Hausa:
guy i no be u. Am a baller right from time.
Park well

GodzBELOVED:
What's yur course?

GodzBELOVED:
Isolo. Se o mo isolo sha? Lol

GodzBELOVED:
hmmmm. Geography is a social science course o.

cloaked: ....which wan be no offence again?...shey na we be Omole ni?...*waged my head a lil buh stylishly SMH-ing it*....lols

GodzBELOVED:
Oga Saikoloji, what are u thinkin o?

Olastep1: na wa o. So all this e-criticism is going on right behind me, huh? I think i should drop my macintosh and pick up my bullet-proof vest cos i may be hit by a stray e-bullet.
This gloatfenk never cease to amaze me... I can see u have a great flair towards writing but u dont realy know the basics. Permit me d sharp criticism. Trust me, i wouldnt call ur writings a peom. I would rather call it a figurative write-up. A poem dont just start from no where n ends somewhere. It doesnt involve so much slangs n abbreviations. My guy, i'm not poisoning ur mind. I'm telling u in a better position, that is, that u shud try learning what poems means. Do a little googleing.
And dont forget in a poem, u dont loose contact with ur audience. See, there's nothing bad if u accept what i said. The fact remains i strained my eyes to get 75% of what u mean. Though, its not bad but u can do better....

*wears my bullet proof vest already*

cloaked: ...hmmm!...dat's quite intriguing bloke!

kuiye:
Pls I'm not yoruba, can u interpret wat u sed

cloaked: ....ah!...my bad!!!...i guess, i need 2 get some rest nw!...nightie-night cutie!

#sleepingmode

Hausa:
haaa, story.
Laughing in greek
Place where i don live sef.
Ire-akari estate to be precise.

BINTI_LAYE101:
Hello ma, i'm from isolo too, where in isolo do u stay.

Hausa: u?

Hausa: i dint say anytin.
Mouth zipped

Hausa:
i tot so. Sleep talker

humbleboyy: so this guy stays in ma area sef,....was finking u stay at sokoto/niger republic.....no wonder u sound like a lasgidisian /winks/

GodzBELOVED:
u won't talk now,eh? U on 2go??

GodzBELOVED:

my course- Geography.

Olastep1: na wa o. So all this e-criticism is going on right behind me, huh? I think i should drop my macintosh and pick up my bullet-proof vest cos i may be hit by a stray e-bullet.
This gloatfenk never cease to amaze me... I can see u have a great flair towards writing but u dont realy know the basics. Permit me d sharp criticism. Trust me, i wouldnt call ur writings a peom. I would rather call it a figurative write-up. A poem dont just start from no where n ends somewhere. It doesnt involve so much slangs n abbreviations. My guy, i'm not poisoning ur mind. I'm telling u in a better position, that is, that u shud try learning what poems means. Do a little googleing.
And dont forget in a poem, u dont loose contact with ur audience. See, there's nothing bad if u accept what i said. The fact remains i strained my eyes to get 75% of what u mean. Though, its not bad but u can do better....

*wears my bullet proof vest already*

GodzBELOVED:
ahh. My dear brother. I stay at Aina,wah abt u?

slybrolin: *sigh* to start with I will 1stly make known of my admiration for d writer of d poem gloatkenf, being a lover and writer of articles, poems etc, its nt such an easy task writing a poem it takes a savvy, intelligent and creative being 2 do so. Also, 2 d articulate lady in d house ur boldness and firmness of character is an hallmark of a great person; am sure u have d best interest of gloat... In mind when u gave ur comments abt d poem. As u rightly said nt evribodi loves reading write-ups. And to Ola u also showed great character in commenting and giviving ur opinion abt d whole 'ish'... If I should give my candid opinion abt dis as a good literature student I would say d poem evidently has a meaning its passing across, jst dt it seemed a lil unorganized maybe its cos of u trying to employ a complex diction which is allowed in literature, try improve on dt, ur audience really matter try give them what dey need if nt 4ever bt @least 4 nw, I understand what u trying to pass across bt u have to make ppl wanna read more hence d 'literary techniques' will come to play. And to Godzlove, my advice to u is simple when trying 2 correct or comment on sth try nt to be 2 blunt, u being blunt sometimes sends d wrong message e.g what jst happened here am sure if u had done it in a mild way am sure dis whole issue wouldn't have ensued; I knw u were jst trying to help bt we are all human seeing our work rubbished can never appeal 2 us, a note of appreciation+ur comments myt have done d job. And to d person who talked abt slangs and abbreviation been used, at dis point I must say d person is nt too familiar with literature dre is what is called 'poetic license' with dis d poet gets 2 use words as he seems fit slangs included

BINTI_LAYE101:
Ahhh! l know that area wella
*moslado hotel area after orita market abi
I STAY AT TITILOYE BEHIND KOGBEREGBE STREET.
#itsabintiworld ooo

Godslove2039:
I wud lyk to knw u. If u dont mind, my fb address is facebook.com/SG2039 .Tnx

ebony888:



Guy do you know what is called peotic licence?

Am sure u do
have you ever tried to read
Elergy in the country church Yard?

Nobody is An Island of knowledge, the fact he apply abbrivation in his write up doesnt mean when given a chance he will do so.......80% of Nairalander long on from their phone.........

Just try and be constructive in ur criticism

thanks

cloaked: ...i've bin meaning 2 ask u dat cutie!..if yep!..pls wat's ur user id?...

GodzBELOVED:
Chai, indeed a binti world! U r on 2go abi fb??

GodzBELOVED:
Do u stay at isolo ni?

GodzBELOVED:
#Noted

humbleboyy: nah, i rep surulere..AGUDA to be precise not that far from isolo.

Olastep1: na wa o. So all this e-criticism is going on right behind me, huh? I think i should drop my macintosh and pick up my bullet-proof vest cos i may be hit by a stray e-bullet.
This gloatfenk never cease to amaze me... I can see u have a great flair towards writing but u dont realy know the basics. Permit me d sharp criticism. Trust me, i wouldnt call ur writings a peom. I would rather call it a figurative write-up. A poem dont just start from no where n ends somewhere. It doesnt involve so much slangs n abbreviations. My guy, i'm not poisoning ur mind. I'm telling u in a better position, that is, that u shud try learning what poems means. Do a little googleing.
And dont forget in a poem, u dont loose contact with ur audience. See, there's nothing bad if u accept what i said. The fact remains i strained my eyes to get 75% of what u mean. Though, its not bad but u can do better....

*wears my bullet proof vest already*