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The Day The Clouds Turned Red (crime Story) / 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] / All In A Circle...(a Crime Story)-- The Completion (2) (3) (4)

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 12:05pm On Dec 25, 2014
tecno4life:


u no sabi me atin angry
ah bros sorry oo i swear my bad i 4get
wish u xmas nd newyear in advance join
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 12:08pm On Dec 25, 2014
Bluestarry:
wish you the shame oh sorry the same *runs out of thread before onemansquad cash me* cheesy
u knw say i go always catch u shey u knw
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by omotalkie(f): 12:18pm On Dec 25, 2014
Missed dis family, gud to be back. Great story u have here D9ty7. Merry xmas to u all
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 2:18pm On Dec 25, 2014
omotalkie:
Missed dis family, gud to be back. Great story u have here D9ty7. Merry xmas to u all
welcome, i missed you o . Were went you? Happy new year
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Uthman51(m): 2:27pm On Dec 25, 2014
D9ty7 come make today lively with 10updates grin grin
..MeRrY cHrIsTmAs....

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by shankies215(f): 2:50pm On Dec 25, 2014
D9ty7 oya now! sad
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Moyosi(f): 3:51pm On Dec 25, 2014
Merry christmas everyone,more updates pls....
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 3:54pm On Dec 25, 2014
Uthman51:
D9ty7 come make today lively with 10updates grin grin
..MeRrY cHrIsTmAs....
yu no wan make enjoy the christmqs, oga d take ur time
Onemansquad:
Wishing ma guys oga D9ty7, stuff46, bluestarry,adeh39,adewealth027,ogbarmey, haydot95, niwdog,tecno4life and evrybdy in the thread a joyous and prosperous xmas celebration


anything when you wish me i wish you same
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Bg14: 4:11pm On Dec 25, 2014
Hmmmmmmmmm, Hapi xmas to u al most expecially our great writer 'D9ty' u r jst too much.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Bg14: 4:23pm On Dec 25, 2014
@D9ty7, the tension is really high we need more updates please And pls pls pls dont let Racheal die pls. Ve cried enof I dont want to cry again. kip her alife for her baby. Tanks in anticipation.

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 5:12pm On Dec 25, 2014
I'm sorry for this comment everyone, I officially apologise specially to sir. D9ty7 and every member of the family grin grin grin grin

*comment modified*
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 5:22pm On Dec 25, 2014
tecno4life:
i'm pissed of

I mean WTF!!!! sad angry angry angry angry
where's mr. D9ty7

no one should call me back ooh i'm gone

Onemansquad, bluestarry, stuff46, fatalveli and co.

Take care . When the story is finished I will come to ake my final comment smiley kiss kiss kiss kiss
broz u d craze? Come back here be4 i pull out my catapult
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 5:25pm On Dec 25, 2014
Well, today is Christmas and that explains why I have been away. I'll update later in the night by God's grace.
Omotalkie, Lilyomi, onemansquad, MhizEnkay, Tecno4life, Bluestarry, bossricky, Bg14, Stuff46, Uthman51, Moyosi, shankies215, Melancholy, ReLaTE, Rounakid, Fatalveli, Niwdog and several others who have commented so far today.
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MhizEnkay: My not replying you is not intentional. Try to understand, I can't reply everybody here. I hope you forgive me.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 5:54pm On Dec 25, 2014
Bluestarry:
broz u d craze? Come back here be4 i pull out my catapult

oga mi try to understand angry angry
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Olanireti(m): 6:16pm On Dec 25, 2014
Been thinking you will not update. Thank God for the change of mind. Expecting the update patiently.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by macpetrus(m): 6:38pm On Dec 25, 2014
No update yet?.. BRB
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by onosj(f): 6:42pm On Dec 25, 2014
D9ty7:
Sincerly speaking, I don't know where to start. Its nothing much actually, I just wanted to wish you guys a MERRY CHRISTMAS and I don't know how and where to start.
I think I should start by picking up my red ink, because anything red is associated with christmas with the exception of blood. Why christmas goes with red, I don't know, but its traditional and we have to follow it.
Today, thousands of years ago, the whole world witnessed the birth of a boy, the saviour of the world known as Christ Jesus.
Though he is no more with us in body, but in spirit, the whole world is celebrating his birth thousand of years after his ascension to heaven. The messiah was born today thousand of years ago. I pray today, you shall be directed unto the path of greatness, you shall dine with kings and Queens, you shall experience a miraculous excellence in all you endeavours.
MERRY CHRISTMAS TO ALL READERS AND FOLLOWERS OF THIS STORY. A BIG SHOUTOUT TO SEUN OSEWA.
I wish u d same nd my fellow readers!!.....
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Niwdog(m): 7:19pm On Dec 25, 2014
[quote
author=Onemansquad post=29186959]Wishing ma guys oga D9ty7, stuff46,
bluestarry,adeh39,adewealth027,ogbarmey, haydot95, niwdog,tecno4life and
evrybdy in the thread a joyous and prosperous xmas celebration [/quote]wish u the same
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Rounakid(m): 7:24pm On Dec 25, 2014
**steps in with ma lonq wrapped weed** NO UPDATE YET...? OKAY OOO... **Doqwalked into one corner of d thread, sits on d dirty floor, and starts puffinq ma kush, waitin patiencly, for qawd to touch oqa 'D' heart**
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by omotalkie(f): 7:37pm On Dec 25, 2014
Bluestarry:
welcome, i missed you o . Were went you? Happy new year
lost ma fone, coping up with new baby and d sister, family ish and all. buh glad am back
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 7:58pm On Dec 25, 2014
Rounakid:
**steps in with ma lonq wrapped weed** NO UPDATE YET...? OKAY OOO... **Doqwalked into one corner of d thread, sits on d dirty floor, and starts puffinq ma kush, waitin patiencly, for qawd to touch oqa 'D' heart**


see this guy o

*gets cold bucket of water and pours him and the weed and it off the weed


oga mi pity us here, we are addicted to smoke
shea today ma the day dem born jesus, if u no pity urself, pity jesus
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Rounakid(m): 8:21pm On Dec 25, 2014
stuff46:



see this guy o

*gets cold bucket of water and pours him and the weed and it off the weed


oga mi pity us here, we are addicted to smoke
shea today ma the day dem born jesus, if u no pity urself, pity jesus
**in yoruba accent** aaaaaah...! Ki lon se...? Na wetin i do na...? Why u damaqed dis ma lonq pipe...? U knw d kind time and enerqy we e cost me...? **runs awt of d thread, and reappear, with ''2 by 2'' ply wood** oya qo find mah weed for me before... I do d needful...
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 8:26pm On Dec 25, 2014
Rounakid:
**in yoruba accent** aaaaaah...! Ki lon se...? Na wetin i do na...? Why u damaqed dis ma lonq pipe...? U knw d kind time and enerqy we e cost me...? **runs awt of d thread, and reappear, with ''2 by 2'' ply wood** oya qo find mah weed for me before... I do d needful...


oms dissinge this guy with that wood
shea the small wen smoke don high u already.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by shankies215(f): 8:30pm On Dec 25, 2014
D9ty7 now cry sad angry
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Lilyomi(f): 8:41pm On Dec 25, 2014
shankies215:
D9ty7 now cry sad angry
Adeh needs to enjoy now. Today is a free day u knw grin grin
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:59pm On Dec 25, 2014
--continuation--
Clement considered taking the kitchen door into the house to catch whoever was in the house unawares, but on a second thought, he realised that the kitchen door would probably be locked from inside, thereby making it impossible for him to enter.
He diverted towards the main entrance. He pushed the door open and eased himself in without making a sound. His fears was making him grow weak, because by this time, little Amanda's cries were getting louder.
"Rachel." He called.
Maybe Rachel had left him like he ordered when he was leaving the house five minutes ago.
He rubbed his eyes to confirm if he was dreaming or seeing it live. Rachel was lying down in her own pool of blood.
"Rachel, who did this to you?" He sreamed as he jumped a couch and squatted on the floor beside her.
"Tak to me, what happened?" He placed his left ear on her chest, but he couldn't feel her heartbeat. He rememebered he has once damaged his left ear as a kid, maybe it was malfunctioning again, he placed his right ear, no difference still.
He violently shook his wife as tears rolled down his cheeks, so many thoughts ran through his mind that moment. He blamed himself for his wife's death, how he wished he had stayed a bit longer with her, instead of walking out of the house, but he couldn't stand another minute with her beside him which was why he left. How he wished he had taken his time to beat her some more, how he wished he had beaten her until she passed out, then he can drive her to the hospital and thereby making it impossible for her killers to get her. He felt empty that moment, he could feel his world crumbling at his feet, and he was watching without being able to do anything to probably avert the situation or reduce the damages done. If he as a police inspector who has been responsible for stopping many criminal activities, bringing law offenders to book, securing the lives of millions of Nigeria by foiling terrorist attack couldn't save his wife. Just one person we are talking about here, the most important person to him, his life partner, the mother of his kids.
Who could have done this to him? Who could have shattered his hopes of a much better tomorrow? Who could have decided that killing his wife was the best way to get at him? Why not kill him instead and spare his wife so that she would be able to take care of the seven day old Amanda.
He thought about his life right from when he could differentiate between good and bad, right and wrong, evil and good. He remembered that the majority of his life was lived without a female companion, he was seperated from his mother and sister right very young, he attended a boys only secondary school in Nigeria, attended the University of Lagos from home, giving him no chance to make friends, he did his youth service in Lagos, all from home except the three weeks orientation camp which was a death camp for him. Then proceeded to a criminology and intelligence institution in the United states, where he met about a hundred classmates and friends, among which one hundred and seventy were boys and the megre thirty were girls who were tomboyish and acted like boys. So it was all living with boys in his three years stay in the states.
Sirens sounded in front of his house and a few seconds later, he could hear footsteps trottling towards the front and back doors of the house.
"Clement, what's going on?" Ngozi asked.
Clement stood up and turned to face his greatest companions both in and out of work, the only trusted friends he had, the ones who understood him, even though he was about four years older than Ngozi, a total of seven years was seperating him and Mike.
"I just don't understand." He replied.
It was a wide believe among the yorubas, an ethnic group in the south-western Nigeria, that a man shouldn't cry over any misfortune that befell him. But it seemed they forgot to give thorough explainations. A man who looses his mobile phone shouldn't cry, but a man who looses his business has every reason to cry.
Ngozi left Clement and other police officers as well as the medical team which has been summoned immediately. She returned a few seconds later with a crying Amanda in her arms.
It was then Clement remembered he was a father, no one paid attention to the cries until Ngozi, the only woman present went in to bring her out.

--to be continued--

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kingphilip(m): 9:13pm On Dec 25, 2014
Na so Rachel take die?
so na within five minutes Kelvin messed ha up n killed ha?

BTW d9ty7 great update
expecting another tonight sha
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by seunviju(f): 9:24pm On Dec 25, 2014
Merry christmas to you all and thanks for the update D9ty7
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by afamjb: 9:27pm On Dec 25, 2014
merry Xmas to u all...
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by rantex1: 9:30pm On Dec 25, 2014
racheal cannot die just like that now
crying loudly like a baby
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kocvalour(m): 9:30pm On Dec 25, 2014
dunno why an almighty president should be impeached when the majority is with him... He should always find a way of escape


Cool story.. Clement should quit

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