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Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by Nobody: 2:59pm On Oct 30, 2013 |
Anybody missed me? It's been a while. Glad to be back.. Been sooo busy. Yeah, so, Kay is gonna update today.. So excited.. Thanks for sticking around through Kay's absence. Was due to circumstances beyond his control.. Y'all are appreciated much.. St TeeKay, say all u want o. I am watching u in 3D |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by meracool(m): 3:38pm On Oct 30, 2013 |
Beesqueezy: Anybody missed me? Somehow..... Only God knows where you and KMJ went to... All I want tonight is an update oooo |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by Nobody: 3:49pm On Oct 30, 2013 |
meracool: You don't wanna know |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by adisa204(m): 5:54pm On Oct 30, 2013 |
I thought blade was a vampire movie,in wat way is this story alike to blade.Don't knw y somepple wud just want to beef a very good writer like you.Well oga me kay even me I have being busy of late,schooling in calavi,Benin republic.na y I never get time to cheer u up jare.I can't wait for 8pm.Big mummy bee I hail ohhh,sexitee I also hail ohhhh.Owo meji fun baba kay,ride on bro. Yours trully, Adisa.
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Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by kayemjay(m): 8:02pm On Oct 30, 2013 |
Yay!!!! This is my 1001st post. Happy Millennial posting to me. [size=14pt] PREVIOUSLY ON “AN EVENING WITH EVA”: [/size] “Why did Shina have to die?” – Sean “Shina was compromised. He made contact with the other side” – Sophia “Serves him right anyway. I have to go now. I’m already behind schedule.” – Sean “Here Lies The Remains of Tawo Marcus Kushim. Brother, Friend, Son.” “You had it coming, didn’t you T? But guess what? Our code still remains. A life for a life” – The General “Have you been interviewed?” – HOPS “I did everything that was presented to me sir.” – Ambrose “When you are in the Capitol, call me directly. Congratulations Peter.” – HOPS “Shhhhhhhh….It is me. Don’t do anything rash Eva.” – Sean “That was for leaving me in a Male Toilet for hours. Couldn’t you think of somewhere else?” – Eva “You are getting desperate sir.” – Sophia “You underestimate me girl. I don’t do desperation. Never. I made a mistake with Giwa once. I never make the same mistake twice. Let’s just say, I am going to have my pound of flesh.” – The General “I thought you said you do not do desperation. If you kill the boy, is that not exactly what it is? A desperate act at revenge?” – Sophia “I lied.” – The General “What…wha.. what.. am…i..doing…here. Wh…who…who…are…you…people?” - Ahmed “Shhhhhhh. Quiet. The General hates noise.” – Ope “Frankenstein. It’s Da Vinci.” – The Colonel “I am going to deliver the Chip to you tonight. Here is your passkey.” – Frank “Thanks Frank. Now we are even.” – The Colonel “If you contact me again Da Vinci, the next time you wake up will be in hell.” – Frank “Dad? Is this really you?” – Eva “Stay where you are Eva. We don’t want to have ourselves a blood bath. I said don’t fucckking move girl!” – The Colonel “What do you want?” – Sean “I will contact you in nine hours Sean. Or is it Agent Bravo? I think this would be a good time to call your Sidekick, Bruno. I intercepted his email.” – The Colonel “Your father is right. He would not have come all this way for nothing. Let’s get out of here.” – Sean “My name is Special Agent Ken. You just passed your interview. Time to go.” – Agent Ken. “What have I gotten myself into?” – Ambrose “Code Red. Abort Mission.” – Sophia “Set up a blockade at the Maitama intersection. I need eyes in the sky! I want him dead or alive! I prefer the former. Somebody, get me that bastarrd!” – Special Agent Ken [size=14pt] AND NOW. . . [/size] The General paced the huge sitting area in the mansion. He was furious. His face contorted with rage. He looked at Sophia for the umpteenth time. “How the hell was he uncovered?” The General asked. Sophia was surprisingly calm. She sat on the single sofa and crossed her legs, with a glass of champagne in her left hand. She had gotten used to the General now. He had stayed with her for days now and the enigma which she saw him as had gradually worn off. She had huge respect for him. She still saw him as a father figure. Even though she no longer cowered or trembled at his every bark. She sipped the alcohol slowly and dropped the glass back on the table beside her. “It was The Colonel.” Sophia replied after a few minutes looking straight into the General’s eyes. “Giwa Haruna?” The General asked surprised and continued “I thought Ambrose’s cover was 100 per cent fail safe. I need a damn explanation!” The General screamed hitting the glass center table with his right fist. The table broke in pieces with some pieces of glass lodging in between the General’s knuckles. He showed no sign of hurt or pain. He stood straight and carefully picked out the tiny shreds of glass that his knuckles had embraced. “Tell me how it happened” He said, taking out the last two visible shreds of glass. Sophia was unmoved by his sudden burst of anger. She knew he was losing it. She had only seen him this uncontrollable once, when he was denied autonomy over the South West Region of the African Conglomerate of Undercover Operations. Sophia was able to calm him and help him re-strategize. He later went on to win the appeal and was the head of the Conglomerate till date. That was seven years ago. She was not ready for all that at the moment. She had her own demons to take care of, which included finding Eva and Sean. “The Colonel left clues. He wanted us to know he did it. He was able to crack the server codes and bypass the rigid firewalls. He had help from a certain Frankenstein. Bee Hive is finding a hard time tracking Frank. The Colonel has not made any demands yet but I am sure he will soon.” Sophia said. “I should have killed him when I had the chance!” The General retorted. “It is not your style. You bit the tiger’s tail when you smoked Ahmed. You know how much he cared for the detective. I wonder how you got desperate and lost control of the calm and demeanor that made you the most feared person in all quarters.” Sophia replied. She had long dropped addressing him as sir. They had returned to the way they were years ago when she lived under his roof. He preferred it that way. “I needed to stamp my authority! Killing Ahmed was the only way to send that message S. Don’t you see?” The General replied, sitting on a chair opposite his ward. Sophia felt sorry for him. His hand was bleeding slowly. “You need to take care of that.” Sophia said. “I’ll be fine. What else do I need to know?” The General asked “Bee Hive deployed a smoke screen and they now have the coordinates of The Colonel’s location. We are looking at a very wide area and it will take about fifteen agents to flush him out. It’s too risky and a long shot. I would not advice it. Besides, something tells me he would be expecting a barrage of agents. He has most probably set up booby traps and little diversions.” Sophia advised. “What’s our best course of action?” The General asked. He took out a handkerchief from his shirt pocket and bandaged his bloody knuckles. “Wait him out. If we rush, we would be playing directly into his hands. He is on his turf. We need to draw him into our terrain. We need to look unconcerned. Act nonchalant. But we would be vigilant. He is currently out for blood. He wants to avenge Ahmed as soon as he can. And he knows he has an advantage. When he sees that we are not acting, he may feel that we did not get his message. He would want to strike again. This time, a little deeper and harder. And he can’t do that in hiding or on his turf. He has to come out. And then, we’ll have him.” Sophia said. The General pretended to think for a while. Sophia’s intelligence had always astounded him. He had initially been thinking about storming the coordinates Bee Hive had given and take out The Colonel with brute force. He had done that before. Three years back, he had stormed the Gulf Coast south of the Bakassi when he got intel that Drago was hiding there. Drago had cloned Bee Hive and was negotiating with the British to sell the information. The General had been searching for Drago for months and when he had finally gotten his location, he stormed the hideout and took down Drago, assault style. He was thinking of taking similar action against The Colonel but he had doubts. The Colonel was very smart. He had taught The Colonel many of the things he now knew and could use them against him. The Colonel could predict his moves. He had to do something he would not normally do under the circumstances. Sophia had given him the perfect alternative. “Where are we with Bee Hive?” The General asked. “All data files have been rewritten and coded with Radeon encryption. All agents’ history have been wiped and replaced with forged identities. All missions have been changed. Our database is safe. If The Colonel were to present his hacked evidence anywhere, he would be running a wild goose chase.” Sophia replied. “Hmmmm…” The General snorted. There was a moment of silence between the two veterans. After a few minutes, the door to sitting room opened. Austin came in, supporting Ambrose on his shoulder. Ambrose was holding his stomach. His once white starched shirt was now stained blood red. Sophia got up instinctively and helped put Ambrose on the long couch. The General just sat on his chair looking. He showed no sign of emotion, care or feeling. He just stared coldly at the events unfolding in front of him. “How is he doing?” Sophia asked Bruno, putting two fingers on his neck to feel his pulse. She got a weak pulse. “He’s lost a lot of blood. I tracked his distress call to a toilet in a mall in the outskirts of Lokoja. I could not take him to a hospital. It’s a miracle he is still alive.” Austin replied. Just then Ambrose groaned. He opened his mouth but no words came out. The General got up and walked to where Ambrose lay. “Lieutenant, how are you feeling? What really happened?” The General asked. “He needs to rest sir. I think he’ll come around. Can I have some time alone with him sir?” Sophia said, looking at the General and then Austin. The General folded his arms while his right arm came up to his jaw. He scratched his hairless jaw for a few seconds as if in deep thought. He needed to know what exactly happened. He needed to be there when Ambrose came to. However he needed him alive. He put his hands in his pant pockets. He felt the tiny but powerful voice transmitter in the depths of his right pocket. “Okay. I will be in the Visitor’s lounge. I demand that he be made available to me immediately he comes to. And that is an order.” The General said, walking towards the door. “Roger that sir.” Sophia replied. Austin also got up from the arm of the four-seat long cushion settee. He looked at Ambrose, shook his head and went after The General who was already ahead of him heading towards the door. The General brought his right hand from his pocket to open the door. As he turned the knob, he released the tiny bean sized bug that was in his hand, blocking the bug’s landing with his legs so no one would see. It landed softly on the Persian rug that filled the wide room. The General opened the door and stepped out, turning right towards the visitor’s lounge. Austin wasn’t any wiser. He had no idea what had just happened he went out after the General and turned left heading to the guest bedroom. As Austin shut the door behind her, Sophia smiled. She had seen the little stunt the General pulled. Her trained eyes had caught the fall of the transmitter. He was hiding something and she had since had her doubts about him. If he trusted her, why did he want to eavesdrop on her? She walked to the door and squatted by the tiny bug. She did not touch it. She examined it carefully. It was an ultra-powerful listening device. The NODE-01 Jaguar. It had the capacity to relay sounds clearly up to 100 meters. She got up, leaving the bug where it was. She went back to Ambrose and whispered in his ears. “Coast is clear. Meet me in the bathroom now!” Ambrose opened one eye. Then the other. He looked around. Sophia was already headed towards the bathroom. He got up from the chair and grimaced. He actually hurt himself when he jumped on the train. But it was not as bad as he made it seem to Austin and The General. He had contacted Sophia when he got off the train and thanked her for saving his life. She had asked him how bad the situation was and he had told her everything he knew. She advised him to fake being hurt, get some more blood on himself and contact Austin. Ambrose had had a tricky moment when Austin tried to take off his clothes to access the extent of injury to his stomach area. Ambrose knew that he could not afford to have his fake injury found. He had groaned and screamed terribly and Austin backed off. Austin felt sorry for him and promised to get him to the mansion so Sophia could look at him. He did not attempt to check Ambrose’s injury again. When Ambrose got to the bathroom, the tap attached to the hand wash sink was rushing at full capacity. The shower was also running. The sound of rushing water would interfere with the transmitter’s reception, blocking the bug from detecting their voices. Sophia sat on the closed toilet seat and beckoned him to come close to her. He got in front of her and sat on the ground, leaning his back on the bath tub. She got out her phone and typed a message: “Did you bring the chip?” She handed the phone to Austin and he read it. He cleared the message Sophia typed and replaced it with his. “Yes I did.” Ambrose typed. Ambrose handed the phone back to Sophia. He got up and walked to the hand washing sink and bent low before it. He put his ‘peace’ fingers in his mouth, gagged on it, and vomited in the sink. He put his hand in the disgusting goo and fished out a black rectangular micro sim. He opened the tap, flushing the goo down the sink and rinsed the micro sim. He walked back to Sophia and handed it to her. “How did you get it?” Sophia asked curiously in a barely audible whisper. “As we approached the police car that was supposed to take me to the Capitol, your message came in. I freed myself from the agent by hitting him just below the ribs. I used the opportunity to grab his smartphone from his side pocket. When I got on the train, I realized that I was being tracked with the phone that I had stolen. I took out the sim and left the phone on in the train. It would be a while before they realize that they have been barking up the wrong tree.” Ambrose replied. “Good job Ambrose. Are you sure you don’t want anyone to check you out?” Sophia asked, getting up from the toilet seat and heading for the door. “I think I am fine.” Ambrose replied. “Good. You need to keep up the act a little while longer. Maybe until after tomorrow.” Sophia said with a tone of finality. “Can I get some sugar in my room? It would really speed up my recovery.” Ambrose asked with a mischievous smile on his face. Sophia smiled, turned and walked up to him. She kissed him deeply and fully on his lips, sucking his lower lips, her tongues flicking in and out, teasing the palates of his mouth. Ambrose squeezed her br3asts as his essence stood at attention, raging like a wild bull. After what seemed like forever, Sophia detached herself from him, eyeing him seductively and stepping two steps back. Ambrose tried to come forwards, attempting to continue the action. “Hey tiger. That was just to say thank you. Will send a hottie into your room in ten minutes.” Sophia said, putting a hand on his chest to stop him from coming any closer. She licked her lips, bit her lower lip and looked at his gr0in area. His body went up in flames of desire. She turned her back on him and wiggled her hips as she shut the door behind her. Ambrose unbuckled his belt and looked into his pants. His desire needed to be satiated. He walked out of the bathroom and went to his room. **************************************** It was a very hot afternoon. The sun was scorching hot and people were sweating as they walked along the streets. Sean walked along the busy Obalende road, heading for the lonely street North of the small roundabout. He got to a very tiny busy street. He heard screams of “Yaba!!! Yaba going bus!!!” from the scores of commercial buses that lined the streets. As he took a left turn, someone bumped into him hitting him by the shoulders. Sean did not look back. He just smiled and continued moving. The person who hit him wore a hood which covered his entire head. He already knew who it was. He put his hand inside the side pocket of his blazers and felt the tiny piece of paper that was not there a few minutes ago. He kept moving forwards, not knowing exactly where he was going. When he saw an empty tricycle, he quickly sat in it. He took out the paper and read the content: MEET ME IN IKD TONIGHT. Tearing the paper to tiny shreds, Sean got out of the tricycle and tracked back the same way he came. He walked for a while, turning corners abruptly, stopping suddenly and sometimes just turning and heading back the same way he came. He continued to move around in circles, making sure that whoever it was that was tailing him got lost along the way. When he was certain that he had lost any trackers, he moved beside buses, crossed the road a few times back and forth, and zigzagged his way until he got to the Barracks and opened the back seat of a grey G-wagon. “How did it go?” Eva asked as Sean settled in beside her in the back seat. He just looked at her and smiled. He looked at the rear view mirror and met the gaze of his driver “DRIVE!” Sean commanded. 9 Likes |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by Nobody: 8:05pm On Oct 30, 2013 |
Nice one.. After such a long break |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by kunki90(m): 8:25pm On Oct 30, 2013 |
hmmmmmmm, wonderful job kayemjay |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by philcz(m): 8:32pm On Oct 30, 2013 |
nyc one Kay.. |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by Sexitee03(f): 8:46pm On Oct 30, 2013 |
Wwooww!!! U got my heart racing, very good work dear, now the action is back. Can't wait to read what's chasing Sean oo. Good job. |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by merryglaze(f): 9:26pm On Oct 30, 2013 |
I've been a ghost reader and i'm really enjoying this piece....don't get me wrong i appreciate u updating but u promised us 8pages and sorry to say but this is kinda short.....anyways thumbz up and more ink to ur pen |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by AnnNini(f): 10:06pm On Oct 30, 2013 |
Nice story u got. U got me glued to my phone every week day by 8pm. But this update is sooooooooo short after waiting for 5days *smiling* I WANT S0ME MORE. |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by Kessleek(m): 10:32pm On Oct 30, 2013 |
NICE ONE KAY |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by DzTzl(f): 10:32pm On Oct 30, 2013 |
AnnNini: Nice story u got. U got me glued to my phone every week day by 8pm. But this update is sooooooooo short after waiting for 5days *smiling* I WANT S0ME MORE.wn it comes to.A.E.W.E we all r oliver twist, oga kay, mre ink to ur fone.... lol, nice one |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by Therock5555(m): 10:37pm On Oct 30, 2013 |
Sexitee03: i hope u don reply my mail abi, scarce sha. Remeber say u never tell me wetin you be wan discuss with me at first o. Abi am i not worthy to know it again. |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by Therock5555(m): 10:38pm On Oct 30, 2013 |
Sexitee03: |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by Ariyke: 12:29am On Oct 31, 2013 |
Nice one kay |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by Nobody: 12:34am On Oct 31, 2013 |
Yaaaaaaaaaaaay!!! Good to be finally bac online. Mehn I've got work to do o. My fone spoilt when d story was on page 19. Kayemjay baba. How u dey na? Eku is na. Beesqueezy nd Sexite. I hail o. Hope u guys r gud, nd u've been taken care of Kay. Pls don't forget to remind me about d@ stuff I mentioned I'd send u both in december. Oya lemme go nd start reading...........by mornin I shld b on d same page wit y'all. |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by kunlesehan(m): 1:33am On Oct 31, 2013 |
hmmmmmm ... KiliManJaro, killing us softly since 2008. 1 Like |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by rossyV226(f): 7:45am On Oct 31, 2013 |
been a ghost reader n av been enjoyin dis piece. nyc 1oga kay! |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by mimifavour(f): 8:56am On Oct 31, 2013 |
Finally kayj. Tanx joor box's work |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by kennybelle: 10:26am On Oct 31, 2013 |
...and i smiled. I love d location used, was able to picture it all n it made d story come alive. Thanks 4d update |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by kingobozy: 1:36pm On Oct 31, 2013 |
Nice one kay.. Realy enjoyed the post.. Although you got some characters twisted.(switching Ambrose for Austin and vice versa) you still did justice to today's post.. This Sophie personality is still a mystery.. She bleeps with Eva, Sean and Ambrose..hmmmm wonder if she has also felt the warmth of the General's erection. |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by kingphilip(m): 2:32pm On Oct 31, 2013 |
AnY update at 8? |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by Kslib(m): 2:36pm On Oct 31, 2013 |
Its getting hotter! |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by Sunny360: 4:40pm On Oct 31, 2013 |
Kay,Ur head dey dere! I salute. *Adjusts seat & waits 4 8pm* |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by rapmike(m): 7:19pm On Oct 31, 2013 |
* carries a sharpend cutlass inside* abeg who be d i.di.ot wey talk say kaymay dey photocopy dat substandard tin cald Blade series, if i catch u eh? I go first matchete u smal, then sue u 4 open slander. I predict too,bt comparing dis masterpiece 2 sum films is totally unacceptable! Warn urself. Kaymay, wel done bro,dos guys dnt write so they cnt understand how difficult dis ting cn be, if anoda 1 cums, cal me make i show am road well,well. E ku she. |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by JeffreyJamez(m): 7:56pm On Oct 31, 2013 |
adisa204: I thought blade was a vampire movie,in wat way is this story alike to blade.Don't knw y somepple wud just want to beef a very good writer like you.Well oga me kay even me I have being busy of late,schooling in calavi,Benin republic.na y I never get time to cheer u up jare.I can't wait for 8pm.Big mummy bee I hail ohhh,sexitee I also hail ohhhh.Owo meji fun baba kay,ride on bro. Seriously?!!! Ppl still go to that dead school?!!.....smh!! |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by kingobozy: 8:48pm On Oct 31, 2013 |
8pm ooohhhh |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by emsheddy(m): 10:04pm On Oct 31, 2013 |
i no make mistake nominate u at all. U too much my guy. Btw, 8pm don pass ohh. No update?? |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by ninja4life(m): 11:11pm On Oct 31, 2013 |
Nice story,oga kay come update o. |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by biolanurat: 11:53pm On Oct 31, 2013 |
Whew!!! Finally I caught up wit u guys. L hv bin a ghost reader all dis while but can't kip it any longer. KMJ u r da bomb. U r somtin out of dis world kip it up. But pleeeeeaaaseee try and see if u can get a gud producer and director to make it into a seasonal film, I bet u it will cart away all d AMA awards for d year. Thumbs up to ur babe. She stood by you all dis while. I admire her. Gudluck in all ur endeavours. I see u soaring high. The sky is ur starting point. |
Re: An Evening With Eva (2013 Triple Award Winner in Crime. Thriller. Action.) by Sunny360: 12:03am On Nov 01, 2013 |
*Enters room,looks left,looks ryt,does not see Kay nor an update,zooms out & leaves dis message: * #Waiting..waiting...# HNM 2U all! |
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