:45pm On Apr 19, 2013 |
NICE POEM DUDE,I LIKE THE WAY U RHYMES THE POEM, THE THEMES AS WELL IS COMPREHENSIVE. KEEP IT UP. |
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