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The Day The Clouds Turned Red (crime Story) / 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] / All In A Circle...(a Crime Story)-- The Completion (2) (3) (4)

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Fatalveli(m): 10:27pm On Dec 11, 2014
[center]Abeg techno4 life, start digging darasimi and dolapo's grave[/center]
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 10:29pm On Dec 11, 2014
RIP silly Dolapo..............see her big head like Tecno4life's own
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 10:52pm On Dec 11, 2014
tecno4life:
Dolapo and Darisimi R.I.P

make clement and co. Survive crycry
Sly take heart


D9ty7 welldone

oya guys comment
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or onemansquad knows what to do to you abi no be so OMS grin

de ban the guy
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emanuel1997: 11:24pm On Dec 11, 2014
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comment or i pull d trigger
bros abeg now na megabytes and nepa things na him cos am i beg o no pull the trigger for ur boy o
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Kolynz(m): 11:27pm On Dec 11, 2014
#TeamDanger-KelvMustNotDie...............
Oga D9ty7, arakurin danger-kelv yen ko gbodo ku oo... Jowo ni tori olorun...... Oun ni mo si feran juu.......... (No mind my yoruba, I be igbo boy oh)
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by handmaid: 12:06am On Dec 12, 2014
this one is 'ghen ghen'
goodnight all
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Benjaminbest(m): 12:42am On Dec 12, 2014
nice update . But i must confess d part dat i have enjoyed most is d part of vicky angel always displaying super smartness
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 6:21am On Dec 12, 2014
D9ty7 hungry don dey catch me cheesy
More grin cheesy
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:04am On Dec 12, 2014
--continuation--
The six life savers discretly entered the first cell amids gunshots.
"Ow!" The girls in the cell wanted to scream.
"shhhhhh! Its the police." One of the life savers said to shut them up.
"Wha?" One of the girls asked.
It was evident that some of them are no from Nigeria and therefore didn't understand the english language.
"Poliza." Another girl whispered to her.
The girls relaxed and allowed themselves to be untied by the life savers.
"Wait right here, we are off to the other cells. I repeat, don't move until you hear order from us." One of the six men who had assumed the role of leadership right from the time they set out, thanks to his outspoken nature and fluency.
Immediately, they exited the cell, one of the sporadic shots hit one of the six life savers on the head and his slumped to the ground and died.
Thanks to the nature of the ground, his thudding sound could not be heard from afar, but his colleagues knew something had hit him. The best thing to do at the moment is to move on and not reel in death of one of them.
The police team stood a greater advantage against the gunmen because, the police were hiding in a vantage position where their shots fly directly to the gunmen hiding place. While the other team were hidden behind a bend in the tunnel and before they could aim at Clement and his boys, they would have to come out of hiding, meaning, most of them were being killed even before they pulled the trigger.
Discretly, they entered the second cell, the third cell, and everything seemed to be going their way, until another one of them was dropped, even though they hadn't been discovered. After five minutes of playing the discrete game, Clement and his team started advancing towards the gunmen. Majority of them has been killed leaving them with about five to take out. This could be noticed as a result of the gunshot. The number of bullets hitting the wall had reduced which prompted Clement and his men to advance towards them. Gun battle had stopped for now, the gunmen were trying to figure out what was going on as they whispered to one another, but unknown to them, their hideout has been uncovered, the four remaining life savers wer standing directly infront of them, and releasing abot three bullets each, they dropped dead, Clement flashed his torchlight to confirm, about seventeen men laid on the floor meaning two had been killed by him personally to make a total of nineteen, and they had ten cells, two men per cell. The equation was incomplete, one of them had escaped, probably to inform the others of their intrusion.
In five minutes, the girls had been freed, about forty five of them. Now, the promblem is how to trasport everyone on them out of the underground safely.
"We have to be fast guys. By equation, one of these men is missing, we don't know what he is up to. Move it." He ordered his men who rallied round the forty five girls and moved all at once, thanks to the width of the tunnel.
Slow walks broke into small jogs and a little while later, they were running towards the exit. The had covered grounds when they all could hear loud voices behind them.
"Hurry up, they are coming for us." Clement said.
Two minutes later, they got to the door which was earlier broken by the men when they were leaving for the inner part of the tunnel.
"Fasten a chain lock on the door." Clement ordered two of his men who had opened their bag and removed the right equipments for the job.
"The rest of you should keep moving." He commanded while he stayed behind with the two soldiers who were chaining the door.
"How long will it take before they get it opened?" Clement asked.
"Three minutes."
"Chances of they spending more than that?" he asked.
"Slim."
Just as the footsstep got closer, Clement knew its either they take to their heels and be killed three minutes later or stand back to withstand the forces advancing towards them.
They left the door and took the bend that finally concealed their location. They could hear the gunmen trying to break the lock, just when one of then advised them to use a gun in breaking the chain, Clement came out of his hiding place and shot two of the advancing lot. Three seconds later, still in shock of the gunshot, Clement took advantage of their shock and came out of his hiding place to release three quick shots.
"Wait right here and hold them. Let me get more men." He said and quickly went in search of the other members of the team whom he knew would still be at the ladder into the underground, going up one by one.

--to be continued--

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:05am On Dec 12, 2014
--continuation--
Dolapo and Darasimi entered the waiting room in the ICU where nobody was seated except Tolani's mother and pastor who was spitting fire as he prayed. The two ladies knelt down as soon as they entered the waiting room and let the pastor rain down blessings on them.
"Thank you because you have answered our prayers." He said.
"Thank you Jesus." They chorused.
"In the name of the lord most high we pray."
"Amen." The three women said in unison.
They stood up and took the nearest seat to them.
"Thank you very much pastor." Tolani's mother said.
"Lets thank God for everything." He replied.
The pastor discussed with Tola's mum while Dolapo and Darasimi stood next to the glass wall and watched their friend who by now was the only one in the ICU.
"My sister, please let me see you in private." The pastor said.
"Me?" Dolapo asked.
"No, your friend." He replied pointing to Darasimi who quickly took excuse from her friend and walked out of the waiting room with the pastor.
"God bless you." The pastor said.
"Amen." She replied.
"Your name?" He asked.
"Oluwadarasimi Christiana." She replied.
It is only when you are in front of a man of God that you mention your christian name, especially when you need prayers.
"You have to be very watchful and prayerful. There is danger lurking in the dark, but God is ready to lift it off you provided you can fast. Three days." The pastor explained.
If there was one thing she hated in christianity, it was fasting, why would she starve herself for no reason when you can talk to God in the language he understands. But the reply she had always gotten from her mother was, even Jesus who had direct access to God fasted. She once considered switching faith by becoming muslim, but going to mosque five times a day was a major turn off, she will also end up messing up her make up when its time for prayer, muslims also fast. Then she decided to stick to christianity where all she needed to do was go to church on sundays and under two hours, she is back home.
"Three days fast?" She asked.
"Yes. That is, tomorrow, sunday and monday. Just fast, and make sure you spend those days in your room. The lord shall lift every danger off you in Jesus name."
"Amen, but pastor, I am writing my final exam and I have papers on monday. Can I go to the exam hall?"
"Yes you can. But make sure you leave the exam hall and its premises immediately the exam finishes." The pastor emphasized.
A minute later, they headed back into the waiting room.
"I will like to take my leave now ma." The pastor said, just then Tolani stirred.
"Mummy, she is awake." Dolapo screamed pointing to Tolani who had opened her eyes and was trying to figure out where she was.
In a flash, Dolapo had gotten to the door which has been locked and no ousider could unlock it except the doctors. Immediately she had contact with the door knob, an alarm went off and in few seconds, security had arrived.
"Glory be to God in the most high." The pastor said.
"Thank you Jesus." rented the air from everybody, while Tolani's mum was weeping and rolling on the floor. Darsimi was on her kneels singing and weeping, Dolapo just stood transfixed to a spot as she was looking at Tola and tears was rolling down her cheeks.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++
The second third guy was getting ready to mound her from behind when Don showed up.
"What the hell is going on here?" He asked.
The current guy quickly disengaged from Janet as they all stood away from her.
"Who gave you the order to do this to her?" Don asked as he gave Janet her clothes.
"Remember, we were paid to keep her here. Even if she is our prisoner, does that mean you should take advantage of her?" Don asked.
"If you are sex starved, can't you go to a brothel?" He asked.
Don walked towards Janet and put his hand on her shoulder.
"Give your verdict. Should they be killed or punished?" He asked.
The two guys who had already humped her were shivering. They knew it doesn't cost Don anything to get them killed, while the others were thankful to God that they were not too jumpy to fvck her like they say.

--to be continued--

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kocvalour(m): 8:21am On Dec 12, 2014
kelvin finish ur job nih..
Victoria no one b like you

Dunno why clement & his guys are winning... I mean, those guards should hv known dat dia was trouble already.. Dunno y u're allowing dem 2 win sha

Janet has a kind heart.. So no death penalty 4 dem guyz..

Don knows about mike trailing them, dunno y he hasnt attacked mike since then
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 8:40am On Dec 12, 2014
God pls save Clement and his team
Halleluyah.......I didn't fast in vain for Tolani's recovery
Darasimi.........beta take heed
Dolapo.......I smh 4u
Janet..........oya do like oga @ d top but she might av mercy on dem sha
Good morning D9ty7
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:49am On Dec 12, 2014
adewealth027:
God pls save Clement and his team
Halleluyah.......I didn't fast in vain for Tolani's recovery
Darasimi.........beta take heed
Dolapo.......I smh 4u
Janet..........oya do like oga @ d top but she might av mercy on dem sha
Good morning D9ty7
Good morning dearie.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:57am On Dec 12, 2014
kocvalour:
kelvin finish ur job nih..
Victoria no one b like you

Dunno why clement & his guys are winning... I mean, those guards should hv known dat dia was trouble already.. Dunno y u're allowing dem 2 win sha

Janet has a kind heart.. So no death penalty 4 dem guyz..

Don knows about mike trailing them, dunno y he hasnt attacked mike since then
- Have you asked yourself why Mike and his team hadn't attacked Don? It is called strategy.
The point is, Mike and his men could break into Don's house one day and get them arrested, but what do they charge them with? A good lawyer will win the case for them. There are little or no evidences.
- Don could have attacked Mike and his men, but how will he do that? Will he just go into their shops and kill them? They are policemen, they are always being feared.
No matter how notorious a criminal could be, he will always pick race if he sees a policeman. Moreso, how sure is he that they are policemen and no some men working for another dark lord.
- Clement and his guys were winning because the terrorists were caught unawares and positioning is another thing. Moreso, its not as if Clement had not lost any of his men, he had ost about four including James who had not returned.
But above all, I love your criticism, they make me get better. Thank you sir.

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 9:31am On Dec 12, 2014
So painful I didn't start with u guys wen d story was hot buh fank God I caught up today D9ty keep it up I really enjoyed dis piece
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:37am On Dec 12, 2014
arabmullar:
So painful I didn't start with u guys wen d story was hot buh fank God I caught up today D9ty keep it up I really enjoyed dis piece
Am glad you caught up with us, and I officially welcome you into the house.
Ma/sir?

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Omololamide(f): 9:53am On Dec 12, 2014
thanks for d update..... dancing coz of 6updates today.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kocvalour(m): 11:27am On Dec 12, 2014
D9ty7:

- Have you asked yourself why Mike and his team hadn't attacked Don? It is called strategy.
The point is, Mike and his men could break into Don's house one day and get them arrested, but what do they charge them with? A good lawyer will win the case for them. There are little or no evidences.
- Don could have attacked Mike and his men, but how will he do that? Will he just go into their shops and kill them? They are policemen, they are always being feared.
No matter how notorious a criminal could be, he will always pick race if he sees a policeman. Moreso, how sure is he that they are policemen and no some men working for another dark lord.
- Clement and his guys were winning because the terrorists were caught unawares and positioning is another thing. Moreso, its not as if Clement had not lost any of his men, he had ost about four including James who had not returned.
But above all, I love your criticism, they make me get better. Thank you sir.

Cool..
Kelvic still the boss[kelvin/victoria]
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 12:05pm On Dec 12, 2014
The comments have not been encouraging so far. We can do better than this.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Flakeey(f): 12:18pm On Dec 12, 2014
D9ty7:
Big shoutout to those who have commented so far today. It is because of y'all that I'll be dropping two quick updates before 5pm.
Flakeey, Adeh39, Kristen12, florjay, afamjb, Ziziola, Fatalveli, macpetrus, Ajaxtea, codedbaby, stuff46, rantex1, shankies215, femyodsky, Ianjum, Moyosi, tecno4life, Kocvalour and a whole host of others.
I love you all.

*seriously blushing*
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emmykul4love(m): 12:27pm On Dec 12, 2014
I see the patrick's family bringing down the corp but what am i even saying................. Dot even know wat to say or comment....... Oga d9ty7 keep it up.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by rantex1: 12:31pm On Dec 12, 2014
na this dangerous underground ngozi wan enter alone
God really save her o.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 12:46pm On Dec 12, 2014
Thank you bro.
Emmykul4love:
I see the patrick's family bringing down the corp but what am i even saying................. Dot even know wat to say or comment....... Oga d9ty7 keep it up.
Its been a while, hw have you been?

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 12:47pm On Dec 12, 2014
rantex1:
na this dangerous underground ngozi wan enter alone
God really save her o.
Don't mind her.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by jummy604: 1:24pm On Dec 12, 2014
Janet tell him to kill them cos u r also gonna die,so y nt die together.clement i see you,thank God for tolani,darasimi you had beta fast than dying lyk a smoked fish.racheal aw s ur baby,i just hope she wnt loose u soon.d9ty well done nd thank you
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by pishon: 1:26pm On Dec 12, 2014
Good job Dt, I got So scared at some point u a indeed a genius. Keep it up bro
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by macpetrus(m): 1:45pm On Dec 12, 2014
Me: Dara.. Oluwasdarasimi
Darasimi: Yes sweetie
Me: Hope you are startin Your fasting tomorrow ?
Darasimi: *In low voice* Tomorrow is saturday?.... Yes I wil.
Me: Ok. *in low voice* let me call chidima and hookup with Her!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 2:21pm On Dec 12, 2014
macpetrus:
Me: Dara.. Oluwasdarasimi
Darasimi: Yes sweetie
Me: Hope you are startin Your fasting tomorrow ?
Darasimi: *In low voice* Tomorrow is saturday?.... Yes I wil.
Me: Ok. *in low voice* let me call chidima and hookup with Her!
You suppose join her in fast
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 2:59pm On Dec 12, 2014
nice updates oga d
I just de watch as the things de unfold


when is the next update??
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ThaRuthlxx7: 2:59pm On Dec 12, 2014
Thank you D9ty7 for those wonderful updates.. Pls u promise to randy up the story before 15 december.. Pls try and complete it.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tobilorba14(m): 3:12pm On Dec 12, 2014
guy u 2 xwit..u b great writer.jst update xharp xharp
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 3:28pm On Dec 12, 2014
ThaRuthlxx7:
Thank you D9ty7 for those wonderful updates.. Pls u promise to randy up the story before 15 december.. Pls try and complete it.
That's why I am going at a very fast pace. 6 updates per day just to finish up.

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