Abeg dnt give person heart attack with dis
Suspense na. Wao d story is so captivating

xxyz17:
Frank please check the time. Its already afternoon

i just updated na or do u expect another thing?

bigsholly: Abeg dnt give person heart attack with dis
Suspense na. Wao d story is so captivating

thanks dear... i thought i had disappointed

frank3.16:


thanks dear... i thought i had disappointed

mehn! You d bomb.. U delivered beyond my expectation. Nice

Rap maestro: mehn! You d bomb.. U delivered beyond my expectation. Nice

wow!!! u have just made my day

frank3.16:
All right guys... this is parts of Chapter 13. i will do my final update on this story on Thursday.

i am afraid if i am getting the ending? pls let me know

Mehhhhhhhhhn!!.. All this bumper-packed action happening within 3days, this could pass for the Nigerian version of ''24''.. Season1,2 and3 oo!.. Ar swear!!!

Pls, the rope was used to tie Nkiru's hand,but you said head. Maybe thats a typo.
The story is on point..!!..very tactical and thoughtful approach..#In my opinion..!!

iebanehita:

Mehhhhhhhhhn!!.. All this bumper-packed action happening within 3days, this could pass for the Nigerian version of ''24''.. Season1,2 and3 oo!.. Ar swear!!!

Pls, the rope was used to tie Nkiru's hand,but you said head. Maybe thats a typo.
The story is on point..!!..very tactical and thoughtful approach..#In my opinion..!!

thanks, i actually meant to say legs.

lol....@nigerian 24

Oooooooooh Ω̴̩̩̩̥α .
Why ª̳͡Rε U̶̲̥̅̊ doin Ƌ̲̣̣̣̥ȋ̝̊̅̄Ƨ̷̜̩̌̋ Τ̅☺ us sef.
Can't wait ƒό̲̣̣̣̥r̲̅ U̶̲̥̅̊ Τ̅☺ finish up Ƌ̲̣̣̣̥ȋ̝̊̅̄Ƨ̷̜̩̌̋ story.
Well done. ℓ̊ doff my hat ƒό̲̣̣̣̥r̲̅ U̶̲̥̅̊.
This ȋ̝̊̅§ intruging. D̶̲̥̅̊ suspense ȋ̝̊̅§ superb. Keep it up.

Frankenstein! Frankenstein!! Frankenstein!!! U are the bomb, more grease to ue elbow....

penzino: Frankenstein! Frankenstein!! Frankenstein!!! U are the bomb, more grease to ue elbow....

thanks... lol @ frankenstein, i feel like a ghost

ewww,Frank thursday iz too far nw, anyway i wil wait or do I ve a choice. very intruging story. officially d best story I eva read. it feels so real n u carry u readers along with d way u write.

[center]Hmmm u're really gettn 2 end oh n besides thursday is 2 far but I can wait till then[color=#006600][/color][/center]

interesting and captivating.

pheeew read everything just in time to meet with the season grand finale..Franko the end so far is on point. I may have to go back and read your old stories. so soon this story is coming to an end, you deliver in record time Sir. #Respekt


maybe I missed it but was Nkiru still bare from the waist up when talking to Emeka and co?

An0nimus: pheeew read everything just in time to meet with the season grand finale..Franko the end so far is on point. I may have to go back and read your old stories. so soon this story is coming to an end, you deliver in record time Sir. #Respekt


maybe I missed it but was Nkiru still bare from the waist up when talking to Emeka and co?

don't think so, cos even Nkiru would know that she was no match to his strong hold physically, so she will just kick and fight but Chinedu would easily pin her down, probably rip the pant but would raise her skirt to have his way. REMEMBER, he wouldn't want priest to know what he did, not after the warning given to them.. Frank, am i right?

Finally, i'm through. Frank is always getting better from Cyber Lover to The Tenth Generation to this one. May I compare you to patterson?
However in your last update Nkiru narrated to Emeka that Adanna was about 11 when priest attemped to molest her while Adanna narrated to Daniel that she was 13?
You often use the word "descretely" instead of "discreetly"
btw, whats he meaning of 3.16 in your name (just curious)

Rap maestro: don't think so, cos even Nkiru would know that she was no match to his strong hold physically, so she will just kick and fight but Chinedu would easily pin her down, probably rip the pant but would raise her skirt to have his way. REMEMBER, he wouldn't want priest to know what he did, not after the warning given to them.. Frank, am i right?

lo I meant her chest was bare; waist up

Anominus dey talk sense o, oga franko, how come chinedu no no tear bra, abi nkiru no wear am, and is she still cloth-less(blouse less) cos u wrote that chinedu tore of(that also sud be changed 2 off) her blouse,and began 2 handle her bare bosom. So, is her bosom still bare wen she was talking 2 emeka and co. Edit that area well.

yeah frank that part needs clarification...

every other part was ok..... kudos



'shit' muttered priest
this correction whatever can be so funny

An0nimus: pheeew read everything just in time to meet with the season grand finale..Franko the end so far is on point. I may have to go back and read your old stories. so soon this story is coming to an end, you deliver in record time Sir. #Respekt


maybe I missed it but was Nkiru still bare from the waist up when talking to Emeka and co?

thanks Rap...

@An0nimous, remember she was untied and made to sit up... now she would just sit up and not mind her cloths still up infront of men, would she?

An0nimus:
lo I meant her chest was bare; waist up

ok, i will have do more talkng on that, but i want you to visualize her lookin shabby, perhaps part of her boobs was exposed... but i will do some more work there

bernonpoint: Finally, i'm through. Frank is always getting better from Cyber Lover to The Tenth Generation to this one. May I compare you to patterson?
However in your last update Nkiru narrated to Emeka that Adanna was about 11 when priest attemped to molest her while Adanna narrated to Daniel that she was 13?
You often use the word "descretely" instead of "discreetly"
btw, whats he meaning of 3.16 in your name (just curious)

thanks on the discreet angle, thats a mistake on my part...

Frank 3.16: for God so love the world, that he sent frank, that whosoever beliveth in him, shall not perish in boredom but shall have everlasting fun.

Damex333: Anominus dey talk sense o, oga franko, how come chinedu no no tear bra, abi nkiru no wear am, and is she still cloth-less(blouse less) cos u wrote that chinedu tore of(that also sud be changed 2 off) her blouse,and began 2 handle her bare bosom. So, is her bosom still bare wen she was talking 2 emeka and co. Edit that area well.

sure, i will do that

princesa: yeah frank that part needs clarification...

every other part was ok..... kudos



'shit' muttered priest
this correction whatever can be so funny

lol

frank3.16:


ok, i will have do more talkng on that, but i want you to visualize her lookin shabby, perhaps part of her boobs was exposed... but i will do some more work there



thanks on the discreet angle, thats a mistake on my part...

Frank 3.16: for God so love the world, that he sent frank, that whosoever beliveth in him, shall not perish in boredom but shall have everlasting fun.

Eeeeehn! Na u biko.
Well done. Comment reserve until the final update.

Wow!..frank! i most admit. This is an action package, suspenses drillin and thrilling novel...i realy enjoined eva bit o it up 2 this moment ...au i wish u can turn it 2 home video..it'l surely b fast sellin movie.
Once again gud work n kip it up..nd thnks 4 keepin mi glue n busy wit this wonderful n fasincatin novel o urs...
Pls..i cnt wait 2 d final show down.

Frankenstein, I no wan disturb because I know say u go everly deliver.... Kudos man.....

alhabeeb: Wow!..frank! i most admit. This is an action package, suspenses drillin and thrilling novel...i realy enjoined eva bit o it up 2 this moment ...au i wish u can turn it 2 home video..it'l surely b fast sellin movie.
Once again gud work n kip it up..nd thnks 4 keepin mi glue n busy wit this wonderful n fasincatin novel o urs...
Pls..i cnt wait 2 d final show down.

thanks guy... its nice to know that my story kept you spell bound. ur testimony means so much to me

penzino: Frankenstein, I no wan disturb because I know say u go everly deliver.... Kudos man.....

definitely, I will deliver

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