I ave to say this, though your story is nice @Miss Kitme, but you fall my hand...

Since you start your story I had been there even before your story made Front Page but you never deem it fit to appreciate me when you appreciated my other gangsters that we rock Nairaland Literature section together. Me I shaa no vex, just making my views known..

Amaka gonna end up marrying Afam, the affair between her sister and Afam occurred long ago. The sister because of Amaka's happiness decided not to spill the bean..

Shout-out to my peepz on this story: Adeh39, Thronekid, D7ty9, Rock555, Kingphillip, lilyomi and others too numerous to mention.

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Nice story... That Ezekiel of a guy? Sumtin must go down with Fifi and Kiki......

Oga D, abeg no vex say i neva comment afta i don finish dis story teh-teh.. D day wey i read d last update and i wan comment na so my phone no gree connect 4 internet (Sub don finish).... ***** Na just MB i dey use self to type this *****

1) The story was just superb, though i pray Clement recovers 4rm his injury and hope d U.S.A wil nt turn Kelvin into a monster again

2) The part 2 will be alrite as sugested, ave a feeling Kelvin stil wana get his own pound of flesh off Clement and Ngozi..

3) Abeg add me for the Whatsapp group- **** 08031160869 ****

4) Oga D, please make U neva start ur next story between Jan. 29 - Feb. 10, cuz durin dis time I go dey do Exam 4 skul.....

5) Lest I 4get, Shout-out 2 Seun Osewa (4 giving us the oportunity 2 read this story), Onemansquad, Bluestarry, Stuff46, Tecno4life, Adewealth027, Adeh39 and a whole lot 2 numerous 4 me 2 mention

1) Chaiiii @ Mike, i really pity U ur immobility led U into dis shit......

2) Moja-mosa la nmo Akinkanju, Akin to ba moja ti ko mosa, iru won ni ba ogun loo @ Kelvin thread softly...

3) Though U walk thru d valley of the shadow of death, U will fear no evil @ Clement...

4) Sly ur cover is blown already....

5) D9ty7 thumbs up to You..

this Sly of a person shaaaa. I neva suspected him to be the mole...... Mehn aw i wish Mike will be there wen Sly is found out as the Mole...

D9ty7, welcome back, i was on a rescue operation before i learnt U had been ofline for some time, was just mobilizing a team 2 go look for.. We were grabing our gear b4 U came back.. Welcome and Weldone Bro.

Onemansquad, Techno4life, Bluestarry, Stuff46 please guys go grab your Guns lets go look for D9ty7, he doesn't go offline like this without a notice.. *** hope he is shaa alrite where he is ***

Adewealth027, please go gather all the ladies on this thread make you look for D9ty7...

tecno4life:
I've been missing in action and no one cared to ask

point of correction Tecno4life, i did ask anbout you check my last coment on page 177 and you wil see, besides Onemansquad, Stuff46 and Bluestarry are my witness.

1) I know Deoye and Co will neva escape that court room..

2) Ngozi, chaiiiiiii I pity You...

3) Did someone say Tobiloba is the Mole Haba........

4) D9ty7 abeg make ur phone pack down, nobody is thinking that maybe Kharl Corp attacked D9ty7 phone so that he will not expose them......

mehn eleyi tun gidigan.... Sumtin is popping.. D9ty7 wel done

1) Mike is nt going to die..

2) Hakym wil likely betray kelvin.. Prompting kelvin to join hands with the police...

3) Ngozi needs to be suspended too... Her bragado don dey too much... Na Clement tell her brother to becum a terrorist??

4) The mole kelvin refered to might be Ngozi, considering the fact that She already got Kharl Corp the map of the Underground ( i wonder wat wil apen 2 Ngozi if Clement finds out about the missing map bcuz am sure Clement will want to go into the underground again)

5) As for Deoye and Co, no matter the number of professional lawyers you hire, you won't get out of this, lets see how ur lawyers gona defend the folowin charges:
i. Attempted murder.
ii. Murder.
iii. Illegal possesion of arms.
iv. Cultism.

6) will coment again later...
Where in this world is Techno4life, Bluestarry, Onemansqaud, Stuff46?? Some pple are reading as guest and ghost, pls do the nidful

@ Onemansquad, i still dey the thread just like going Ghost mode sometimes, you supose understand as Intelligence gathering officer.... Happy New Year to you...

D9ty7:
Update dropping in minutes. I am busy with some research work. Getting facts, pictures, videos from various millitary take over in Nigeria. My next story is centred on that.

.. This one go sweet pass anything, na Military package....... Make you shaa give us the link once the story is ready...

1) Wow is all i could say.......

2) Congrats D9ty7 for the literature man of the year award.....

3) I thought this story was supose to end on or before last year Christmass Anyway continue with the story make we finish am on time, so as to start another one .

4) Onemansquad why you no give me mention on your new year greeting...

5) Wishing all Nairalanders and followers of this thread too numerous to mention, a Happy New Year.... This new year will be our best year so far IJN.... Happy New Year.

this comment is just to satisfy the likes of Ogbarmey, techno4life, onemansquad... For quoting and busting me yesterday for reading in a ghost mode even when D9ty7 knows am a regular commentator......

1) please D9ty7 na beg i dey beg, please free my Girlfriend's namesake "Dolapo", that emotional crisis is too much (but I didn't tell U to kill her ooooo).
Reading about her character reminds me of my girl though my girl is this outspoken type (she can talk like) but when troubles comes she becomes gentle like a Dove

2) I guessed right in my last comment when I said that Underground leads directly into the Kharl Corp....

1) This Matilda of an agent is gonna a bad agaent with the trap she is setting for Victoria......

2) Victoria please don't go back to ur vomit...

3) Slyvester am sorry for the loss... But is anybody avin a re-think, his wife might nt die, she may just pass out due to shock leaving Hakym and D.K that she has died....

4) Kharl corp cover is almost blown... Suspect that underground leads directly into Kharl Corp....

5) Ngozi should not act stupid, Jay is ready to pay for all he did....

6) I'll be back *** In Terminator's Voice *** for more comment..


Nice Updates from D9ty7 and welcome back Bro....

@ D9ty7
1) Dolapo must not die..
2) Deoye will be caught this time around..
3) Dr. Raphael's time is up...
4) Akpan should remember to call his boss when he goes to pick Rachel from the hospital...
5) Its time to let Ngozi get out of this story, though i don't know how it will be done....

Let me rest here for the moment coming back later..... Still the same good work @ D9ty7....

@ D9ty7...
1) Pls am beging U don't let Tolani die...

2) Clement should go and burst Don's residence wen Dr. Raphael will stil b dere so dat d bastard wil stop disturbin rachel...

3) Habeeb should be involved in an accident, so dat he will not foil Clement's plan concerning Victor...

4) I want Sandra and Frank 2 reconcile back, Frank has gone through alot emotionally in a short period of time..

5) Proximate analysis of the story to be continued later.....

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I was finally busted on this thread after being a ghost reader since the begining of this story...

Omo i go confess oooooooooo, dis story reminds me of my own self aw i take bleep my landlord's daughter 4 skul............

I am speechless...,.....

Kk

Why sud sum1 always intefere wen u'r abt 2 do d real thing....