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The Day The Clouds Turned Red (crime Story) / 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] / All In A Circle...(a Crime Story)-- The Completion (2) (3) (4)

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:13pm On Nov 08, 2014
Congratulations to you Jennimma. You just proved to the world that noise-making is not all that counts. All other contestants were lousy about their campaign which was the reason why I decided to stick with Jenny all thru.
The fact that she is a literature-lander is a major plus to her but she is very humble and deserves it. She was always at every thread telling them to vote for her and coming back to thank them even if they didn't vote. Am glad my votes counts and the person I voted for won.
Am waiting for the new Nairaland queen to bring the crown here and celebrate with us. Until then; let me drop this update for our reading pleasure.

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 10:14pm On Nov 08, 2014
D9ty7..............thanks for updating after one million years............well done
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:17pm On Nov 08, 2014
Lol! Thanks for reading. But before you go, check this out as we celebrate our new beauty Queen.
adewealth027:
D9ty7..............thanks for updating after one million years............well done
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:17pm On Nov 08, 2014
--continuation--
The doctor walked into the ward to see an active Clement and his friends chatting happily.
"I can see you are good now." The doctor said.
"Doctor Kolade, I am more than okay now. I no longer feel pains in my underarm save for some occassional pull on the veins." Clement replied.
"That's how it should be. You know, we should be thankful to God that you were not hit on the vein, it could have been worse. You'll be feeling the occassional pains on your veins for a few weeks of which you'll be taking pain relieving tablets. I tell you, it will only take a few days before you stop feeling the pains." Doctor Kolade explained.
"Meaning he can go home now?" Kelvin asked.
"Mr Kelvin, its only in a couple of hours that he'll be discharged. Let all neccessities be concluded and all paper work observed." Doctor Kolade cautioned.
"Don't mind him doctor. I don't know his problem. You are not the patient and you are eager to go home." Clement said.
"You are the reason why am here." Kelvin replied.
"What about me?" Ngozi asked smiling sheepishly.
"I came here majorly because of you too."
The doctor ran a few examination on Clement before he walked out of the ward.
Clement has been thrown into deep thought since he noticed something going on between his brother and his colleague. As far as he knows, Ngozi is engaged to a young banker name Tobiloba and its only in a matter of months when they'll be tieing the knot. He knew his brother to be a playboy and someone who doesn't know what it means to be in love. And seeing them hitting it up in just twenty four hours is a cause for concern for him.
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Rachel woke up with a start. She's been having sleepless night since she discovered her father-in-law's secrets and she needed someone to talk to so as to ease the burden created by keeping the secret to herself alone. She knew talking to her husband will only take thing out of proportion and cause family breakdown, enemity between father and son. Her own life would be in danger and as far as she is concerned, death is not an option. She has one person in mind, her kid sister, her only confidant and friend.
She picked up her phone and punched in some digits.
"Hello Chidinma." She said immediately the person at the other end picked up the call.
"Hello big sis. Whatsup?" Chidinma asked.
"Am good, you?"
"What do you expect? How is my baby doing?" Chidinma asked.
The two sister talked for a few minutes before Rachel made known, her reason for calling.
"Chidi." She called.
"Yes Rachy."
"When are you coming to Lagos?" Rachel asked.
"Maybe next month. You know there is a public holiday next month. I should be in Lagos by then."
"Haba! Next month is too far now. I know if you want to visit your boyfriend, you won't wait till next month o. All you'll do is take a few days off. You have to be in Lagos this weekend. No excuses." Rachel said.
"As your lordship pleases ma'am. But I would be disappointed if your reason for calling me is not worth it." Chidinma warned.
"Trust your big sis na."
Rachel ended the call after chatting for a few more minutes.
Chidinma was a university graduate currently doing her youth service corps in Oyo state. Even though she was a graduate of the University of Benin, Edo state.
Onome walked in as soon as she dropped the call.
"You are awake already?" She asked.
"Yes." Rachel replied.
Onome took a sit beside her on the bed.
"We both know you are not taking to the doctor's advice. He said you need rest and you've only slep for forty-five minutes." Onome began.
"Onome please. Am not interested in all that. The most important thing is I slept regardless of how long." Rachel said rudely.
"Am sorry." Onome apologised.
She stood up at once and made to walked out of the room.
"You can call me when you are ready to eat so I can come and serve you." Onome said sadly. More like a maid that she was than the friend she had become.
"Onome." She was forced to call her.
Onome turned to face her.
"Am sorry." Rachel said.
Onome nodded her head slowly as a smile appeared on her face. She walked out of the room.

--to be continued--

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:19pm On Nov 08, 2014
Viewing this topic: lait, Paradise163(f), adewealth027(f), MosesIgb(m), Onyi42, Masky2000, D9ty7(m)..... Your comments and thoughts on the story so far
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 10:22pm On Nov 08, 2014
E be like say na me first read dis one..........nice write up though......I know u are so eager to kill Rachel but plsssss let her give birth first b4 doing justice to her........bikonu D9ty7
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onyi42(m): 10:23pm On Nov 08, 2014
nice story….. turn it to movie and it will be a bomb
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Niwdog(m): 10:25pm On Nov 08, 2014
Is like i dey follow ade 4 back. Kelvin na runs guy, if his to die, i pray he impregnate ngozi before that happens
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:51pm On Nov 08, 2014
What of Sandra? His official girlfriend.
Niwdog:
Is like i dey follow ade 4 back. Kelvin na runs guy, if his to die, i pray he impregnate ngozi before that happens
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:53pm On Nov 08, 2014
Am I eager to kill Rachel? I don't think so. What if at the end of the story; she lived happily ever after with Clement and her baby?
adewealth027:
E be like say na me first read dis one..........nice write up though......I know u are so eager to kill Rachel but plsssss let her give birth first b4 doing justice to her........bikonu D9ty7
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:53pm On Nov 08, 2014
Appreciated boss!
Onyi42:
nice story….. turn it to movie and it will be a bomb
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 10:57pm On Nov 08, 2014
"Happily ever after".......na Cinderella u dey write? Lol.........anyways dats my own observation because Rachel dey seriously put head for where her head no suppose reach........as for that Kelvin,make he no just near Ngozi or else..................................na me go carry SSS come cash am
D9ty7:
Am I eager to kill Rachel? I don't think so. What if at the end of the story; she lived happily ever after with Clement and her baby?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:12pm On Nov 08, 2014
If SSS come cash am wetin dem go charge him with?
adewealth027:
"Happily ever after".......na Cinderella u dey write? Lol.........anyways dats my own observation because Rachel dey seriously put head for where her head no suppose reach........as for that Kelvin,make he no just near Ngozi or else..................................na me go carry SSS come cash am
Sincerly, Rachel is just being a good Nigerian. She wants to stop insurgence and she is in a pole position to stop it. She has the greated secret and evidences, she is connected(as the wife of a serving Inspector)
Maybe she is just taking the wrong steps.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 12:05am On Nov 09, 2014
Good morning to y'all
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:38am On Nov 09, 2014
--continuation--
Sandra pulled up in front of a Chineese restaurant in the town. She picked up her phone and dialled a number.
"Hello babes, where are you?" she asked.
"Come into the restaurant. Table fifteen." Thefemale voice at the other end replied.
"Okay. Am on my way." Sandra said some prayer before she alighted.
Just like they had been waiting for her all day or they knew she'll be coming. Camera flashes could be seen all over her. Some angry youths mobbed her trying to get something off her but with the quick intervention of the security men, she was led into the restaurant.
"Madam. You should have parked your car in the executive car park to avoid things like this." The security man walking her inside said.
"Its normal. They are like my shadows and I can't run way from it. These are the sacrifices you pay for being a celebrity." She replied.
Another security at the door pushed the door open for her and she walked in.
"Enjoy your stay ma'am." The first security who led her to the doorway said.
"Thanks." She replied.
She turned to the security at the door.
"Please where is table fifteen?"
"The room adjacent to this. Third table from the door."
Sandra walked away thinking how the restaurant authorities did the numbering of the tables. The first hall has over thirty tables and she was made to understand that table fifteen is in the next hall. Chineese and their way of numbering. She thought as she walked towards her friend Nkechi who was seated with a guy.
"Welcome dear." Nkechi said opening her arms for a hug.
"Thank you." Sandra said sitting down beside her friend in a table for four.
"Straight to business. This is Don, he'll be helping us on this particular issue." Nkechi began.
Sandra nodded slowly. As much as she hated getting involved with things like this, she realised it is the only way she could stop paying exhorbitant amount to some blackmailers.
"Don will be getting us one of his most competent girls who will handle this case for us. You guys talk to yourselves." Nkechi continued.
"Good afternoon sir." Sandra said curtly.
"Good afternoon." Don replied.
Don was a well built light complexioned guy who looked handsome but mean. He smiled once in every one minute, he stood 6ft 7inches from the ground.
"My girl Vicky will be her in no time." Don assured them as the waiter brought Sandra's orders.
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Vicky was unsure of how best to handle the situation but she has no option.
"Where are you off to?" Her motherr asked.
"Mum, I need to get to the departmental store downtown. I just realised I have exhausted my sanitary pad." She gave one of the most flimsy excuses ever even though every human being would buy her lie.
"You can take my car and please return as fast a possible." Her mother said.
"Thank you mummy." Victoria said picking the car keys from the table and walking out of the house.
Her mum seemed understanding most times but at times, she could be one of the most annoying human alive.
"God bless you mummy." She muttered as she sped out of the compound; with one place in mind, the chineese restaurant downtown.
As much as she wanted to put an end to this criminal live of hers on her mother's insistence, she still find herself committing more crimes. Its just evident that she is connected to the act from birth.
Maybe its in her gene.

--to be continued--
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:42am On Nov 09, 2014
Keep your comments coming guys..... Next update after 12noon.
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Niwdog(m): 7:48am On Nov 09, 2014
I don't like sandra
D9ty7:
What of Sandra? His official girlfriend.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Michaellegend(m): 7:53am On Nov 09, 2014
D9ty7:
Keep your comments coming guys..... Next update after 12noon.
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hmmmmm....HV been following this story since the beginning and this is my first comment on this thread. I will say you are doing a great work here. ride on boss!!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Michaellegend(m): 7:55am On Nov 09, 2014
D9ty7:
Keep your comments coming guys..... Next update after 12noon.
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hmmmmm....HV been following this story since the beginning and this is my first comment on this thread. I will say you are doing a great work here. ride on boss and happy new week!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 7:59am On Nov 09, 2014
of course its in her gene... Lion no dy born goat o
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Niwdog(m): 8:00am On Nov 09, 2014
Thumps up to yu D9ty7. I love the way you want to make the whole family of patrick to be united in crime
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Fatalveli(m): 8:04am On Nov 09, 2014
I knw dat D9ty7 never disappoint....nice one bro! Onemansquad, pass me two baby-oku, seven codeine and one sachet of ref-nun.... I get am 4 match 2dae, btw where's techno4life and smallpenis
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Melancholy(m): 8:23am On Nov 09, 2014
She's a recidivist. Her guess is the reality, someone should pls tell her it's in her blood. D9ty7, i dey follow u like moon
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 8:26am On Nov 09, 2014
Nice write up..................dis vicky sef.............na wah o
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 8:38am On Nov 09, 2014
Still following u lyk twitter.... Nice write up, more ink 2 ur pen... Keep it flowing.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:02am On Nov 09, 2014
Its a good thing to see you comment today.
Michaellegend:

hmmmmm....HV been following this story since the beginning and this is my first comment on this thread. I will say you are doing a great work here. ride on boss and happy new week!
You sure?
Onemansquad:
of course its in her gene... Lion no dy born goat o
No be my fault o! Na d plot dey drag them together.
Niwdog:
Thumps up to yu D9ty7. I love the way you want to make the whole family of patrick to be united in crime
I don't disappoint because God is with me. Abeg drink responsibly o
Fatalveli:
I knw dat D9ty7 never disappoint....nice one bro! Onemansquad, pass me two baby-oku, seven codeine and one sachet of ref-nun.... I get am 4 match 2dae, btw where's techno4life and smallpenis
Who go tell her now? Would you like to have her bb needle?
Melancholy:
She's a recidivist. Her guess is the reality, someone should pls tell her it's in her blood. D9ty7, i dey follow u like moon
Thanks ma'am.
adewealth027:
Nice write up..................dis vicky sef.............na wah o
Thanks ma'am
adeh39:
Still following u lyk twitter.... Nice write up, more ink 2 ur pen... Keep it flowing.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ChyEndowed(f): 9:26am On Nov 09, 2014
Work well done!........may d gud Lord continue 2 inspire u
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Melancholy(m): 9:26am On Nov 09, 2014
D9ty7:
Its a good thing to see you comment today.
You sure?
No be my fault o! Na d plot dey drag them together.
I don't disappoint because God is with me. Abeg drink responsibly o
Who go tell her now? Would you like to have her bb needle?
Thanks ma'am.
Thanks ma'am
Ma'am to me? U wan change me to woman nii. Lol
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by codedbaby(f): 9:37am On Nov 09, 2014
circle circle circle all na circle . Weldon D9ty7
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:39am On Nov 09, 2014
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 10:58am On Nov 09, 2014
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oga d9ty7 nice updates, next update please.
Happy sunday
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:09am On Nov 09, 2014
Update is currently in progress.
stuff46:

oga d9ty7 nice updates, next update please.
Happy sunday

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