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Jobs/Vacancies / Re: Oil And Gas Recruitment: Aptitude Test Second Round. by Piresg24(m): 4:01pm On Jan 26, 2021 |
I received a message to that effect too, around 3 a.m this morning. |
Poems For Review / Re: THE POET by Piresg24(m): 9:56pm On Nov 19, 2013 |
@Kagari.....Thanks 4 ur comment. You can check more works on my profile! |
Poems For Review / Re: From The Deep Of Imagination by Piresg24(m): 10:32pm On Nov 15, 2013 |
@Justiceenams, ur works are gud! I love 'Fears' ,'Her Curse' n 'More Than Love'. |
Poems For Review / Re: Original Love Poems by Piresg24(m): 5:08pm On Nov 15, 2013 |
@ Justiceenams, thanks for commenting on my work. I will do check out ur work! U can check out other of my poems on my profile. Tnx |
Poems For Review / Re: Original Love Poems by Piresg24(m): 11:29pm On Nov 11, 2013 |
How about that? Pls comment. |
Poems For Review / Re: Original Love Poems by Piresg24(m): 11:28pm On Nov 11, 2013 |
To My Bee's knee Game not with my heart By your stonewalling art That we may ourselves have a glee Of a lasting wet dream Which shall endure Like a bristlecone pine. How your yea made me gay Having reached our bloom Should we not enjoy our may? Bereave me not of this boon Anon to the partterre let's ooze. Neither did I had a clue Nor was I given a cue That you are as the honey suckle Could made me missed my orgeat and sherbet Oh! How your caress imbued on me a salve. Shall I compare you to the altair? Cruising into my life in beams and rays Glossy like a sun bird causing a stare Sleek to my feel cutesy and fey. You are the bird of paradise Finely curved like the cypress vine You smell so sweet like a fragrant pine Even sweeter fragrance than the moon flower. The moon and sun may fail to shine it light! The ocean may fail to afford us water! But my love for you shall always glow. By: Piresg24 |
Poems For Review / Re: The Poets' Café : Chat Room! by Piresg24(m): 11:17pm On Nov 11, 2013 |
How about that? Ur comments pls. |
Poems For Review / Re: The Poets' Café : Chat Room! by Piresg24(m): 11:16pm On Nov 11, 2013 |
To My Bee's knee Game not with my heart By your stonewalling art That we may ourselves have a glee Of a lasting wet dream Which shall endure Like a bristlecone pine. How your yea made me gay Having reached our bloom Should we not enjoy our may? Bereave me not of this boon Anon to the partterre let's ooze. Neither did I had a clue Nor was I given a cue That you are as the honey suckle Could made me missed my orgeat and sherbet Oh! How your caress imbued on me a salve. Shall I compare you to the altair? Cruising into my life in beams and rays Glossy like a sun bird causing a stare Sleek to my feel cutesy and fey. You are the bird of paradise Finely curved like the cypress vine You smell so sweet like a fragrant pine Even sweeter fragrance than the moon flower. The moon and sun may fail to shine it light! The ocean may fail to afford us water! But my love for you shall always glow. By: Piresg24 |
Poems For Review / Re: Poems From The Heart by Piresg24(m): 11:08pm On Nov 11, 2013 |
To My Bee's knee Game not with my heart By your stonewalling art That we may ourselves have a glee Of a lasting wet dream Which shall endure Like a bristlecone pine. How your yea made me gay Having reached our bloom Should we not enjoy our may? Bereave me not of this boon Anon to the partterre let's ooze. Neither did I had a clue Nor was I given a cue That you are as the honey suckle Could made me missed my orgeat and sherbet Oh! How your caress imbued on me a salve. Shall I compare you to the altair? Cruising into my life in beams and rays Glossy like a sun bird causing a stare Sleek to my feel cutesy and fey. You are the bird of paradise Finely curved like the cypress vine You smell so sweet like a fragrant pine Even sweeter fragrance than the moon flower. The moon and sun may fail to shine it light! The ocean may fail to afford us water! But my love for you shall always glow. By: Piresg24 4 Likes 1 Share |
Poems For Review / Re: Poems From The Heart by Piresg24(m): 11:06pm On Nov 11, 2013 |
Anyone around? pls check this n don't 4get to comment. |
Poems For Review / Re: THE POET by Piresg24(m): 7:45am On Nov 09, 2013 |
Please! anyone there to comment on my poem. |
Poems For Review / Re: THE POET by Piresg24(m): 11:42am On Nov 08, 2013 |
To My Bee's Knee Game not with my heart By your stonewalling art That we may ourselves have a glee Of a lasting wet dream Which shall endure Like a bristlecone pine. How your yea made me gay Having reached our bloom Should we not enjoy our may? Bereave me not of this boon Anon to the partterre let's ooze. Neither did I had a clue Nor was I given a cue That you are as the honey suckle Could made me missed my orgeat and sherbet Oh! How your caress imbued on me a salve. Shall I compare you to the altair? Cruising into my life in beams and rays Glossy like a sun bird causing a stare Sleek to my feel cutesy and fey. You are the bird of paradise Finely curved like the cypress vine You smell so sweet like a fragrant pine Even sweeter fragrance than the moon flower. The moon and sun may fail to shine it light! The ocean may fail to afford us water! But my love for you shall always glow. By Piresg24 1 Like |
Poems For Review / Re: THE POET by Piresg24(m): 6:05pm On Nov 02, 2013 |
Any one there? |
Poems For Review / Re: THE POET by Piresg24(m): 5:51pm On Nov 02, 2013 |
Please anyone there to appraise a poem I'm about uploading? |
Literature / Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition Season 2 - Round 2 - Hot Topics by Piresg24(m): 1:01am On Aug 21, 2013 |
Designer: PCGuru Why I chose the topic: I chose the topic “Dreams Can Come Through” with a view to inspiring ones that have lost hope in life that they can actualize their dreams with a right attitude and actions. The unique experience I derived working with a designer: An avid believer of dreams in the person of PCGuru truly gave a vivid interpretation to my poem by way of a design as though he was the poet himself. Constraints in working with a team: The only constraint was the delay in response may be because I am not the only one he is attending to. Poem analysis: The poem “Dreams Can Come Through” has seven stanzas of unequal lengths. The first to third stanzas of the poem portray an overwhelming difficulties of life experienced by a soul who by reason of that becomes pessimistic about the actualization of his dreams. He indeed is a royal blood and heir apparent to the throne but was treated unjustly. This is seen in stanza four. The stanzas that followed show the soul's desire for change and the inspiration he got through the voice that whispered which is his deux ex machina ie saving grace, whispering to the hopeless soul,reviving him that he can actualize his dreams. Why the designer used the designs,pictures,visuals and every component of the design: The Reason for using Butterflies is because they are a symbol for metamorphism which is the process of transformation, it represents the transition from the dream to reality. He also decides to go with a subtle tone and simple bright brokhels to give it a vivid and bright looking feel, as the title centers around hope and dreams. Meanings of some terms,terminologies and figures of speech used: Personification was one of the tools used by the poet, such words include: “breath”,uncertainty,penury,misery,nature. The poet uses allegory to depict wisdom as Solomon,meekness and patience as Moses and boldness as David. “Poverty” here means lack of vital abilities. The poet uses oxymoron ie “living dead” to depict one who has dreams but dwells in his predicaments. “Stinking fangs” in the context means unhealthy or worthless. “mire” and “afire” mean troublesome situation and state of great excitement respectively. Metonymy was used ie Crown in the poem signify kingship. “Foe“ in the context represents personal weaknesses as fear,low self esteem. The message behind the poem: That even in the inquietude of ones dire mire, one can always aspire higher with a right attitude and actions and never to retire in their desire to actualize their dreams.....This poem is dedicated to those who despite all yet actualize their dreams. |
Literature / Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition Season 2 - Round 2 - Hot Topics by Piresg24(m): 9:46pm On Aug 19, 2013 |
Designer: PCGuru Why I chose the topic: I chose the topic “Dreams Can Come Through” with a view to inspiring ones that have lost hope in life that they can actualize their dreams with a right attitude and actions. The unique experience I derived working with a designer: An avid believer of dreams in the person of PCGuru truly gave a vivid interpretation to my poem by way of a design as though he was the poet himself. Constraints in working with a team: The only constraint was the delay in response may be because I am not the only one he is attending to. Poem analysis: The poem “Dreams Can Come Through” has seven stanzas of unequal lengths. The first to third stanzas of the poem portray an overwhelming difficulties of life experienced by a soul who by reason of that becomes pessimistic about the actualization of his dreams. He indeed is a royal blood and heir apparent to the throne but was treated unjustly. This is seen in stanza four. The stanzas that followed show the soul's desire for change and the inspiration he got through the voice that whispered which is his deux ex machina ie saving grace, whispering to the hopeless soul,reviving him that he can actualize his dreams. Why the designer used the designs,pictures,visuals and every component of the design: The Reason for using Butterflies is because they are a symbol for metamorphism which is the process of transformation, it represents the transition from the dream to reality. He also decides to go with a subtle tone and simple bright brokhels to give it a vivid and bright looking feel, as the title centers around hope and dreams. Meanings of some terms,terminologies and figures of speech used: Personification was one of the tools used by the poet, such words include: “breath”,uncertainty,penury,misery,nature. The poet uses allegory to depict wisdom as Solomon,meekness and patience as Moses and boldness as David. “Poverty” here means lack of vital abilities. The poet uses oxymoron ie “living dead” to depict one who has dreams but dwells in his predicaments. “Stinking fangs” in the context means unhealthy or worthless. “mire” and “afire” mean troublesome situation and state of great excitement respectively. Metonymy was used ie Crown in the poem signify kingship. “Foe“ in the context represents personal weaknesses as fear,low self esteem. The message behind the poem: That even in the inquietude of ones dire mire, one can always aspire higher with a right attitude and actions and never to retire in their desire to actualize their dreams.....This poem is dedicated to those who despite all yet actualize their dreams. 2 Likes |
Literature / Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition Season 2 - Round 2 - Hot Topics by Piresg24(m): 9:43pm On Aug 19, 2013 |
Number 17 Dreams Can Come Through The future is bleak Gloomy like a thick darkness Every breath whispers fury Uncertainty sneaks into my thoughts Enslaving enthusiasm. Negativity becomes my watchword The dictum 'while I breath I hope' Becomes oblivious to my mind And 'all hope is lost' A new song on my lips. Penury and misery Become my counsels Poverty like my sworn enemy Snears at me every tick tock. I am the living dead full of life Farther from crown and beauty Found among the rejects of the society Treated like vagabond by nature Though,born of royalty Bereft of crown. Oh! My saving grace Where are you? Poverty places its stinking fangs on me! Behold, a whisper I heard Soothing was its effect on me saying; Turn your mire to afire Your dreams can come through In weakness is strength Attitude is everything. Dreams can come through It may be as tall as the Iroko tree It takes a Solomon to climb it It may have rough paths It takes a Moses to walk through. Dreams like a dragon's egg Only the brave gets it To a coward Its a perennial impossibility To a David,a victory assured Your greatest foe is self Overcome self,actualize dreams Dreams can come through But it takes one to plan With hands and feet engaged. By: Piresg24 2 Likes
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Literature / Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition Season 2 - Round 2 - Hot Topics by Piresg24(m): 9:39pm On Aug 19, 2013 |
Reserved for number 17 |
Literature / Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition Season 2 by Piresg24(m): 3:05pm On Aug 18, 2013 |
Where is the submission thread? Is not 18th the deadline? |
Literature / Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition Season 2 by Piresg24(m): 9:35pm On Aug 16, 2013 |
I will finish it b4 tumaro. What abt u? |
Literature / Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition Season 2 by Piresg24(m): 9:28pm On Aug 16, 2013 |
Helloo, I need help------------how do I contact d designer I'm to work with Tempus fugit. Solaceye is d one...I'm no. 52 |
Literature / Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition Season 2 by Piresg24(m): 11:55pm On Aug 15, 2013 |
My slot is 10 and I'm seeing double slots.How can it be corrected? |
Literature / Re: Poetry by Piresg24(m): 10:58pm On Aug 15, 2013 |
Reserved for number 11 Dreams can come through |
Literature / Re: Poetry by Piresg24(m): 10:54pm On Aug 15, 2013 |
reserved for no.11 |
Literature / Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition Season 2 - Submission Thread For Round 1 by Piresg24(m): 9:31am On Aug 13, 2013 |
The Storm No.52 A thick cloud appeared In communion it gathered Ready to bequeath its due to mother earth Rumbling of thunder I heard The sun disappeared into the thick cloud Behold,a thick darkness I saw The cheerful crowd turned sore and fled Like a melting ice before the sun All,men and women,young and old Engaged their legs on a marathon Off to their abode Away from the menacing storm Streets become lonely Market places deserted Farmland waited in vain without any to till The whirlwind blew The forest trees danced in awe Heavenly dues like a tsunami descended on earth Roofs eloped from houses Dancing to the rhythm of the wind Flood crept into houses Displacing man of habitation Indistinct voices I heard saying Oh! Our fields oh! Our buildings For how long? When shall this nightmare end? When shall be the dawn of a new day? I woke up from my deep sleep Behold,it was a sunny day and I smiled because it was but a dream. 3 Likes |
Literature / Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition Season 2 by Piresg24(m): 9:18am On Aug 13, 2013 |
The Storm A thick cloud appeared In communion it gathered Ready to bequeath its due to mother earth Rumbling of thunder I heard The sun disappeared into the thick cloud Behold,a thick darkness I saw The cheerful croud turned sore and fled Like a melting ice before the sun All,men and women,young and old Engaged theirs legs on a marathon Off to their abode Away from the menacing storm Streets become lonely Market places deserted Farmland waited in vain without any to till The whirlwind blew The forest trees danced in awe Heavenly dues like a tsunami descended on earth Roofs eloped from houses Dancing to the rhythm of the wind Flood crept into houses Displacing man of habitation Indistinct voices I heard saying Oh! Our fields oh! Our buildings For how long? When shall this nightmare end? When shall be the dawn of a new day? I woke up from my deep sleep Behold,it was a sunny day and I smiled because it was but a dream. 1 Like |
Politics / Re: Islamophobia In Delta, Boko Haram Now The New Name For Muslims by Piresg24(m): 9:34pm On Sep 06, 2011 |
Government must put a veil one its eyes to eliminate lawfully those that endanger the lives of fellow Nigerians. |
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