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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 4:54pm On Dec 11, 2014
CHAPTER TWENTY ONE
Sylvester drove into his compound anxiously. He alighted from his car and went to close the gate, he just can't wait to see his wife. She already told him she'll be visiting the hospital today to get her result. He was convinced that she was pregnant, but the doctors had to confirm.
"Anybody home?" He asked as he opened the front door.
He wouldn't have known if his wife was home or not, she had no car of her own, the compound was empty as at when he drove in.
He proceeded towards the living room when he started percieving the odour that something was wrong. He could hear the sound of someone crying, but he wasn't sure.
He concluded maybe his wife had lost the pergnancy again because he remembered the first time she suffered a miscarriage, it was on the day she got her positive test result.
But his conclusion was proven all wrong when he entered the living room and saw his sister-in-law, a seventeen year old girl, Charlie squatted beside his wife body crying.
"Charlie, what's the matter?" He asked running accross to join them, his wife was motionless and cold, she was also in a pool of her blood.
"What did you do to her?" He asked raising Charlie up with her collar and slamming her on the nearest couch.
"I didn't do anything for her. She was shot, I saw them do it." Charlie pleaded with tears in her eyes.
"Who did it and how come you weren't seen?" He asked tightening his grip on her neck, choking her in the process.
"I was sent to get groceries from the supermarket down the street and on coming back, I saw the two men walked into the compound. Since you have told me not to enter the house through the living room anytime you have visitor, I decided to enter through the kitchen. I was in the kitchen when she went to the bar to get them wine and a few minutes later, I heard her pleading, then she was shot." Charlie explained.
"Are you sure?" Clement asked.
She nodded her head affirmatively.
"Have you called the police?" He asked.
She shook her head negatively. He laid down beside his wife and wept. Is this how the dream they both had will shatter? They had both planned to have just two kids, God willing, a boy and a girl after which they'll relocate to Canada where they came from. But now, it all seemed impossible, he would no longer become a father.
"Nooooooooooo." He screamed so hard that the whole building shook.
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Exams had just finished for the day and students began trooping out of the hall in twos and threes. Dolapo remained on her seat waiting for the crowd at the exit to reduce before making her way out of the hall.
"Girlfriend." Someone tapped her from behind. It was Darasimi.
"Oh! Its you. How was your exam?" She asked.
"Good." Darasimi replied.
The two girls remained in the hall for a few seconds before Darasimi suggested that they leave.
"Can't you see the mumber of people at the door? Even those outside are numerous. I can't stress my tired sef." Dolapo replied.
"You want everything so easily. Mind you, things don't come easily, you have to work and struggle." Darasimi replied grabbing her hands and matching towards the exit.
They stopped at the bag cabinet and picked Dolapo's bag.
"Let me put my things there please." Darasimi pleaded.
"Who will carry it?" Dolapo asked smiling.
"I will." Darasimi replied.
"Don't bother. I will carry it." Dolapo said laughing heisterically.
The two girls squeezed their way through the crowd and just before they stepped outside Dolapo backed away.
"Whats wrong?" Dara asked.
She pointed to a set of guys who were standing at the door. They have been there since exam finished and every one knew them well. They are popularly known as the current tappers. That's how they do during gatherings such as this, standing at the door when everyone is trying to go out and they try as much as possible to tap currents from the ladies like they always say. They touch the girls inappropriately and a girl who wants to protect her dignity will be advised to shut up, because reacting will only lead to embarrasment for the girls. Only once has the guys been humiliated and they disappeared for almost a whole semester with no one tapping currents. One of them touched late Chioma's as5 and in retaliation, she slapped one of the. As if waiting for someone to make the first move, all the girls present in the hall that day attacked the guys and tongue lashed them.
"Lets go." Darasimi said persuasively.
"No way am I going to let them touch me with their filthy hands." Dolapo replied.
They all knew Dolapo to be an uptight person. She was just an extroverted introvert who became outgoing as a result of the friends she moved with in school. She doesn't move much with guys and she loved it that way. Darasimi knew Dolapo will only leave the hall when those guys leave the door or the crowd reduces.

--tbc--

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 4:55pm On Dec 11, 2014
--continuation--
Don was seated in the living room with his guys, they were all chattering happily and discussing random topics. Janet on her part was afraid to leave the store which has served as her room or better still cell. She had removed her cloth and undies as a result of the odour emanating from them, as a result of the non stop perspiration that had taken place on her body. For three days, she hadn't had her bath and the room she sleeps was one of the less ventilated room she had ever seen in her life. The little amount of oxygen getting in doesn't measure up to the oxgen genenrated when you use a hand fan. The air can be likened to the air that escapes when one blows out air through the mouth. She was always seating and the sweat which covered her body in the morning will definitely get absorbed by the piece of clothing on her body.
A light tap sounded on the door.
"Who is that?" She asked.
"Its me Deoye." A male baritone voice replied.
What does he want with her? She had asked herself before she remembered that she told him about needing new clothes.
"I came to give you these clothes that I am able to get." He said.
"I am naked." She told him hiding all shame in her.
She approached the door gently and pushed it open a bit, hiding her small frame behind the door. Deoye tossed a polythene bag into the room.
"Thanks." She said as she shut the door and fastened the lock.
She emptied the content of the bag and the clothes she saw made he smile for the first time. They are not first grade or first class attires, as a matter of fact, they are not female wears but she had seen many people call the clothes unisex. She could count three football jerseys and two jean, a long trouser and a short.
This should be enough for now, but first she had to take her bath.
She put on one of the cloth and realised that it was unsafe for her. Her n.i.pples were visibly outlined on the cloth. She knew any man that sees her in the cloth will definitely feel a stir in his groin.
Wearing this in the midst of the guys will prompt them to molest her the way they wanted to do the previous night.
She managed to sneak out of the house into the barkyard silently with no one noticing. She considered running away, but the main gate is directly opposite one of the windows of the living room, she'll spotted even before reaching the gate. She would have jumped the fence but the fear of what awaits her outside the fence was enough reason for her to accept fate.
She silently got water into two buckets and dipped her dirty clothes in them, her skirt and undies, since her shirt has been torn to shred by the guys the previous night, there is no point wearing them again. In twenty seconds, the water had changed colour from being sparkling clean to dirty, she repeated the process about five times before spreading them on the clothing line to dry. Then she stripped herself naked and quickly poured the whole of the second bucket on the body and scrubbing her body with her palm, she was a little bit refreshed. She put on the jersey and just when she wanted to wear the jean trouser, she could feel a hand on her bum. She jumped and made to run away, but the hand had gripped her tightly on the waist. She turned to face one of the most mean looking guys in the house.
Her foolishness actually put her into trouble. She forgot that the house was a two flat apartment where the backyard of Don's flat happened to be opened to whoever was in the second flat's kitchen.
The guy unzipped his trouser and brought out his huge fly.
"Please. Don't do it." She pleaded.
"I love that voice." He said pushing her to the wall and resting her hand on it, with one deep thrust, he had the whole of his member buried inside her from behind.
She gritted her teeth trying not to moan or attract the attention of the other guys in the house, because she knew what the outcome would be. She wasn't enjoying the act, considering the fact that she wasn't in the mood for such, but she had to dance to his tunes.
Juts when the guy was about to release, he started speaking gibberish and making noise and as he deposited his millions of baby making cells into her factory, the other guys showed up from nowhere.
"Oh my God!" She muttered.
Is this God's way of paying back after living three years without sex. Sleeping with over ten guys will definitely cover up the years she had missed.

--to be continued--

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 5:10pm On Dec 11, 2014
Janet na die be this o
oga d abeg mke miracle happen abeg
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Shebarh(f): 5:23pm On Dec 11, 2014
more plssssssmore plssssssmore plssssss
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by macpetrus(m): 5:26pm On Dec 11, 2014
Janet.... cry
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by omotalkie(f): 5:31pm On Dec 11, 2014
Oh my God! cant stop laughing. lyk Stuff46 said, I only wish for miracle to happen for Janet oo
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 5:32pm On Dec 11, 2014
The more I get the more I want

FEED ME MORE

grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 5:35pm On Dec 11, 2014
I wish I was the guy with the first taste of that sweet pus.sy grin smiley
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 5:36pm On Dec 11, 2014
Oga D9ty7 I sight you just drop update at once

U said 10th but this is 11th angry
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by alabig(m): 5:50pm On Dec 11, 2014
*In don's boys voice, are you aware that janet have become our wife* there must always be a consequences of evil, either small or large.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 5:55pm On Dec 11, 2014
We want more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Ziziola: 6:10pm On Dec 11, 2014
Kai! Jane don die oooo
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 6:30pm On Dec 11, 2014
tecno4life:
Oga D9ty7 I sight you just drop update at once

U said 10th but this is 11th angry
I said between 10th and 15th, but b4 15th hopefully.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by sleekbody(f): 7:00pm On Dec 11, 2014
damn, wanted 2 wait till the end of d story b4 commenting, but @ dix "yoncture" I have no choice dan 2 say u were holding a pen d day u were delivered. wonderful story
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Shebarh(f): 7:01pm On Dec 11, 2014
hi dnty7....ya really a good writer... buh plsss don't let racheal,the baby and dolapo die... dat reminds me wah bout tolani

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Omololamide(f): 7:03pm On Dec 11, 2014
ha! i pity janet....
thanks guy, u na weldone o....
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Niwdog(m): 7:11pm On Dec 11, 2014
In chiwetalu agu voices "amu ato ni mi ikeh"
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 8:33pm On Dec 11, 2014
D9ty7, y do u allow dose sef starved guys 2 touch Janet nau? I dnt lyk it ooo. *in an angry mood* infact I don't even feel lyk commenting sef. but, erm....., I need more updates. Nd thanks 4 dis update too.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:36pm On Dec 11, 2014
Next update drops b4 10pm.

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by macpetrus(m): 8:48pm On Dec 11, 2014
D9ty7:
Next update drops b4 10pm.

Dancing sekem sekem.....
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:44pm On Dec 11, 2014
--continuation--
Clement and his men proceeded into the now dark tunnel, each an everyone of them holding their flashlights. The order was to switch on the flshlight, know if the enemy is close, then switch it off before pulling the trigger.
Clement knew sooner, or later, the gun men will leave their hiding place and advance towards them, he wasn't going to gamble his chances, in a second, he switch on the flashlight, pointed it towards the cell where he rescued the five girls a few minutes ago, he ran into the cell and his men followed suit.
The gunmen had already gone into hiding, the reason being that they were quite unsure of the direction where the intruders were shooting from, even though they saw their flashlights from one direction, but the death of two of their members had taken them unaware and they had to withdraw to form a game plan.
"We don't know where this men were hidden, but I am pretty sure that they are no longer in the cells. All you need to do is discretly enter each cell and free the girls, everywhere is dark, it will be difficult for them to spot you." He explain to his men who listened with rapt attention. Even the police who were afraid at first are begining to enjoy the whole adventure, but the fear of death is the begining of wisdom for them. Even though, the soldiers loved it and are willing to go into more action.
"Go in twos. There should be three life saving groups, meaning six of us here will go on the mission to release the girls, while the rest of us here try our best in engaging the gun men for as long as possible." Clement explained.
"Now go." Clement said to the six men who had already assemble before him. Immediately they set out of the cell, about ten bullets hit the rocky walls and it cracked. The men all withdrew into the cell unhit.
"They are shooting sporadically, and unknown to them, we found out where they are hiding before they did." One of the six men explained.
"Everyone hold out fire and shoot in their direction. You guys will have to move as fast as possible into each cell and untie the girls." Clement explained.
The men nodded, it sounds interesting. Moving amidst bullets can be risky and life threatening but its all fun to the soldiers, while the policemen are still pondering over what could happen.
"Now once you come face to face with their hiding place unoticed, take them all out at once." Clement concluded.
It all sounded like the best idea, but how to go about it was the problem. When they are not ghost or invisible, how are they expected to walk in front of healthy men who were sporadically shooting, even if its dark, they could easily spot their moving shadows. But they won't criticise Clement's order because it is Clement.
Clement and his men all stood against the iron bar, then the shooting started. Quietly, the six life savers crept out in search of the girls being held hostage.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Dolapo and Darasimi approached the two policemen who were leaning against the car in which they brought Dolapo to school.
"What kept you so long?" One of the men asked asked rudely.
"The crowd was too much." Dolapo replied curtly.
A minute later, they drove out of the school gate.
"Please, I want to see my friend at the hospital." She said.
For the first time, Darsimi rode in the same car with her.
"As you can see, we are out of the school, there is no way I can turn back." The rude guy replied.
"You can just enter through the second gate over there." Dolapo replied keeping her cool.
She had learnt to tolerate the two policemen, from the first time they drove her to school, she had disliked them. They were trying to boss Ngozi around, but the tough lady was up to the task of shutting them out.
"Please, just park over there. I'll walk the remaining distance to the hospital and I promise to be back in five minutes." She pleaded.
Darasimi wanted to talk, but knowing she had no say in the matter glued her lips.
Dolapo was hopeful the guy would stop the car once he get to the second gate, because she thought he was only pretending like most policemen do, but to her suprise, he sped past the second gate.
"Park! Park! Park!" She shouted.
The driver ignored her and continued driving.
"I'll open the door and jump out o." She threatened. The rude guy swerved off the road and switched off the ignition of the car.
"You know what? You can go, I will find my way home." She said as she opened the door and go out of the car, Darasimi followed suit. The two officers in front exchanged looks and before any of them could say a thing, Dolapo and Darasimi had already crossed to the other side and are heading back into the school.

--to be continued--
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 9:54pm On Dec 11, 2014
D9ty7, I can sense wat u wnt 2 do o, I think Darasinmi will sacrifice her life in exchange 4 Dolapo's own, Abi
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 9:55pm On Dec 11, 2014
oga d easy o
pity those girls na
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 10:03pm On Dec 11, 2014
adeh39:
D9ty7, I can sense wat u wnt 2 do o, I think Darasinmi will sacrifice her life in exchange 4 Dolapo's own, Abi
i knw say u b winch but can fly that fast? Aw u tk leave dat side cme diz side ?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by mariamferanmi(f): 10:03pm On Dec 11, 2014
Oga D una weldone oo! Am even shut of word sef. Keep it coming d sky is ur limit!!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:04pm On Dec 11, 2014
I really wanted to drop one more update tonight, but...yawns. I am feeling dizzy like anything.
Goodnight guys. Udate resumes tomorrow, two early morning updates and subsequent two to drop before 4pm, then another two before 12midnight.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:05pm On Dec 11, 2014
adeh39:
D9ty7, I can sense wat u wnt 2 do o, I think Darasinmi will sacrifice her life in exchange 4 Dolapo's own, Abi
Grrrrrhhhhh!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:05pm On Dec 11, 2014
stuff46:
oga d easy o
pity those girls na
Yes boss!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 10:07pm On Dec 11, 2014
Dolapo and Darisimi R.I.P

make clement and co. Survive crycry
Sly take heart


D9ty7 welldone

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:08pm On Dec 11, 2014
mariamferanmi:
Oga D una weldone oo! Am even shut of word sef. Keep it coming d sky is ur limit!!
Why not let the sky be our starting point and heaven the limit?
I really appreciate you comment.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 10:09pm On Dec 11, 2014
D9ty7:
I really wanted to drop one more update tonight, but...yawns. I am feeling dizzy like anything.
Goodnight guys. Udate resumes tomorrow, two early morning updates and subsequent two to drop before 4pm, then another two before 12midnight.
oga cme bk. Sleep d catch u? I get drugs oya cme tk diz rat poison, e go clear sleep piam piam

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