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Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by valyzubxx(m): 11:42am On Oct 19, 2013
cheesy cheesy Kai!! This Chistar01 guy no go kill person oo...I'm seriously loving this masterpiece. Ride on bruv!
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 12:44pm On Oct 19, 2013
valyzubxx: cheesy cheesy Kai!! This Chistar01 guy no go kill person oo...I'm seriously loving this masterpiece. Ride on bruv!
#Bless grin...

Seems my regular commenters have abandon me... sad embarassed
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by tbabstobadt(m): 12:51pm On Oct 19, 2013
chistar01: #Bless grin...

Seems my regular commenters have abandon me... sad embarassed

no be so jawe...school is tying us up
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by skyscraperTM(m): 1:06pm On Oct 19, 2013
I'm so loving this story!!
peaCE
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by MsSpaqs(f): 1:17pm On Oct 19, 2013
Lmao
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by tinahrex(m): 2:16pm On Oct 19, 2013
chistar01: #Bless grin...

Seems my regular commenters have abandon me... sad embarassed
baba we dy bhind u......FIRE ON!!.....
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Winnie1950(f): 3:32pm On Oct 19, 2013
Welldone Mr chistar u are doing a great job. UPDATE! UPDATE!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!!! UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!! don't keep me waiting
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Eniqurl(f): 3:44pm On Oct 19, 2013
#followinq.
TeamJummy.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Mador(f): 5:26pm On Oct 19, 2013
3face and pcubecheesy grin....anyways kip d ball rolling I'm enjoying yaa story.more greese to yaa armpit.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 5:49pm On Oct 19, 2013
sкчscrαρεr™:
I'm so loving this story!!
peaCE
lol..thanks bro
tbabstobadt:

no be so jawe...school is tying us up
hmmm.. Oh, school boys grin, u are excused
Ms Spaqs: Lmao
I comment my reserve
tinahrex:
baba we dy bhind u......FIRE ON!!.....
brotherly! I see you
Winnie1950: Welldone Mr chistar u are doing a great job. UPDATE! UPDATE!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!!! UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!! don't keep me waiting
yes ma, I won't!
Eni~girl:
#followinq.
TeamJummy.
lol.. I see you.
Mador: 3face and pcubecheesy grin....anyways kip d ball rolling I'm enjoying yaa story.more greese to yaa armpit.
lol, armpit ke? Was there ever greese in my armpit? grin, thanks sha, don't mind me, those were the first names that crossed my mind grin.

Seems ALMOST all of them are back grin *dancing skelewu* welcom back guys grin, I guess I have been UN-abandoned(whatever that means) grin.

*NEW UPDATE IN A BIT!!!*
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 6:03pm On Oct 19, 2013
EPISODE 17.

Unlike the first time she walked into the office of Mrs Ogbonaya anxious and scared, this time, she felt the exact opposite of how she felt the first time.

As Jummy approached the office, she started hearing voices from Mrs Ogbonaya office and thought it would better for her to wait before she knocked or walked it, so she stood at the door waiting, and unintentionally eaves dropping.

"I thought I told you to sack the girl?" She heard a male voice say.

"Sack her? Why would I do that? She's arguably the best employee in this company!!!" A female voice said.

"Cynthia! You have been daring me for too long in this company, just so you know, you are just a co-acting branch manager, I am an acting manager too and I can choose to file a report of incompetence to the board in a minute and you'll be out!" The male voice replied.

"Stephen, I really don't have time for this you chit chat! You can go ahead and file the report as a matter of fact, I'm curious about what you would write in it. That I promoted our best staff to a position she merited? Yea! Good luck with that!"

Stephen seemed to have calmed down a little, "You didn't even consult me before promoting her, is that how it is now? We don't tell each other things anymore?"

"Hey! Don't even go there oh! You didn't tell me that you had a wife and two kids when we were dating did you?"

"For crying out loud! Look at the luxurious name tag on your table! It says 'MRS OGBONAYA,' You are now happily married, why can't you just let the past be the past." Stephen paused and watched Cynthia facial impression change for the angry one to a sober one, "That was personal and this is business, you letting your personal feelings get ahead of your professional feeling. Don't worry, I assure you that this won't go like that!" Stephen replied.

"Whatever! I'll be here waiting for you to do your worst!" Cynthia fired back.

Stephen stormed out of the office, he suddenly walked into Jummy at the door, and nearly ran her over, he adjusted his suit and added, "Oh! Great! She has even heard everything, now the whole company would know about us! Thanks a lot Cynthia, thanks!" And he walked away.

Cynthia walked to her door and gave Jummy a deadly stare, "if you speak just one word about what you just heard to another person, I'll make sure you'll be sweeping the office and cleaning the windows by monday!" Cynthia said and slammed the door on Jummy's face.

Jummy was speechless, "funny to think that this so called co-acting manager, Stephen, was hitting on me when I first resumed work at GNP," she thought and walked to the personnel office, she knew better than to knock at the door.

* * * * *

Everyone in the studio seemed to be in a trance, even the camera had stopped rolling in surprise, the question in everybody's mind was, "did 3face just yell cut? Or are we hearing double?" Their question was answered soon enough as 3face broke the silence.

"What's all this JAMB questions on my personal life? Zainab, what you told me was that this show was just a casual interview on relationship talks. In fact am out of here," he stood up and walked out of the studio, leaving everyone still in shock.

It took the question of Prosper to bring back every one to life, "Are we still shooting this or what?" He asked.

E.A saw the opportunity slipping from his fingers so he replied, "Yes, we definitely are, we just have to start all over again since we can't feature 3face on the show again, thank God it was a live show," he replied.

"We have a show at UNILAG by 8pm, so I'm not sure starting all over would be possible since we've got to consider traffic, Akoka isn't exactly at the back yard of the Island, you know?" Philip replied.

"So what's going to happen now?" E.A answered.

"I dunno, maybe we would come over some other time, Prosper, let's go now, the time is almost 7PM and we would need to head home to prepare before going," Philip said and stood up.

"Going home isn't such a good idea, let's just drop by any good boutique and buy something nice to wear, you know as UNILAG students are na?"

"Sure sure.. That's a better idea, good thing I brought enough cash with me, let's go then..." Prosper stood up and they both walked out of the studio without saying any word to anyone else.

E.A glared at Zainab and felt like shooting her, he looked away and screamed, "Okay, we are done for today, everyone pack up! I guess there won't be any special edition anymore thanks to someone here," he was glaring at Zainab now.

Zainab was transfixed on her chair and couldn't move, she just looked down at her feet and waited for everyone to pack up and leave before going to talk to E.A, she knew he was really pissed at her.

After 20 minutes of continuous noise of pissed staffs, the studio was empty with just Zainab and E.A in it, E.A picked up his bag and walked to the door, he looked at Zainab and said, "lock up when you are done, we wouldn't want to find our gadgets next time we are here, good night"

Zainab wanted to say something but couldn't find the nerve to, she just looked at E.A walk away.

It took her a minute for her to gather enough courage to run after E.A, she was lucky to have caught him just as he entered his car.

The first thing that came out of her mouth was rather silly, "aren't you taking me out to dinner again?"

E.A looked at her and if his eyes had guns, then Zainab would have been shot, luckily for her, it didn't, he didn't reply her but inserted the key in the ignition and zoomed off, leaving Zainab standing in the middle of the road looking "stewpeed".

She walked back in to the studio, picked up her stuffs, locked the studio and drove home.

* * * * *

After an hour that seemed like it didn't want to end, work hours was finally over and Jummy walked out of company excited, she had just been instructed by the personnel manager that she would resume ASAP, and ASAP for Jummy meant the next day, she was dying to tell Zainab the good new so as she waited for a cab to take her home, she called Zainab on her cell.

It took Zainab four rings before she finally picked up, she had been on her bed sulking, she still couldn't believe how bad her day went.

"Hello," Zainab said in a low tone.

"Hey babe, how far na.. Or wait, that's not important. You won't believe what happened today at work!!" Jummy yelled.

Zainab assumed it was one of Zainab boring gist about some guy she was crushing on and hoped would talk to her one day, "what?" She asked reluctantly.

"Guess!" Jummy replied excited.

"I hate guessing, I know you have been dying to tell me so just go ahead and tell me before you explode!"

"Ohhh.. Just try and guess na, please"

Jummy just said please? Okay, that's a first, Zainab thought, "okay, if you insist, errr... Obama proposed to you?" Zainab replied mischievously.

"Be serious jhur! Try and guess!"

"Ohhh, Jummy now you have made me curious, you know am a horrible guess, just tell me," Zainab replied calmly, Jummy surely made her calm or laugh without even trying.

"Okay okay! I just got promoted to assistant branch manager!!!" Jummy yelled.

"Wow! Go girl!!! Yea!!!!" Zainab yelled.

"Yea!!!" Jummy joined her and they kept on scream "yea" over the phone for the next five minutes.

"Hope you coming to pick up in my house now? No sleeping tonight oh!!!"

"Ahh.. Am coming girl, but I'll have to sleep oh, I resume duty tomorrow and wouldn't want to be late on my first day as assistant branch manager!!" Jummy replied, they both seemed to be screaming at each other over the phone.

"Who sleeps on her night of promotion? Jummy don't dull me oh!" Zainab replied.

"Taxi!!" Jummy suddenly yelled at a taxi that was zooming by, it stopped and she quickly hopped in.

"Hello! Are you still there?" Zainab asked.

"Yes yes, I am, am heading to your house now, just go and put on something hot!!! I have a feeling I might reconsider sleeping tonight."

"Confirmed girl!! Okay! Just holla when you around, I need to go and dig out that my mini skirt that I haven't worn for ages," Zainab replied and hung up. She went to her wardrobe and started throwing stuffs out of it all around the room in search of the miniskirt, she had already forgotten about all that happened in work.

* * * * *

TIME: 9:42PM.

About an hour later, Jummy got to Zainab house and ran inside, she quick grabbed the pair of clothing she left in Zainab house for emergency partying situations like this.

In another twenty minutes, both ladies were packed in Zainab's car as they drove to the island in search of any nice club the could spend the night in, little did they know that things don't always go the way we planned.

TO BE CONTINUED.

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Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by ARareGem(f): 6:29pm On Oct 19, 2013
Definitely still fllg. smiley
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by gennysq(f): 6:34pm On Oct 19, 2013
Serious Suspence! Wetin go happen Ooº°˚ ˚° can't wait!
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Eniqurl(f): 7:37pm On Oct 19, 2013
'Dafuq! U've started wid ur suspense aqn. Sha kum nd update oh.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by skyscraperTM(m): 8:48pm On Oct 19, 2013
Whenever Jummy and Zaynab are together something always goes wrong. . .



CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by kingphilip(m): 9:02pm On Oct 19, 2013
Dis got me laughing 'aren't u taking me to dinner again'
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Daniel2802(m): 9:53pm On Oct 19, 2013
kingphilip: Dis got me laughing 'aren't u taking me to dinner again'
she wan get free food.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 10:11pm On Oct 19, 2013
ARareGem: Definitely still fllg. smiley
smiley
gennysq: Serious Suspence! Wetin go happen Ooº°˚ ˚° can't wait!
cheesy, watch n see...
Eni~girl:
'Dafuq! U've started wid ur suspense aqn. Sha kum nd update oh.
grin
sкчscrαρεr™:
Whenever Jummy and Zaynab are together something always goes wrong. . .



CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!
lol, u know them well enough.
kingphilip: Dis got me laughing 'aren't u taking me to dinner again'
lol, you dey mind the babe? grin
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by spaq: 10:50pm On Oct 19, 2013
Hehehehe..

Cnt wait to see d part where jummy n john get 'wedded' cheesy
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by BabieGhagha(f): 11:00pm On Oct 19, 2013
dis zainab nah big ful.she thinks lyk bat sometimes.me i dey gbadun jummy anyday anytym.#team jummy#
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Chuksemi(m): 11:19pm On Oct 19, 2013
I believe you. Nice work. Best story I ve read so far. You know what that means.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Eniqurl(f): 11:42pm On Oct 19, 2013
Xo ur nt updatinq 2nyt #sAd
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by tinahrex(m): 12:10am On Oct 20, 2013
spaq: Hehehehe..

Cnt wait to see d part where jummy n john get 'wedded' cheesy


N i cant wait to see d part where Zainab n ha Bonyface lawyer get wedded too...#hehe...
Nyc 1 Mr.Chistar!.....#Anticipatin
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by skyscraperTM(m): 10:41am On Oct 20, 2013
tinahrex:

N i cant wait to see d part where Zainab n ha Bonyface lawyer get wedded too...#hehe...
Nyc 1 Mr.Chistar!.....#Anticipatin

More like Zaynab weds E.A



I think the main story has not begun, we're yet to know who is the babe in total control.

This story is full of Action, Suspense, Comedy, Drama, Love, etc. Me likey!! grin
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 1:04pm On Oct 20, 2013
spaq: jummy n john get 'wedded' cheesy

tinahrex:
Zainab n ha Bonyface lawyer get wedded too...#hehe...
Nyc 1 Mr.Chistar!.....#Anticipatin
sкчscrαρεr™:

Zaynab weds E.A
grin
Laugh wan kill me die!!!! See this people oh, tory just dey start and una don dey predict who go marry who, to be frank with you guys, I don't even know who would marry who yet because I still have some new characters to introduce to you guys and you know there would be fights, break ups, heartbreaks, s3x clips (my favourite grin) and many other relationship issues, this story might be the longest and bestest(pardon ma grammar grin) I've ever written, so its still too early to predict yet grin.. Good point though, maybe Zainab would marry boniface and E.A, like the indians do grin, just a thought.
Babie Ghagha: dis zainab nah big ful.she thinks lyk bat sometimes.me i dey gbadun jummy anyday anytym.#team jummy#
lol, *whispers in ear* they are collectively the "Babe(s) in total control of theirselves," I just named the story Babe In Total Control of Herself because I loved the effect the title: "B1TCH" gave.... you would know Zainab "otherside" later on grin, as one great philosopher said: "Our experiences and actions shapes us and makes us who we are".
Chuksemi: I believe you. Nice work. Best story I ve read so far. You know what that means.
lol, yea, I do... Thanks and m flattered.
sкчscrαρεr™:

I think the main story has not begun, we're yet to know who is the babe in total control.

This story is full of Action, Suspense, Comedy, Drama, Love, etc. Me likey!! grin
just like Mz_chistar said (where is she BTW?), you are quite right, I'm just wondering, if this intro is all of "these" how would the main story be? grin, In God we trust. Thanks.


Okay, I think I have talked too much already, thanks for you guys comments and thoughts concerning the story, I really appreciate.

That being said, am of to type a new update, I just came back from church few minutes ago - you know how igbo churches like to waste time, anyway, I plan on making today episode special, so as usual, expect it by 6PM here, I'll post it on my blog as soon as I type it finish though, which might be in an hour of two, so please go and check it out there grin... Luv you guys..

PEACe
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Zarathena(f): 5:09pm On Oct 20, 2013
Hmmmm.... Its getting really interesting.
Good job Chistar! More hairs to ur beards grin
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Daniel2802(m): 5:15pm On Oct 20, 2013
Give us sunday update na.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Eniqurl(f): 6:03pm On Oct 20, 2013
06:10pm.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 6:13pm On Oct 20, 2013
EPISODE 18.

"Caro your body necessary... Caro carry leave story... Caro they make my head they turn... Caro they make want to loose am... Caro they make my head they bang... Caro they make my head they scatter... I'm looking for Caro..." Those were lyrics from L.A.X and Wizkid hit track, which blared from the speakers which were strategically placed round the "Club Underground, Lagos Island".

*** (I'm still wondering what tha fucck L.A.X was doing on that track. This was obviously the first track which would have brought him to the limelight but he sang just one verse and left wizkid to do the rest, am pretty sure most people fast forward the song when it gets to L.A.X verse... Okay, I'm already talking off point, maybe I'll write a complete music review on this song and post it on my blog - just a thoughtgrin"wink ***

Anyway, as Zainab and Jummy stormed into the club, it seemed like time froze for a split second as everyone turned to stare at them in total silence, a waiter who was passing by with a tray filled with drinks collided into a couple who were dancing like their lives depended on it and BOOM!!!... Well, I'll leave you to imagine what happened to the waiter afterwards, just know that he spent the next 6 months in a hospital.

Jummy and Zainab were both aware of what their presence in the club was doing to all the men and they both smiled as the waved their hips while heading to the bar.

They got there, sat down and the bar tender finally came to attend to them.

"Can I take your orders please?" He asked in the most polite way he could, he wanted to give a good impression.

"Err.. I'll have the usual," Jummy replied.

Zainab was shocked, "the usual? You mean you've been here before?"

"You no think say I go just carry anyhow club na..." Jummy replied.

The waiter was getting impatient, couldn't they place their orders and talk later? He wondered, "do you need anything ma'am?" He asked Zainab.

"Oh! Am sorry, just bring two of anything my friend her says is the "Usual," thanks."

"Are you sure you want to drink what I ordered too?" Jummy asked, not exactly because she cared though.

"If you can drink it and make it the usual, then I can drink it too na! After all it can be as bad as that drink I drank some days ago at 'Spot One'," Zainab replied, reminding Jummy of that drink she drank on the night she and a certain Clement got intimate.

"Okay oh, its your problem, so where are the cute guys na, or aren't we attractive enough? This one no guy has approached us yet..." Jummy asked.

"Don't worry, just give it a little time... Time my friend," Zainab replied with grin, she sounded convincing and sure.

* * * * *

Meanwhile, at the other end of the same club sat three guys: Henry, Mathew and Oscar, they were talking and of course, drinking.

Amongst the three, only Henry wore sunshades - its funny how people where sunshades to a night club, what an Irony?.

Anyway, Henry was a fairly tall and hadsome guy of 29, "beans" brown in complexion and he had that kind of lips that would make you want to kiss him. Below his left ear, on his neck, was a tattoo; the tattoo looked like a cross if viewed from the front and like a star if view from the rare, the artist who drew it definitely did a swell job.

Mathew on the other hand, was almost as tall as Henry and of the same age grade, but was "M.T.N" yellow in complexion, he had already lost count of the amount of times people mistook him for an albino, and yes, he wasn't bad looking atall.

Thirdly, Oscar was sorta like the exact opposite, he was roughly the same height with a maltina bottle - okay, I agree that am just exagerrating but you get the idea, don't you? He also a swollen lip which looked like he had hit the lip on something hard, or maybe he was involed in a fight, who knows?

They were among the host of guys who were spell bound by the appearance of Jummy and Zainab.

Oscar was the one who broke the spell as he spoke first, "buts guys, did you see those two hot chicks that just walked into the club few minutes ago?" He asked the others.

"Oh boy, I see them oh, chai! That fat one yansh na die!!! E be like Julius Berger trailer," Mathew responded almost immediately, he seemed to be anxious.

"I they tell you!!! That "lepa" one come fine die and her b0obs no be here!!!" Oscar added.

"The bad thing be say, them pass our level, if we go follow them talk now, them fit slap us oh," Mathew said.

"Abi oh, I no know why we even come this kind club self, the girls wey get levels, get levels scatter. The girls wey no get levels, be like ashewo!" Oscar said with remorse.

"You just talk my mind now now, see that ashewo for that corner self," Mathew said, pointing towards the direction.

"No mind the mumu girl, she just they allow that bad guy press hin br3ast because of hin buy malt for am..." Oscar added, "forget that girl first, I for like follow those two hot chick talk na," he said, trying not to change the topic.

Mathew suddenly bursted out in an uncontrollable laughter, "Guy no think am! Ordinary 'hi', you no fit talk."

"Wetin be your own na, I just they talk my mind, who talk say I wan actually do am?" Oscar asked, already frustrated.

Oscar suddenly starred at Henry who had been quite all through their discussion and just sipping his red label wine in peace. Judging from his calm behaviour and choice of drink, he seemed to be a lot different from the other two. The other two guys were busy drinking beer.

"Guy, why you they quiet na? Abi the girls yansh don make you deaf and dumb?" Mathew asked.

"Eh? Wetin you just talk?" Henry asked.

"Hin say, your mama don born new pikin," Oscar replied sarcastically.

Henry mind seemed to be somewhere else, he just mumbled what Oscar just said in confusion, "mama? Pikin? Born? Wetin you they talk self?"

Oscar and Mathewboth started laughing at Henry, while he just starred at them in confusion.

"Guy, you no see those chicks wey just enter club now now?" Oscar finally asked, when the were done with laughing.

"Oh! Na those girls they make una piss for una pant?" Henry asked and started his own round of laughter.

"Make we set 100k say you no fit follow them talk now!" Oscar replied in annoyance.

"Oya na! Set am! I go carry that slim one number come now now self as a bonus," Henry boasted.

"God save you say I no hold cash here, I for chop your money," Henry replied, genuinely sad.

"I no hold cash here self, I go drop my Iphone! Since na useless phone you they use, just drop your car keys! You go use the 50k bail am when I win!" Henry urged on, he seemed sure of himself.

"Oya na! I no wan hear abeg oh or biko when I chop your money oh, if you never bail am in 3 days time, I go enter computer village, sell the phone oh! You agree?" Oscar added.

"Deal! I agree," Henry replied and then handed over his phone to Mathew, Oscar did the same to his car keys. Mathew was expected to act as the "boardman."

NB: boardman in this context simply means a refere and judge.

As soon as Mathew had made sure both Oscar and Henry knew the predicament of what they were about to do and let them know about the rules, he gave Henry the go ahead, Henry stood up and headed to the bar where Zainab and Jummy, who were the "hot chicks," were sitted.

* * * * *

Meanwhile, AT THE BAR.

"So how was your day by the way na? I'm sure you and that Prosper guy of P-cube would have at the very lease exchanged numbers.. I trust you na..." Jummy said to Zainab.

"Collect number ke? Abeg change the topic, I don't want to talk about it..."

"Hmmm, you would gist me later on sha, that's all I know," Jummy replied.

"Whatever, enhen, I've spoken with that lawyer oh, that Boniface guy, funny to think that I was expecting one old man that would probably be ugly too..."

"Isn't Boniface an old man?" Jummy asked, she had picture Boniface in the same manner as Zainab.

"Tah! He is far from old oh, the man is H.A.N.D.S.O.M.E! To the core!" Zainab took her time to spell out the word, "to be frank with you, I even undresses him with my eye."

"E be like say I go follow you go your next meeting oh, how did the meting go anyway?"

"It was annoying at the beginning but it got better and I guess everything is now in order, he is working of getting an arrest warrant presently," Zainab replied.

"Oh! Arrest ke? Arrest who? Richard?" Jummy was alarmed.

Zainab was about to say; "Yes na! Don't you know..." When the waiter arrived with their drinks, she was cut short.

Henry who was already close enough to Zainab by now, slipped on the seat beside Zainab and grinned at her even though she wasn't even looking at him.

"And I thought I was the only one who drank 'Ice on the block' in here," Henry said to Zainab referring to the drink she held.

Zainab was startled, "Were you talking to me? What did you say?" She asked as she turned to him.

"I'm talking about your drink, 'Ice on the block,' its my favourite, I didn't know beautiful ladies drink it too," he rephrased.

"Hmmm, so this drink has got a name?" Zainab replied indifferently.

"Yea, it does, its just a mixture of about four different drinks and its exclusive to just this club, or maybe I just haven't seen it anywhere else..." He explained.

"Oh, seems you know quiet a lot, that's good to know," Zainab replied, still indifferently, she hadn't even looked at him properly.

"Just taste it first and then you would understand better," he pushed, and was amazingly still grinning.

"Okay, if you say so," Zainab replied and took a sip of the drink, it's taste was superb! Confusing though, but still superb, she turned to Henry and smiled, "it tastes err errr..." She couldn't find the right word to describe it.

"Don't bother, I know how you feel. Am Henry by the way," he replied and stretched his hand for Zainab to shake him.

Zainab leaned back a little and gave him the "body check," the body check is just something girls do to guys who approach them, they take a quick picture of the guy's complete appearance and let their brain process the shoes, belt, hair style, clothes and even wrist watch, then if the guy meets up to their standard, they might consider the guy but if not, they just ignore the guy.

In Henry's situation, Zainab gave him a pass mark of seventy out of a total of hundred. She took his hand and shook him, "and am Zainab".

"Yes!" He said to himself, "all that remains now Is to get your number, I might as well have some fun while am at it," he thought.

Jummy was already tickling Zainab leg to remind her she was still by her side, Zainab got the message.

"Oh, I forgot my manners, meet my friend, Jummy..." She pointed to Jummy, Henry stretched his hand towards Jummy, she took it and he introduced himself to her, afterwards he turned back to Zainab and tried to start a conversation.

"So what are two beautiful ladies like you guys doing here on a monday night? I thought cute girls only visit clubs on fridays?" Henry asked, hoping Zainab would get he was trying to complement her.

"Errr... We just celebrating something," she replied, she didn't think it would be right to give him the full gist.

Henry saw an opportunity and he jumped into it, "Oh! Then you are very lucky," he replied

"Why?" Jummy replied looking confused.

"Am the party rocker! You both came here to celebrate, so why are you sitting down?" Henry asked and without waiting for a response, he stood up and held Zainab's hand.

In a mocking tone, he asked, "would you dance with me?"

Zainab was about to refuse out of courtesy when Jummy jumped in and said, "go jhur, I'll be fine, trust me"

"Okay then, if you say so!" She then turned to Henry and said, "hope you know how to dance?"

Henry laughed, "I'll let you find out yourself."

They both walked to the dance floor to the amazement of both Henry's friends who were watching from a distance and other guys in the club who were still staring at the "hot chicks."

Just like clock work, the D.J instantly changed the song to Davido's Skelewu and the whole club went wild. People who were sitting stood up and started dancing, those on the dance floor went all haywire on the track.

Jummy wasn't left in the dark, minutes later, a certain Clinton guy walked up to her and another few minutes later, they joined Zainab and Henry on the dance floor.

Henry did a good job and soon enough, Zainab was tired soon enough so they went back to the bar and talked a for a longer time. Clinton and Jummy later joined them and they all got talking.

* * * * *
2:49AM.

They were all having so much fun that didn't even notice how far time had flown. Jummy eventually got tired and needed to go home so she could catch some sleep, after literally begging Zainab for about thirty minutes, Zainab finally accepted, so she, Jummy, Clinton and Henry all walked out of the club staggering like drunk people.

They got to the car park and walked to the exact spot they had parked the car but the car was no more, they magically became sober immediately.

"Jummy, was it not here we parked the car?" Zainab asked looking confused.

"Err.. Ye.. I think so.." Jummy stuttered.

TO BE CONTINUED.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 6:24pm On Oct 20, 2013
Zara-thena:
Hmmmm.... Its getting really interesting.
Good job Chistar! More hairs to ur beards grin
thanks babes, but if you see my face, u might want to rethink that "beards" statement grin
Daniel2802: Give us sunday update na.
given grin
Eni~girl:
06:10pm.
lol, I was dropping finishing touches
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by hibty(f): 6:30pm On Oct 20, 2013
See chistar ooo,I actually love L.A.X's part,wizkid was jst repeating..... D lax's voice z very sexy *grins* nyc update!!!
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Chuksemi(m): 7:05pm On Oct 20, 2013
Hmmm. Nice story. But I really think zainab will never marry E.A, NEVER EXPOSE THE TRUE EXTENT OF YOUR ANGER TO A WOMAN YOU ARE STILL TRYING TO COURT.

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