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The Day The Clouds Turned Red (crime Story) / 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] / All In A Circle...(a Crime Story)-- The Completion (2) (3) (4)
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by RhAngel: 9:20am On Nov 15, 2014 |
LogoDWhiz:thanks so much, i do appreciate. I il tk anytn u tk.... |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Niwdog(m): 9:23am On Nov 15, 2014 |
I smell sylvester being a mole. But diz update short oo |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kingphilip(m): 9:30am On Nov 15, 2014 |
Niwdog:wow this is another dimension u r trying to bring into it but he shouldn't have pulled that stunt in Ayo's residence if he was or was he not the one that went with Clement there? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Niwdog(m): 9:51am On Nov 15, 2014 |
kingphilip:he may pull the stunt in order to avoid being suspected |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 9:55am On Nov 15, 2014 |
D9ty7............dat was a good one I hope u won't kill Ngozi too because this one wey dem wan go Mr Ayo's residence.....e get as e be o |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kingphilip(m): 10:00am On Nov 15, 2014 |
Niwdog:Na true sha |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 10:01am On Nov 15, 2014 |
D9ty7.... No kill anybody 4 dere ooo... Especially Ngozi, u hear ![]() Where is Emulkul4love nau ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 10:45am On Nov 15, 2014 |
RhAngel: Uwc dear!!! Okay then! Relax and enjoy the story! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Crownfullhouse(m): 10:48am On Nov 15, 2014 |
Well done Oga D9ty7. More blessing and wisdom to Ur brain....... Ghost mode deactivated...... |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by bdabuwa(m): 10:53am On Nov 15, 2014 |
Ride on sire !!! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:16am On Nov 15, 2014 |
--continuation-- Ngozi kept quiet as Sylvester drove towards Dolphin estate where Mr Ayo Okorie's residence was located. This was the first time she'll be working with Sylvester directly, even though they were both visiting officers, Ngozi works at the Area F-command while Sylvester work for an intelligence agency, the FBI and he was cotacted to help the police with his team. Ngozi wanted to ask him questions but the look on his face showed he was in no mood for such. She cleared her throat to gain his attention. He only glanced at her and turned to face the main road within a second. "Sylvester." Ngozi called. He turned to face her with an askance look. "When are you leaving?" She asked. "Do you have a problem with me leaving or staying?" Ngozi smiled. "You see, I have no problem with either of the two, its just that am suprised everyone is begging you to stay." she replied. "Do you want me to leave?" He asked smirking his lips. "What do you expect, like if you leave now, I'll be happy." She replied. He frowned a bit but quickly concealed the frown with a dirty smile. "Everyone wants me to stay. Even your bosses who are too old to handle a revolver. I single-handedly led the team that successful sent the notorious Ayo out of the town. I am an asset." "You are yet to achieve what some policemen have achieved, the likes of Clement, Late Okoro, Mike and even the late Charles. All you have is the ability to read the situation and you have the tactical knowledge, the execution is what you don't have. Its not like you led the team into the residence, you gave them how to invade without anyone noticing." Ngozi said angrily. "You were not there and please I am driving, I need to concentrate." He replied shutting her up. Fifteen minutes later, he pulled up in front of Mr Ayo's gate where five soldiers stood guarding the gate. "Don't just sit down there lady. Come with me." He said. Ngozi opened the door and came out, she rounded the car and walked towards the gate with Sylvester. "I am agent Sylvester, FBI fourth clearance level assisting the police and with me here is Ngozi." He said flashing his FBI badge. Ngozi produced her ID car and showed it to the millitary men. "This way." one of the millitary men led the way towards the main gate. The gate was opened from within after the soldier leading the way tapped the gate lightly. "Who is in charge here?" Sylvester asked. "Leiutenant James." The soldier replied. They walked into Mr Ayo's living room which was in a total mess, books flung everywhere, broken glasses, half burnt chairs to mention a few. "How long do you stay here?" Sylvester asked. "Twenty four hours. We work in shifts." A young man dressed in uniform stood beside another uniformed man and were conversing in low tones. "You can go, I'll take it up from here." Sylvester discharged the soldier who nodded and walked away. The two millitary men stopped talking immediately they saw Sylvester. "You must be James." Sylvester said to none of them in particular, but he had his eyes set on the younger uniformed man. "And you must be Sylvester." The younger man replied. Sylvester dropped his hand on Ngozi's shoulder. "This is Ngozi, a policewoman." "Here with me is Hassan." James replied. The four officers set to work with Sylvester assuming the lead role, he dished out intstructions while James explained the layout of the house to them. Sylvester siezed the opportunity to push Ngozi around as he made her work hard, opening locked door without keys, he was happy she came along. He was punishing her in the best of his abilities. "Come and see this." Ngozi said to Hassan whom he had developed likeness for because of his calmness. Hassan walked towards her holding a laptop which was almost broken into two with him. They were both in a room they assumed belonged to Mr Ayo himself. "A diary." Ngozi said to him as they both glanced through the pages of the book. Ngozi's attention soon drifted off to a shelf that stood beside a doorway. She walked towards it and picked up the first thing her eyes caught. It was a map in which every part of the house was drawn. "A map?" Hassan asked as he peeped from behind her. Ngozi nodded as she used her hand to trace the main gate to where they were and truely, the room belonged to Mr Ayo. Then her eyes caught something that heightened their curiousity. "An underground?" They both exclaimed. --to be continued-- 2 Likes |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:52am On Nov 15, 2014 |
The next update drops later in the afternoon. Kip your comments coming. Tecno4life, onmansquad Fatalveli- I love your story Bluestarry- wonderful piece I call your story vibra Adewealth027- Adeola temi nikan Adeh- I won't talk o Tenajek, bdabuwa, crownfullhouse, LogoDWhiz: secretary and a boss of life. Kingphilip, Niwdog: I love it when you guys discuss about the story. It measures how predictable my story is. Stuff46, haydot95 and RhAngel. To all ye ghost readers. God dey o and he dey watch all of una. He go smile and tell Angel Gabriel. God: See dem thieves. Na me create them o. They will just read and won't comment. Angel Gabriel: If we don't have people like this on earth, the hell will be empty. God: True talk. YOU DON SEE WETIN GO HAPPEN IF YOU CONTINUE TO READ AND YOU DON'T COMMENT. 2 Likes |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 12:16pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
Hmmmmmm Sylvester wan turn himself to jack bauer abi ![]() ![]() D9ty7,muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuah for a job well done |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kingphilip(m): 12:17pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
wow make dem no risk am go underground o unless dem no wan come back alive d9ty7 nice update abeg I de hunger for more |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Fatalveli(m): 12:19pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
Na the underground they will find all the clues the are looking for. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by absky5(m): 12:32pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
Underground ke ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 12:52pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
D9ty7:thanks oga. But u don pastor? Diz 1 wey u d talk abt heaven n hell |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 12:53pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
Wetin dey worry Sylvester sef ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Niwdog(m): 1:00pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
Hmm. Underground, i would love Ngozi and Hassan to handle diz undergrd alone |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kingphilip(m): 1:07pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
Niwdog:y do u say so I think some of Ayo's men will be there o |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Cashio(m): 1:17pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
its getting more interesting by de day |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Niwdog(m): 1:18pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
kingphilip:as am suspectin ayo being a mole,if he get to know abt the map, he may nolify evry means of getting evidience in dat undagrnd |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ReLaTE(m): 1:19pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
Keep it up, am following. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kingphilip(m): 1:27pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
Niwdog:u r ryt boss but it might b risky just the two of them because I'm sure Ayo won't leave there unguarded |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Shynaboy1: 1:31pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
*comes in with red eyes and broken bottle* Who wan try me? Oya D9ty7, come update! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 1:41pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 1:48pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
Underground room? Now this is getting more interesting!!! I wish to have one when I grow up #bucketlist |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Donbabajayz(m): 1:51pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
more ink to ur pen OP.... |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stormybucci(m): 1:54pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
D9ty7:bro no vex oo, I get really tight schedule but am back nw full tym |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emzypaz(m): 2:08pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emmykul4love(m): 2:14pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by JigsawKillah(m): 3:46pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
#lights CIG D9ty7 Its afternoon already boss |
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