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The Day The Clouds Turned Red (crime Story) / 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] / All In A Circle...(a Crime Story)-- The Completion (2) (3) (4)

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by rantex1: 9:38am On Dec 11, 2014
maltida never know work oooo just too amateur
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 9:57am On Dec 11, 2014
Rounakid:
D9ty7
D9ty7
D9ty7
...make mah mb no finish for refreshinq dis paqe for d 97th time...
Stop romancinq dat ya babe and com and update ooo!...
ONEMANSQUAD: U will have to lend me dat u sniper... Incase...


I hope I dont here you well??
you want to use what when am arround??
oms if you give him anything I will cut off your jt
Mr. dnt try that here



*( draws out my 12mm from hw boots and shows it to him and he shivers..
I would be tempted to use it in you)*
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:16am On Dec 11, 2014
--continuation--
Clement and his team waited a minute or two for Leiutenant James and when it seemed he won't be returning, they decided to advance.
"You, you and you. Stay behind here. This is the extraction point. Be at alert." Clement instructed in low tones.
Sylvester went down on his knees.
"Sly, any problem?" Clement asked.
Sylvester raised his head up to face Clement.
"Any problem?" Clement asked again.
"Something is wrong." Sylvester said.
"What do you mean?" Clement asked.
"I need to be with my family now, most especially my wife." He replied.
Clement gave him an unimpressed look.
"I have this strange feeling, I am afraid something bad might have happened to them. I need to check on them." He explained.
"Are you that superstitious?" Clement asked.
"Its not about superstitious believe or anything. I just have a feeling something is not right." Sylvester replied.
"So what do you want?"
"I demand to be discharged this minute." Sylvester replied.
"Granted!."
Clement and the rest of the guys continued without Sylvester who has immediately picked race and with the help of his flashlight ran in the way which they had come.
"Wait." Clement instructed his men.
One hundred yards away from their point, they could see one of the two soldiers molesting one of the girl held up in the cell.
"I'll sneak up behind him and kill him, incase things go out of hand, storm the place. Okay?" Clement instructed as he silently sneaked into the tunnel and expertly walked past the most illuminated part of the tunnel where anybody outside or inside the tunnel can see him, but one way or the other, he wasn't spotted. Not even his movement was heard.
He sneaked behind the first soldier who was backing the iron door into the cell. He stabbed him on the neck and allowed him to fall on his partner who was lying on top one of the girls held hostage. Before the second guy who was lost in the s.ex he was having, Clement had turned his head and it gave a cracking sound like his neck bone had left their socket. He fell down and died too.
"Shhhhh! No noise." He said as he bent down to untie all of them. He checked his time peice, five minutes to go before the oxygen in the mask run out and the opening into the underground slam shut.
"Come with me." He said lifting the girls up, from the look of things, he knew these girls won't survive running for five minute or even standing for five minutes. He had to do something fast. They were all between the ages of fifteen and nineteen.
He had to device a plan, he bent down and picked the youngest of the five girls, he put her on his back and proceeded to walked out of the cell.
"We'll come with you." The other four girls said.
"No, we'll come and get you." He replied.
"No. Please, lets go with you." They pleaded.
He had no choice than to let them have their it way. He was now thrown in between saving five lives and his own. He knew there was no way he could exit the illuminated part of the tunnel without being spotted, five people going at a time, and to say they are girls, they will always make mistakes because they are scared.
Then an idea struck him. It looked like the best idea to him, but very risky. He knew if he were to use the idea, he would successfully take the five girls out to safety, but they would be spotted. It is better than loosing all the girls.
He picked an iron rod from the cell and led the girls out. A few yards to the large bulb illuminating the area, he strucked it hard on the bulb which shattered and everything went dark. Out of impulse, and to his utmost suprise, the girls all ran away and he followed them, their foortsteps very silent that no one could hear them.
"Who is that?" One of the men asked.
"Power outage?" Another one asked flashing his torchlight to the passage where Clement and the girls had gone.
"Storm the place." Clement said immediately he got to the point where his men were waiting for him.
"Get these girls out of here." He said to one of his men.
The guy, a soldier accepted the challenge which is the get out of the underground. Now that the oxygen in the mask had run out, it remained to be seen how they'll pass the underground room without inhaling the dangerous gas released.
It was an advantage for Clement and his men, now that the inner part of the tunnel has been thrown into darkness. They can attack the men without being seen. But the problem is pulling the trigger on the right target in the dark.

END OF CHAPTER TWENTY
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by codedbaby(f): 10:26am On Dec 11, 2014
Hmmmmmmmm. All iz well.

D9ty7 Weldon
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ajaxtea(m): 10:37am On Dec 11, 2014
1) This Matilda of an agent is gonna a bad agaent with the trap she is setting for Victoria......

2) Victoria please don't go back to ur vomit...

3) Slyvester am sorry for the loss... But is anybody avin a re-think, his wife might nt die, she may just pass out due to shock leaving Hakym and D.K that she has died....

4) Kharl corp cover is almost blown... Suspect that underground leads directly into Kharl Corp....

5) Ngozi should not act stupid, Jay is ready to pay for all he did....

6) I'll be back *** In Terminator's Voice *** for more comment..


Nice Updates from D9ty7 and welcome back Bro....
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by macpetrus(m): 10:37am On Dec 11, 2014
The Action Begins
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kristen12(f): 11:00am On Dec 11, 2014
I just pray that nothing should happen to Rachel. Welldone D9ty7
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Fatalveli(m): 11:04am On Dec 11, 2014
Waiting for chapter 21
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Ziziola: 11:21am On Dec 11, 2014
Hmmmm......... Take heart Sylvester. Can't wait to see Kelvin's action
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by afamjb: 11:34am On Dec 11, 2014
clement na you wan be rambo u wan save d world.....
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by florjay(f): 11:47am On Dec 11, 2014
The source of ur wisdom shall never dry
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Flakeey(f): 12:28pm On Dec 11, 2014
afamjb:
flakeey na him oh ...u remember he was fat and couldn't run as well plus he always loved his mum.


yes ke
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 12:33pm On Dec 11, 2014
Sylvester, sorry oooo.
Kelvin....mmmn, are u sure u hv d heart 2 kill ur bros wife? Will ur bros ever 4giv u?
Rachael, I strongly believe u won't die.
Clement, ur family is in serious danger o, even u sef, in dat underground. May God help u o.

D9ty7, dnt disappoint me ooo, if Rachael die ehnn?
Mmmmmn. Thanks 4 d update. Expecting more.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 12:49pm On Dec 11, 2014
I am suprised to see the likes of Adeh calling for the safety of Rachel. Weren't u d one calling for her immediate execustiom sometyms back?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 1:24pm On Dec 11, 2014
D9ty7:
I am suprised to see the likes of Adeh calling for the safety of Rachel. Weren't u d one calling for her immediate execustiom sometyms back?

Yes......but, u see, I changed my mind, especially because it's Kelvin dat wnts 2 kill her, ehn, I dnt wnt Kelvin 2 be her killer.
So u beta change ur mind too, or else............!!!
U knw wat I mean.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Flakeey(f): 1:48pm On Dec 11, 2014
ghen! ghen!! ghen!!!

D9ty7, ori e wa nbe
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 1:57pm On Dec 11, 2014
adeh39:


Yes......but, u see, I changed my mind, especially because it's Kelvin dat wnts 2 kill her, ehn, I dnt wnt Kelvin 2 be her killer.
So u beta change ur mind too, or else............!!!
U knw wat I mean.
Abeg o. We'll talk about it when we meet upstairs.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 2:03pm On Dec 11, 2014
Big shoutout to those who have commented so far today. It is because of y'all that I'll be dropping two quick updates before 5pm.
Flakeey, Adeh39, Kristen12, florjay, afamjb, Ziziola, Fatalveli, macpetrus, Ajaxtea, codedbaby, stuff46, rantex1, shankies215, femyodsky, Ianjum, Moyosi, tecno4life, Kocvalour and a whole host of others.
I love you all.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by onosj(f): 2:23pm On Dec 11, 2014
My brother 4rm another mother, ur river of creativity will never ever run dry.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by pricelesslove(f): 3:26pm On Dec 11, 2014
wow, I have been reading this story in silence, I didn't want to comment, but I can't keep it anymore. Dear you are very good at what you are doing, and what I like about you is the way you update, may God strengthen you and give you more wisdom. keep it up dearie
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Cashio(m): 3:32pm On Dec 11, 2014
D9ty7:
Big shoutout to those who have commented so far today. It is because of y'all that I'll be dropping two quick updates before 5pm.
Flakeey, Adeh39, Kristen12, florjay, afamjb, Ziziola, Fatalveli, macpetrus, Ajaxtea, codedbaby, stuff46, rantex1, shankies215, femyodsky, Ianjum, Moyosi, tecno4life, Kocvalour and a whole host of others.
I love you all.
....and my name was not mentioned....leaves thread sobbing.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Omololamide(f): 3:35pm On Dec 11, 2014
i have been MIA for a while, glad to be back to read some assured updates... weldone...... nice work and keep it up........
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 3:52pm On Dec 11, 2014
Oga ur son is hungry 4 more. Plz dnt let rachel die o
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by JigsawKillah(m): 4:07pm On Dec 11, 2014
Damn!
Just got here after a long read
Oga D9ty7 u r too good jare
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 4:15pm On Dec 11, 2014
D9ty7:

Abeg o. We'll talk about it when we meet upstairs.




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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Shebarh(f): 4:19pm On Dec 11, 2014
v been a silent reader all dis while and i must confess ya a talented writer.. cnt wait to know d end of dis story
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 4:20pm On Dec 11, 2014
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u guys should comment or i pull d trigger
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 4:24pm On Dec 11, 2014
oga D9ty7 if rachael die 4 ur manuscript abg change am shap shap


#jst find a way nt 2 kill her oo or else

u knw wt dis is used 4 ryt??
















Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 4:27pm On Dec 11, 2014
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by omotalkie(f): 4:40pm On Dec 11, 2014
Eiya! I feel for sylvester's wife. she shudnt die oo
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 4:42pm On Dec 11, 2014
I still want racheal dead..and as for matilda don't give up
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 4:50pm On Dec 11, 2014
Two updates drop any moment from now. And I appreciate, onemansquad, Vibra, Omotalkie, stuff46, JigsawKillah, Bluestarry, Cashio, Omololamide for their comments.
And I welcome Shebarh into the house.

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