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Re: Poetry Contest by macalurs(m): 12:45am On Nov 14, 2006 |
nilla: Thanks baby, you're awesome. |
Re: Poetry Contest by nilla(f): 12:47am On Nov 14, 2006 |
yayyyyyyy your back. where have you been?? I missed you |
Re: Poetry Contest by macalurs(m): 3:07am On Nov 14, 2006 |
This poem explains it: Warlords It started as a friendly duel, shots fired but we stayed cool; But time passed and fumes of gun-powder beckoned warlords of brute and power And in a flash, our innocent poetic playground, became a den where freedom found A world with neither rules nor tenets, where guns blazed and heaven rain'd bullets I bow to no king amongst villians of equal vile, and deem none amatuer, for each his style But stay I true to one: NILLA the Queen; when she order ''ARMAGEDDON!'' the battle begin. |
Re: Poetry Contest by macalurs(m): 3:22am On Nov 14, 2006 |
Don't mind me. . . . I just love epic movies. Don't literally interprete everything on the poem to equate my perception of the evolved thread. I've been checking in here often and my my, there're lot'a new faces (abi new usernames). But when the debree settles and the dust is swept off, big-mac and frank and genial (and others legit.ly) pick up where they all left off. |
Re: Poetry Contest by nilla(f): 3:27am On Nov 14, 2006 |
@ macalurs, wowwy, sweet and in tune with the times of the thread. |
Re: Poetry Contest by nilla(f): 3:29am On Nov 14, 2006 |
macalurs: i love epic movies too. meanwhile what did you think of my poem? Am i getting any better, or should i quit and just concentrate on judging |
Re: Poetry Contest by nilla(f): 3:39am On Nov 14, 2006 |
regarding the increase in #s yeah, i guess we'll just have to wait and see those that keep coming back. |
Re: Poetry Contest by macalurs(m): 6:33am On Nov 14, 2006 |
Yes you sure are getting better. See what happens is, after a while of writing with the same pattren and you feel you'd have exhausted everything there is to write with that style, then you'll evolve. Evolution in writting comes from research of other people's works, finding a role-model, and then try borrowing and modifying to you own. Meanwhile, there's alot to learn from this pattern you write with, and alot to write about. Enjoy yourself writting in that way only you write, while you write about everything you can (from experiences to fiction) You most assuredly will get better, and with time, get a better flow of words. Creativivity begets itself. Mark my words, by this time in 1yr, you'll be a genius of flow. notice how my writting style evolved? |
Re: Poetry Contest by nilla(f): 7:11am On Nov 14, 2006 |
@ macalurs, its going to take me a yrrrrrrrrrrr to be a genius of flow? Thats too long just kidding, I'm happy that I'm getting better Where's everyone?? somegirl, franc, Genial, denny, Chiluv,etc How can the judge be kept waiting |
Re: Poetry Contest by dennylove(m): 7:33am On Nov 14, 2006 |
Yes, back wit FULL FORCE!!!!!!!! check this one out. As I write, I'll sing this song for the greatest love I've ever known. To my heart, you have the only key, I beg of you, never set me free. I prayed to God for a love so true now, I, realize He already knew. In time my prayer WAS answered, the most wonderful woman HE BLESSED ME WITH YOU. What we share feels so right to say I love you every night. Wonderful moments shared, precious memories, still tell me you care. I see your shadow, as I lay myself to sleep. Dreams of you, oh so sweet in my heart, I will keep. Look into my heart, my life. Tell me, what do you see? can you feel the need, the want, as I to be your husband, you my wife. Much joy and happiness you've brought me. If I had life to live again, I'd want to with you, my lover, my best friend. Always and Forever, I'll love you till the end frm ''DENNYLOVE'' |
Re: Poetry Contest by nilla(f): 7:38am On Nov 14, 2006 |
mhmmm this keeps getting better. nice one Denny. Lets see what the others have to offer. People keep it rolling in |
Re: Poetry Contest by dennylove(m): 8:18am On Nov 14, 2006 |
NILLA,just don't want to-- ---because, you can't help but fall in LOVE wit me. I call this ; YOU ARE THE ONE I WANT I would climb the highest mountain, And walk the hottest desert sand, For it is you that I seek. I would cross the widest river, And swim the deepest ocean blue, For it is you I want by my side. You are the one, Who makes me whole, You've captured my heart, And touched my soul. You are the one, Who step in my life, Who gave me power, To do what's right. For you alone, Are my reason to live, For the compassion you show, And the care that you give. You came into my life, And made me complete, For each time I see you, My heart skips a beat. For you define beauty, In both body and mind, Your soft, gentle lips, When they collide with mine. For you are the one, God sent from above, The angel I needed, And whom I do love. it's me ''DENNYLOVE'' |
Re: Poetry Contest by franc1982(m): 11:25am On Nov 14, 2006 |
[center]'Missing You' In the silence of my heart, I’m left in the awe of you, I think but questions, That type you try but can’t drown. In this solitude, Imagination runs wild in nostalgia; Eyes shut when our lips met, A walk with hearts, Two tightly bound as one, Our embrace before the sun did us part, With tears as our aphrodisiac. Ages since you’ve been gone, My heart have soared every now in years, Always searching, never to be done, My beautiful and soulful ambiance, Where could you have gone? The sun now rises so late, Letting me walk through those memories, When the last tear drops, It embraces me, Until my lost is but found. [/center] [center][/center] |
Re: Poetry Contest by franc1982(m): 11:47am On Nov 14, 2006 |
@ Nilla I see you're the type that serve the best wine last. That was a very nice poetic tribute. How about an anthology of our poems on this joint? [center]' The very best of Nairaland '[/center] We can be the first to do that on the site. Thanks for the comment on ' Hope'. What about the middle stanza in 'Deja Vu'? Just kidding, LMAO!!! @ Mac It's good to have u back bro, See u still talking about the war, Lets let it go for now, More faces we can make mince of, We should do it real bad when it's U, Genial, Somegurl and me, And of course, the judge, now judges. @ Somegurl My heart is done, It's printing out ur poem now, When next i get on, U'll have it. @ Genial Where the hell are u at? U add a twist and u just disappear? Men, I don't fancy that at all. @ new users, It's one love here, If u hate, then, u'll be trespassing. Guess what, Violators will be shot, Survivors will be shot again. Poetically I mean. |
Re: Poetry Contest by mukina2: 12:06pm On Nov 14, 2006 |
a poem to steal your heart Within the first few moments I knew I was yours Within the first few hours I embraced your sweet kiss. Every second after that first I dream of you. Every day passing that first I hope to spend with you. True love dreams do come true The dream I have to live with you. True hope of everlasting love With the promises made after just the first hug. With all that I have I am willing to give. I promise you this My first true love shall be my last. |
Re: Poetry Contest by saintsam(m): 12:48pm On Nov 14, 2006 |
I think I should have stumbled over this thread long ago.I so much love u guys. keep the poetic world alive. |
Re: Poetry Contest by saintsam(m): 2:17pm On Nov 14, 2006 |
I AM AN AFRICAN. I am an African Not because I was born there But because my heart beats with Africa’s I am an African Not because my skin is black But because my mind is engaged by Africa I am an African Not because I live on its soil But because my soul is at home in Africa When Africa weeps for her children My cheeks are stained with tears When Africa honours her elders My head is bowed in respect When Africa mourns for her victims My hands are joined in prayer When Africa celebrates her triumphs My feet are alive with dancing I am an African For her blue skies take my breath away And my hope for the future is bright I am an African For her people greet me as family And teach me the meaning of community I am an African For her wildness quenches my spirit And brings me closer to the source of life When the music of Africa beats in the wind My blood pulses to its rhythm And I become the essence of music When the colours of Africa dazzle in the sun My senses drink in its rainbow And I become the palette of nature When the stories of Africa echo round the fire My feet walk in its pathways And I become the footprints of history I am an African Because she is the cradle of our birth And nurtures an ancient wisdom I am an African Because she lives in the world’s shadow And bursts with a radiant luminosity I am an African Because she is the land of tomorrow And I recognise her gifts as sacred samson. |
Re: Poetry Contest by Genial(m): 2:19pm On Nov 14, 2006 |
mukina2: Hmm, Princess. . . Is this a licence to get jealous? @ bigmac (Is that a big or small M?) It's nice to see you back. @ Franc, Violators will be shot, That reminds of someone. LOL @ Nilla. . . Well, bless your noble heart. Shall we open the dance floor? |
Re: Poetry Contest by mukina2: 2:30pm On Nov 14, 2006 |
wow!my king noo and wats with the dance floor i'll shoot the two of youwhere's esly? |
Re: Poetry Contest by Genial(m): 2:30pm On Nov 14, 2006 |
My Father |
Re: Poetry Contest by Genial(m): 2:33pm On Nov 14, 2006 |
mukina2: Well, in that case. . . do you have a lawyer? Just to make sure you don't stay too long in jail for manslaughter! I haven't seen Esly. Have you? |
Re: Poetry Contest by macalurs(m): 5:04pm On Nov 14, 2006 |
@Frank: I describe some things in "war terms" because it seems to paint the most vivd picture, should not mean I'm warlike. Someone's gotta be different up in here, or where's the artistry? @Genial: You coolashellmaketheladiesfeelgoodsonofagun. @Nilla: The best judge I ever had. @Allman: Jeez y'all too good. I just gotta keep up or lose meself in the rubble. @The ladies unwooed: Bring your friends and family, we got enough guys in here to make y'all feel good. Y'all are just too beautiful, we're still searchin' for the rightest words. |
Re: Poetry Contest by nilla(f): 7:33pm On Nov 14, 2006 |
dennylove, "you are the one i want" thats nice, looks like you like long poems. Whats my name doing at the top though? I did not understand that. franc, "Missing you" Who you dey miss self?? I'm kidding nice one. @ Nilla thanks for liking my tribute . I agree with you, we should combine all our poems. Mukina darling, your "a poem to steal your heart" is to die for. Simple but sweet. So who's heart are you stealing wow!my king noo meanwhile i already gave you my word, i ain't after the king. so pls dont shoot |
Re: Poetry Contest by nilla(f): 7:40pm On Nov 14, 2006 |
saintsam:everyone here is feeling that too. I absolutely love your "I am an African" poem. love anything that has to praise, or give hope to Nigeria & Africans Genial, @ Nilla. . .i don't feel like being beheaded on orders of the queen today but if your refering to the competition. yes. your "My Father" poem is nice. As usual i know i'd have known it was your poem without seeing your name. |
Re: Poetry Contest by nilla(f): 7:48pm On Nov 14, 2006 |
mac, @Genial: You coolashellmaketheladiesfeelgoodsonofagun. lol @Nilla: The best judge I ever had. A happy judge gives good points. keep making the judge happy. @The ladies unwooed: Bring your friends and family, we got enough guys in here to make y'all feel good. Y'all are just too beautiful, we're still searchin' for the rightest words.lol. rightest words indeed . |
Re: Poetry Contest by Genial(m): 8:46pm On Nov 14, 2006 |
My Beloved |
Re: Poetry Contest by somegirl(f): 9:12pm On Nov 14, 2006 |
Franc, I am looking forward to read whatever it is you are writing for me! Thanks in advance. Saintsam, I too love your poem called "I am an African". Beautiful! |
Re: Poetry Contest by Odeku(m): 10:08pm On Nov 14, 2006 |
make una dey waste time romancing the store there, i dey do my own for yonder. there is more to getting a lady than all that lie. |
Re: Poetry Contest by macalurs(m): 12:30am On Nov 15, 2006 |
@odeku: whatever |
Re: Poetry Contest by nilla(f): 12:32am On Nov 15, 2006 |
Odeku: spoilsport like you. If you dont want to appreciate or understand them byeeeeeeeeee |
Re: Poetry Contest by dennylove(m): 1:24am On Nov 15, 2006 |
i more poem then I REST MY CASE!!!!!!!!!!!!! MY STAR When God created heaven and he placed those stars above I knew right then the star I'd choose would fill my life with love. The greatest gift bestowed to me is the best recieved by far Cuz that's the day I met you Babe, and realized that you're my star. I can't forecast what life will hold but there is one thing I know That if we keep it watered well our plant of love will grow. The greatest gift bestowed to me is the best recieved by far Cuz that's the day I met you Babe, and realized that you're my star. You will always be the brightest star in the heavens of my heart and I won't despair when dark clouds near for my star shines through the dark. you are the greatest and happiest thing that have ever happened to me.MY STAR. frm ''DENNYLUV'' |
Re: Poetry Contest by Odeku(m): 1:26am On Nov 15, 2006 |
you and this your moth na Gd go save you, how I go appriciate when person dey lie say i be moon, i be star, i be light, na which kind yeye lie be that. abeg tell me wuz up, me i no get time for romancing the stone. all dem people dey compete so tell ask them wash your car, wash your clothes and on top of that cook you dinner and make wee see wetting hamatan do. stop all that lie show me the real deal. |
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