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Re: The Religion by Stiv(m): 7:32am On Jun 01, 2013 |
This is a fascinating story, and it definitely deserves more than a nairaland frontpage. It deserves to be published as a book, an e-book, and its a great story for a blockbuster hollywood movie (Quentin Tarantino style). I like the way you did your research from wikipedia and other places to aid your writing. Well done, Frank. However, when doing the final publishing, change from cops to police. That's how we know them in Naija. And get a solid proof reader. We humbly await the final chapter. 1 Like |
Re: The Religion by ponana(m): 8:26am On Jun 01, 2013 |
Nice piece Mr Frank |
Re: The Religion by frank317: 12:23pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
wow, the comments have been great... what more can i say... i really thank everyone that have taken out their time to say someting good to me. i am just overwhelmed penzino: Wow Frankenstien as I have refered to u when I started from page one dis morning... U are a sensational writer, the suspence, intrigue, romance and action makes this piece an awesome one... I remove head dress for you... I just hope Chidi and nkiru would cum out safe. Consedering what Daniel went through, pls dnt complicate his character further... I would like to see a twist that would make Daniel an aquaintance with Priest in the past since there was nothing about them being togther.. And I wonder what havoc emeka, joe and co would unleash... i honestly cannot do that since Daniel's life for the past two years had been in sadness and isolation. he had also concentrated on revenge |
Re: The Religion by frank317: 12:25pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
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Re: The Religion by Mynd44: 12:33pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
I wanna be like uncle Frank when I grow up 1 Like |
Re: The Religion by frank317: 12:39pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
Pls you guys should not crucify me for typo errors... you all should know i dont play with my Fridays, therefor i suffer for Friday fun on Saturday... Okay, chapter 12 ends here. let me point out that this story is about to end. it is going to be a 14 chapter story. i intend to keep the whole story to the three days timeline Priest gave himself to capture Adanna. extending the story or providing more twist will result in me exceeding the 3 day time line thereby not acheiving my aim. so the whole story was a 3days event with a few flash back. the last event will happen in the last chapter while the last chapter will be used to describe how the ever after went. pls just still tell me what you tink. thanks. |
Re: The Religion by frank317: 12:40pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
Mynd_44: I wanna be like uncle Frank when I grow up ha Mr.Mynd... i want to be like you tooo even now. |
Re: The Religion by Mynd44: 12:42pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
frank3.16:Yeah right......look at how interesting you stories are.......be my mentor jorh |
Re: The Religion by Stiv(m): 12:46pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
Nice work, but we need you to finish this masterpiece. |
Re: The Religion by drsolob(m): 12:58pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
wow wating for part2 |
Re: The Religion by Nobody: 1:01pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
Oga franko, we dey ur back lyk hunch (ike). |
Re: The Religion by danjkad: 1:43pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
Ooooooohhhh. More update plsssssssss. |
Re: The Religion by penzino(m): 2:38pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
Frankenstein.... U will definately live long cos u have a greatmind.... Kudos boss, u da bomb!!! |
Re: The Religion by bukatyne(f): 2:42pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
Woah! Frank this was/is a splendid read. I like your power of imagination. Abeg, come and finish this story quick. I would definately write one day so that luvmijeje would critic. Keep it up and my post condolences on your loss. |
Re: The Religion by frank317: 3:24pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
danjkad: Ooooooohhhh. Emmm that will on Monday or Tuesday |
Re: The Religion by frank317: 3:30pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
bukatyne: Woah! Frank this was/is a splendid read. I like your power of imagination. Abeg, come and finish this story quick. I would definately write one day so that luvmijeje would critic. Thanks, I just hope she smiling at me from heaven and saying well done my love. Thanks all for our wondering comments, I just hope u all will patient with meeting till I update on Tuesday |
Re: The Religion by frank317: 3:31pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
penzino: Frankenstein.... U will definately live long cos u have a greatmind.... Kudos boss, u da bomb!!! U will love long too my brother |
Re: The Religion by iebanehita(m): 4:42pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
Hmm!!.. What can I say? Reading your story is worth every of my time. 'You nor dey waste time to update like Government.' I love the twist, turns and suspense. Just some few corrections i think.. ''Piss''.,,, should be substituted with ''pee''. ''kill my little sister'' should be ''kill my younger sister'' #Nkiru should be of age to be addressd as ''little'' by Adanna. |
Re: The Religion by benaak(f): 5:25pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
Frankly speakin Frank,u are a genius,the plot, twist ,suspense are terrific,welldone. I pray that the Lord will compensate u doubly for ur loss,it is well. |
Re: The Religion by princesa(f): 5:31pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
suspensful and rovery... congrats on hitting the front page, and for your more regular update, unlike yours truly i already have a mentor am growing up to be like, so just mentor Myndd |
Re: The Religion by ibrokola(m): 5:49pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
frank3.16: Joe and his girl were already sleeping with his own girl in a separate room after getting high and a multiple round of sex. |
Re: The Religion by kenny987(f): 6:09pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
Frank3.16! Ur story and everything in it is awesome! I've bin seeing this title "The Religion" and always put it down as something un-interesting so never bothered reading until yesterday evening. I'm glad I didn't read till now cos this way I don't get 2 deal with d suspense and waiting 4 updates. Trust me though, u're a great writer! Just some typos here n there and u're good 2 go. Take heart on d loss of ur fiancee, the Lord will certainly console u and cause u 2 find anoda 2 spend ur lifetime with. Kudos! |
Re: The Religion by frank317: 6:53pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
iebanehita: Hmm!!.. Thanks guy... Point noted |
Re: The Religion by Emeralddan(f): 7:19pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
Congratulations bro on making the frontpage.....this story is so WOW!! |
Re: The Religion by Ohibenemma(m): 8:58pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
Good writing, I must admit. Started reading it about two days ago, and have been re-drawn to it several times when idle. It's free flowing and fairly detailed. For those expecting too much details, probably Chimamandaesque, I'd say 'one man's meat is another's fish'. While her style is great and consistent, her descriptions are sometimes boring (I skip such parts while reading ). However, Oga Frank, I won't fail to state it that I have little patience with certain 'overlookings' Nigerians and even half educated westerners(eg footballers on twitter) make while writing. 'My dad has BEING the chairman for over two years,' is an example of such. 'He HEAT him hard with a cudgel,' is another. Such mistakes are scattered across your work, but this isn't to deter you, it's to make you pay more attention. Once again, you are good. |
Re: The Religion by frank317: 9:21pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
Ohibenemma: Good writing, I must admit. Started reading it about two days ago, and have been re-drawn to it several times when idle. It's free flowing and fairly detailed. For those expecting too much details, probably Chimamandaesque, I'd say 'one man's meat is another's fish'. While her style is great and consistent, her descriptions are sometimes boring (I skip such parts while reading ). Ohibenemma: Good writing, I must admit. Started reading it about two days ago, and have been re-drawn to it several times when idle. It's free flowing and fairly detailed. For those expecting too much details, probably Chimamandaesque, I'd say 'one man's meat is another's fish'. While her style is great and consistent, her descriptions are sometimes boring (I skip such parts while reading ). ya, i get that... but i have an editor who helps me polish my work. thanks for that though... i wil definately work hard to be beter next time |
Re: The Religion by frank317: 9:27pm On Jun 01, 2013 |
Emerald dan: Congratulations bro on making the frontpage.....this story is so WOW!! thanks dear, glad you like it. kenny987: Frank3.16! Ur story and everything in it is awesome! I've bin seeing this title "The Religion" and always put it down as something un-interesting so never bothered reading until yesterday evening. I'm glad I didn't read till now cos this way I don't get 2 deal with d suspense and waiting 4 updates. Trust me though, u're a great writer! Just some typos here n there and u're good 2 go. Take heart on d loss of ur fiancee, the Lord will certainly console u and cause u 2 find anoda 2 spend ur lifetime with. Kudos! i am glad you read it and you commented. thanks, the lord is my strenght. princesa: suspensful and rovery... ahhh princess, i never reach to be mentorooo, with all these gramatical errors? |
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